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四、读写任务类——记叙文

典例

请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didn’t offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown ter he was proved to be a disabled person.

In a series of cases nationwide，we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport，which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.

People with moral deficiency (who don’t give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned，but they don’t deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values but not laws.In comparison，the attackers behave worse. The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats.It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice，but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violence justice？

This “violent justice” can confuse many people and encourage them to do the same，especially when we are overpowered by 满分作文

The news is about a young

disabled man attacked on a bus

for not offering his seat to a

woman with a baby，which leads

a debate about who is right and

who is wrong.

I am so upset that in our

society the woman with a baby

should be so impolite.It was

wrong of her to get her justice

with violence，which will

really do great harm to our

society.Today in our society，

many other people like her

would take it for granted that

they should be offered a seat

on the crowded bus，as the

morality requires.However，if

I were a passenger on the

crowded bus，I would stand out

to tell her that the young man

is also in need of help because

of his disability.

So there is still a long way to

go for us to build up a

harmonious society.In my

opinion，we should fight

against the violent justice

阅卷老师点评

1.层次分明，结

构清晰

本篇习作按照三

段式：概括文章

大意→谈谈自己

对这则新闻的看

法及感受→对于

创建和谐社会自

己的一些建议。

按照这一顺序展

开叙述，不但做

到了要点齐全，

而且富有层次

感。

2.高级词汇的使

用

习作中用到了：

do great harm

to；take...for

granted; stand

out; in need

of; build up;

fight against;

civilized and

harmonious

society等，显

示了作者扎实的

综合语言运用能

illogical mood.

If cruel and rude acts are rooted in

children’s hearts，society will never

step into civilization.The practice

violates common values，neither solving

problems nor safeguarding civilized

society.

写作内容

1.用约30个词概括短文的要点；

2.用约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法，

内容包括：

(1)读完这则新闻，你有什么感受？

(2)假如你是车上的一名乘客，你会怎样做？

(3)就如何创建文明、和谐社会提出你的建

议。

写作要求

1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的

论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能

直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

and try every means to avoid it

happening so as to solve such

kind of problems and safeguard

our civilized and harmonious

society.

力，让文章更具

有可读性。

3.多样化句型

的使用

习作中运用了

which 引导的非

限制性定语从

句；who 引导的

名词性从句；if

虚拟条件句；

there be句型

等。

读写任务型写作中的记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的启示或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。

1．写作步骤

概括原文→衔接过渡→描述事件→发表看法

概括原文记叙文常用模版：

(1)The passage/story is about a misunderstanding between a student and a teacher.

(2)The author tells us a story about...

(3)The passage is a story about...

(4)According to the passage，the hero in the story...