读写任务(四)讲评 (1)

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1）赞同吗？为什么？
agree
Work, keep yourself busy, make full use of your time/meaningful, a sense of achievement, be thought highly of /praised ①study harder and make a great progress, which give you a sense of achievement… ②share the happiness which were gained from studying with your classmates. Such as, working out a difficult math problem…
Study hard and enjoy yourselves The author highlights the effect of work on people’s health, because it can rid one of loneliness, and make one feel fruitful and proud of himself, which always contributes to a good body. In common with the author, I agree that the harder you work, the happier you will be, as hard work can keep a person busy, and gives one a sense of achievement, hence he will be self-confident and feel happy. Around me, some of my classmates work very hard, hoping to fulfill their dream. However, they don’t seem unhappy. Oppositely, they try to find fun even under the pressure of the NMET. For example, they may share the joy with others when working out a problem. Sometimes they may play a trick on his partner using the newly-learned idioms, thus refresh themselves quickly. As for me, I think only when we truly experience what fun it is, can we spare no effort to study hard and meanwhile enjoy ourselves.
读写任务（四）讲评
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议 论来自百度文库文
论点 Work is helpful to health 论据
1)get rid of loneliness 2)fulfillment & achievement
The author highlights the effect of work on people’s health, because it can rid one of loneliness, and make one feel fruitful and proud of himself, which always contributes to a good body.
读写任务模板的套用
【发表个人看法】In my opinion, I think it is important to work hard, because hard work may keep you busy and bring you a lot of happiness and achievement.
2）举例
3）如何做？study hard and find fun from your study.
The passage mainly tells us that scientists find work is helpful to health and explain the reason why work is good for health, besides, work has many advantages in people’s life. I agree with the opinion that study hard also can live happy, because when we are studying, we can feel the interest of study and gain more knowledges. 1. 要点齐全，详略得当 My friend had the similar experience. One time, he failed in the final exam, our teacher was very angry, 2.例子比较具体, 比较有说服力 because everyone in my class passed the exam, only he didn’t. I thought he would be worried and upset, on the contrary, he smiled to me and said he won’t give up and he 3.有些句子存在语法错误，用词不当 would study harder. So he asked many questions when he was in trouble. Besides, he answered questions in the class and kept smiling to everyone. As time went out, he made great progress and became more confident. In my opinion, we should regard study as a happy thing and learn to feel the interest of study, what’s more, we should be positive and optimic towards life, in this way, we can live happily.
The passage mainly tells us that work is helpful to health for the reasons that people can be away from loneliness and find friendship and warmth by working, besides, they can also get fulfillment and achievement from work. In my opinion, I think learning hard can lead to happy life. That is because when we get good grades by studying hard, we will be proude and encouraged. 1.is an example of my classmate. When I met him 要点齐全，观点鲜明 Here first time, he was just an ordinary student. However, he had 2.例子比较具体 an extraordinary heart, for I could see that he spent most of his time on study with his patience. Sometimes, he got bad 3. 语法错误稍多，较多词语运用不够恰当 grades, he even never complained it, on the contrary, he regarded it as a chance to find out his mistakes and benefitted from it. What’s more, he always keeps optimistic, because he believes nothing can defeat him. As for me, we should see the achievement we will get in study but not the hardships, only by this can we live happier.
【举例】This reminds me of one of my friends. 【例子】When I was studying English years ago, I was poor in writing. I couldn’t even make a good sentence and 【心情】I was sad about it.【起伏】 Luckily, my friend told me not to give up and said to me that I should study hard and have an optimistic attitude to life. 【结果】 With the help of him, I studied harder. A month later, I did better in English and live more happily. I really thanked my friend very much. 【做法】As for me, I believe that when we have an positive attitude towards study and try our best, we can become better in study and life.