英语作文-课件ppt

surprised
so…that…
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He did magic shows well. Everyone was surprised.
He did magic shows so well that everyone was really surprised.
Ending
I hope you'll feel better soon, best wishes!
• Dear Danny,
• I'm sorry to hear that you're not feeling well. As we know, it is important for us to keep healthy .But do you know how to make it? I'm happy to share my ideas with you here. First, you should eat healthy food, such as apples, vegetables and so on, don't forget to stay away from junk food. Second, it's necessary for you to do more sports.You can run every morning and play ball games after school.Third, you should give up unhealthy living habits, such as drinking and smoking. I think you'd better go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. What's more, you're supposed to stay happy and talk with your parents and your friends more often.
6. It's important for us to keep health.
healthy
7.My English is more and more better.
better and better
8.We have to do something save the earth.
to save the earth
• If everyone can do as I say, the world will be more and more beautiful, let’s take action.
12.They like playing games and sing English songs.
singing
Practice
假如你是Frank,阅读邮件内容，然后根 据提示给Danny 回一封电子邮件。
Dear Doctor Frank, How are you? I often feel very weak and I
Studying hard
4. There are many people like pop music.--Many people like pop music.
5. Whatever he happens, he never lose confident.--Whatever happens to him, he never loses confidence.
Ending
If everyone can……., the world will be …..
• It’s our duty to protect the environment. The
environment is becoming worse and worse, so we must do something to save it. First, I think we should plant more trees and grass, it is helpful to protect the wild animals . we all know, animals are our friends so we must stop people hurting them. Second, it’s our duty to save water, while we are washing our hair ,we should turn off the shower. Next, make sure we take our own bags when shopping. Recycling paper、 bottles and books is also a good way to save the earth.
don’t know what to do. Could you give me some advice on how to keep healthy?
Danny
吃健康 食物
多锻 炼
不吸烟 喝酒
How to keep healthy?
自拟 建议1
自拟建 议2
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9.The aim of the club is improve our English speaking skills.
to
10.He has many hobbies, from collect stamps to swim. collecting swimming
11.There is going to have a concert this evening. be
don’t use paper napkins（餐巾）
stop riding in cars
recycle（回收） books,bottles and paper
The outline of the letter
outline
Beginning It’s our duty to……The environment is becoming……….
二、列举提纲，打造文章骨架
• 在完成审题工作之后，根据提示内容， 列出提纲，打造整篇文章的骨架，在这一 环节中，我们必须把作文的要点列举出来， 包括你在作文中需要补充的重点短语等。
三、充实提纲，完善文章内容
• 文章骨架一定，接下来就要进行充实完善，使 之血肉丰满。根据骨架，我们把词和词组充实为 句子，把句子结合为段落，再整理成文章。这又 要求我们把握几点：①句子要完整，意思须符合 主旨。②恰当使用连接词，使文章通顺，过度自 然。 ③处理好开头和结尾。为更好地达到这三点 要求，在作文时要求学生在确保正确的前提下， 能够正确使用关联词，并且文章句式尽可能多样 化， 。如简单句和复合句并用，陈述句和感叹句 共存，插入语、省略句、习语、格言的适当运用 都能使文章更完美，更具说服力 .
Can you correct the mistakes?
1. We believe happiness belongs to our. 2. Although he was tired, but he was haupspy. 3. Study hardly is the bridge to success.
• I hope you‘ll feel better soon, best wishes!
Frank
What should we do to save the earth?
plant trees
turn off the shower
save water
take your own bags when shopping
Main part
First： plant more trees and grass, protect the wild animals Second: save water, turn off the shower Next: take our own bags when shopping. recycle paper、bottles and books , stop riding in cars At last: stop using paper napkins
Third: give up bad habits( drinking and smoking) , I think: go to bed early and get up early . not stay up late , stay happy and talk with your parents and your friends more often.
• 四、仔细检查，完美文章细节
• ⑴是否有语法错误：主谓是否一致， 句子的时态、语态，动词的用法，词语的 搭配是否正确，比如consider 后要跟动名 词形式，happen 不能使用被动语态，be able to 与can不能同时使用，一个句子中 不能同时出现because与 so或者although 与but等情况。⑵检查上下文是否连贯，句 子衔接是否自然流畅。⑶是否有大小写、 拼写和标点错误。⑷是否有重要信息遗漏。 ⑸ 开头和结尾是否处理完美。
He took the ring out of an egg. when
People cheered for him.
as soon as
after because
People cheered for him as soon as he took the ring out of an egg
did magic shows
Oh, yes,the traffic is busier and busier , so we should stop riding in cars if possible, you should walk on foot. At last , I want to tell you if you’re used to using napkins, please stop it at once!
Our beautiful school
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写
一、认真审题，确定文章主旨
作
二、列举提纲，打造文章骨架
四
步
三、充实提纲，完善文章内容
走
四、仔细检查，完美文章细节
一、认真审题，确定文章主旨
• • 在这一环节中，我们要通过对题目的仔
细研读，确定好文章的体裁、时态、人称、 主题等信息。常见的文章体裁有记叙文、 书信、E-mail、日记、说明文等。（初中阶 段我们通常使用一般现在时态进行作文。）
outline
Beginning
Dear Frank,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well………..
Main part
First：eat healthy food ,such as…..stay away from junk food
Second: do more sports, run, play ball games