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2020高考英语作文专题修辞格 拈连技巧课件(共8张)
得到金黄的评价；她太渺小，不可对其大加赞扬。
6. I wish my horse had the speed of your tongue. 多么希望我的马儿会跑过你的舌头！
7. She managed to catch the early bus and a bad cold. 她赶上了早班车，也赶上了重感冒。
Defination
拈连(zeugma):
是指甲乙两个事物连在一起叙述时，把本来 只适用于甲事物的词语拈来用到乙事物上，这种 修辞手法就叫拈连，又叫“顺拈”。运用拈连， 可以一语双叙，轭式搭配，使上下文联系紧密自 然，表达生动深刻。例如：
He lost his money and his hope for a better life. 他丢了钱，也丢了过好日子的希望。
Practice: Put the following into Chinese
1. She stood there with weeping eyes and heart. 她站在那儿，眼睛流着泪，心流着血。
2. In fact, I was the efficiency expert for the whole family. I used to organize my father’s tools, my mother’s kitchen, my sister’s boyfriends.
小时孩子们吸干妈妈的奶水，大时榨干爸 爸的薪水。
5. She’s too low for a high praise, to brown for a fair praise, and too little for a great praise.
(W. Shakespeare: Much Ado About Nothing) 她太下贱，不值得褒奖太高；她皮肤太深，不宜
6. I wish my horse had the speed of your tongue. 多么希望我的马儿会跑过你的舌头！
7. She managed to catch the early bus and a bad cold. 她赶上了早班车，也赶上了重感冒。
Defination
拈连(zeugma):
是指甲乙两个事物连在一起叙述时，把本来 只适用于甲事物的词语拈来用到乙事物上，这种 修辞手法就叫拈连，又叫“顺拈”。运用拈连， 可以一语双叙，轭式搭配，使上下文联系紧密自 然，表达生动深刻。例如：
He lost his money and his hope for a better life. 他丢了钱，也丢了过好日子的希望。
Practice: Put the following into Chinese
1. She stood there with weeping eyes and heart. 她站在那儿，眼睛流着泪，心流着血。
2. In fact, I was the efficiency expert for the whole family. I used to organize my father’s tools, my mother’s kitchen, my sister’s boyfriends.
小时孩子们吸干妈妈的奶水，大时榨干爸 爸的薪水。
5. She’s too low for a high praise, to brown for a fair praise, and too little for a great praise.
(W. Shakespeare: Much Ado About Nothing) 她太下贱，不值得褒奖太高；她皮肤太深，不宜
2020版高考英语复习名师写作辅导课件：写作技巧大全 (共129张PPT)
考法1 应用文
·I would like to know some information on… ·It will be appreciated if you can/could… ·I would also like to know if you can/could… ·Please give my best regards to… ·Remember me to your parents.
1. 展览时间、地点； 2. 展览内容。 注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________
____________________________________________
例
［课标全国Ⅱ2017］
The exhibition is a collection of works including some papercuts from famous artists. Among the papercuts will be some works from us students. Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to visit it. I know you have much
考法1 应用 文
此类作文常见的写作格式如下：第一部分，文章 开头，即称呼(通常已给出)；第二部分，寒暄语句， 引出写信的目的(寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子)； 第三部分，根据提纲扩展主体段落(主题句＋扩展句1+ 扩展句2+扩展句3)；第四部分，表明自己的观点或提 出殷切期望，并结束书信主体段落；最后是落款。
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国 朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你 回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 到达时间； 2. 合适的礼物； 3. 餐桌礼仪。 注意：1.词数100左右；
2020年高考英语写作指导课件 提纲作文(共21张PPT)【优秀课件】
Yours, _____(署名)
模板2 感谢信 Dear __________(称呼)，
Thank you very much for/ thanks a lot for/ Many thanks for_____________ (具体原因)。 Without your help ___________(从反面说明) _________(总结). I appreciate it more than I can say.
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
写作模版展示
模板1 道歉信 Dear _______(称呼),
I’m really sorry to tell you that..._______（所发生的事情）. Will you please accept my apology?____________ (提出希望). Anyway,________ (总结)。模板1
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
1. 格式 2. 人称 3.时态 4. 要点 5.语法 6. 字数 7. 书写
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
词汇，句型（高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连
接 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，
词
使全文结构紧凑
4. 语言得体
模板2 感谢信 Dear __________(称呼)，
Thank you very much for/ thanks a lot for/ Many thanks for_____________ (具体原因)。 Without your help ___________(从反面说明) _________(总结). I appreciate it more than I can say.
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
写作模版展示
模板1 道歉信 Dear _______(称呼),
I’m really sorry to tell you that..._______（所发生的事情）. Will you please accept my apology?____________ (提出希望). Anyway,________ (总结)。模板1
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
1. 格式 2. 人称 3.时态 4. 要点 5.语法 6. 字数 7. 书写
2 0 2 0 年高考 英语写 作指导 课件 提 纲 作文 （共2 1张PPT ）【优 秀课件 】
词汇，句型（高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连
接 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，
词
使全文结构紧凑
4. 语言得体
2020山东新高考英语试题英语写作读后续写详解与指导PPT(精编实用课件)
2.Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman．She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor．She knew they had problems，and they needed all kinds of help．When she had time，she would bring food and medicine to them．
2) 深层信息理解： 2)文章风格
3)写作主题 Get the main idea
故事发展 开头语
Predict the plot properly
1) Actions动作的丰富性
2) Feelings情感表达的多样性 3) Surroundings 恰当运用环境描写 4) Language 语言的运用
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读 后 新高 年读 续 考山 写 东解
2020年全国高考英语试卷（山东卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
1. The Meredith family lived in a small community．As the economy was in decline，some people in the town had lost their jobs．Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet．People were trying to help each other meet the challenges．
2) 深层信息理解： 2)文章风格
3)写作主题 Get the main idea
故事发展 开头语
Predict the plot properly
1) Actions动作的丰富性
2) Feelings情感表达的多样性 3) Surroundings 恰当运用环境描写 4) Language 语言的运用
lost their jobs．Many the challenges．
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读 后 新高 年读 续 考山 写 东解
2020年全国高考英语试卷（山东卷）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
1. The Meredith family lived in a small community．As the economy was in decline，some people in the town had lost their jobs．Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet．People were trying to help each other meet the challenges．
专题03 写作指导Happy Education(课件)-【延期不延学】江苏2020高考英语书面表达模拟课件讲评(共22张PPT)
福！
很多学生就会天马行空的写出非常中国味的英文句 子！ You progress in study is my happy. 如果你心中有英语句型和词形的变化那你就不会写 成这样的句子！
. 你在学习上的进步就是我的幸福 最简单的：Your progress in study is my happiness.（跟 汉语语序有点相似） 更好的：The progress you have made in study means that I am happy. Or: If you make progress in study, happiness will come into my mind.
Every native of Yangzhong attaches great importance to the protection of environment. Mr Coronavirus, this is the last place that you are eager to visit.
将此句改为； It’s boring (for us) to have e-lessons at home every day. 再稍作调整则效果更好 How boring it is (for us )to have e-lessons every day！
3.扬中人人爱护环境，病毒先生，这不是你想要来的地方！
abilities—such as performances in science competitions, writing abilities, oral skills, musical talents, and achievements in dance—under the microscope(显微镜). The cruel competition has
很多学生就会天马行空的写出非常中国味的英文句 子！ You progress in study is my happy. 如果你心中有英语句型和词形的变化那你就不会写 成这样的句子！
. 你在学习上的进步就是我的幸福 最简单的：Your progress in study is my happiness.（跟 汉语语序有点相似） 更好的：The progress you have made in study means that I am happy. Or: If you make progress in study, happiness will come into my mind.
Every native of Yangzhong attaches great importance to the protection of environment. Mr Coronavirus, this is the last place that you are eager to visit.
将此句改为； It’s boring (for us) to have e-lessons at home every day. 再稍作调整则效果更好 How boring it is (for us )to have e-lessons every day！
3.扬中人人爱护环境，病毒先生，这不是你想要来的地方！
abilities—such as performances in science competitions, writing abilities, oral skills, musical talents, and achievements in dance—under the microscope(显微镜). The cruel competition has
高考英语层级写作 1写作技巧篇 第2讲用高级句式增分课件(共75张ppt)
第二讲 用高级句式增分
内容索引
·层级三 言简意赅的“非谓语” ·层级四 光彩夺目的“定语从句” ·层级五 丰富多样的“名词性从句” ·层级六 画龙点睛的“状语从句” ·层级七 委婉动人的“虚拟语气” ·层级八 重点突出的“强调句” ·层级九 风格独具的“特殊句式”
层级三
言简意赅的“非谓语”
在写作中，如果出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之 间的关系显得松散；而过多地出现复合句会让人读起来费劲。恰当地运用非 谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样、句子活泼，而且 读起来结构紧凑、言简意赅。
目录
6.___H_a_v_i_n_g_a__tr_i_p__th_e_r_e__ will give you a good understanding of Chinese culture.(北京卷满分作文) 到那里旅行会使你对中国文化有一个很好的了解。
7.____I_n__o_r_d_e_r_t_o_m__a_k_e_o_u__r_s_c_h_o_o_l _li_fe__c_o_lo_r_f_u_l_a_n_d__m_e_a_n_i_n_g_f_u_l____________， our school has decided to organize a sports meeting. 为了使我们的校园生活既丰富多彩又有意义，学校决定组织一场运动会。
目录
4.不定式：作主语、表语、定语、宾语、宾语补足语和状语等。 i feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard. (2019·天津卷满分作文) 我很荣幸有机会让大家倾听我的声音。 i think it’s a good chance for you to participate in the english spea competition. 我认为参加英语演讲比赛对你来说是一个好机会。
内容索引
·层级三 言简意赅的“非谓语” ·层级四 光彩夺目的“定语从句” ·层级五 丰富多样的“名词性从句” ·层级六 画龙点睛的“状语从句” ·层级七 委婉动人的“虚拟语气” ·层级八 重点突出的“强调句” ·层级九 风格独具的“特殊句式”
层级三
言简意赅的“非谓语”
在写作中，如果出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之 间的关系显得松散；而过多地出现复合句会让人读起来费劲。恰当地运用非 谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样、句子活泼，而且 读起来结构紧凑、言简意赅。
目录
6.___H_a_v_i_n_g_a__tr_i_p__th_e_r_e__ will give you a good understanding of Chinese culture.(北京卷满分作文) 到那里旅行会使你对中国文化有一个很好的了解。
7.____I_n__o_r_d_e_r_t_o_m__a_k_e_o_u__r_s_c_h_o_o_l _li_fe__c_o_lo_r_f_u_l_a_n_d__m_e_a_n_i_n_g_f_u_l____________， our school has decided to organize a sports meeting. 为了使我们的校园生活既丰富多彩又有意义，学校决定组织一场运动会。
目录
4.不定式：作主语、表语、定语、宾语、宾语补足语和状语等。 i feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard. (2019·天津卷满分作文) 我很荣幸有机会让大家倾听我的声音。 i think it’s a good chance for you to participate in the english spea competition. 我认为参加英语演讲比赛对你来说是一个好机会。
2020年高考英语写作方法指导课件(共21 张)
五、逻辑顺
不少考生在写英语作文时，完全根据材料的前后顺序， 将所给内容一一译成英语，或者说虽然有变化，但文意 仍不通顺。这两种情况都会使得短文前后不连贯，层次 不清晰，逻辑性不强。因此，考生应认真思考所给材料， 找到短文表达的主旨大意及线索，然后在文意及线索的 引导下，将短文内容顺畅地表达出来。为了增强文章的 可读性，考生应该学会使用and ,so,then,at the same
My work is busy . He has joined the army for two years.
要避免这类错误，应该注意模仿课文或平时所读的文 章中的词汇和句法手段，留心观察其表达法，增强结 构意识，提高英语语感，尽量用英语思维来写英语。
3、多做写作训练，在练中提高写的能力。
同学们可以通过连词成句、仿写、缩写、改写、命题作文 及图表作文等多种训练，广泛接触各种文体，最终达到掌 握其写作技巧，提高实际应用英语能力的目的。
4、应试时的注意事项：
①理解是做写作题的关键。
②首先必须仔细而认真地阅读题目和要求，以确定文 章的体裁和格式。理解题目是写作的关键，只有理解 得正确，才能保证书面表达不走题。
③抓住要点是组织语言、形成短文的核心。
如果抓不住要点，组织语言的词句再好，也必然 会造成漏写或表达不清，也许还会画蛇添足。
④组织语言、正确叙述是整个写作过程中的重要环节。
C、难词解释法：
不少考生平时不注重记忆必要的单词，写作时 碰到生词就绕道走，最后只好用解释法、定义 法来说明，结果语言晦涩难懂，文意错乱，表 达不畅。
四、结构整
所谓结构整，就是要求考生在初学写作时要用完整的简单句将句 意表达清楚，这要把握好两个关系。 ①完整不等于一定要用复杂的句子。 考生一味追求新、奇、难，结果很容易出错。 例：误：It is not only the boy but also his parents are kind to others. Not only the boy but also his parents are kind to others. ②简单不等于一定用省略句。 考生在不可省略的地方省略，结构就不完整，句意就不明确。 例：误：He doesn’t know what and how to do it. 正：He doesn’t know what to do and how to do it.
不少考生在写英语作文时，完全根据材料的前后顺序， 将所给内容一一译成英语，或者说虽然有变化，但文意 仍不通顺。这两种情况都会使得短文前后不连贯，层次 不清晰，逻辑性不强。因此，考生应认真思考所给材料， 找到短文表达的主旨大意及线索，然后在文意及线索的 引导下，将短文内容顺畅地表达出来。为了增强文章的 可读性，考生应该学会使用and ,so,then,at the same
My work is busy . He has joined the army for two years.
要避免这类错误，应该注意模仿课文或平时所读的文 章中的词汇和句法手段，留心观察其表达法，增强结 构意识，提高英语语感，尽量用英语思维来写英语。
3、多做写作训练，在练中提高写的能力。
同学们可以通过连词成句、仿写、缩写、改写、命题作文 及图表作文等多种训练，广泛接触各种文体，最终达到掌 握其写作技巧，提高实际应用英语能力的目的。
4、应试时的注意事项：
①理解是做写作题的关键。
②首先必须仔细而认真地阅读题目和要求，以确定文 章的体裁和格式。理解题目是写作的关键，只有理解 得正确，才能保证书面表达不走题。
③抓住要点是组织语言、形成短文的核心。
如果抓不住要点，组织语言的词句再好，也必然 会造成漏写或表达不清，也许还会画蛇添足。
④组织语言、正确叙述是整个写作过程中的重要环节。
C、难词解释法：
不少考生平时不注重记忆必要的单词，写作时 碰到生词就绕道走，最后只好用解释法、定义 法来说明，结果语言晦涩难懂，文意错乱，表 达不畅。
四、结构整
所谓结构整，就是要求考生在初学写作时要用完整的简单句将句 意表达清楚，这要把握好两个关系。 ①完整不等于一定要用复杂的句子。 考生一味追求新、奇、难，结果很容易出错。 例：误：It is not only the boy but also his parents are kind to others. Not only the boy but also his parents are kind to others. ②简单不等于一定用省略句。 考生在不可省略的地方省略，结构就不完整，句意就不明确。 例：误：He doesn’t know what and how to do it. 正：He doesn’t know what to do and how to do it.
2020高考英语写作专题 中国传统文化介绍课件(20张PPT)
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Enjoying writing (III)
[题目要求] (2017·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学 习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： 1．时间和地点； 2．内容：学习唐诗； 3．课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．(2017•北京卷•书面表达·第一节) The Chinese Poetry Contest, which aimed to encourage students to know more about Chinese Traditional poetry culture, attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school. 旨在鼓励学生了解更多中国传统诗歌文化的中文诗词大赛吸 引了全校师生。
next class.
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④ At first, please read some materials about poetry of the
课前准备拓展1 Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely significant role in
内容
decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8
a.m.
on
内容 Wednesday,
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will
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Enjoying writing (III)
[题目要求] (2017·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学 习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： 1．时间和地点； 2．内容：学习唐诗； 3．课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．(2017•北京卷•书面表达·第一节) The Chinese Poetry Contest, which aimed to encourage students to know more about Chinese Traditional poetry culture, attracted almost all the students and teachers in the school. 旨在鼓励学生了解更多中国传统诗歌文化的中文诗词大赛吸 引了全校师生。
next class.
.
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④ At first, please read some materials about poetry of the
课前准备拓展1 Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely significant role in
内容
decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8
a.m.
on
内容 Wednesday,
which
will
last
two
ho时ur间s.、③地In点order
to
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for a college entrance English composition?
The ideal length is typically 200-300 words, depending on the specific requirements of the exam
Conclusion Writing
04
Sample text analysis
An in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples
Through in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples, students will understand how to construct story plots, shape character images, and use language skills to express emotions and themes.
What are the common mistakes students make in English composition?
Common misses include poor grammar, weak vocabulary, unclear organization, and lake of origin or depth in analysis
Grammar Control
Correctly use tensions, sense structures, and punctation
Fluent Expression
Write in a smooth and coherent man with proper transitions
2020高考英语作文专题修辞格 夸张技巧课件(共30张)
For your reference
大清早，阿姨Polly表扬了Tom。这是他 有生以来第一次被注意到。他走起路来情绪 高昂，就像漂在空中一样。
想想只不过帮了阿姨一个小忙就得到认 可，Tom的心都要融化掉了。他满脸带笑， 大踏步地走在乡间小路上，感觉整个世界都 在朝他挥手致意。
Happy & proud
He almost died of laughing. =He almost laughed his head off.
I sat there still, frozen with fear.
Drill 2情感上
Carl极其愤怒，暴跳如雷。
Carl was so angry, jห้องสมุดไป่ตู้mping about like a thunder.
一滴太白酒，十里草木香。
One drop of Taibai wine, and its fragrance will be felt miles around.
Example 2情感上
I love you. You are the whole world to me, and the moon, the sun and the stars.
Defination
夸张是为了达到某种表达效果的需要，对事物 的形象、特征、作用、程度等方面着意夸大或 缩小的修辞方式。
Hyperbole is a way of speaking or writing that makes someone or something sound bigger, better, more, etc. than they really are.
Practice 2情景描写
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要点3：工作 2020届高三英语一轮复习---写作课怎样写作文教学优秀课件 (共29张PPT)【完美版】 jobs---teacher/doctor/cook/worker/ program designer/colleague—
（1）I hope I will work in a computer company
（2）In my free time，I will get actively involved in volunteering activities to improve my
interpersonal skill and make my life colorful.
2020届高三英语一轮复习---写作课怎 样写作 文教学 优秀课 件 (共29张PPT)【完美版】
(1) I often imagine what my life will be in the future.
(2) Now I have an outlook for my future life in ten years
(3) Let’s look into my future life in ten years
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2020届高三英语一轮复习---写作课怎 样写作 文教学 优秀课 件 (共29张PPT)【完美版】
要点4：业余生活
take exercise / travel / read books / selfie / dance / photograph / volunteer –
列出关 键 词
要点1：主题：十年后的我 imagine / have an outlook for / look into the future / future life / in ten years
2020版高考英语总复习写作专题课件：专题9 应用文写作之倡议书 (共12张PPT)
Students' Council
参考范文: Dear friends,
In recent years, with the popularity of digital devices, students pay little attention to their handwriting. As a result, their handwriting is not so good as it was in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly, we'd like to offer some
(3)I think we should follow the following advice. (4)Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth. 3.段尾常用语: (1)It's time that we should do something to… (2)Let's join our hands and take action immediately. (3)In my opinion, we should be polite and spare no effort to do something… (4)Only in this way can we succeed.
Benefits of riding shared bikes are obvious: they nevg low-carbon lifestyle. Convenience is also why people are in favour of it. Additionally, shared bikes are almost free of charge while other forms, taxis, for example, are quite expensive.
参考范文: Dear friends,
In recent years, with the popularity of digital devices, students pay little attention to their handwriting. As a result, their handwriting is not so good as it was in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly, we'd like to offer some
(3)I think we should follow the following advice. (4)Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth. 3.段尾常用语: (1)It's time that we should do something to… (2)Let's join our hands and take action immediately. (3)In my opinion, we should be polite and spare no effort to do something… (4)Only in this way can we succeed.
Benefits of riding shared bikes are obvious: they nevg low-carbon lifestyle. Convenience is also why people are in favour of it. Additionally, shared bikes are almost free of charge while other forms, taxis, for example, are quite expensive.
(浙江专版)2020版高考英语循序写作第一步从写对句子开始第一周万变不离其宗的5种基本句式课件新人教版
[即时演练] 补全句子 1．作为一名中学生，我认为英语是一门非常重要的科目。
As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject . 2．从古代起，人们就把早起视为好习惯。 People have regarded getting up early as a good habit since ancient times. 3．这个坏消息使得这个老妇人发疯了。 The bad news drove the old woman crazy .
2．总而言之，乡村生活比城市生活对健康更有利。 In conclusion, country life is more beneficial to health than city life.
3．另外，欢迎你们所有人都来参加。 What's more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part你们安全回国。 ②(2017·浙 江 11 月 高 考 写 作 )We'll offer you some traditional activities. 我们会给你提供一些传统的活动。
[即时演练] 补全句子 1．格林先生将就如何学好英语给我们作一场报告。
Mr. Green will give us a speech on how to learn English well. 2．幸运的是，她答应再给我一次面试的机会。
三、主语＋系动词＋表语 该句式就是常说的主系表结构。此句式侧重说明主语是什么
或怎么样，谓语动词需用 be 动词或连系动词(如 feel, seem, become, get, turn, remain, look, grow 等)，表语多为形容词，也 可以是名词、介词短语、不定式及分词等。
2020届高考英语写作辅导 怎样写好作文教学课件 (共29张PPT)
（2）In my free time，I will get actively involved in volunteering activities to improve my
interpersonal skill and make my life colorful.
要点5、总结 live a (an) happier / richer / colorful / active/meaningful life 或 live in peace / harmony
例如： 假定你是李华，你校英文报纸“外国文化” 栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活短文。请 给美国朋友Peter写信约稿，要点如下：
（2）I’ll be a professional teacher. I love my job and get along well with my students. I often make my class interesting and lively.
（3）I’ll become a psychological doctor. I’ll try my best to help people with mental problems.
要点3：工作
jobs---teacher/doctor/cook/worker/
program designer/colleague—
（1）I hope I will work in a computer company
as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.
（三）正文写法（第二段的写法）：
1、原则：一二三原则：就是用一些连词或过渡词标出要 点顺序（用连词凸显要点）
interpersonal skill and make my life colorful.
要点5、总结 live a (an) happier / richer / colorful / active/meaningful life 或 live in peace / harmony
例如： 假定你是李华，你校英文报纸“外国文化” 栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活短文。请 给美国朋友Peter写信约稿，要点如下：
（2）I’ll be a professional teacher. I love my job and get along well with my students. I often make my class interesting and lively.
（3）I’ll become a psychological doctor. I’ll try my best to help people with mental problems.
要点3：工作
jobs---teacher/doctor/cook/worker/
program designer/colleague—
（1）I hope I will work in a computer company
as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.
（三）正文写法（第二段的写法）：
1、原则：一二三原则：就是用一些连词或过渡词标出要 点顺序（用连词凸显要点）
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4. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态)
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高考英语评分原则：
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。
评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英， 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。
7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
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What is a good writing？ How to catch the experts' eyes?
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What is a good writing？
well.
average
it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
along
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken
written
——段落层面1
This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
words,so I have to refer to themmeinetthweith
dictionary.
look up
2.The ability to read English passages is slowly.
low
3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lots
afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he
come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came
here.
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——句型层面2
• 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so
"我们一起研究高考"
英语高考第II卷
第二节 书面表达（25分）
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近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表 达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲 只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制 具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考 查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学 习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可 说，有利于考生的自由发挥。
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇
所致。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
A good composition
content structurelanguage
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
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DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content:
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Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
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总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
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——词汇层面1 • adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so
many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things.
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• 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 • 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
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——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
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——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
havEensgtluisdhievdery well.
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
is
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Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
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1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确
定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去 2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点， 应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性 及上下文的连贯性。
of time and efforts.
learning
4.Only by this way, can we keep up with other students.in
5.I'm LiHua, a new student of you.
Li Huvel is common and I can't speak∧very
plans to compete. 4) I floerfgt ot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokset us much money to buy one.
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1.I can't understand them when I meet new
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
They even threw rubbish into the lake, _to_t_a_ll_y_i_g_n_o_r_i_n_g the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby.
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
_I_t_is__s_u_g_g_e_st_e_d__th__a_t __the conference be put off.
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高考英语评分原则：
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。
评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英， 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。
7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
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This village is very small， which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
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二、感知典型范例 ——篇章层面1
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DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？ How to catch the experts' eyes?
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What is a good writing？
well.
average
it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
along
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken
written
——段落层面1
This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
words,so I have to refer to themmeinetthweith
dictionary.
look up
2.The ability to read English passages is slowly.
low
3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lots
afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he
come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came
here.
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二、感知典型范例
——句型层面2
• 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so
"我们一起研究高考"
英语高考第II卷
第二节 书面表达（25分）
2020/5/10
近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表 达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲 只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制 具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考 查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学 习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可 说，有利于考生的自由发挥。
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇
所致。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
A good composition
content structurelanguage
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
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DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content:
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Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
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总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
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二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1 • adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so
many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things.
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二、感知典型范例
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第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
• 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 • 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
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二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
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二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
havEensgtluisdhievdery well.
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
is
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Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
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高考英语评分原则：
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确
定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去 2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点， 应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性 及上下文的连贯性。
of time and efforts.
learning
4.Only by this way, can we keep up with other students.in
5.I'm LiHua, a new student of you.
Li Huvel is common and I can't speak∧very
plans to compete. 4) I floerfgt ot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokset us much money to buy one.
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改错
1.I can't understand them when I meet new
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
They even threw rubbish into the lake, _to_t_a_ll_y_i_g_n_o_r_i_n_g the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby.
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)