2013届中考英语书面表达讲解课件
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Pay more attention to…/ We must obey ….on the way to…
(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。
When we meet some ….., we should call for help …Biblioteka Baidu.
范文背诵：5’ Dear students, As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others because fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. What’s more, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace. Yours， Li Hua
当堂训练10’
One possible passage ： Dear father, Father’s Day is coming. I，d like to say something to you. You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life. You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever! Happy Fathers Day! Yours, Li Hua
注意：仔细检查，认真抄写
中考作文举例 指 导
自学指导一、看校园安全 话题作文，审题，列出要点 。2’
建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们
更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是 Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生 发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。 内容提示：
九年级英语备课组
主备人:唐冰秀
议课组长:张楚贤
议课时间: 6月 日
上课时间: 6月 日
1.了解写作的注意事项 2.学会运用技巧，进行语篇的组织。 3.背诵范文。
中考作文五步走写法
一、审清题目，列出要点 审文体（包括格式），审人称， 审时态，审内容要点（含字数）
二、结合要点，简单表达 三、连词成句，表达正确 四、适当发挥，丰富表达 五、组合成文，适当过渡
(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
自学检测一、审清题目，列出要点5’
1. 审文体: 应用文中的书信格式
2. 审人称： 第一人称 （we） 3. 审时态： 一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时 4. 审内容要点及字数： (1)不带管制刀具到学校; We mustn’t bring … Don’t have a bath in the river ..without (2)不私自下河洗澡; Fighting is (3)不打架; (4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;
(1)不带管制刀具到学校; (2)不私自下河洗澡; (3)不打架;
(4)上学放学的途中注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。 参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things 紧急情况：emergency; 写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。
自学指导二、看“开展有意的活动 ”，审题，列出要点 2’ 为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题 的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英 语写一篇参赛短文。 提示：1. 衣着整洁; 2. 保持环境卫生; 3. 待人有礼，乐于助人; 4. 遵守交通规则; 5. …… 要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开 思路，适当发挥; 2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
How to Behave Well? 范文背诵5’ In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities. It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
(2) 我的压力是什么;
(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。
自学检测三、思考问题，回答要点，连词成句 4’
1. 审文体:
演讲稿
2. 审人称： 第一人称 （学生们/I ） 3. 审时态： 一般现在时（主体时态）、过去时 4. 审内容要点及字数： (1)同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; 考试压力、交往方面的压力 (2) 我的压力是什么;
考试压力，举例说明压力是来自谁，具体的情况
(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
跟对方谈谈自己的想法，沟通思想，达成共识
★ 范文 背诵5’ Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of afterclasses at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That’s all. Thank you!
自学检测二、审题，列要点并简单表达5’ 1. 审人称：
第一人称 （we）
2. 审时态： 一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时 3.要点表达：适当拓展，丰富表达。 ①.衣着整洁; We should keep our….. ②. 保持环境卫生; It is our duty…./ The city must be …. ③. 待人有礼，乐于助人; Be friendly and ready to help others . When we are on the bus, ④. 遵守交通规则; We should obey ….when the traffic light are red,… ⑤. 适当拓展(在公共场所不大声喧哗…） Don’t talk loudly in public places./It is good to save …
总 结1’ 中考作文五步走写法：
一、审清题目，列出要点 审文体（包括格式），审人称， 审时态，审内容要点（含字数）
二、结合要点，简单表达 三、连词成句，表达正确 四、适当发挥，丰富表达 五、组合成文，适当过渡
书写规范, 卷面整洁。 注意：书写规范, 卷面整洁
父亲节的一封信 父爱如山！假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给 你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。 写作要点： 1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育， 过上更好的生活； 2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时，他鼓励我不放弃； 遇到困难时，父亲鼓励我笑对生活；表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。 温馨提示： 1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅， 不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥； 2. 短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好， 不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear father, Father’s Day is coming, I’d like to say something to you. ________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
.自学指导三、看“如何减压让生活更美好”审题，并思 考如何回答，再进行语篇组织 2’
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更 好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特 意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演 讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法, 与同学分享,内容包括: (1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。
When we meet some ….., we should call for help …Biblioteka Baidu.
范文背诵：5’ Dear students, As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others because fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. What’s more, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace. Yours， Li Hua
当堂训练10’
One possible passage ： Dear father, Father’s Day is coming. I，d like to say something to you. You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life. You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever! Happy Fathers Day! Yours, Li Hua
注意：仔细检查，认真抄写
中考作文举例 指 导
自学指导一、看校园安全 话题作文，审题，列出要点 。2’
建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们
更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是 Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生 发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。 内容提示：
九年级英语备课组
主备人:唐冰秀
议课组长:张楚贤
议课时间: 6月 日
上课时间: 6月 日
1.了解写作的注意事项 2.学会运用技巧，进行语篇的组织。 3.背诵范文。
中考作文五步走写法
一、审清题目，列出要点 审文体（包括格式），审人称， 审时态，审内容要点（含字数）
二、结合要点，简单表达 三、连词成句，表达正确 四、适当发挥，丰富表达 五、组合成文，适当过渡
(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
自学检测一、审清题目，列出要点5’
1. 审文体: 应用文中的书信格式
2. 审人称： 第一人称 （we） 3. 审时态： 一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时 4. 审内容要点及字数： (1)不带管制刀具到学校; We mustn’t bring … Don’t have a bath in the river ..without (2)不私自下河洗澡; Fighting is (3)不打架; (4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;
(1)不带管制刀具到学校; (2)不私自下河洗澡; (3)不打架;
(4)上学放学的途中注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。 参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things 紧急情况：emergency; 写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。
自学指导二、看“开展有意的活动 ”，审题，列出要点 2’ 为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题 的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英 语写一篇参赛短文。 提示：1. 衣着整洁; 2. 保持环境卫生; 3. 待人有礼，乐于助人; 4. 遵守交通规则; 5. …… 要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开 思路，适当发挥; 2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
How to Behave Well? 范文背诵5’ In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities. It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
(2) 我的压力是什么;
(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。
自学检测三、思考问题，回答要点，连词成句 4’
1. 审文体:
演讲稿
2. 审人称： 第一人称 （学生们/I ） 3. 审时态： 一般现在时（主体时态）、过去时 4. 审内容要点及字数： (1)同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; 考试压力、交往方面的压力 (2) 我的压力是什么;
考试压力，举例说明压力是来自谁，具体的情况
(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
跟对方谈谈自己的想法，沟通思想，达成共识
★ 范文 背诵5’ Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of afterclasses at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That’s all. Thank you!
自学检测二、审题，列要点并简单表达5’ 1. 审人称：
第一人称 （we）
2. 审时态： 一般现在时（主体时态）和将来时 3.要点表达：适当拓展，丰富表达。 ①.衣着整洁; We should keep our….. ②. 保持环境卫生; It is our duty…./ The city must be …. ③. 待人有礼，乐于助人; Be friendly and ready to help others . When we are on the bus, ④. 遵守交通规则; We should obey ….when the traffic light are red,… ⑤. 适当拓展(在公共场所不大声喧哗…） Don’t talk loudly in public places./It is good to save …
总 结1’ 中考作文五步走写法：
一、审清题目，列出要点 审文体（包括格式），审人称， 审时态，审内容要点（含字数）
二、结合要点，简单表达 三、连词成句，表达正确 四、适当发挥，丰富表达 五、组合成文，适当过渡
书写规范, 卷面整洁。 注意：书写规范, 卷面整洁
父亲节的一封信 父爱如山！假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给 你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。 写作要点： 1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育， 过上更好的生活； 2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时，他鼓励我不放弃； 遇到困难时，父亲鼓励我笑对生活；表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。 温馨提示： 1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅， 不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥； 2. 短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好， 不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear father, Father’s Day is coming, I’d like to say something to you. ________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
.自学指导三、看“如何减压让生活更美好”审题，并思 考如何回答，再进行语篇组织 2’
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更 好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特 意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演 讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法, 与同学分享,内容包括: (1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;