中外诗歌对比分析

Analysis between To Autumn and Autumn Twilight in a Mountain

山居秋暝

王维

空山新雨后，天气晚来秋。

明月松间照，清泉石上流。

竹喧归浣女，莲动下渔舟。

随意春芳歇，王孙自可留。

To Autumn is an ode that contains three stanzas, and each of these has eleven lines. With respect to its rhyme, ‘To Autumn’ does not follow a perfect pattern. While the first stanza has an ABABCDEDCCE pattern (see the poem on the next page), the second and the third ones have an ABABCDECDDE pattern. However,Autumn Twilight in a Mountain has four stanzas, eight sentences. It has the excellent rhyme.

In To Autumn, John Keats writes about a typical day of this season, describing all kind of colorful and detailed images. The author makes an intense description of autumn at least at first sight. The first stanza begins showing this season as misty and fruitful, which, with the help of a ‘maturing sun’, ripens the fruit of the vines. Next, we can see clearly a hyperbole. Keats writes that a tree has so many apples that it bends (line 5), while the gourds swell and the hazel shells plumps. Finally, Keats suggests that the bees have a large amount of flowers. And these flowers did not bud in summer but now, in autumn. As a consequence, the bees are incessantly working and their honeycombs are overflowing since summer. In the second stanza, there is an evident personification. The poet starts asking a rhetoric question (line 12) to autumn which now is not only a woman but a gleaner. However, this woman is apparently resting in a granary or in the landscape: The third stanza continues again with rhetoric questions. In the first one Keats asks the woman where the sounds of the spring are. And the second one is just a repetition of the same question. However, the poet tells autumn that she has her own sounds, although some of them are sad:

Comparing with Autumn Twilight in a Mountain，shoulian focuses on the quiet environment. It also expresses the poet elegantly serene feelings. Language plain, but gives produce a cool, fresh feeling. These hills, the evening is clean and fresh, it has a fresh and quiet tone was set for the poem. Hanlian is neat antithesis. Preceding sentence write static scene for the eye see the cold moonlight through the pine needles,

hazy, focused depicting mountain village moonlight quiet; latter sentence to write a moving scene, both eye see, there are ears the static in smell, sound, static in action, movement phase contrast spring water flows through the slate issued gurgling sound, contrasting the quiet Village Moonlight. Although the screen is cool, but the flow of lively, deathly silence feeling calm, but not die a quiet natural life. Jinglian writes the noisy in the village, which enforces the silent in the mountain. Before six lyric by natural scenery, the last two is a direct expression of the poet. Poet writes this quiet and full of vitality screen, and finally issued an expression of their intention to emotion. The last sentences suggest that the noble feelings of the poet longing deserted mountains and happy hermit life goals

From the expression to analysis the poems, the picture show in Wang Wei, is a poet captured in contemplation of the scene, is still in the see moving. Poet captures some of the dynamic, sound poetry, to automatically write static ,write static sound like static, thereby creating a mood of quiet and beautiful,. "to move, are becoming increasingly static." Static V oid is not dead nor depression in this poem. Poets of autumn, washed off completely the kind of sad, sad mood, completely washed out the kind of dark and deep colors. He expresses the fresh and vigor of autumn. The poem is highly pictorial, picture with sound dynamic, giving to the beauty of the music, of poetic beauty. Simultaneously, the noble sentiments of the poet also are reflected in the quiet beautiful scenery. Whereas, in K eats’eyes, autumn symbolizes maturity. This exists in human and animal lives. Some instances of this are the ‘full-grown lambs’, the sorrow of the gnats, the wind that lives and dies, and the day that is dying and getting dark. As all we know, the next season is winter, a part of the year that represents aging and death, in other words, the end of life. However, in my opinion, death does not have a negative connotation because Keats enjoys and accepts “autumn”or maturity as part of life, though winter is coming.

Therefore, the beauty of autumn is spread out before us. The harvest and still in the autumn is attractive. In the autumn, the scenery is not dead, because of the vitality. In a word, the autumn is worthy of appreciating it.