托福大作文写作框架分析解析

4. ask a question and answer it by yourself
• What is the most important quality should a good leader possesses? I believe openmindedness outweighs industry, knowledge, sense of responsibility, etc., and it is the crucial element that leads a group to success.
TOEFl Independent Writing
Structure
Steps
• • • • I. brainstorming II. beginning III. body paragraphs IV. conclusion
I. Brainstorming • 2013.1.12：Do you agree or disagree the following statement: • An effective leader should try to make others feel that they are part of the decision making process.
IV. Conclusion
• • • • 1. induction 2. advising 3. warning 4. concession
1. induction
• In conclusion, leaders , employees and the whole team will benefit if leaders let others join in the process of decision making. Leaders who can do so will definitely lead their groups from success to success.
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• • • • Health, happiness Environment, employment, efficiency Responsibilities, rights Socialization, skill
Leaders: 1 less burden • 2. leaders will make less big mistakes • 3. more ideas to choose. • 4. popularity increases Workers: • happier, Promotion, Work harder • More responsibility , communication • find their potential. Team: enhance the team spirit and cohesion
II. beginning
• 1. come straight to the point • 2. background + stance • 3. Stance + brief introduction of your supporting points • 4. ask a question and answer it by yourself. • 5. quotation + stance
1. come straight to the point
• Outstanding leaders ought to engage their subordinates in the process of decision making to achieve success.
2. Stance + brief introduction of your supporting points
• Good leaders should definitely get their subordinates involved in the course of making decisions. Only in this way can they enhance the team spirit, and benefit both the leaders and employees.
• The competition of modern society is becoming increasingly intense. The essence of the competition is the confrontation of people, especially the leaders. However, a leader can’t make a group successful without obtaining helps from others.
5. quotation + stance
• Peter F．Drucker, farther of modern management, once said “An effective manager is good at employing others’ merits”. In order to accomplish this, leaders should absorb ideas from their subordinates.
2. advising
III. body paragraphs
• • • • topic sentence general statement example or argumentation closing sentence
examples
• 1. true people, true events • 2. your own experiences • 3. assumption