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2014年12月

无老师优秀范例：“To spend, or not to spend: that is the question.” When it comes to government expenditure on space project, the debate in both the community and the common world has come to a vogue. Should government spend a considerable amount of money on exploration of the universe, as asserted by scientists, scholars, and government officials; or should these money go to more pressing issues of the day, as the poor and the miserable maintains? As for me I commit to the notion that space technology, though impractical at first glance, is of vital importance to humankind, and is therefore worthy of our taxes.

无老师优秀翻译：“剁手，还是不剁，这是个问题”当涉及到政府对于空间探索的投资，坊间关于这一点的争论已经甚嚣尘上。政府应该把很多钱花到空间探索上么，就像科学家，学者和政府官员所宣扬的那样；亦或者应该把钱花在今天更迫切的事情上，比如说穷人救济和低保户的救济？对我来说，我赞成空间科技，虽然乍看上去不是很实际，但是其实对于人类来说很重要，我们的纳税花在这上也更值得。

无老师平庸范例：”To spend, or not to spend, that is a question” When we talk about spending money on space travelling, there are a lot of questions on this. Should the government spend money on space travelling, just as scientiests, scholars, and governments said; or should they spend the money on others important things, just like giving money to the poor people and disabled people? For me, I will support the space travelling, although they are not real, but they are important for people, our taxes should invest in them.

无老师精析：本文的作者，应该特别符合广大中国考生的口味。原因有3点：第一，思路正统，完全按照我们书写的套路来写，首先引入出题，然后列出两方意见，最后给出自己的意见。第二，写得好模仿。开头就是万能的To be, or not to be的变体，容易磨坊。第三，有用，好模仿。come to a vogue，comes to这样的固定搭配。

好了，话不多说，亮家伙！第一句，优秀范例“To spend, or not to spend: that i s the question.” When it comes to government expenditure on space project, the debate in both the community and the common world has come to a vogue.对比平庸范例”To spend, or not to spend, that is a question” When we talk about spending money on space

travelling, there are a lot of questions on this.首先优秀范例能想到用To be, or not to be这样的表达方式本来就很赞，而且想一想，这个貌似是可以作为万能开头的。就是把be，spend换做主题词，就可以作为任何一篇作文的开头。很漂亮！接下来，有时我们的老朋友，固定搭配“it comes to”拿出来替代土土的when we talk about真是太赞了！而且本文的作者，一大优点就是词汇量够凶悍！“expenditure”“space project”“debate in”用词都还蛮书面化的，加分！而且接下来的“the community and the common world”虽然直译过来，中文没有很大差别，但是稍有一点出师表之中的“宫中府中俱为一体”的感觉，又是显示出自己的词汇量的强大。而且优秀范例最后的come to a vogue，赞~\(≧▽≦)/~！不仅因为优秀范例没有落入俗套的用popular，而且作者在用vogue这个词的时候，也没有用他的形容词词性，而是用了它的名词词性，这个是很漂亮的。

第二句，优秀范例Should government spend a considerable amount of money on exploration of the universe, as asserted by scientists, scholars, and government officials; or should these money go to more pressing issues of the day, as the poor and the miserable maintains?对比平庸范例Should the government spend money on space travelling, just as scientists, scholars, and