高中英语高二名校短文改错天天练练习(七)新人教版

英语：2010年高二名校短文改错天天练（七）

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Peter was walking back home from school, thought about the 1.

class today. It was about giving the first aid. Suddenly he saw 2.

a young girl lay on the ground. She seemed to be asleep but Peter 3.

saw that her face was very pale. He walked up to the girl and call 4.

softly,“Miss, Miss.” She moved slightly and gave no clear response .5.

He put her hand under her nose. Yes, she was even breathing . Then he 6. suddenly saw that it was a wound on her left leg and blood was flowing 7. out. She might have hit by a car. He dialled 120 and called an ambulance 8. while waited for it, then he put the girl in the recovery position by 9.

roll her onto one side and placing her left upper arm under her chin. 10.

答案及解析

thought 改为thinking ,ving 形式作伴随状语

正确

lay改为lying ，see sb doing sth 看到某人正在做某事

call 改为called ，和前面的walked并列

and改为but

第一个her 改为his

7.it改为there

8.have后面加been

9. waited改为waiting，这是一个省略句，相当于while（he was waiting）

10. roll 改为rolling 作介词by的宾语

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Lily is one of the puipls who is studying in Dongshan 1.

Primary School.One day，in her way to school，Lily found 2.

a wallet lay on the road. She picked it up and found a lot of 3.

money and a calling card in them. She thought the loser must 4.

be worried. Without the wallet，she went to a public telephone 5.

and called on the owner. Then she waited at the bus-stop. The owner 6.

came by taxi in a moment. Lily gave the wallet to her. The owner 7.

was very thankful that she took out a 100-yuan note to reward Lily. 8.

And she refused it and went to school. Seeing this , the owner raised 9.

her thumb and praised Lily helping her in time again and again . 10.

答案及解析

1. is改为are，定语从句的先行词是puipls

2. in 改为on , on one’s way to 在去…的路上，为固定词组

3. lay 改为lying , 指钱夹当时的动作

4. them 改为it ,这里指钱夹

5. Without 改为With

6. 正确

7. 去掉on 或把on改为up

8. very 改为so, 这里用到so…that 结构

9. And 改为But 前后是转折关系

10. Lily 后加for ，“praise sb for doing sth”为固定词组“因…而感谢某人”

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we had a P. E. lesson in this afternoon. Our teacher taught us 1.

to practise the long jump. When the bell rings，we gathered 2.

on the playground. After warming-up exercises，the teacher 3.

told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do. Then 4.

we followed the teacher and practiced one or another. Soon 5.

came my turn，but I felt a bit of nervous. Though I failed 6.

the first time,but Ididn't lose my heart. I kept on practising. 7.

At last I was able to jump over more than 3 meters.From this 8.

lesson ,I came to see that one will succee if he has perseverance. 9.

And I decide I will do as many as I can to do every thing in future. 10.

答案及解析

1.去掉in，in this afternoon 是一个中式英语

2. rings 改为rang，时态应上下一致

3. 正确

4．do 后加it

5. or 改为after ，one after another 为固定词组，“一个接一个”

6. 去掉of

7. 去掉but，或把but改为yet

8. 去掉over，over 和后面的more than 重复

9. success 改为succeed

10. many 改为much