话题5:过生日-安徽省合肥市第一中学高考英语新题型读后续写、读写任务技巧突破专项课讲义
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Lesson 5 读后续写(话题:过生日)
例题:As he lay awake that night, Tony could hear his parents discussing his sister Alice’s birthday. It was just two days away. Birthdays we re always a lot of fun, even though there was no money for store-bought gifts. Nearly all of toys he and his sister had were homemade. Ther e was nothing wrong with that, he knew. Like many families in this part, they were poor.
This birthday would be different, though. Alice was older now, and he’d seen how her eyes lit up when she saw the new doll at Honey House, a neighborhood store just down the road from their house.
How he longed for her to have it! An idea finally came to him just before he went to bed. After a quick breakfast the following morning, he placed a tin can and a piece of string in a large bag. Then he tied the bag to the handlebars of his bike and headed toward a village hill.
After a long journey, he reached his destination, the mango forest. There were already two other boys there. Tony grabbed his bag and set to work immediately. The smaller trees had already been picked over pretty well, but he was able to find a half-dozen mangoes before noon.
When the sun was high overhead, the hard work began. Nearly all of the taller trees held ripe mangoes but they were well beyond reach. The other boys took their fruit and went away. Tony used his pocket knife to cut a long piece of bamboo. Then he took the tin can from the bag, tied it to one end of the bamboo stick, and walked over to the base of mango tree.
He stayed there, holding the tin can high up into the tree. His efforts were occasionally rewarded when a mango dropped into the can. After a while his neck ac hed from looking upward, and his arms grew sore. He kept at it, though, and by late afternoon his bag was nearly full.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
On the way back to town, Tony began to worry that the other boys might already have sold or traded their mangoes with Honey House.
Paragraph 2:
The following morning, Alice walked into the kitchen and took a seat at the breakfast table.
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续写步骤
●仔细审题,明确要求
●精读文章,确定文章线索(时间为线索,空间为线索等)
已知线索:妹妹生日—家里没钱—想买娃娃—想到办法—芒果园劳动
●紧扣要求,展开联想,揣摩续写思路
开头语引导思路发展方向
提示词提供写作要点(如人物、地点、事件等)
原文所给关键词分类
●人:boys
●物:gifts, doll, bag, mango, fruit
●事件:birthday efforts
●动作:looking
●地点:store
Paragraph 1:On the way back to town, Tony began to worry that the othe r boys might already have sold or traded their mangoes with Honey House.
sell mangoes and buy the gift
boys, bag, mango, fruit, efforts, store
Paragraph 2:The following morning, Alice walked into the kitchen and took a seat at the breakfast table.。