高考英语作文建议信课件

advisable明智的, essential重要的 significant有意义的.vital极其重要的。
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be+adj=be of great+抽象名词
是不是所有的形容词只要有名词形式就可以套用呢？
important---importance
英语作文专题(一)
词汇升级
空白太多 要求接近满最多空一行
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阅卷时间10~15秒所以 一定要在段首写出亮点 没有低级错误否则即使 有亮点也是18-19分 写错了必须划掉写错划 一道横线就可以了
take
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因果关系是在写作中很好的句式升 级
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【2015全国II】假定你是李华计划和同学们去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人过重阳节 (the double ninth Festival)请给外教露西写封邮件邀他一同前往，内容包括 1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
beneficial---benefit。有益处的
valuable---value有价值的 significant-wk.baidu.com-significance
e.g.It is of great benefit for you to do... I often do morning exercise,which is of great benefit for me.
分绝对没戏。 • 乱用非谓语动词(Knowing that....，只是半句，然后后半句不写了)
• 下面表达正确的是，给主人带个合适的礼物是必要的/明智的 • A.Bring a proper gift to the host is necessary • B.It necessary for you to bring a proper gift to the host. • C.It's necessary to bringing in a prepare gift to the host. • D. It’s advisable to bring a people proper gift to the host.
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所有状语从句中有几个表示因果?
• 原因状从Because • 结果状从As (it is a fact that)+原因,+主句 • so...that... • ....,for (the reason that)...同位语从句
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写作神句
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want to的替换 be willing to do(will意愿) be curious to do(curious好奇) be eager to do(热切) desire to do(渴望) have a great desire to do (名词形式比上面的高级) long to do/long for sth(这里的long是v) intend to do
段首句我们要写亮点句，如何将这两句话写成一句呢？
To begin with，you should learn more about Chinese table manners，which is of great significance for you to be a guest in Chinese friend's home.
下列句子表达正确的是。 A.Learn【Learning】 English is very important. B.I believe do【doing】 exercises is necessary.
C.It is of great value for teenager to read many books. D.It is of great valuable【value】 for teenages to read many books.
一种句式只能用一次，不要反复用
【2018年全国卷I】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家里做客， 发邮件向你询问相关习俗请回复邮件，内容包括 1.到达时间2.合适的礼物3.餐桌礼仪
You should learn more about Chinese table manners. It is of great significance for you to be a guest in Chinese friend's home.
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丰富开头篇：副词
Obviously,明显的,Apparently,(ap+父母)显然的。副词修饰一句话 形修名副修动形句 二段结尾：Consequently=therefore=As a result=so=thus=As a consequence, 介词短语开头
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参加写作升级
• attended sth • join in sth • participate in sth • be/get (actively)involved in sth
I want to take part in more activities. 升级：I have a great desire to participate in more activities.
参加剪纸艺术展有利于你了解中国传统文化。
Obviously participating in the paper-cutting art exhibition is of great benefit for you to have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture. 对中国传统文化有更好的理解
句式也不要反复用，用过一次定从 下一次就不要用了
• What we all know is that…
• It is widely acknowledged(承认) that a great many forinners are learnning Chinese thesedays.
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用如此以至于造句
【2017全国II】假定你是李华想邀请Herry一起参观剪纸艺术展请你给他写封邮件， 内容包括艺术展，请你给他写邮件内容包括 1.展览时间地点2.展览内容
因为这个艺术展很有意义，所以我想邀请你参加。 这个艺术展是如此的有意义，以至于我们每个月都要举办一次。
As it is of great significance,... so that句型
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many&much的写作升级
• a great many • a large number of • a variety of多种多样的 • a growing number of越来越多的 • an increasing number of大量的 • an increasing amount of • much • a large amount of 加不可数名词 • a large(great) deal of 加不可数名词
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高分作文你得这么写 •结构:分三段(看的出你分段了才行) •内容:要点一个都不能少 •语言不犯低级错误，多用高级词句 •评分细则说了算
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写作常见错误
• 不分大小写(句号后面小写) • 只写从句，不写主句(写了一长串从句，忘了写主句)严重会让判卷老师认为不分主句从句，20
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【2017年全国I卷】假定你是李华正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语请写封邮件告 知下次的上课计划 内容包括:3课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
It is important for you to learn Chinese history of Tang Dynasty. 划线部分可升级为? It is of great importance for you...
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污染很严重。
think写作升级
Environment pollution is serious. 写成被动污染被越来越多的专家和教授认为很严重。
Environment contamination is thought very serious by more and more experts and professors. 你觉得这句话中需要替换哪些单词？
下列句子表达正确的是。 A.Learn English is very important. B.I believe do exercise is necessary C.It is of great value for teenager to read many books. D.It is of great valuable for teenages to read many books.
believe consider【常用】 hold argue(争论) assume(假设)
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very写作升级 • fairly相当的 • extremely极其的 • extraordinarily非凡的 English study is very important. English study is extremely important.
like can many常见词汇升级 词汇升级搭配合适的升级句式
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丰富开头篇：介词短语
我喜欢摄影，来记录很多美好的瞬间.
I like photograph,
can record many wonderful moments.
A.for
B.which
C.since 引导原因状语从句+完整的句子
这句话哪个词可以升级？
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英语作文专题(一)
句型升级
丰富开头篇：众所周知
很多外国人都在学习汉语。 ，很多外国人都在学习汉语。
• As we all know that...
• As is known to all,...(as引导的定语从翻译为正如)
• It is widely acknowledged(承认) that... • It is widely believed that...
下面表达正确的是，给主人带个合适的礼物是必要的/明智的 A.Bring【Bringing】 a proper gift to the host is necessary. B.It is necessary for you to bring a proper gift to the host. C.It's necessary to bringing【bring】 in a prepare gift to the host. D. It's advisable to bring a people proper gift to the host.
这个活动是如此有趣以至于我们参加了。
This activity was so popular that we all take part in it.
试着用一下so that的倒装
So popular was this activity that...(照抄)
你的思维决定了你写的句子 • n是如此那样以至于…… • 高级思维如此那样是n以至于......