托福独立写作范文和分类整理-中立式
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托福独立写作范文和分类整理-中立式让步式结构是托福独立写作里一个饱受争议的段落展开结构。有人认为这种托福写作结构不能表现出作者独到的见解,甚至让考官觉得考生观点不明确,得不了高分。实际上,前程百利名师认为,这要具体情况具体分析。
有些题目一边倒式,让步式,中立式都能写,那更倾向于建议采用前两种结构去写,因为如果明明能将观点表现的很鲜明却写的模棱两可,跟同场考试的其他考生一边倒,让步的文章相比就不占上风。但是有些题目前两种不好写,比如说:你同不同意以下观点-城市中的老房子都应该被拆除。如果我们的观点是应该拆,用一边倒写,那想出来的论点可能是老房子不安全,老房子不好看。好像再没有其他的了。但是如果这时候我们用中立写,把老房子分成应该拆的老房子和不该拆的老房子。这时候题目可展开的论点就扩大到了一倍。所以有时候使用中立法还是必要的。
除了这个之外,有一些比较,对比型的文章,因为就是对一个事物的两个方面或者两个事物进行必要,要求我们必须用中立法来写,比如以下这篇文章:
中立式
范文
The government has announced that it plans to build a new multilane highway near where you pare the advantages and disadvantages of living near this project.What is your view of this project?Give details to support your opinion.
Cities and towns must routinely upgrade their road systems.As part of that upgrade,the road authorities in rapidly developing areas often construct multilane highways that cut through or nearby the city itself.For city residents,there are advantages and disadvantages to living near a new multilane highway.
Among the benefits of living near a big highway is the convenience of being able to hop onto a main road right away,without having to spend time in local traffic.This is a distinct advantage if a person commutes by car to another town because the commuter can quickly access the highway and get going. Being near to a major high way is also very convenient when the person is going to the airport,since most highways connected to the airport highway.Finally,if one owns property on land that is near a future highway,and if the zoning laws permit commercial establishments,it might be possible for a person to open a restaurant or a gas station that would attract travelers.
Of course,there are significant disadvantages to having a multilane highway near one’s home.The noise made at all hours of the day and night by speeding cars and trucks harms to the quality of life.Even if noise walls are built along the road,the sounds are still very annoying to residents.A related problem caused by highways is the pollution that comes from exhaust pipes and the litter that gets thrown out of moving vehicles.If a person owns a home in a residential area bordering the new highway,it is likely that
the property value of that residence will go down,since no one will want to buy a home near a noise highway.
My point of view on this issue would depend on whether I was a renter or a homeowner.If a highway was planned to run by my area where I was renting,I might not mind.The construction process for the highway would probably be a nuisance,however,and so I might choose to move away from the construction area.If,however,I owned property and a highway was planned,I would be extremely unhappy.Although the government usually pays residents when the highway goes right through where their house is,the government does not compensate a property owner if the highway is just“near by.”That would be very unfortunate.
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(跟题目相关的背景引入信息,2-3句).For_________________,there are advantages and disadvantages to________________________________________________________.
Among the benefits of______________________is the convenience of being able to
____________________,without having to_____________________________.This is a distinct advantage if a person(优点1).(优点2)is also very convenient when the person is_______________,since ___________________________________.Finally,if one(优点3),and if
____________________________,it might be possible for a person to
____________________________________________________.
Of course,there are significant disadvantages to having____________________________.(缺点1). Even if_______________________are still very annoying to___________________.A related problem caused by_____________is(缺点2).If a person(缺点3),it is likely that
___________________________,since________________________________________.
My point of view on this issue would depend on whether I was__A__or__B__.If
________________A_______________,I might not mind.________________________.If,however,
_________B__________,I would be extremely unhappy.
________________________________________That would be very unfortunate.
对于中立法,我们不应该一棒子打死,而是对症下药,具体情况具体分析。方能药到病除,永葆安康。以上就是本期前程百利名师带来的对中立式写作结构的分析,希望能够帮助大家备考托福考试。