高中英语短文改错课件
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umbrella. an
Attention,please!
五不改原则
1.单词拼写不改 2.大小写不改 3.词序不改 4.标点符号不改 5.原意不改
解题步骤
1. 浏览全文，掌握大意
2.整句理解，上下兼顾 3.复读全文 ，检查验证
Practice makes perfect!
短文改错（共10小题；每题一分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删
还要注意形和副
tall
They put t_h__e_m___in the corner of the sitting
it
代词格，细领悟
＼ room. Kate was covered it wit_h__t_. The sitting room looked
动词形
parent∧s singing
and _d_a__n_c__e_ happily. dancing
除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出
该加的词. 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后
的词。 注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller
mine It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understando…ur (2010 辽宁卷）
He found difficult to learn math well.
it
practice
as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dance happily.
practice
1. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as
a fool.
at
2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the
hill.
3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .
light.
and
2. He will stay there one and two days.
or
3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying.
4. The driver put the window down and offered us a
（2011新课标全国卷）
luggage
2 In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports
was steady, around three per weeks.(2011辽宁卷）
progress, furniture,
week
weather, fun, news, information, advice
∨
were
and asked me lots of questions.
4. I found the game excited and my dad explained
the rules.
exciting
二、名词数
根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动词的单复数来判断
高考链接：
1 It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
3. His father looks much more happier today.
四、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的使用． 2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. 3. it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 (make, find,
think)
高考链接4： With the help of Katia, a roommate of me… (2011 重庆卷）
不可数名词
equipment, knowledge…
三、还要注意形和副
１形容词修饰名词，be动词，系动词后要用形容词
２副词修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子
３比较级和最高级的使用
高考链接：
1 When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and
_A__t_ Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
On
介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住
father to choose a Christmas tree. They c__h_o__o_s__e_
动词形
chose
a big one. It was almost as t_a__ll_e__r_as the room!
practice
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. angrily
2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is clear
quite different from mine.
Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011
全国）
flew
(2)主、谓不一致的错误
I stayed there for one and a half hours and
made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国
How to do Proof-reading
短文改错
Objectives
1）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力 2）综合运用英语知识的能力 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻 辑的能力
高考短文改错的考查方式
Unnecessary word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word Wrong word
to asked me lots of questions
practice
1.Not only the students but also the teacher like
the film.
likes
2. When they came here, I will show them. come
3. They eager to know everything about China
高考链接５：
There was one on particular I’d really wanted.(2011 浙江卷)
in
∧ He had only a small cold room to live.
in
He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon.
buying
2 I was really disappointing and about to leave when
disappointed
he walked out of a building.
(2011陕西卷)
3 They were eage∧r know everything about China and
1. Some students may also save up for our
college or future use .
their
2. I was learning to express me in simple
English.
myself
3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.
lights
名词数
really b_e__a_u__t_i_f_u_l_l_y_ at the moment. There was
beautiful
还要注意形和副
a fire burning in the fire place, _b__u_t_the Chistmas
冠词连词须关注
and
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
2. I like play∧ing piano.
the
3. I am fond at English. of
what is the main trouble when correcting a composition?
解题步骤
1. 浏览全文，掌握大意 2.整句理解，上下兼顾 3. 复读全文 ，检查验证
for 4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the
money.
on
六、冠词连词常光顾
１. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误．
２．连词but，and，or, so和although的逻 辑性用法错误．
高考链接６：
He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷）
I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag
from the floor. and
(2011新课标卷）
Practice
1. I came into the living room and saw one of them
just go through the kitchen door but turn on the
卷2)
was
(3)主动语态和被动语态的错用
To our surprise,the man wa\s turned
out a thief.
2. 非谓语动词的错误 高考链接:
1 I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to
Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）
gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）
slowly
2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is
clear
quite different from mine.
3 The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected. (2009陕西） faster
everything
4. One day I wrote a little story and showed
to my teacher.
it
五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住．
1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。
2.不定式后的动词短语中介词不能省 3.时间状语前有指示代词this, that或one, next,last等修饰时不用介词.
A Limerick
动词形，名词数， 还要注意形和副. 代词格，细领悟, 介词短语须关注. 习惯用法要记住, 冠词连词常光顾.
．
一.动词形
动词
非谓语
谓语
to do doing done 时态
语态
主谓一致
1.谓语动词
(1)动词的时态错误.
However, my father had to return to work on
Attention,please!
五不改原则
1.单词拼写不改 2.大小写不改 3.词序不改 4.标点符号不改 5.原意不改
解题步骤
1. 浏览全文，掌握大意
2.整句理解，上下兼顾 3.复读全文 ，检查验证
Practice makes perfect!
短文改错（共10小题；每题一分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删
还要注意形和副
tall
They put t_h__e_m___in the corner of the sitting
it
代词格，细领悟
＼ room. Kate was covered it wit_h__t_. The sitting room looked
动词形
parent∧s singing
and _d_a__n_c__e_ happily. dancing
除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出
该加的词. 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后
的词。 注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller
mine It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understando…ur (2010 辽宁卷）
He found difficult to learn math well.
it
practice
as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dance happily.
practice
1. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as
a fool.
at
2. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the
hill.
3. When a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .
light.
and
2. He will stay there one and two days.
or
3. Every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying.
4. The driver put the window down and offered us a
（2011新课标全国卷）
luggage
2 In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports
was steady, around three per weeks.(2011辽宁卷）
progress, furniture,
week
weather, fun, news, information, advice
∨
were
and asked me lots of questions.
4. I found the game excited and my dad explained
the rules.
exciting
二、名词数
根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动词的单复数来判断
高考链接：
1 It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
3. His father looks much more happier today.
四、 代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的使用． 2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. 3. it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 (make, find,
think)
高考链接4： With the help of Katia, a roommate of me… (2011 重庆卷）
不可数名词
equipment, knowledge…
三、还要注意形和副
１形容词修饰名词，be动词，系动词后要用形容词
２副词修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子
３比较级和最高级的使用
高考链接：
1 When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and
_A__t_ Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
On
介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住
father to choose a Christmas tree. They c__h_o__o_s__e_
动词形
chose
a big one. It was almost as t_a__ll_e__r_as the room!
practice
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work. angrily
2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is clear
quite different from mine.
Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011
全国）
flew
(2)主、谓不一致的错误
I stayed there for one and a half hours and
made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国
How to do Proof-reading
短文改错
Objectives
1）识别错误 并正确校正语篇的能力 2）综合运用英语知识的能力 3）准确理解语篇，掌握内容及行文逻 辑的能力
高考短文改错的考查方式
Unnecessary word
1. I can go to home now.
Missing word Wrong word
to asked me lots of questions
practice
1.Not only the students but also the teacher like
the film.
likes
2. When they came here, I will show them. come
3. They eager to know everything about China
高考链接５：
There was one on particular I’d really wanted.(2011 浙江卷)
in
∧ He had only a small cold room to live.
in
He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon.
buying
2 I was really disappointing and about to leave when
disappointed
he walked out of a building.
(2011陕西卷)
3 They were eage∧r know everything about China and
1. Some students may also save up for our
college or future use .
their
2. I was learning to express me in simple
English.
myself
3. I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.
lights
名词数
really b_e__a_u__t_i_f_u_l_l_y_ at the moment. There was
beautiful
还要注意形和副
a fire burning in the fire place, _b__u_t_the Chistmas
冠词连词须关注
and
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
2. I like play∧ing piano.
the
3. I am fond at English. of
what is the main trouble when correcting a composition?
解题步骤
1. 浏览全文，掌握大意 2.整句理解，上下兼顾 3. 复读全文 ，检查验证
for 4. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the
money.
on
六、冠词连词常光顾
１. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误．
２．连词but，and，or, so和although的逻 辑性用法错误．
高考链接６：
He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷）
I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag
from the floor. and
(2011新课标卷）
Practice
1. I came into the living room and saw one of them
just go through the kitchen door but turn on the
卷2)
was
(3)主动语态和被动语态的错用
To our surprise,the man wa\s turned
out a thief.
2. 非谓语动词的错误 高考链接:
1 I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to
Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷）
gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）
slowly
2. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is
clear
quite different from mine.
3 The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected. (2009陕西） faster
everything
4. One day I wrote a little story and showed
to my teacher.
it
五、介词短语须关注，习惯用法要记住．
1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。
2.不定式后的动词短语中介词不能省 3.时间状语前有指示代词this, that或one, next,last等修饰时不用介词.
A Limerick
动词形，名词数， 还要注意形和副. 代词格，细领悟, 介词短语须关注. 习惯用法要记住, 冠词连词常光顾.
．
一.动词形
动词
非谓语
谓语
to do doing done 时态
语态
主谓一致
1.谓语动词
(1)动词的时态错误.
However, my father had to return to work on