奥巴马作文模板
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奥巴马作文模板
【篇一:2012年最新版美国总统奥巴马制造的作文模
板】
think about the america within our reach: a country that leads the world in educating its people; an america that attracts a new generation of high-tech manufacturing and high-paying jobs; a future where we’re in control of our own energy; and our securit y and prosperity aren’t so tied to unstable parts of the world. 想一想我们完全力所能及可以为美国实现的目标:人民
接受的教育领先全世界;吸引新一代高科技制造业和高薪工作;实
现我们的未来,由我们自己掌握能源,我们的安全和繁荣不再依赖
世界上某些不稳定地区; think about the xxxxx within our reach: xxxxx that leads the world in xxxxx; xxxxx that attracts a new generation of xxxxx; a future where we’re in control of our own xxxxx; and xxxxx.
超棒的用在开头段,表明多方的观点。
they understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to a story of success that every american had a chance to share: the basic american promise that if you worked hard, you could do well enough to raise a family, own a home, send your kids to college, and put a little away for retirement.
他们了解,自己是一个伟大事业的组成部分;他们为每一个美国人都有机会踏上的成功之路做出贡献——在美国可以实现最普遍的希望:你如果辛勤工作,就足以养活家庭,拥有住房,送孩子上大学,还可以为退休存点钱。
they understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to a story of success that xxxxx: the basic xxxxx promise that if xxxxx, you could do well enough to xxxxx, xxxxx, xxxxx, and xxxxx. 表明xxxxx的作用,以及好处。
we can either settle for a country where a shrinking number of people do really well, while a growing number of americans barely get by, or we can restore an economy where everyone gets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set of rules.
我们可以满足于这样一个国家,其中越来越少的人富甲一方而越来
越多的美国人却勉强度日,或者我们可以重建我国经济,让人人都
得到公平的机会,人人都尽自己的一份力量,人人都遵守同样的规
则
we can either settle for a country where xxxxx, while a
growing number of xxxxx, or we can restore an society where everyone gets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set of rules.
【超好的用于公平的主题】用于论证段,谈及这么做的好处。
and it plunged our economy into a crisis that put millions out
of work, saddled us with more debt, and left innocent, hard-working americans holding the bag.
这使我们的经济陷入危机,数百万人失业,我们背上了更多的债务,让无辜、勤劳的美国人代人受过。
and it plunged our xxxxx into a crisis that put millions xxxxx, saddled us with more xxxxx, and left innocent, hard-working xxxxx in the depth of despair. 用于
论证段,将主题进行扩展,论证做xxxxxx的坏处
building a world-class transportation system is part of what made us an economic superpower.
building a world-class xxxxx is part of what made us an xxxxx superpower. 写得十分到位的,用句论证段或者首尾段,讲做
xxxxx的好处
and i want to cut through the maze of confusing training programs so that from now on people like jackie have one program, one website, and one place to go for all the information and help that they need.
我要精简令人眼花缭乱的种种培训项目,从现在起,让杰基这样的
民众可以只上一个培训项目、一个网站、一个地方,就能获得他们
所需的一切信息和帮助。
and xxxxx want to build up the plan of xxxxx so that from now on people like xxxxx have one program, one website, and one place to go for all the information and help that they need.
太赞了,简单易用,用于论证段,将主题进行扩展,讲做xxx的好处。
for less than 1 percent of what our nation spends on
education each year, we’ve convinced nearly e very state in the country to raise their
standards for teaching and learning, the first time that’s happened in a generation.
我们仅用了我国年度教育经费的不到百分之一,就说服了国内几乎每一个州提高其教学和学习标准——这是几十年来的第一次
for less than 1 percent of what our nation spends on education each yea r, we’ve convinced nearly every xxxxx in the country to raise their
standards for teaching and learning, the first time that’s happened in a generation.
【用于教育主题】令人感动啊!无老师超喜欢的!只需修改一处!讲发展教育的好处we also know that when students don’t walk away from their education, more of them walk the stage to get their diploma.
我们还知道,如果学生不中途退学,更多人会走上领取毕业证书的讲台。
xxxxx also know that when xxxxx don’t walk away from their xxxxx, more of them walk the stage to get their xxxxx.
用于任意一段,将做xxxxx事情带来的好处。
after all, innovation is what america has always been about. 毕竟,创新是美国的根本
after all, xxxxx is what human has always been about.
用于3-4段,提出自己的分论点。
and, by the way, it was public research dollars — over the course of 30 years — that helped develop the technologies to extract all this natural gas out of shale rock, reminding us that government support is critical in helping businesses get new energy ideas off the ground.
顺便提一下,是过去 30年间政府拨出的研究资金帮助开发了从页岩中提炼天然气的技术,这一点提醒我们:政府的支持对帮助企业把新能源设想转化为现实至关重要。
and, by the way, it was xxxxx — over the course of 30 years —that helped develop the technologies to xxxxx, reminding us that xxxxx is critical in helping xxxxx.
很有历史感的一句话,用于任意一段,讲做xxxxx的事情的长期的好处 but i will not walk away from the promise of clean energy. 但我不会背弃对清洁能源作出的承诺
but i will not walk away from xxxxx.
用于任意一段,表示坚决支持xxxxx
it’s time to end the taxpayer giveaways to an industry that rarely has been more profitable and double down on a clean energy industry that never has been more promising.
现在应该是停止向这个利润鲜逊于任何人的产业提供纳税人馈赠、
转向为前途从未如此光明的清洁能源加倍投资的时候了。
it’s time to end the xxxxx to xxxxx that rarely has been more profitable and double down on xxxxx that never
has been more promising.
太赞了!亲一口先!用于最后一段,表明反对xxxxx。
【篇二:美国总统奥巴马制造的作文模板【无老师原
创】】
barack hussein obama 注定是一位传奇的美国总统,在他的任期
之内,战争继续,但是却获得了诺贝尔和平奖。
在他的任期之内美
国经济从重创之中恢复,但是美国人们依旧群情激奋。
应该这一切
都与barack hussein obama非凡的演讲天赋有着无穷的联系,但
是人总是喜欢浅尝辄止,我们总喜欢仰望伟人,但是从来没有想到
为人身上其实也有很多我们可以学习与借鉴的。
从今天开始,无老师就带着每一位考友探寻奥巴马演讲深处的秘密。
奥巴马的演讲逻辑清晰,排比句众多,用词准确,绝对是我们每一
个人作文模仿之佳品。
无老师就本着尊重原文本身含义,尽量减少
个人对其句意的修饰,同时最大程度上方便每一位考友使用为目的,尽最大努力,对奥巴马的众多演讲稿开刀,直接取出热腾腾的第一
手华丽句子,来给我们每一位考友做成模板,直接使用。
今天是第1期,无老师会继续做下去,对于写作的追求是无穷无尽的,因为总有令人感动的句子出现,让我们欲罢不能。
文章编辑方
式为第一段是原文,第二段是制造完成的模板。
为了保证考友们不
会把模板理解错误,以及保证句意的理解,无老师把原文也放在了
这里,而且力劝每一位考友首先研究原文的含义,然后再使用模板,绝对是事半功倍的选择!
if there is anyone out there who still doubts that america is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.
if there is anyone out there who still doubts that xxxxx(论点一) is a xxxxx where all things are possible, who still wonders if
the dream of our xxxxx(论点
二) is xxxxx in our time, who still questions the power of our xxxxx(论点三), this essay is my answer.
用于最后一段结尾,进行总结
it’s the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, democrat and republican, black, white, hispanic, asian, native american, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled — (cheers) — americans who sent a message to the world that we have never been just a collection of individuals or a collection of red states and blue states; we are and always will be the united states of america. (cheers, applause.)
it’s the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, democrat and
republican, black, white, hispanic, asian, native american, gay, straight,
disabled and not disabled, the people who sent a message to the questionnaire conducted by the xxxxx team of stanford university; all of these concluded the same result that xxxxx (观点).
用于举例
it’s the answer that —that led those who’ve been told for so long by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about what we can achieve to put their
hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day. it’s been a lon g time coming, but tonight, because of what we did on this day, in this election, at this defining moment, change has come to america. (cheers, applause.)
it’s the answer that —that led those who’ve been told for so long by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about xxxxx(正面观点) to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day. it’s been a long time coming, at this defining moment, change has come to our cultural.
最后一段,正面观点(段落开始结尾均可)
i want to thank my partner in this journey, a man who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets of
scranton, and rode with on the train home to delaware, the vice president-elect of the united states, joe biden. (cheers, applause.)
people want to thank xxxxx(某人) in their xxxxx(做了什么), a man/woman who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets, and rode with on the train home to tiny village to xxxxx(做了什么辛苦工作).
具体例子
and to my campaign manager, david plouffe — (cheers, applause) — the unsung hero of this campaign who built the best — (cheers) — the best political campaign i think in the history of the united states of america — (cheers, applause) —to
my chief strategist, david axelrod — (cheers, applause) — who has been a
partner with me every step of the way, to the best campaign team ever assembled in the history of politics — (cheers) —you made this happen, and i am forever grateful for what you’ve sacrificed to get it done. (cheers, applause.)
and to my xxxxx, xxxxx(某人) who has been a partner with me every step of xxxxx某个过程, to the best xxxxx(职位,比如说领队啊) ever assembled in the history of xxxxx(某事) who made this happen, and xxxxx(某人)will be forever grateful for what xxxxx have sacrificed to get it done.
描述某特定人或者人群的具体例子
i was never the likeliest candidate for this office. we didn’t start with much money or many endorsements. our campaign was not hatched in the halls of washington; it began in the backyards of des moines and the living rooms of concord and the front porches of charleston. it was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause. (cheers, applause.) it grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generation’s apathy — (cheers) — who left their homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep. it drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of americans who volunteered
and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from the earth. this is your victory. (cheers, applause.)
xxxxx(某事) was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause.
具体例子
xxxxx(某事) grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generation’s apathy who left t heir homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep.
具体例子
xxxxx(某事) drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of xxxxx(某人) who volunteered and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from the earth.
具体例子
以上的三个例子,一定要单独使用,千万不要放在一段之内使用。
now, i know you didn’t do this just to w in an election, and i know you didn’t do it for me. you did it because you understand the enormity of the task that lies ahead. for even as we celebrate tonight, we know the challenges that tomorrow will bring are the greatest of our lifetime: two wars, a planet in peril, the worst financial crisis in a century. even as we stand here tonight, we know there are brave americans waking up in the deserts of iraq and the mountains of
afghanistan to risk their lives for us. there are mothers and fathers who will lie awake after their children fall asleep and wonder how they’ll make the mortgage or pay their doctors’ bills or save enough for their child’s college education.
for even as all reasons listed, we know the challenges that opponents will bring are the greatest of our front.
最后一段开头
there’s new energy to harness, new jobs to be created, new schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.
if xxxxx, there’s new energy to harness, new jobs to be created, new
schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.
用于新建xxxxx将为我们带来的好处。
mr. obama: there will be setbacks and false starts. there are many who won’t agree with every decision or policy i make as president, and we know the government can’t solve every problem. but i will always be honest with you about the challenges we face. i will listen to you, especially when we disagree. and
above all, i will ask you to join in the work of remaking this nation the only way it’s been done in america for 221 years —block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand.
there wil l be setbacks and defect. there are many who won’t agree with
every decision in this essay, and, of course, the xxxxx(某人)can’t solve every problem. but xxxxx(某人) will always be honest with you about the challenges you face.
结尾段的开头
【篇三:美国总统奥巴马制造的作文模板】
无老师文章编辑方式为第一段是原文,第二段是制造完成的模板。
为了保证考友们不会把新托福模板理解错误,以及保证句意的理解,无老师把原文也放在了这里,而且力劝每一位考友首先研究原文的
含义,然后再使用模板,绝对是事半功倍的选择!
此次不仅加入了新素材,而且还在很多替换位加入了该替换怎样的
内容,绝对帮助各位考友最快速度用到自己的作文中!
原文:what we’ve been debating here in washington over the last few weeks will affect the lives of the students here and families all across america in
potentially profound ways. this debate over budgets and deficits is about more than just numbers on a page; it’s about more than just cutting and spending. it’s about the kind of
future that we want. it’s about the kind of country that we believe in. and that’s what i want to spend some time talking about today.
模板:what we’ve been debating here in xxxxx over the last xxxxxxxxx will affect the xxxxxxxxx here and xxxxxxxxx all across xxxxxxxx in xxxxxxxxxxx. this debate over xxxxxxxxxx is about more than just
numbers on a page; it’s about more than just xxxxxxxxxx xxxx. it’s about the kind of future that we want. it’s about the kind of country that we believe in. and that’s what i want to spend some time talking about today.
超棒的起始段,几乎就是为托福作文准备的。
原文:but there’s always been another thread running through our history -–a belief that we’re all connected, and that there are some things we can only do together, as a nation. we believe, in the words of our first republican president, abraham lincoln, that through government, we should do together what we cannot do as well for ourselves.
模板:but there’s always been another thread running through our history -– a belief that xxxxxxxxxxx正面观点, and that there are some things we can only do together, as xxxxxxxx. we believe, in the words of xxxxxxxxxx, (that through xxxxxxxxx 词句可以忽略不用), we should do together what we cannot do as well for ourselves.
用于论证段
原文:now, for much of the last century, our nation found a way to afford these investments and priorities with the taxes paid by its citizens.
模板:now, for much of the xxxxxxxx一段具体时间, xxxxxxx found a way to afford these investments and priorities with the xxxxxxxxx paid by xxxxxxxxx.
用于论证或者举例。
原文:but as far back as the 1980s, america started amassing debt at more alarming levels, and our leaders began to realize that a larger challenge was on the horizon.
模板:but as far back as the xxxxxx, xxxxxxxxxxxx started xxxxxxxx at more alarming levels(此处写得妙), and xxxxxxxx began to realize that a larger challenge was on the horizon.(写得好有画面感啊)
用于论证或者举例。
原文:to meet this challenge, our leaders came together three times during the 1990s to reduce our nation’s deficit — three times.
模板:to meet this xxxxxxx, somebody do something three times during the xxxxxxx to do something — three times.
用于论证或者举例。
原文:but we have to do it without putting at risk current retirees, or the most vulnerable, or people with disabilities; without slashing benefits for future
generations; and without subjecting americans’ guaranteed retirement income to the whims of the stock market.
模板:but we have to do it without putting at risk current xxxxxx, or the most vulnerable, or people with disabilities; without slashing benefits for future
generations; and without subjecting xxxxxxxx(某国家)guaranteed retirement income to the whims of the stock market.
o(∩_∩)o哈哈~,又见奥巴马并列金句!而且模板度超高!
原文:to give you an idea of how much damage this caused to our nation’s checkbook, consider this: in the last decade, if we had simply found a way to pay for the tax cuts and the prescription drug benefit, our deficit would currently be at low historical levels in the coming years.
模板:to give you an idea of how much xxxxxxxx this caused to
xxxxxxxxx, consider this: in the last decade, if we had simply found a way to xxxxxxxxxx, our xxxxxxxxxx would currently be at xxxxxxxxxxxx historical levels in the coming years.
绝棒的举例句!
原文:finally, there are those who believe we shouldn’t make any reforms to medicare, medicaid, or social security, out of fear that any talk of change to these programs will immediately usher in the sort of steps that the house republicans have proposed.
模板:finally, there are those who believe we should xxxxxxxxx, out of fear that any talk of change to xxxxxxxx(接名词结构)will immediately usher in the sort of steps that the xxxxxxxxx(某人或者某群体) have proposed.
hohoho观点句的绝品!
原文:even after our economy recovers, our government will still be on track to spend more money than it takes in throughout this decade and beyond.
模板:even after our xxxxxxxx, xxxxxxxxx will still be on track to spend more money than it takes in throughout this decade and beyond.
用于讨论xxxxxxxx的恢复
原文:a serious plan doesn’t require us to balance our budget overnight –- in fact, economists think that with the economy just starting to grow again, we need a phased-in approach –- but it does require tough decisions and support from our leaders in both parties now.
模板:a serious plan doesn’t require us to balance our budget overnight –- in fact, economists think that with the economy doing something, we need a phased-in approach –- but it does require tough decisions and support from xxxxxxxxxx (somebody) now.
超好的关于经济的论证句!
原文:above all, it will require us to choose a vision of the america we want to see five years, 10 years, 20 years down the road.
模板:above all, xxxxxxxxxxxxxx will require us to choose a vision of the xxxxxxxx we want to see five years, 10 years, 20 years down the road.
超好的托福作文最后一段的总结句。