英语议论文正反观点对比写作

However, each coin has two sides.
On the other hand, people
that ….
object
(4)你的观点: …… in my view / opinion, I agree with…, As for me, … As far as I’m concerned,
表示不同观点的套语
paragrap 2表达赞同观点 …of them are in favor of the idea that…
People who are for the idea think …
Some people believe that… …
表达反对的观点: On the contrary, …of them hold a different view. …of them hold the opposite opinion.
How to polish your Writing
高考书面表达评分标准
高考书面表达评分标准
第五档（很好）（21－25分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。 — 覆盖所有内容要点。 — 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 — 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较 复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 — 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
不同观 点对比 说明自 己观点

Paragraph1 总起: Different people hold/ have different opinions. People have taken different attitudes towards … People have different opinions on this problem. There are two opposite opinions about it.
英文字母示例
单从书写上看 猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？
中考各档书面表达示例
21
4分
10
5
Bad sample
次卷 不面 清不 整 得洁 分涂 改 较 多 语 言 错 误 多 层
; ; ; ; 11
字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。
对比鲜明
Remember：
We must pay attention to our handwriting,it can help us get a high grade.
(4)Others think it is bad. However, others have opposite opinions. 注意：使用高级词汇
句式----化腐朽为神奇
(5)They spend a lot of time and energy on it. So it will affect our work and rest. 名词性从句 They argue that it takes both time and energy to write new or read micro-blogs, which will affect our work and rest.
书写注意事项
Talk about it in your group.
1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。 作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为 “四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写， 不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或 用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的感觉。 3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线划 掉即可。 eg: He can speker English very well. He can speker speak English very well. Game
句式----化腐朽为神奇
(2) Some people think it is good, because they can show their talent and share information. It is convenient to them.
Some people think it is a good way to show their talent and share a good amount of information and experience. Meanwhile, it’s convenient to keep in touch with friends.
审题
一般现在时 议论文 本文属于________，基本时态是________，
第一和第三人称 人称用____________
抓要点，列提纲---文章结构
提出问题
正反 观点 对比 类的 文章
不同观点对比
说明自己观点
构思---文章结构
(1)With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see many people set up their own micro-blogs. 对微博有两种态度. (2) 态度一: .一部分人认为它好， 原因（1）原因（2） (3)态度二: 另一部分人认为它不好， 原因（1） 原因（2）， (4)我的观点: 好or不好 ？？ 提出问题
Dear sir, recently our classmates With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see many people set up their own micro-blogs. Some people think it is a good way to show their talent and share information. Meanwhile, it’s convenient to keep in touch with friends. It is also a new platform to meet new friends and gain knowledge of the outside world. However, others have opposite opinions. They argue that it takes both time and energy to write new or read micro-blogs, which will affect our work and rest. In my view, the micro-blog is a good tool for us to broaden our horizons and communicate with others. It will benefit us a lot if we can limit the time we spend on it to avoid getting addicted.
: Some people think it is _____________ a good way to show their talent and share information. (赞同) On the contrary （与之相反） However ______________, Others ____________________________. hold a different hold the opposite view opinion (持有不同/相反的观点)
A常见题型：talk in your group
1、根据汉语提示完成作文。 2、根据表格提示完成作文。 3、根据图片提示完成作文。 要求：写一篇100字左右的英语作文。
B写作策略:please,remember
审
列 润(整 , 连 , 美 )
草稿纸
抄
试卷
写作基本要求
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• • • • •
1.字数达到要求。（100字左右） 2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。 3.语法正确。 4.标点正确。 5.文章内容是否切题 。 6.格式正确。
小试牛刀：衔接词
More and more people have their own micro-blogs. Some people think it is good, because they can show their talent and share information. It is convenient to them. They can also meet new friends and gain knowledge. However, different people hold different views. Others think it is bad. They spend a lot of time and energy on it. So it will affect our work and rest. I think the micro-blog is very good, because we can communicate with our friends.
观点二 1．花费很多时间和精力
2．影响工作和休息。
it takes both time and energy to do sth ; affect our work and rest
How to polish your Writing
高考大纲中常用的衔接词 1. 表示递进 what is more (而且); in addition(此外)； besides, moreover(而且，此外) 2. 表示转折 however; on the contrary(正相反) 3. 表示因果 Therefore(因此，所以); as a result; because 4. 表示对比 like; unlike, on the other hand 5. 表示总结 to sum up ; all in all
句式----化腐朽为神奇
(3)They can also meet new friends and gain knowledge.
It is also a new platform to meet new friends and gain knowleБайду номын сангаасge of the outside world.
非限定语从句
句式----化腐朽为神奇
(6) I think the micro-blog is very good, because we can communicate with our friends. In my view, the micro-blog is a good broaden our horizons tool for us to keep our eyes open and communicate with others. It will benefit us a lot if we can limit the time we spend on it to avoid getting addicted.
高考应试作文 写作训练
正反观点对比
越来越多的人拥有微博（ micro-blog），下表反 映了人们对微博的不同看法 一部分人认为： 另一部分人认为：
1．展示才华、分享经验； 1．花费很多时间和精力
2．认识朋友、增加知识 2．影响工作和休息。 假如你是李华，请你根据以上表格的内容提 示，给某英语报社写一篇100词左右的英语短文， 并发表自己的看法。 注意： 1．所写短文需包括已提供的所有信息； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
总结： in brief, in a word, in summary
How to polish(完善) your Writing 2 1
词汇 句式
技巧点拨
衔接词
2
学以致用
构思---短语
观点一 1．展示才华、分享经验；
2．认识朋友、增加知识
show their talent ; share experience meet new friends ; gain knowledge
句式----化腐朽为神奇
(1)More and more people have their own micro-blogs. With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see that many people set up their own micro-blogs. 句式(1): It is + adj /n+(for sb). to do 句式(2): 宾语从句