高考作文讲评二

作文讲评

同学们使用的丰富句式：

1、What we first should do is to cherish mow as well as wonderful future .Never could we predict what the future has in store for us.(张思思)

2、We are supposed to be aware of the significance of today. (李瑀喆)

3、As far as I am concerned, it makes on sense to regret or worry.Lost in regretting,

I was in low spirits.(杨爽)

4、Grasp today’s chance you are given,understand how you failed yesterday and future will surely shine a great light on you.(邹宇轩)

5、I felt sa sad that my enthusiasm to study English gradually faded away.(周乾)

6、Only in this way can we enjoy our fruitful life, not feeling bored and upset.(朱胜)

7、Hearing her words, I realized that I shouldn’t put off today’things.(张依)

8、By putting what we have planned into reality, we can make today the ladder to tomorrow even the fundation of our vivid future.(童雪彤)

9、Never can we go back to the past time, nor can we predict what future will be like.Feeling I was left behind, I was almost on the edge of cliff.(杨瑾)

10、Accordingly, we shouldn’t have wasted the past time.(苏阳黎)

11、Only by making full use of today can we make a splendid achievement。（王众康）

12、Hard as I had been working on math, I failed the exams over and over again.(许学谦)

13、We have strong ground to believe that futurt is not as terrible as we have experted.(周宇轩)

14、We need to set out to do some worthwhile things today.(王胡轩)

15、We can know the real meaning between today and present on the assumption that we make full of present.(李必博)

16、Had it not been for his change, he would not have led a comfortable life.(欧阳颖洁)

学习其他同学们使用的丰富句式：

17、What impressed me most was when I was in middle school. However hard I tried, I couldn’t make great breakthrough.（方珍）

18、Poor as he was, he never lost heart.（黄晶）

19、I firmly believed that nothing could hold me back as soon as I attempted to get it over.（文瑶）

20、Hard as the life is, one can realize his dream by having a strong mind.（文瑶）

21、It is universally acknowledged that it is what we think that leads to what we do.（李祎）

22、It is tough for him to live as a normal life as we have. But in his mind, nothing can prevent his devotion to science.（赵鹏）

23、It is commonly believed that thinking more can make a man gain more.（郑舒然）

24、Tired as I was, I have studied math very hard since then. Every time I met with a difficult problem, I would stick on thinking about it.（张诗萌）

25、It was not the result of the competition but my determination of being the first that really counted.（习永志）