高考英语写作公开课优秀课件

Step1 .Analyzing the task
【审题——抓准信息· 快速推断】
项目 体Байду номын сангаас 话题
结论 书信（给_编__辑_一__封__信_）_
以“文明出国旅游”为主题
时态 人称
一般现__在_时__为_主_及__情_态__动_词_的_ 应用 __第__一_人__称__为_主___
Step2. Finding out the main points and forming sentences
avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that _q_u_e_u_e__ju_m__p_i_n_g_is unacceptable in many countries。
第3段：向社会呼吁【结尾6分】
【信息】呼吁大家做文明游客
【点拨】适度发挥, 以使文章符合逻辑 【运用】我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的
行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。
【遣词】 1.代表国家形象：represent our country 2.注意：be cautious about 3.只有这样：only in this way
【造句】 more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are ____r_e_p_r_e_s_e_n_ti_n_g__o_u_r_c_o_u_nwtrhyile abroad, so we need to___b_e__c_a_u_ti_o_u_s_a_b_ohuotw we act, ___o_n_l_y_i_n_tchains wweay enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.
outline composition writing, the proof and the rational cloze.
What is a good writing？
Content:
* everything needed included which is related to your view.( 内容要完整)
* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
How to write a composition
Six steps to write a composition ① Analyzing the task ②Finding out the main points ③Thinking of key points/phrases ④Forming sentences ⑤Combining the sentences into a passage ⑥Copying normally
Step3. Combining the sentences into a passage
【造句】 In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must_r_e_sp__ec_t__a_n_d_f_o_ll_o_w__l_o_ca_l_c_u_s_t_o_m__s, Besides, we’d better n_o_t_t_a_lk__lo_u_d__ly__in__p_u_b_l_ic__p_la_c_e_s_to
第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点12分】
【信息】1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。
【点拨】扩充要点, 使文章条理
【运用】 建议注意自己的行为。首先，尊重习俗；其次，不高声
喧哗，再次，插队是不被接受的。
【遣词】1.尊重习俗：respect and follow local customs 2.高声喧哗：talk loudly in public places 3.插队：queue jumping
4.引起了社会关注: cause a big concern
【造句】Every year, a great many holidaymakersgo abroad for sightseeing and relaxation ,while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big .concern
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅)
Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
高考英语写作公开课优秀课件
Learning Aims
▪ 1.Learn to write an outline composition. ▪ 2.Develop a good writing habit —
analyze — organize — polish. ▪ 3.Develop the abilities to solving the
【定点——把握要点，遣词造句】
第1段：点明话题—出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为【引入6分】 【信息】每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起 了社会关注。 【遣词】1. 假日游客: holidaymaker
2.出国旅游观光: go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation 3.不文明行为: behave rudely
(云南省第二次统测)每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不 文明行为引起了社会关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文 明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请给报社 专栏编辑写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：
1.尊重习俗； 2.不高声喧哗；
3.其它。 注意:词数100~120个,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。