雅思小作文饼状图写作范例、思路、常用句式

雅思小作文：

饼状图一例

Many women want or need to continue working after they have children.The chart below shows the working after they have children. The chartbelow shows the working pattern of mothers with young children.作文写作要点：

介绍各扇面及总体的关系。

各个扇面之间的比较，同类扇面在不同时间、不同地点的比较。

重点突出特点最明显的扇面：

最大的、最小的、互相成倍的。

The basic trends of the four charts:

Just after bearing children, back towork.

The older child…the more…

Most part-time during child 5~9

Child 10+, full time double, part-time less

the introduction can be written like this:

Evenjustafterhavingachild,alargenumberwomenreturntowork.Asthechildgrows older, the percentage of mothers who choose or need to continue working rises.Atleastuntilthechildisten,thelargernumberofworkingmotherstakepart-timeoccupations. When the child is ten years or older, the number of the full-timers morethan doubles while that of the part-timers decrease.

Eachartentails/containstruction,whichillustrateswhatthechartinvolvesrather than the over trends.

WritingParagraphs:

Information analyzed according to the pie charts.

Child 0~2, 30% back to work (19p.t., 11f.t.)

3~4, p.t. up dramatically to 35%, f.t. same

5~9, p.t. up consistently to 48%, f.t. slight increase to 14%

10+, p.t. slightly 3% down, f.t. double to 29%

Paragraph1：Whentheyoungestchildisatmost2yearsold,30%ofthewomenreturn to work. 19% full-time, and 11% as part-timers.

Paragraph 2：The percentage of full timers remains the same until the child turns fiveand increased slightly to 14% when the child is at most 9 years old, but the percentageof part-time working mothers grows dramatically to 35 and continues growing to 48%by the time the child is

9."

Paragraph 3：A change occurs after the child grows to ten. The number of full-timeworking mothers doubles in percentage to 29, while that of the part-timers is reducedslightly to by 3% to 45%.

Conclusion：

Itappearsthat,whenthechildturnstoten,womenhavemuchfewermaternal responsibilities than the years before.

Sentence Patterns：

Introduction：

The(two)piechartsshow(reveal,suggest,illustrate,demonstrate,indicate,describe, relate) the proportion (percentage) of A and B…in

(7) (categories), dividedinto…and…(one is…, another is…)

Comparison：

1、The biggest difference between

(2) groups i s in…, where A makes up% while(whereas) B constitutes% (makes up=constitutes=accounts for)

the highest percentage / amount of A, which was approximately %, was for…. (=in)/was found in

3、In…, while there is (not) a great deal of difference between the per centage of A andB (the former is % and the latter is %).

in…, while a greater percentage of A than B are found in…(the former is % and thelatter is %).

5、By contrast, A has increased (declined), from % in…to % in….

Compared with B, A…

Conclusion:

To sum up

In conclusion

It appears that…

The two charts clearly show…