新编剑桥商务英语中级unit_3分析解析

•EXAMPLE:
今年从外国进口的汽车急剧地下降。 • A: imports of foreign automobiles have declined sharply this year • B: imports of automobiles have declined sharply this year •在这里foreign是个缀余，因为import的车不 可能是domestic的
使用礼貌友好的词汇
• • • • • A. 说“Thank you" , 例如: Thank you for your letter of yesterday. Thank you for your prompt reply. Thank you for helping us in this respect. Thank you for your information.
Reading and Writing
• 1、 身份介绍 (Personal Identification) • 2、 工作环境与日常事务 (The office，general business，environment and routine) • 3、接待与闲暇活动 (Entertainment of clients，free time，relationships with colleagues and clients) • 4、商务旅行 (Travel) • 5、健康 (Health) • 6、购买与销售 (Buying and selling) • 7、公司结构、系统及程序 (Company structures， systems，processes) • 8、产品与服务 (Products and services) • 9、成果与成就 (Results and achievements) • 其外，还会涉及其他的一般商务话题（Business issues）
•EXAMPLE:
许多跨国公司已经在中国开始了各种商业活动。 • A: Hundreds of transnational firms have started various businesses in China • B: Hundreds of transnational firms have started businesses in China •various这个词是中式英语的又一典型多余修饰 语。 类似的名词词组（“a series of” “all sorts of”, and “ different kinds of”) 在翻译 中通常不必译出。在汉语中需要它们来表明复 数，然而在英语中只需以名词的复数形式出现。
Chapter Three. Business skills: Leaving&taking messages
Listening and Speaking Taking notes and messages
Reading and Writing Chingligh and expressions
•比较常见的中式英语
修改：
• • Dear Mrs. Walters If I had known your needs before May 20, I could have shipped Model GSP immediately. However, the spring sale drained our stock. The Model GSK, a similar instrument, is in stock, and you could have it at the same price as the GSF. It normally sells for $10,000 more. we will ship it as soon as you give us the word. Yours sincerely
用词准确(correctness)
包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；使用精确 措词，传达准确信正确地使用语法和标点符号；拼写正确和恰当的 语言风格。请比较下面两组例词：
Formal approximately inquire ascertain obtain assist participate construct purchase contribute sufficient difficult utilize Informal About Ask find out receive help share build buy give enough hard use
电子邮件（Email）
BEC写作主要考查体裁
• 由于BEC考题中已给出电子邮件的收件 人和主题，所以考生只需要写称呼、正 文和结束语，签名也可免去。
礼貌(Courtesy)
例如：
• • Dear Mrs. Walters, Because you delayed so long in your response, Model GSF is off stock. If you are interested, we have some similar models on hand. Yours truly,
•中式英语的特点:
•Wrong Collocation错误的搭配 •Syntactic Error语法错误 •Improper Word Order语序不当 •Ambiguous Reference语义不明
•EXAM来自百度文库LE:
在将来的30到50年间，我们在经济上将达到经济 发达国家的水平。 • A: in another 30 to 50 years, we shall approach the level of the economically developed countries • B: in another 30 to 50 years, we shall approach the level of the developed countries •(通常情况下，“发达国家”已经意味着是经济 上发达的国家，因此，没有必要再加上修饰语。)