专题十六 介绍伟大人物-决胜2020高考写作通关秘籍

介绍伟大人物

【写作攻略】

1. 审题：根据题目要求不同分为两类

1）指定人物的介绍。题目中会提供一些基本信息供选择使用。

2）自选人物进行介绍。

2. 时态的选择：对于人物的成就和贡献应使用一般过去时，人物对自己的影响用一般现在时态。

3. 注意1）事实细节的罗列应注重内在联系和适当的过渡。不能是零散信息的简单堆砌。

2）避免句式单一

3）人物的品格成就应重点突出，可将其贡献对自己的影响联系起来。不必面面俱到

4）词汇的选用尽量精确不泛泛，特别是形容词，动词短语。

【补充资源】

常用表达

✓外貌：good-looking; funny-looking; ordinary-looking; handsome; charming; beautiful; pretty;

white-haired; near-sighted; healthy; bearded; leggy(腿长的); bony(瘦的); muscular（肌肉发达的；强壮的）; slim; athletic（体格健壮的）

✓性格：kind-hearted; absent-minded; patient; naughty; smart; intelligent; bad-tempered; attractive;

confident; independent; humorous; talkative; modest; serious; friendly; extrovert（外向的）; untidy;

shy; fatherly（慈爱的，父亲般的）; motherly; lovely; manly（强壮的男子气概的）; optimistic;

innocent; modest; sensitive; reliable; forgetful; sincere

✓兴趣爱好：be good at; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about; be strict in/with; be absorbed in;

be addicted to; focus on; pay attention to; put one’s heart into

✓家庭背景：be born in; spend one’s childhood in; live a ha ppy/hard life

✓教育背景：be admitted into/ to a key university; graduate from; receive a doctor’s degree

✓主要事迹：serve/work as, devote one’s life to; concentrate oneself to; make up one’s mind to do;

have a gift/talent for

✓成就：s et a good example for; be honored/respected as; make great contributions to

【范文演示】

2016北京卷

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：

1. 该人物是谁；

2. 该人物的主要贡献；

3. 该人物对你的影响。

注意：

1. 词数不少于50

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

______________________________________________________________________________________

列提纲找思路

1) 开头表示荣幸和骄傲：delighted; honor; be enthusiastic about; excited; share; interest

2) 介绍自己喜欢的中国历史人物，说明人物的贡献和对自己的影响：when it comes to; my favorite figure; person; introduce; renowned（著名的有声望的）; widely; establish（建立创办）; masterpiece （杰作）; impact; style; enlighten（启发开导）; encourage

3）结尾：希望朋友能感兴趣：be interested in; tell; send; recommend; work

满分作文1

Dear Jim,

I am delighted to hear from you. It’s an honor to know you are enthusiastic about Chinese history.

When it comes to my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Li Bai of Tang Dynasty. He was renowned as the greatest romantic poet. Over 900 poems of him survived and were widely read by later generations. He expressed his emotions in poems directly every time he was frustrated by his unsuccessful career, which formed his unique style of writing. This really enlightens me.

Are you interested in Li Bai? Please tell me and I’ll send you some books.

Yours,