高考英语作文书面表达满分提升原理大解析

高考英语作文书面表达满分提升原理大解析
请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

More than 100,000 volunteers in 132 cities spent a weekend picking up plastic and other waste across the country, in a joint worldwide effort to clean up the planet.
To celebrate the 10th World Cleanup Day on Sept 15, some 700 non-profit NGOs (non-governmental originations) and social groups held activities aimed at cleaning up the environment and tackling the waste crisis throughout China, mobilizing an estimated 1 million-plus people.
From snowcapped mountains to vast oceans, people united in taking action to remove waste from the environment to raise awareness of the severity of the crisis.
“Where there is a will, every day can be and should be ‘Cleanup Day’,” says Ma Yongjian, a volunteer from Bei jing who recently did “plogging”—jogging while picking up trash—with his friends in Yudong Park in the northwest of the city.
“We must change the way of living we are used to, to reduce waste from its source,” says Joe Harvey, a British national and promo ter of “zero waste” lifestyles in China. He and his girlfriend Carrie Yu created The Bulk House, a brand that provides zero-waste solutions for daily living. They are urging people to reduce or eliminate the use of plastic and single-use disposables, such as plastic utensils, bags and beverage bottles.
Sounding a note of caution, Mao Da, a specialist in environmental history at Beijing Normal University, says: “In recent years, the massive consumption and materialistic craze have worsened the waste situati on as trash has been produced at a faster pace and in greater quantities.”
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括文章大意。

概括写法
一找、二并、三换
概括大意需要文体，无非：新闻体、故事体、论说文。

就本文而言，是新闻体。

新闻体的大意主要看：事实和评论（facts and opinions），评论有时和写作目的交织在一起。

关注点：首段和末段（目的非常重要）
步骤：
1.找关键信息
More than 100,000 volunteers in 132 cities spent a weekend picking up plastic and other waste across the country, in a joint worldwide effort to clean up the planet.
To celebrate the 10th World Cleanup Day…activities aimed at cleaning up the environment and tackling the waste crisis
…people united in taking action to remove waste from the env ironment to raise awareness of the severity of the crisis.
2.提炼和合并
去掉细节信息（例如数字），换为：某人做了某事，目的+方式，即：sb do sth to do….by doing….
More than 100,000 volunteers in 132 cities spent a weekend picking up plastic and other waste across the country, in a joint worldwide effort to clean up the planet.
To celebrate the 10t h World Cleanup Day…activities aimed at cleaning up the environment and tackling the waste crisis
…people united in taking action to remove waste from the environment to raise awareness of the severity of the crisis.
这里面目的有好几处，但基本相同，因此：clean up the planet, raise awareness of the severity of waste crisis
最终是：
In celebrating the 10th World Cleanup Day, people make a joint worldwide effort to clean up the planet and raise awareness of the severity of waste crisis.
但这个句子由于和原文相似多，稍微变换一下，改成：sb do sth to do….by doing….。

The 10th World Cleanup Day has raised public awareness of the severity of waste crisis by
encouraging more and more people worldwide to clean up the planet together.
主体
材料中来，材料中去
（1）你对于“世界清理日”及类似活动有哪些看法？
所谓看法，无非你觉得这件事的好处或坏处，说白了就是影响。

当然谈影响，就要说明原因。

此类是环保话题，毫无疑问，从positive方好写：
思维要点：环保，健康
环保—》reduce waste, create a clean environment where people live in harmony with nature
健康—》价值观，生活方式–》serve as a wake-up call / reminder that we should pursue a healthy lifestyle.
Undoubtedly, such activities can benefit the whole society a lot in many ways.（说明主旨）First, they contribute to a clean and harmonious environment.（要点一：干净和谐）People have been suffering the consequences of the worsening environment and unfortunately the mounting waste is one of the root causes.（解释，先从反面写垃圾的负面作用）With volunteers cleaning up the waste, people work and socialize happily physically and psychologically.（承接前一句，形成对比）Besides, they serve as a wake-up call that people should pursue a healthier lifestyle such as avoiding overconsumption. （要点二：生活方式的变化。

同时用举例法）
（2）你觉得要采取哪些措施来保持环境整洁？
公共性的措施无非是一大一小一意识，即：个人怎么做，政府怎么做。

措施：
1. awareness:
2. regulations
3. recycling products
但首先要明确一点，先要学会从材料中找要点，如果能找到的话，尽量先用材料中的要点来拓展。

原文有：
Where there is a will, every day can be and sh ould be ‘Cleanup Day’
reduce waste from its source
reduce or eliminate the use of plastic and single-use disposables, such as plastic utensils, bags and beverage bottles
综合一下：
Honestly speaking, holding activities alone is far from enough.(说明主旨) For one thing, each individual should do his part to clean the environment around him instead of throwing rubbish at will.（要点一：个人责任，注意instead of的信息添加丰富骨干，避免说空话）A little effort can make a big difference.（承接前一句，说明原因）For another, producers should obey environmental rules and regulations and be subject to supervision.（要点二：生产商做法。

为了避免观点走空，加一个接受监督。

）Only in this way can a clean earth be in sight. （最后总结）
完整的作文：
The 10th World Cleanup Day has raised public awareness of the severity of waste crisis by encouraging more and more people worldwide to clean up the planet together.
Undoubtedly, such activities can benefit the whole society greatly. First, they contribute to a clean and harmonious environment. People have been suffering the consequences of worsening environment and unfortunately the mounting waste is one of the root causes. With volunteers cleaning up the waste, people work and socialize happily physically and psychologically. Besides, they serve as a wake-up call that people should pursue a healthier lifestyle such as avoiding overconsumption.
Honestly speaking, holding activities alone is far from enough. For one thing, each individual should do his part to clean the environment around him instead of throwing rubbish at will. A little effort makes a big difference. For another, producers should obey environmental rules and
be subject to supervision. Only in this way can a clean earth be in sight. (共158词)
心得
不要过于自信，慢慢说，小心写
我一直认为，写作不要用太多的长句子，毕竟写作是让读者（这里就是阅卷老师）在最短时间内明白你说的要点，用短句子说明主旨，用长句子（但不要都是）解释主旨句，长短结合。

另外，句子一长了，各种汉式说法就冒出来了，神不知鬼不觉的。

总之，写作文应该让读者读得舒服，那么能用一个常见的容易理解的词就不要用复杂生僻的，能一个名词作主语的，就不要用动名词短语，能一个简单句说明白的，就不要硬凑上定语从句和非谓语动词。

一些搭配要牢记。

参考答案说明：
个人感觉答案第二部分说看法时，只是把材料复述一遍，并非发表了看法，因此需要斟酌。

A great many volunteers throughout the country made joint efforts to pick up rubbish scattered around so as to bring the severity of environmental crisis into the public focus.
The past decades have witnessed the development of economy, but we pay a high price for it, damaging the environment. To observe the 10th World Clean Up Day, the Chinese participate in this worldwide action. Some organizations have carried out various programs targeted at cleaning up our surroundings and awakening people’s awareness of environmental protection. In response to the campaigns launched, people do their bits to help sustain the planet where we co-exist.
As for individuals, we can start from minor things as follows. To begin with, we can use energy-saving products as much as possible. In the second place, we cannot throw rubbish at will and we can eliminate using plastic and disposable chopsticks. Only when we all enhance the eco-friendly awareness can we enjoy a healthier life.
高中英语新高考-英语作文：谈谈写作的评判性思维（简化模式）
评判性思维英文名字：critical thinking。

定义颇多，各种术语比较费脑。

我参考了一些文本解释，比较通俗易懂的是下面这个：
批判性思维就是一种慎重的思考过程。

在这一过程中，你使用批判性思维来考虑一个问题。

最终，你判断什么是可信的，或决定将要做什么。

以下是批判性思维的方法，包括：
1、别急着判断，而是检查一个命题或行动的有效性。

2、用多维视角思考。

3、考虑一个想法或行动的内涵和影响。

4、用理由和证据来解决分歧。

5、根据最新信息来重新评价一个观点。

简化为：
1、你的观点是什么？
2、你有什么理由支持你的观点？
3、你为什么这么想？
4、关于这个问题有没有不同的视角？
因此总结一下比较容易掌握的评判性思维的模式：
主题—》解释一下—》给个细节或例子—》为什么呢/那又如何？
这种练习可以在平时经常练习，例如：
小明迟到了
--》为什么呢？It is because他起晚了–》为什么呢？for the reason that熬夜打游戏
–》那又如何？It is clear that上课很多知识听不懂。

--》那又怎样？which means that他上课开始走神。

--》那又怎样？Therefore, 他回家无法完成课堂作业。

题目
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Li Shuangying said her 18-year-old son, who just took this year’s college entrance exam, would
become a professional in the artificial intelligence (AI) field.
Artificial intelligence is the branch of computer science concerned with making computers behave like humans. The requirement for AI talents is a solid foundation of maths and English, so for senior high graduates, they should have a higher mathematical thinking ability and have a good command of English if they want to become professional in AI.
Li Shuangying said her son always has been one of the top students in his class at one of the leading high schools in Zhongshan, Guangdong province. Zhongshan, which neighbors Guangzhou, has been one of Chinas pioneering cities in embracing reform and opening up. It flourished （繁荣）on labor-intensive industries, but recent rising labor shortages and costs have become a real threat. In response, local manufacturers have been quick to embrace automation （自动化）and adopt AI-assisted robots for survival.
The company Li works for, a medium-sized home appliance manufacturer with annual output of about 1 billion yuan （$150 million）, is no exception. Li said she used to bring her son to her workplace from time to time, and he has developed a strong interest in AI, automation and robots. “Our family all agree that AI is the trend, and it holds great potential for future development,” Li said. That view is shared by many college students and their parents, who consider Al a desirable major.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个词概括上文。

2. 用约120个词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）请你谈谈对人工智能专业的看法；
（2）作为高三学生，你是否会选择人工智能专业？简要说明理由（2至3点）。

如何概括
第一步：
确定本文是新闻体，通过一个具体例子来谈现象，因此具体人物细节就不要出现，应该笼统说是一类人。

找（关键句）
Li Shuangying said her 18-year-old son, who just took this year’s college entranc e exam, would become a professional in the artificial intelligence (AI) field.
developed a strong interest
it holds great potential for future
第二、三步：整合和替换：
With the fast development of AI and labor shortage, many students are keen on AI’s potential and decide to embrace the field as their major in college.
主体
（1）请你谈谈对人工智能专业的看法；
这里涉及到如何评价一个专业的有用与没用，教育部说：对不起良心的专业应该停办了。

用评判性思维公式来简化本文：
AI专业好—》解释一下：AI处理事情又快又好AI can perform both rote management tasks more quickly and efficiently, without getting bored or distracted.—》为什么呢？这是一个数据时代，劳动力缺乏—》那又如何？给学习者更多就业机会
具体解释：
从就业角度：能带来充足的就业机会，（因为）各种工作都需要人工智能来处理数据，还有劳动力缺乏等，（结果）说明了对社会有用，社会需要。

从专业角度：让学习者的学习能力更强，因为学习者可以集中精力在创新思维上，（结果）适应能力也加强了，可以在不同的领域游刃有余；促进国家科技发展。

Undoubtedly, AI major is the driving force for the country to flourish.（先写主题句）First, we are standing at the crossroads to a digital society and economy.（原因一：信息化时代到来）AI major just meets the urgent need and keeps up with the fast pace of times. （具体解释一下，说明AI 正好赶上步伐）Therefore, it gives students a competitive edge over their peers in seeking jobs.（那又如何？说结果：增加就业砝码）Second, AI major requires of learners high critical thinking and innovation, which are the pillar of almost all areas.（原因二：对学习者有促进）Therefore, AI major plays the key role in our country’s technological leve ls.（那又如何？促进国家科技发展）
（2）作为高三学生，你是否会选择人工智能专业？简要说明理由（2至3点）。

如果不选这个专业，势必和文章中心脱离。

可以分为：对个人、对社会两个角度写。

这也是紧扣材料中的interest，potential，这是以后高考行文的重点。

Personally, I will major in AI without hesitation.（先写主题句）For one thing, AI can arouse my strong interest in high technology.（从个人角度看，我的兴趣）For another, AI major can help me fulfil my goal that people can be relieved of an overwhelming workload and pursue their potential.（从社会角度看，解除负担，实现潜力）
好词好句：
the driving force推动力
standing at the crossroads处在关键时刻
meets the urgent need满足迫切的需求
keeps up with the fast pace of times跟上时代的快节奏
gives students a competitive edge over their peers比同龄人有竞争优势
requires of learners high critical thinking and innovation要求学习者有高级批判思维和创新能力
the pillar of支柱
plays the key role in起关键作用
arouse my strong interest in激发我对……的强烈兴趣
fulfil my goal达到我的目标
be relieved of被解除
an overwhelming workload繁重的任务
pursue their potential追求理想
完整的全文
With the fast development of AI and labor shortage, many students are keen on AI’s potential and decide to embrace the field as their major in college. (27词)
Undoubtedly, AI major is the driving force for the country to flourish. First, we are standing at the crossroads to a digital society and economy. AI major just meets the urgent need and keeps up with the fast pace of times. Therefore, it gives students a competitive edge over their peers in seeking jobs. Second, AI major requires of learners high critical thinking and innovation, which are the pillar of almost all areas. Therefore, AI major plays the key role in our c ountry’s technological levels.
Personally, I will major in AI without hesitation. For one thing, AI can arouse my strong interest in high technology. For another, AI major can help me fulfil my goal that people can be relieved of an overwhelming workload and pursue their potential. (128词)
试卷里的参考范文：
Possible version one:
With the fast development of AI applications in industry and in all walks of life, AI major has attracted students and their parents despite high requirements for maths and English. (30 words)
Personally, I think highly of Al major. Each year graduates Hood into the job market, waving their diplomas and certificates, only to be frustrated and disappointed. However. Al is expanding in every field, ranging from finance to medicine. Therefore, more Al-related jobs will be available. Additionally, AI plays an important role in network technology, which reflects China’s technological levels. As young generations, we should bear responsibility for the future of our country.
As a Senior 3 stu dent, I’ll choose AI as my major. Not only does it stir up my great interest but it is also a promising major. Through the study of Al, we can solve varieties of scientific problems and bring great benefits to our society as well. (120 words)
Possible version two:
With the fast development of AI applications in industry and in all walks of life, AI major has attracted students and their parents despite high requirements for maths and English. (30 words)
Personally, I think highly of AI major. Each year graduates flood into the job market, waving their diplomas and certificates, only to be frustrated and disappointed. However, Al is expanding in
every field, ranging from finance to medicine. Therefore, more Al-related jobs will be available. Additionally. AI plays an important role in network technology, which reflects China’s technological levels. As young generations, we should bear responsibility for the future of our country.
As a senior 3 student, however, 1 will choose law instead of AI major. I love watching TV programs about laws. Moreover, our society is in great need of experts in laws because China is developing rapidly and we need laws to maintain peace, order and secure justice. (120 words)
高中英语新高考-英语作文：谈笑间，轻松搞定英文写作
例题：
A course that has impressed you most in college;
我非常反对背诵所谓的模板作文，能押到题纯属瞎猫碰到死耗子，有百害而无一利。

实际上，我们完全可以做到以不变应万变。

英语写作就是要具备三个基本的要素：
1. 思想
2. 语法
3. 词汇
这三个要素中，最难的不是词汇，而是思想。

我们很多同学平时聊天滔滔不绝，犹如黄河之水，但是一到考试，憋不出一句话，悲哉！好在我们高考、四级、六级的写作要求都很低，稍微多展开一下就可以了。

闲话少说，转入正题：
第一步：思路拓展
面对作文题，无话可说不是你的错。

独家的“九脉神剑”，你就望上面套吧：
【老师插一句】既然是学科，肯定要围绕知识教育，文化，还有心理。

下面就是具体化：
Culture: differentcultures, broaden my horizons and enrich my knowledge
Health: develop（实际上，我更喜欢用mature）my personality;…is rewarding to my physical and mental health
注：同学们可能注意到，为什么提及具体学科？因为我们的应试写作突出语言形式，内容其次。

等你把内容都想好了，最后再安排一个学科，那是很容易的事情，不过我想好了，说心理学psychology。

第二步：写作过程
先点题，提出观点
方法：运用标记法：先写主干，再来添油加醋
心理学重要。

【重要如何表达？参见魔法词汇第2条】
Psychology plays / a decisive role.
拓展：
（前面讲一句无关紧要的点题废话从句），S (心理学) V（重要）/ 在我的未来事业发展中。

(When) it comes to /the most impressive course, psychology without doubt plays / adecisive role / in my life.
点评：本句可以提炼为：
Whenit comes to sth, sth without doubt plays a decisive role in my life.
2. 万事皆有因果
原因：
先瞅瞅很一般的写法：
Ichoose it to solve many puzzling problems. For example, more and more peopleseek for materials but don’t feel happy even though they try their best to lookfor happiness. Mental disease has done much harm to their health.
提升：
Ichoose it to solve many puzzling problems.（to do表示目的，参考后面魔法词第5条；problems 太泛泛而谈，英文写作要具体化）
I choose it for thesake of gaining an insight into many puzzling issues.
Forexample, more and more people seek for materials but don’t feel happy eventhough they try their best to look for happiness.（还用moreand more，该换衣服了吧？don’t也比较没有情调哦；trytheir best，天啊，这是初中生常用的宝贝。

怎么办？魔法词箱里有！看下面划线部分如何完美升级，注意它们应该成为你终身的可靠的朋友。

）
For example, it is universally acknowledged thatan increasing number of peoplecrave for materials but fail to feel happy even thoughthey make a pains-taking effortto pursue happiness. (it形式主语，就那几个，没事就套着玩)
Mentaldisease has done much harm to their health. （do harmto应该要暂时丢掉了）
Mental disease has posed a great threat to theirhealth.
结果：
Luckily,learning psychology is quite rewarding (你是不是用useful?) in the followingaspects. First, It enables (用make是很无聊的一件事) me to have a good understanding of different cultureswhere （要学会把两个句子糅合在一起）people of variousbackgrounds may see things from unique perspectives. The more knowledge Iaccumulate , the more easily I live with them. （the+比较级，这是我的惯用的伎俩）Second,psychology laysa solid foundation for my physical and mental health, mycharacter maturing at last.
点评：亲爱的童鞋们，这段文字基本就是魔法词构成的，从后文找出来吧。

但是最后一句不简单，我用到了独立主格结构。

但要是你写，是不是这样呢？
Second, psychology lays a solid foundation for myphysical and mental health.
读者要问：你怎么就能想到这种方法？
首先你要知道，对于任何一个句子进行拓展，我提出展句的“程咬金三板斧”法：
这个句子有什么结果。

做任何一件事，包括提建议，也要想到可能的结果。

这个句子是什么导致的，即原因。

这个句子在什么条件下完成的即状语。

其次，你要知道，针对上面第一种结果联想法，有两种方式可以搞定：
把结果句，改为…, which…
如果结果句的主语和前胡子主语一致，就用非谓语动词；如果不一致就用独立主格结构。

即：S1 V1 O1 and S2 V2 O2.
改为：
S1V1 O1，S2 V2-ed/-ing O2.
3. 结尾
这样写，尤其在结尾，会让白天鹅变成丑小鸭的：
Psychologyhas influenced me and I believe it will inprove my future career.
我用魔法词这样改，哇！
Psychology does have a far-reachingimpact on me, which I believe will further my future career. 其实你也是可以的，我告诉你秘诀：
我们写作时，不要忘记倒装和强调两种手法，而对谓语强调很简单却异常的强大，所以用了doeshave…；遇到it, he…就要想到定语从句，不过就是把it换成which；遇到believe就瞬间想到插入语；further还有一个特别的用法，“促进”，动词。

高中英语新高考-英语作文：我来给鸡汤类的英语写作一剑封喉！
背景
各种大小模拟考试，我把作文题分类成两个：一是问题，二是人品（绰号：鸡汤）。

而后者占了70%，例如：
dream and effort
independent
cooperation
life choice
how to deal with frustration
personal practice
我希望读者能够坚持读完我下面的写作简要指导，应该对您有一些启发。

作文指导
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

The first day of school our professor introduced himself and challenged us to get to know someone we didn't already know. I stood up to look around when a gentle hand touched my shoulder. I turned around to find a wrinkled, little old lady beaming up at me with a smile that lit up her entire being. She said, "Hi handsome. My name is Rose. I' m eighty－seven years old. Can I give you a hug" I laughed and enthusiastically responded, "Of course you may." and she gave me a giant squeeze.
"I always dreamed of having a college education and now I'm getting one." She told me. After class we walked to the student union building and shared a chocolate milk shake. We became instant friends. Every day for the next three months we would leave class together and talk nonstop. I was always amazed at this "time machine" as she shared her wisdom and experience with me.
At the end of the semester we invited Rose to speak at our football banquet. I'll never forget what she taught us. She was introduced and stepped up to the podium. "We do not stop playing because we are old; we grow old because we stop playing. You've got to have a dream. When you lose your dreams, you die. We have so many people walking around who are dead and don't even know it."
……
At the year's end Rose finished the college degree she had begun all those years ago. One week after graduation Rose died peacefully in her sleep.
[写作内容]
1、以约30个词概括短文的要点；
2、然后以约120个就“Dream and effort”这个主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：
（1）谈谈你对Rose演讲内容的理解和感想。

（2）结合实际谈谈你的梦想、具体困难和圆梦行动。

我的感悟
一、鸡汤类的作文题存在通用性
这篇作文本质上就是写梦想。

其实dream和purpose, ideal, goal, ambition是一家的，下次换成谈谈goal，不要说没有写过。

我们要做的就是，需要把鸡汤类的话题归类，不要做很多无
用功。

二、概括类的鸡汤文往往是记叙文，记住就一个公式：某人或某物做了某事。

这篇文章涉及到两个人：Rose, I
Rose在本文做了四件事：87岁继续大学教育；和我分享个人经验和智慧；发表演讲；去世
我在本文就做了一件事：成为Rose朋友
这样一想就好办了：
Rose continued her college education at the age of 87.
Rose liked to share her experience and wisdom with me.
Rose made an inspring speech.
I make good friends with Rose.
下面要做的就是把它们连在一起，我一再跟学生强调：概括类的文字务必要简洁，不要用复杂的句子，也不要用什么修辞。

因为概括本身就是为了让读者一下子明白文章讲了什么。

你要是想体现你的写作才华，就在下面的120词中发挥吧。

Rose, 87 years old, continued collegeeducation and often shared experience and wisdom with me, her close friend.Though she died soon after graduation, her speech impressed everyone.
三、鸡汤类的作文，谈感想就两个：impressive, moved。

谈理解，首先要具体为：它的功能或重要性。

感想：I am deeplymoved and impressed by Rose’s speech. She gave top priority to the important role our dreams andeffort play in the daily life.
重要性的思维就鸡汤而言，无非：动力、激情、幸福等。

(1) It is a source of Motivation, encouragingus to study hard.
(2) It gives us hope and arouses enthusiasm/ happiness.
(3) However, without effort, our dream will be in vain / be the castle in the air.
需要把三个句子拓展开来：
A dream is something that you feel happy to hold on to. People with dreams love what they do,
regardless of economic rewards,power or celebrity. So it is a source of motivation, giving us endless confidence and firing/arousing our great enthusiasm. If people lack dreams, they would never reach full potential. Dreams imply hope, discipline,courage and many other qualities. In many cases, it can open up opportunities for people. However, dream and effort should go hand in hand, or dream will become thecastle in the air.
有学生一看拓展这么多，傻眼了，他觉得他脑袋想不到这么多，那么请看下面第四条。

四、鸡汤类的思维关键词存在互补和共存关系。

（这就是我在课堂上的最新发现）
请读者认真看我上面标了红色的词汇，你会发现幸福、爱、自信、激情、希望、潜力、勇气、机遇等本质上差不多。

为什么这么说呢？我举例：
有了梦想（dream）,人生就会有希望（hope），有了激情（enthusiasm），有了自信（confidence）等等。

这里面的逻辑应该是很清晰的，不需要我解释，但是，我这样换一下：
有了希望（hope）,人生就会有梦想（dream），有了激情（enthusiasm），有了自信（confidence）等等。

有了自信（confidence）,人生就会有梦想（dream），有了激情（enthusiasm），希望（hope）等等。

……
敢情说这些鸡汤词就是一家人啊？有道是：不是一家人，不进一家门。

这对我们的启发就是，你会了其中的一个话题写作，那么其它的话题都是同理的。

我经常听人说，“自信”有什么好谈的，那是因为他的思维没有打开。

现在你知道了这个道理：
幸福、爱、自信、激情、希望、潜力、勇气、机遇等必须打包出售！
老子说，一生二，二生三，三生万物。

这里就是这个道理，譬如：爱生勇气，勇气生希望，希望生万物……
五、凡是举例分两种，时间紧张、思维卡壳、想得19分保底，请选第一种：以自己为例；否则，以名人为例（前提是你得提前准备）。

（1）以我为例的写法分三层：开始（写困难）、转机（有了希望）、结局（喜大普奔）、感慨（鸡汤照应）
开始：I have dreamed of being a translator since childhood. But in the past few years, I have had much trouble in memorizing new words. It almost cost me confidence and enthusiasm.
转机：I decided to make it a routine to read novels every day.
结局：Practice makes perfect. My efforts paid off and my dream came true.
总结：I realize that only with dream and effort can I realize my dream.
（2）别人的例子
说到这里，我不得不说，这些外国名人的名字是必须记住的：Helen Keller, Thomas Alva Edison, Columbus, Bill Gates, Jobs。

如果实在记不住他们，记住中国的张海迪，周总理等。

理由是：HelenKeller和张海迪可以体现此类鸡汤作文：自信，勇气，梦想，信心，对待挫折，坚持……，总之只要是优秀人性都可以放在他们身上；Columbus发现了新大陆，体现勇气、梦想……；Bill Gates, Jobs体现创新、慈善、执着、科技达人；周总理的为中华之崛起而读书，体现了理想、方向、奉献、执着等。

Helen Keller, without dreams inspired by her teacher, would not have “seen” so many things through mere touch, and hence would not have moved the world by her touching story. In the same way, Zhang Haidi, given her poor physical condition, would not have become a well-known writer without her ambition to overcome any difficulty. With dreams encouraging us, we are moving forward more eagerly and confidently.
最可取的是下面的句式：
A striking example is Pre mier Zhou, who in the youth dreamed of “studying for a prosperous and rising China”. It was this dream that motivated him to strive to achieve the liberation of our country.
最后总结：
说起来鸡汤文就这五句话，但是不要，不要，不要写成模板文，你需要对于鸡汤文多在平时总结一些好句子，譬如我写本文的时候就用到：Dreams can be an enthusiastic love of life that puts a sparkle in our eyes. / Dreams can smooth the wrinkles from our souls.
高中英语新高考-英语作文：我们如何推敲写作用词？（以校园欺凌为话题）
下面我们就说这篇文章的用词：
School Bullying
Various school bullyings are now coming under the spotlight. Despite considerable efforts to tackle the issue, the effect is far from satisfactory.
Quite a few factors give rise to the bullying issue. First, many convenient media online and off-line have provided fertile soil for negative information, especially concerning violence, which will be rooted in children's heart and lead them astray. Inadequate parental education should also be held responsible for their children's ignorance of laws and indifference to others' feelings. They will end up appealing to more simple but rude ways, like violent abuse, to serve their purposes.
In fact, there is no simple solution to school bullying. Most important of all is proper guidance and monitoring from both schools and parents. Particularly, it is more emphasis on children's ethical development and mental health that can secure a harmonious school, instead of prioritizing their academic performance. After all, students' self-discipline and moral sense count for anything.
推敲花絮节选：
Various convenient media online and off-line make children exposed to negative information
修改：Various convenient media online and off-line have provided fertile soil for negative information.
理由：fertile soil字面意思是“肥沃的土地”，但是这个soil可以进一步灵活运用，下面有具体解释。

expose这个词这里用得其实挺好的，但我们认为，最好用expose children to...。

这就涉及到make的消除规则，参看：。