高中英语作文写作课件详解公开课 观点议论20张
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高三英语二轮专题：应用文写作阐述观点课件
养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。做题前， 要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌 跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要 善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检 查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。 在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面 对考试。英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”， 遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳 理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺 复习方法。
美文欣赏
互联网已经成为现代人工作和生活中必不可少的通信工具，在人们 的日常生活中起着重要的作用，但它也有一些负面影响。请就互联 网的利与弊发表你的见解，并阐述你的理由。内容包括：
好处
提供大量的信息，促进人际交流； 网上购物便捷。
弊端
损害眼睛； 长时间上网影响工作和休息； 网瘾影响学生的学习。
你的观点
advantages while avoiding its disadvantages.
距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考， 能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不 能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。以下是本 人从事10多年教学经验总结出的超实用新高考英语专题复习讲义希望可以帮助 大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！
still a large number of people/students who hold a different view concerning this
美文欣赏
互联网已经成为现代人工作和生活中必不可少的通信工具，在人们 的日常生活中起着重要的作用，但它也有一些负面影响。请就互联 网的利与弊发表你的见解，并阐述你的理由。内容包括：
好处
提供大量的信息，促进人际交流； 网上购物便捷。
弊端
损害眼睛； 长时间上网影响工作和休息； 网瘾影响学生的学习。
你的观点
advantages while avoiding its disadvantages.
距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考， 能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不 能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。以下是本 人从事10多年教学经验总结出的超实用新高考英语专题复习讲义希望可以帮助 大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！
still a large number of people/students who hold a different view concerning this
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高三英语议论文写作指导模版(PPT19张)
题目分析
• 体裁： 议论文 • 时态： 现在时 • 篇章结构：三部分
Part 1(Para 1)topic Part 2(Para 2-3)body Part 3(Para 4)your own opinion
Part 1(Para 1)topic
Nowadays, a growing number of people_p_r_e_fe_r__to__m_a_k__e_f_r_ie_n_d_s_o_n__li_n_e. Opinions about this matter vary from person to person.
Different people differ in their opinions.
Opinions about this matter are divided as follows.
Some people think that… Some people are in favor of … Some people prefer to do… Some people would like to do… Some people hold the view that… Some people say/claim/agree that …
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3.创意表现上，利用统一的视觉或音 乐来增 加品牌 和产品 之间的 关联性 ，经过 长期积 日 常 素 材 提炼 成写作 中的材 料，使 材料为 表达一 定的主 旨服务 ，从而 将素材 实用化 ，是写 作过程 中十分 重要的 环节。
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5.一 是 从 生 活 中(日 常生活 、阅读 等)发现 并积累 素材； 二是对 素材宏 观的分 类整理 ，开阔 精神文 化视野 ；三是 对个案 具体素 材的原 点思考 ，发散 性思考 ；四是 对具体 素材的 价值化 处理。
高考英语复习书面表达之观点论证型PPT优质公开课
⑻In addition, many people think that refusal usually means inability.
⑼All mentioned above tells us that it is hard for us to say “No”when we o suggest . ⑺It is true that . ⑻ In addition .
⑼All mentioned above tells us . ⑽As a matter of fact, .⑾There is no denying that .⑿In short, .
⑿ In short,everybody should learn to say 'No' directly.
练习
Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Competition and cooperation. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below:
⑴It is well known that .
⑸A case in point is the daily behavior of us.
⑹This is close to suggest that it is always not easy to say 'No'.
⑺It is true that people often prefer to say 'Yes' for fear of hurting others.
⑼All mentioned above tells us that it is hard for us to say “No”when we o suggest . ⑺It is true that . ⑻ In addition .
⑼All mentioned above tells us . ⑽As a matter of fact, .⑾There is no denying that .⑿In short, .
⑿ In short,everybody should learn to say 'No' directly.
练习
Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Competition and cooperation. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below:
⑴It is well known that .
⑸A case in point is the daily behavior of us.
⑹This is close to suggest that it is always not easy to say 'No'.
⑺It is true that people often prefer to say 'Yes' for fear of hurting others.
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance
高考英语二轮课件 写作 议论文 专题1 论证观点(22张ppt)
活学活用 仿照上述句型，翻译下列句子。
(1)你越努力，你越进步。 The harder you work, the more progress you make. _________________________________________
(2)你越主动，你成功的机会就越大。
The more active you become, the more successful _________________________________________ you can be. _______________________________
even bank accounts are stolen.⑤Therefore, I suggest
that you think twice and remain rational when you are
shopping online. 【结构分析与解读】
根据写作的内容， 本文的结构是总－分－总，
短语提升文章的层次感。
3．在语言运用方面， 考生可以掌握一些常用于
议论文写作的短语和句型， 如compared with..., it is clear /obvious that..., From what I have mentioned above we can see that...等。 4．相关短语。 (1)come to realize 开始意识到 (2)as important as 和……一样重要 (3)push sb.to do sth.使某人做某事
(4)focus more on 更加关注 (5)spoken language skills 口语技能/水平 (6)communicate with 和……交流 (7)more attention should be given to 应该更加关注 (8)both necessary and beneficial 既有必要又有利
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件(共12张)【优秀课件】
3. It’s my honor to stand here and say something about…
4. Ladies and gentlemen/ Boys and girls, I’m…I’m greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I’m going to talk about…
1，不怕困难，分析问题，相信自己能过解决问题；
2，与父母、老师、同学交流，探讨解决方法；
3，做好学习或生活计划，及时巩固、总结。
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件 （共12 张）【 优秀课 件】
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件 （共12 张）【 优秀课 件】
Dear fellow students, It’s my great honor to give a speech here about
Speech
----演讲稿
➢Step Ⅰ：明确演讲主题
写作步骤：
➢Step Ⅱ：分析问题，展开论述
➢Step Ⅲ：提出解决方法或期待
Words and phrases：
➢significant/ significance ➢vital/ vitally ➢ count ➢attach importance/ significance to sth ➢stress/ emphasize ➢make a difference ➢lay/place emphasis on ➢last but not the least
As we all know, summer is the time when we students can relax and enjoy the family time. First of all, outdoor activities are clearly needed because, as we all know, spending too much time at home in front of our computer or TV is not the best way to spend the vacation.
4. Ladies and gentlemen/ Boys and girls, I’m…I’m greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I’m going to talk about…
1，不怕困难，分析问题，相信自己能过解决问题；
2，与父母、老师、同学交流，探讨解决方法；
3，做好学习或生活计划，及时巩固、总结。
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件 （共12 张）【 优秀课 件】
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件 （共12 张）【 优秀课 件】
Dear fellow students, It’s my great honor to give a speech here about
Speech
----演讲稿
➢Step Ⅰ：明确演讲主题
写作步骤：
➢Step Ⅱ：分析问题，展开论述
➢Step Ⅲ：提出解决方法或期待
Words and phrases：
➢significant/ significance ➢vital/ vitally ➢ count ➢attach importance/ significance to sth ➢stress/ emphasize ➢make a difference ➢lay/place emphasis on ➢last but not the least
As we all know, summer is the time when we students can relax and enjoy the family time. First of all, outdoor activities are clearly needed because, as we all know, spending too much time at home in front of our computer or TV is not the best way to spend the vacation.
高中英语书面表达专题：议论文课件(共24张)
Sentence patterns （观点） :
A majority of people are in favor of the ending of the division of science and arts. In their views, there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, the separation of subjects strongly affects the overall quality of our people. Furthermore, in the second place, it will result in some art students' lacking the spirit of exploring science and some science students' not caring about important issues like society and human beings.
Sentence patterns （观点） :
Some advocate(提倡) students’ playing games, saying/ arguing /insisting that playing games is good for them to develop their intelligence and imagination. Others, however, hold the opposite opinion/idea, believing that students should keep away from videogames.
高中英语写作公开课课件(共61张PPT)
表示转折关系的并列句 这类并列句常用but （但是；可是），yet（可是；然 而），while （而）等来连接，后面分句与前面分句之间 有意义上的转折关系。
She said she would be late, yet she arrived on time. Certainly he apologized, however, I won't forgive him. I like tea while she likes coffee.
状语从句（Adverbial cause):从句用作状语
When you cross a main road, you must be careful. Sit down wherever you like. As I didn’t know the way, I asked a policeman. You’ll be late, unless you hurry.
Tom and Mike are American boys.
She likes drawing and often draws pictures for the wall newspapers.
简单句的五种基本句型
不及物 动词
宾语
主语
及物 动词
间宾+直宾宾语
宾语+宾补
系
动词
表语
第一种句型：S+V
Guide in Writing
丰城二中
Teaching Objectives(教学目标）
By the end of this lesson you’ll be able to ■ find out the mistakes of the compositions given. ■ find out what problems cause you not to get higher marks in your writing. ■know some practical ways to improve a composition. ■feel less scared in writing.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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内容
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homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
2021/10/10
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
2021/10/10
1
内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
英语议论文写作课件课件(共15张)
阐述作者的观点：
As far as I’m concerned, … I hold the view that …
写作框架
1.点明主题+ 过渡句
2.详细对比--介绍正方观点+进一步介绍正方
观点；介绍反方观点+进一步介绍反方观点
3.阐述作者的观点
Pattern
There is a discussion about/on ______.
Should students make friends on line ?
Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . H__o_w_e_v_e_r__， others are against it .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study. _B_e_s_id_e_s_ ,some students get cheated on line.
转折 though/although/but/ however/despite/…
对比类 on the contrary/on the other hand
递进强调 besides/what’s more/
in addition/to make matters worse/what’s worse…
高考英语写作之议论文 完整版课件PPT
As a result of
因为
Thanks to Due to Owing to
2.More roads will have to be built with more cars, __________（所以）we’ll have less field to grow rice.
So
结果
therefore thus as a result/consequence
However,some people prefer to live in an apartment. On one hand, it is clean and safe. On the other hand, it is close to your work.
As far as I’m concerned, I prefer living in a traditional house. My reason is that I like enjoying sunlight, especially in winter. Moreover, my grandparents wouldn’t be happy if they live in an apartment. As they argue that it is not convenient for them to have outdoor activities. So I think living in a traditional house is a good and healthy lifestyle .
1.住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，树，可以养宠物， 可以在院子里锻炼身体。
2.住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近
3.我的看法及理由。
因为
Thanks to Due to Owing to
2.More roads will have to be built with more cars, __________（所以）we’ll have less field to grow rice.
So
结果
therefore thus as a result/consequence
However,some people prefer to live in an apartment. On one hand, it is clean and safe. On the other hand, it is close to your work.
As far as I’m concerned, I prefer living in a traditional house. My reason is that I like enjoying sunlight, especially in winter. Moreover, my grandparents wouldn’t be happy if they live in an apartment. As they argue that it is not convenient for them to have outdoor activities. So I think living in a traditional house is a good and healthy lifestyle .
1.住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，树，可以养宠物， 可以在院子里锻炼身体。
2.住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近
3.我的看法及理由。
高中英语选修二(人教版)2-4Writing 如何写观点类作文 教学课件
[常用表达] 一、引出主题(开头句) One of the pressing problems today is...and in my opinion，... I recently read a newspaper article on...As far as I am concerned，...
All in all, we should properly balance the relationship between phones and study. Only in this way can we benefit most from our learning process.
Yours，
_th_e_i_m_p_o_r_t_an_c_e__o_f _study.
(非谓语作状语)
2．正是我们的个人知识促进了手机的发展。
(一般表达)Our personal knowledge promotes the development of
phones.
(
高
级
表
达 )__It_i_s_o_u_r_p_e_r_so_n_a_l_k_n_o_w__le_d_g_e_t_h_a_t _p_ro_m__o_te_s_t_h_e_d_e_v_e_lo_p_m__e_n_t _o_f_p_h_o_n_e_s._
Section Ⅳ Writing——如何写观点类作文
[技法指导] 如何写观点类作文
观点类作文是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的 文体。在写作时，主要通过摆事实、讲道理，使读者接受作者的观 点。写作步骤是：第一段，开门见山，描述现象或表明立场，提出自 己的观点。在中间段落，说理论证自己的观点。为了使论证的层次更 清晰，可以使用to begin with, what's more, besides, in addition等衔接性 的词语。最后一段再次表达自己的观点。
人教版高中英语复习课件：写作给定观点型资料(共17张PPT)
• One of the primary causes is that 支持论点的理由1. As the saying goes, 引用名言证明理由1. / For example,引用 实例证明.
• Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持理由2primary causes is that 支持论点的理由1. As the saying goes, 引用名言证明理由1./ For example,引用实例 证明.
• Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持理由2. 并阐述.
• _____________good mood benefits your health. Life is always full of ups and downs. When you are in trouble or frustration, you should take it in a reasonable way and overcome it as soon as possible.
• ____________keeping a good mood brings you not only friendship, but health as well. ____________, we should learn to look at things from a positive angle, face challenge and pressure with optimistic attitude.
• On the one hand, 支持理由1，并阐述. • On the other hand, 支持理由2，并阐述. • Finally,支持理由2，并阐述. • So , based on the above discussion, there is no doubt
• Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持理由2primary causes is that 支持论点的理由1. As the saying goes, 引用名言证明理由1./ For example,引用实例 证明.
• Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持理由2. 并阐述.
• _____________good mood benefits your health. Life is always full of ups and downs. When you are in trouble or frustration, you should take it in a reasonable way and overcome it as soon as possible.
• ____________keeping a good mood brings you not only friendship, but health as well. ____________, we should learn to look at things from a positive angle, face challenge and pressure with optimistic attitude.
• On the one hand, 支持理由1，并阐述. • On the other hand, 支持理由2，并阐述. • Finally,支持理由2，并阐述. • So , based on the above discussion, there is no doubt
高中英语作文专题——议论文 PPT课件 图文
遣词造句，初步成文
在题材明确，信息全面，要点清晰的 基础上，要根据要点和重点词汇的句 法功能和语法规则，按照提示遣词造 句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一 致，时态呼应，脉络分明，合乎逻辑， 内容完整的短文。
通读审核，查漏补缺
定稿前认真检查，仔细核对，及时 修改，（内容要点是否遗漏，字母 大小写是否正确，单词拼写是否有 误，习惯用语搭配是否恰当，时态 是否呼应，主谓是否一致，是否有 中式英语出现等）力争使全文信息 完整，结构合理，语句表达准确。
While others think that观点一is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支 持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥-----------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由 三).
whether
(探讨的问题)or not. Different
people have different opinions. Some people say yes.
They think that
(支持的理由一). And
(支
持的理由二). Besides
(支持的理由三，此
点略低于前两个).
Others, however, think students should not. They
二.写作模板
The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say观点一is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
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How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— （事例）
结论
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评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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英语作文写作
观点类 作文写作
What makes a good essay?
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
•
7. 学习了这篇传记让我们了解到了沈 从文从 小如何 “读社 会这本 大书” ，感受 到他青 春期的 悲欢得 失。由 于传主 生活经 历的太 多苦难 ，加上 作者在 回忆中 不时融 入淳厚 的情感 ，让我 们读来 有某种 沉重与 辛酸， 也让我 们学生 受到启 发：对 于强者 ，生活 中的风 霜雨雪 也和阳 光雨露 一样， 都从不 同侧面 或者以 不同的 方式滋 润着我 们的生 命，现 实中的 曲折、 坎坷、 苦难可 能拓展 人的精 神空间 ，让人 能更加 以阔大 的心胸 与坚强 的意志 ，去感 受
3. conclusion:
__i_n_m__y__o_p_in_i_o_n_…___
主题句的内容要明确，语言简洁，开门见山， 句式力争多样性
1. introduction(topic):
Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.
towards … Ø People have different opinions on this problem. Ø People take different views on this question.
TheTbhoedbyodpyarptart
Ppooiinntt11:： 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）
RReeaassoonn11：：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空 气，有利健康
➢ They think it good to do sth…… ➢ sth do good to sth ➢ In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do
sth…… 翻译:They think it good for their health to be close
生命，理解生活的意义。
•
4.不少评论家觉得沈从文擅长写景， 且晴朗 明澈， 但是缺 少深度 。也有 评论家 认为好 就好在 没有深 度，因 为没有 深度的 “看” 风景， 其实就 不为一 般的社 会价值 所局限 ，这样 也就抛 弃了自 以为是 的优越 感和置 身事外 的位置 ，而是 在宇宙 万汇的 动静之 中“看 ”。
•
5.一次眼光看风景万物，多了一份包 涵和宽 容，看 到的历 史也就 不是战 争、王 朝更迭 之类的 东西， 而是千 百年来 凡夫俗 子们的 哀乐、 努力和 命运。 它们代 表了更 为现实 逼真的 生存和 价值。
•
6.抒发的感情真诚感人，不写自己的 品学兼 优、勤 奋用功 ，而是 如实地 展现自 己的天 生的野 性，充 满了阅 读和学 习“生 活”这 本大书 所得到 的欢欣 鼓舞的 生命体 验，表 现了对 自然和 生命无 比好奇 和热爱 以及泰 然面对 一切残 忍和苦 难的生 活观。
•
2.沈从文创作的小说主要有两类，一 种是以 湘西生 活为题 材，一 种是以 都市生 活为题 材，前 者通过 描写湘 西人原 始、自 然的生 命形式 ，赞美 人性美 ；后者 通过都 市生活 的腐化 堕落， 揭示都 市自然 人性的 丧失。
•
3. 从作者的描述看，作者的观察敏锐 ，记忆 超强， 对现象 世界十 分倾心 ，对大 自然的 声音、 气味， 社会上 的人与 事怀有 浓厚的 兴趣。 他把大 自然与 社会生 活称为 一本“ 大书” ，他从 这本“ 大书” 中学到 了许多 书本上 没有的 东西， 他在自 然和社 会中倾 心体验 ，尊重 生命本 真的做 法，并 非不爱 学习， 而是为 了更好 的学习 。
• 表示递进、强调的关联词 • .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In
addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse…
Conclusion paragraph: 结尾
结尾常用句型 Ø In my opinion/Personally, … Ø As far as I’m concerned, … ØIn short/ in brief/ in a word, …
Ø On the other hand, … some people are against the idea.
表列举说明的关联词: • Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, ....
Secondly… Thirdly… • In the first place… In the second place…
In the third place… • Finally/ Last but no神放松/大脑休息/有利于学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接） 翻译: What’s more，they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Ppooiinnt 2:：３５％的学生认为不应该 春
•
游（亮明观点）
• 翻译: On the other hand, about 35% students are
against the idea.
2. body(supporting ideas):
高考临近 w_i_t_h_c_o_l_le_g_e_e_n_t_r_a_n_c_e_e_x_a_m__in__a_ti_o_n_d__ra_w__in__g_n_e_a_r__ 接触自然_b_e__c_lo_s_e_t_o__n_a_tu_r_e__ 精神放松 _r_e_la_x__th_e_m__s_e_lv_e_s_ 呼吸新鲜空气 _b_re_a_t_h_e__so_m__e_f_r_e_s_h air 大脑休息 _r_e_s_t _th__ei_r_b_r_a_i_n_s____ 没心情玩_（__d_o_n_’_t_f_ee_l_l_i_k_e_g_o_i_n_g_） 耽误学习_(_w_a_s_te__th__e_t_im__e_)_____
• 表示递进、强调的关联词 • .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In
addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse…
CConocnlculsuiosnion: 小段总结，进一步亮明 观点，前后呼应。
巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系
Ø Opinions are divided on this question. Ø Different people hold different / opposite opinions. Ø People have taken/adopted different attitudes
• 使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下 Ø）However, …of them hold a different view. / …of
them hold the opposite opinion.
Ø People who are against it don’t think so.
Ø Different from those…., …people think ….
In the third place… • Finally/ Last but not least/, ....
• RReaesaosno1n：1:高考临近，没有心情玩
• 翻译: They say that with college entrance
examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
翻译：Most students, about 65%, are in favor of the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
表达观点一句型： Ø …of them hold the opinion that …. Ø …of them are in favor of the idea that… Ø People who are for the idea think …
• They say/believe/hold the opinion… that….
•RReaesaoson2n：2:春游耽误学习
翻译:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.
to nature and breathe some fresh air
表列举说明的关联词: • Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, ....
Secondly… Thirdly… • In the first place… In the second place…
观点类 作文写作
What makes a good essay?
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
•
7. 学习了这篇传记让我们了解到了沈 从文从 小如何 “读社 会这本 大书” ，感受 到他青 春期的 悲欢得 失。由 于传主 生活经 历的太 多苦难 ，加上 作者在 回忆中 不时融 入淳厚 的情感 ，让我 们读来 有某种 沉重与 辛酸， 也让我 们学生 受到启 发：对 于强者 ，生活 中的风 霜雨雪 也和阳 光雨露 一样， 都从不 同侧面 或者以 不同的 方式滋 润着我 们的生 命，现 实中的 曲折、 坎坷、 苦难可 能拓展 人的精 神空间 ，让人 能更加 以阔大 的心胸 与坚强 的意志 ，去感 受
3. conclusion:
__i_n_m__y__o_p_in_i_o_n_…___
主题句的内容要明确，语言简洁，开门见山， 句式力争多样性
1. introduction(topic):
Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.
towards … Ø People have different opinions on this problem. Ø People take different views on this question.
TheTbhoedbyodpyarptart
Ppooiinntt11:： 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）
RReeaassoonn11：：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空 气，有利健康
➢ They think it good to do sth…… ➢ sth do good to sth ➢ In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do
sth…… 翻译:They think it good for their health to be close
生命，理解生活的意义。
•
4.不少评论家觉得沈从文擅长写景， 且晴朗 明澈， 但是缺 少深度 。也有 评论家 认为好 就好在 没有深 度，因 为没有 深度的 “看” 风景， 其实就 不为一 般的社 会价值 所局限 ，这样 也就抛 弃了自 以为是 的优越 感和置 身事外 的位置 ，而是 在宇宙 万汇的 动静之 中“看 ”。
•
5.一次眼光看风景万物，多了一份包 涵和宽 容，看 到的历 史也就 不是战 争、王 朝更迭 之类的 东西， 而是千 百年来 凡夫俗 子们的 哀乐、 努力和 命运。 它们代 表了更 为现实 逼真的 生存和 价值。
•
6.抒发的感情真诚感人，不写自己的 品学兼 优、勤 奋用功 ，而是 如实地 展现自 己的天 生的野 性，充 满了阅 读和学 习“生 活”这 本大书 所得到 的欢欣 鼓舞的 生命体 验，表 现了对 自然和 生命无 比好奇 和热爱 以及泰 然面对 一切残 忍和苦 难的生 活观。
•
2.沈从文创作的小说主要有两类，一 种是以 湘西生 活为题 材，一 种是以 都市生 活为题 材，前 者通过 描写湘 西人原 始、自 然的生 命形式 ，赞美 人性美 ；后者 通过都 市生活 的腐化 堕落， 揭示都 市自然 人性的 丧失。
•
3. 从作者的描述看，作者的观察敏锐 ，记忆 超强， 对现象 世界十 分倾心 ，对大 自然的 声音、 气味， 社会上 的人与 事怀有 浓厚的 兴趣。 他把大 自然与 社会生 活称为 一本“ 大书” ，他从 这本“ 大书” 中学到 了许多 书本上 没有的 东西， 他在自 然和社 会中倾 心体验 ，尊重 生命本 真的做 法，并 非不爱 学习， 而是为 了更好 的学习 。
• 表示递进、强调的关联词 • .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In
addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse…
Conclusion paragraph: 结尾
结尾常用句型 Ø In my opinion/Personally, … Ø As far as I’m concerned, … ØIn short/ in brief/ in a word, …
Ø On the other hand, … some people are against the idea.
表列举说明的关联词: • Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, ....
Secondly… Thirdly… • In the first place… In the second place…
In the third place… • Finally/ Last but no神放松/大脑休息/有利于学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接） 翻译: What’s more，they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Ppooiinnt 2:：３５％的学生认为不应该 春
•
游（亮明观点）
• 翻译: On the other hand, about 35% students are
against the idea.
2. body(supporting ideas):
高考临近 w_i_t_h_c_o_l_le_g_e_e_n_t_r_a_n_c_e_e_x_a_m__in__a_ti_o_n_d__ra_w__in__g_n_e_a_r__ 接触自然_b_e__c_lo_s_e_t_o__n_a_tu_r_e__ 精神放松 _r_e_la_x__th_e_m__s_e_lv_e_s_ 呼吸新鲜空气 _b_re_a_t_h_e__so_m__e_f_r_e_s_h air 大脑休息 _r_e_s_t _th__ei_r_b_r_a_i_n_s____ 没心情玩_（__d_o_n_’_t_f_ee_l_l_i_k_e_g_o_i_n_g_） 耽误学习_(_w_a_s_te__th__e_t_im__e_)_____
• 表示递进、强调的关联词 • .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In
addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse…
CConocnlculsuiosnion: 小段总结，进一步亮明 观点，前后呼应。
巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系
Ø Opinions are divided on this question. Ø Different people hold different / opposite opinions. Ø People have taken/adopted different attitudes
• 使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下 Ø）However, …of them hold a different view. / …of
them hold the opposite opinion.
Ø People who are against it don’t think so.
Ø Different from those…., …people think ….
In the third place… • Finally/ Last but not least/, ....
• RReaesaosno1n：1:高考临近，没有心情玩
• 翻译: They say that with college entrance
examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
翻译：Most students, about 65%, are in favor of the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
表达观点一句型： Ø …of them hold the opinion that …. Ø …of them are in favor of the idea that… Ø People who are for the idea think …
• They say/believe/hold the opinion… that….
•RReaesaoson2n：2:春游耽误学习
翻译:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.
to nature and breathe some fresh air
表列举说明的关联词: • Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, ....
Secondly… Thirdly… • In the first place… In the second place…