高考英语如何进行概要写作课件(共20张PPT)

（Support)
Similarly
laws are need to forbid the use of cell phones in cars
against the law and strictly enforced
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
1. Cell phones used on the road dangerously distract the drivers and should be banned.
2. Using cell phones while driving dangerously draw away drivers' attention and should not be allowed.
Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones.
Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.
Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.
Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.
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Result
It's dangerous. It's safe.
(Support)
Drivers using a phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using.
Para 4: Suggestion
Q1：Before using a cell phone, what question should drivers ask themselves?
Is this call really that important?
Yes. Suggestion1：Use a phone wisely
Para 3: Argument (论据)2
2. Cell phones used on the road should be forbidden. An example：
at least 1,000 deaths per year
① phones used by drivers ② drunk driving
Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones.
Para 5: Conclusion
Para5 Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. As professional racer John Andretti says, “Driving safely is your first responsibility.” The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.
Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.
Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.
Para 2: Argument (论据) 1
1. Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers.
Drivers using a
not using a
Attention on the phone on the road
3. We should forbid using cell phones on the road for their harmful distraction to drivers. 简单句
4. Drivers should be prevented from using cellphones while driving because they can be dangerously distracted. 复合句
Learn to use the checklist: 4C+1O
Factors
complete
concise coherent correct objective
Checking points 1. Cover the main points
using your own words 2. No details in 40~80 words
distraction to drivers.
Para 2: Argument (论点) 1 Para 3: Argument (论点) 2
Para 4: Suggestion Para 5: Conclusion
Para 1: Viewpoint
a fact
Para1 Cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
a viewpoint
Tip2: The viewpoint of an argumentative writing （议论文） should be included in a summary.
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
3. Use transitional words if possible
4. No grammatical mistakes
5. No personal opinion
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Para 1: Viewpoint (观点)
1. It's a dangforbidden.
Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.
Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.
a quote (引语)
Tip3: A quote is usually used to support an idea and should be not included in a summary.
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
Skills: 1. 词性转换法 2. 近义替换法 3. 正话反说法 4. 语态互换法 5. 句式变化法 6. 主语变身法
Have a try: work in groups of 4 to create a good summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
No. Suggestion2：Not use a phone
Drivers need to be more responsible when using cell phones.
（Support)
Main points of the summary
Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones.
Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.
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Speeding Tired driving Drunk driving Careless driving Using cell phones
Skills of restatement(重述): “Point1” as an example
Point1：①Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and ②should be forbidden. 并列句
Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.
Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.