高考英语作文summary-技巧课件ppt

2、说明文及新闻报道
（1）对象、性质功用、利好 （2）问题、解决方法 （3）现象、原因、结果
The topic-what
Koalas are unhappy and complaining
The reasons- why Tourists’ taking photos
The effects-how Being repeatedly awaken
“Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can’t you just be happy about what you have already got?”
3.结论（第三段） 结尾句（无此项扣1分）
Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese has included 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.
Practice
Passage A (2014年江苏高考作文)
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（次）重点
1.概要（第一段---约30 1）英语词汇被收录于汉
词，少于25或多于40 语词典
词均扣2分）
2）不同的人观点不一
1）自己的观点（赞成或反对
2.发表自己的观点
均可）
（第二段--观点鲜明， 不能骑墙）
2）理由2-3点（注：若写4点 则从总分中扣2分）
The solutions
Government ban the practice
The conclusion Be more kind to animals
koalas in wildlife parks that are repeatedly awaken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.
---往届实验班考生
What is a Summary?
A summary is a short account giving the main points of something longer or detailed.
以约30个词概括主要内容
A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days complaining about it.
Summary writing
(约30个词概括)
概要:约30词，少于25或多于40词均扣2分
抄袭原文材料为无效要点；改变句式表达方式， 并有适当发挥，不认定为抄袭。
读写作文写好summary 的意义
第一段是定调子，阅卷老师往往读 完第一段就已经打出基本分了。
---高考阅卷老师
相对于写作的其他要求来说，这一 部分较难写，这一部分先读后概括， 而其他部分都是有中文提纲的。
Koalas in wildlife parks can’t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is considering making the tourists’ behavior illegal to protect the animals.
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直接引语
A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, “No one is perfect, -e--a--c--h----o--n--e---s---h--o--u--l-d-------b-----e------h----a----p-----p----y-------a----b----o----u-----t-------------w---h---a--t--y--o--u----h--a--v--e---got.”
This story is about a peacock who complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.
In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.
2 Argumentation(说明文) 3 Exposition(议论文)
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2015高考作文
1.记叙文
• 写作方法：串联要素法 • 六个要素：
who; when; where; what; how; why • 某人做了某事, 结果如何？
• The passage mainly talks about….
Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.
人称时态
The story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you have already got.
If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.
“It is true that you cannot sing,” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!”
“Oh, but what good is all this beauty,” cried the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!”
Summary writing
Learning objectives : 1. To have a better understanding of
the elements of a summary; 2.To learn and be able to write a
satisfactory summary.
dos and don’ts
1、注意人称时态正确； • 2、不写过多细节:实行精“兵”裁“员” • 3、不用直接引语； • 4、不能过早表达观点； • 5、不可完全照抄原文； • 6、不可加入自己的观点； • 7. 思路清晰，巧用关联词增强文章的
连贯性。
Styles of passage
1 Narration（记叙文）
With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two
opposing groups:“For” and “Against”
3、议论文
三要素：论点、论据、论证。
文章结构：总分结构、分总结构、 平行结构。
Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
过早表达观点
Each of us has strengths and wp--e--e--a--a--ck----on----ce----ks----sw----e--a--s--s--,----su---up--cs-h-e--ta--as--b-a-o--up--te--ah--ci-s-o--cv--ko--.i-cA--e-,but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got .
A peacock complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.
过多细节
In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of complaining about what he didn’t possess.
1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea):
Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance