大学英语四级图画作文指南

描述图画的常用词
• 有关图画的名词 • 描述图画的形容词 • 修饰动词的副词 • “寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译？
替换picture的词语
• drawing 指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。 • cartoon 指幽默或讽刺性漫画。(amusing
drawing in a newspaper or magazine, esp one that comments satirically on current events (报刊上的)漫画；（尤指）时事讽刺 画。) • portrait 指肖像，只用于指人。 • illustration 插画
四级图画作文
By CUG Writing Workshop
作文四大要素
• 根据教育部公布的《大纲解析》，大作文 四大要素为描述、寓意、分析、评论。
• 根据历年考题，首段应是图画描述，不应 发表太多议论，否则属于跑题。
• 图画描述至少应有两句，根据大纲解析， 如果图画只字未提，扣三分之一的分数； 如果图画只描述一句，属于描述不充分， 扣3分。
Homework
• As is vividly depicted above, in the cartoon stand two travellers, travelling across mountains and grasslands with heavy baggages on their shoulders.
• There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the finnal.
• On the playground runs a young man, rushing to the finnal.
• As is shown in the picture, + 完全倒装结构（主系 表 表系主）+ 非谓语动词结构 +定语从句
第一段常用首句句式
• As is shown/ depicted/ portrayed in the picture/ cartoon,....
• The picture above vividly describe.... • The drawing above does
demonstrate certain thoughtprovoking social phenomenon. • What does the author intend to convey by describing... is that ....
• 女神版：As is shown in the cartoon, in the picture stands a candle, spreading brightness around itself.
• 屌丝版：As is shown above, a young man was asking his barber to have his hair cut like David Beckham.
3. 小结：概括论证，总结本段
1句
➢第三段：结论段，建议措施，4句 1. 结论句：1句 2. 针对双方提建议：2句 3. 包装结尾、展望未来：1句
• Only in this way can we solve this problem. • It is high time that we solved this problem.
Βιβλιοθήκη Baidu
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the classroon stands a teacher, asking her student to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long text-message, while the student feels rather unpleasant. (37 words)
第一段第二句由图片描述上升到文字说 明或寓意的阐释
①
Simple
由浅入深之句型
and funny as the cartoon
is,
it
reflects that ....
2）The caption reads/indicates that “___”.
第一句描述图画 怎么写？
• 描述图画时需要遵循以下步骤：
1.寻找出图画的中心事物，并确定中心事 物的位置。
2.描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个 方面来描述。
3.寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行 简单的描述。
1. 句型单一， 2. 不具备可复制
字幕:
• Caption: words printed with an illustration or a photograph in order to describe or explain it （附於插图、照片上 的）说明文字
1) We are informed by the caption that “___”.
写作框架：
1）第一段主要是描述图画中的信息和表达的 含义。
2）第二段的全文的重点，一般都是要求具体 分析图画中暗含的社会现象。
3）第三段的要求一般视具体的试题而定，有 的要求给出自己的评论、有的要求举例、 有的要求考生提出自己的建议以及针对现 象应该采取的措施。
➢ Tips：第二段和第三段的开头最好写一个 主题句，既可以防止离题，又符合英文写
练一个呗
• As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the picture stands a boy, worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first. (33 words)
• There is a man who is running on the playground.
• On the playground runs a young man.
• As is shown in the picture, + 完全倒装结构（主系 表 表系主）+ 非谓语动词结构 +定语从句
描述图画的形容词
• thought-provoking发人深省的 • enlightening 有启迪作用/使人感悟的 • compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴
趣
• profound含义深刻 =far-reaching implications • instructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV:
• As is vividly depicted above, in the cartoon stand two men, dressed in traditional Arab clothes, watching the construction of ancient pyramid, which is the amazing achievement of teamwork.
• 女神版：As is shown above, in the chair sits a young man, asking his barber to have his hair cut as cool as David Beckham.
• 屌丝版：As is vividly depicted above, there is a bottle falling to the ground, the wine spile out. One man thinks it's all over, while the other one thinks it still left a little.
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in front of blackboard stands a teacher, teaching mathematics, however, one of her students holds the opinion that the knowledge he is learning might be outdated by the time he's in the job market. (42 words)
extremely, highly, most, particularly, quite ） • amusing 令人发笑的， ridiculous 荒谬可笑的
• illuminating (particularly revealing or helpful) 富有启发性的；很有助益的；
• impressive 印象深刻的， exaggerative 夸张
➢议论文框架结构：3段，12句，120－180词， 3－5个关联词，3－5个从句
➢第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，图画描述，3句
1. 总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作＋环境
1句
2. 挖掘细节词、串连成句：
1句
3. 文字说明/象征寓意：
1句
➢第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句
1. 主题句：象征寓意，1句
2. 论证：3句 1）因果论证 2) 影响论证 3) 举例论证
• 女神版：As is vividly depicted above, in the picture lies a bottle, falling to the ground with wine spilt out . One man who looks very sad thinks it's all over, while the other one,
修饰动词的副词：
• graphically/ vividly生动地 • symbolically象征性地 • conspicuously/ clearly / explicitly
清晰地 • subtly巧妙地，精细地
寓意：
moral/ implications/ message have a profound implication
• 屌丝版：There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the final. The final is defined as another new start.
• As is shown in the picture, + 完全倒装结构 （主系表 表系主）+ 非谓语动词结构+定 语从句
某个位置有中心事物 中心事物什么样 周围事物什 么样
完全倒装 定从
非谓语动词
非限定性
• 常见可用于四级写作的完全倒装的系动 词有 be, come, run, walk, jump, sit, stand, lie, crouch蜷缩, float等表示动作的 动词。
• 屌丝版：As is shown in the cartoon, a candle is shining in the dark. It spreads brightness around itself.
第一段套话如何描述
首段写法
• 其实，阅卷教师最重视的就是大作文第一 段，也是最难写的段落，盲目套用模板、 空发议论，容易导致低分。
• 阅卷教师最希望看到的写法是: ➢首句总体描述图画，点出人物、动作和环
境；
➢次句挖掘细节词、串连成句，将图中细节 一网打尽；（根据情况而定）
➢末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。可以发表 议论，最好不要太多。
• There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the finnal. The final is defined as another start.
• On the playground runs a young man, rushing to the