写作技巧训练

choose gifts for their mothers on Mother’s Day.
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Looking forward to your reply.
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Yours,
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Lin Chao
• Country • Anita (UK) •
Gifts A green scarf
1.审题并列出提纲
Reasons 1. need one 2. favorite color
• Jacob (USA)A hand-made card1. mean a lot
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• 注意： 1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息；
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2. 开头已经为你写好，你只需接着写；
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3. 词数：70个左右。开头和结尾部分的内容不计入总词汇。
• Dear editor,
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I am writing to tell you about how children from different countries
a. mother needs one b. green is her favorite color a. easy to make b. means a lot a. costs little b. make mother happy
连词成篇
• Anita from the Uk gives her mom a green scarf because her mother needs one and green is her favorite color. As for the American boy Jacob, he sends his mom a hand-made card,because he thinks it's easy to make and means a lot. I come from China and I would like to help my mom clean the house on that day, for I think this gift costs little but makes my mom happy.
写作技巧训练
以2011年杭州市中考写作题为例
书信作文
1. 明确书信的格式(正确无误) 2. 提示所提到的信息无遗漏(列提纲)
3.检查有无语法问题(仔细) 4.万能句型勤背诵(修饰)
• 书面表达
• 一家英语杂志社正在调查不同国家孩子母亲节给妈妈送礼物的情况。假如你是林超，请根据表中的 信息并结合自身看法，给杂志社写一封信。
2. 礼物gift 1) a green card 2) a hand-made card 3) 发挥想像(如: 打扫房间, 买菜, 亲手做一顿晚 饭)
clean the room , buy some vegetables , cook dinner
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• 3. 原因reason • Anita • • Jacob • • I(lin chao) •
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2. easy to make
• Lin Chao (Chi源自文库a) •
clean the house 1.cost little 2.make her happy
2.抓关键词
• 1. 国籍country
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Anita from the UK
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the American boy Jacob
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I (Linchao) come from China
• Country
Gifts
Reasons
• Anita (UK)
A green scarf
1. need one
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2. favorite color
• Jacob (USA)
A hand-made card 1. mean a lot
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2. easy to make
• Lin Chao (China)