雅思教育类大作文

Question: some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

提纲：advantages

起：背景越来越多学生选择一年休假在大学前引起关于其的社会热点话题，我认为好处大于坏处。

立：有益，对自身对社会都不了解，所以应该通过这一年去了解社会，了解自身，进而知道自己人生方向。Moreover，也能了解生活得不易，更体会父母工作赚钱的艰辛。珍惜现在的生活。

驳：但是有人说不好，因为太年轻容易被花花社会迷惑，不想回学校学习。这是一种浪费对于年轻的生命。不过这是可以解决的，只要让年轻人们了解在大学学习的必要性，意识到只有通过学习才能负担他们想要的生活，这样就不会沉溺于娱乐而不想学习。

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In modern society, increasingly more students do not choose to go to university directly, instead of taking one year off between finishing school and going to university, with conflicting views on if it benefits to the youth. From my perspective, one-year gap tends to have a favorable influence on young students.

Speaking of why the youth be affected positively, the key reason may root in the fact that most of them do not have a clear understanding about the society and themselves which makes them don’t know what they should choose and learn in the collage. Moreover, it is a good chance for them to get known about the difficulties that their parents are going through. For instance, to live in the society they have to find a job. And it is impossible for them to find an easy job with high salary. As a result, they may work as a waiter or dishwasher as well as they will appreciate their parents give them money and let them have a happiness life in the school.

However, some people think it may exert a bad impact on students because it is easily to get involved in the colorful society and do not want to come back to university to study more. It is a waste for young life. while this problem is solvable, as long as they can think it is necessary to study in the university and realize that is the only way that they can live the life they want.

In conclusion, one-year off is a good opportunity to experience tons of different things and learn knowledge that you can’t learn in school.