高中英语Module3ForeignFoodSectionⅤWriting—介绍饮食的文章课件外研版选修8

5．然而，快餐在营养方面远远不能令人满意，特别是对儿童和年轻 人的健康和成长。(especially for ...；简单句) However, fast food is far from satisfactory in nutrition, especially for the health and growth of the children and young men.
[题目要求] 起源于西方的快餐在中国越来越流行，尤其是在儿童和青
少年群体之中，备受青睐。为此，美国某饭店快餐部在你校进 行了一次调查。请你以“Fast Food”为题，写一篇 100 词左右的 英语短文，简单介绍以下几个方面的内容：
1．快餐受欢迎有其原因； 2．从营养角度来讲…… 3．医生的建议； 4．你的观点……
第二步：核心词汇想周全
1． popular
受欢迎的
2． convenient
方便的
3． order
点菜
4． nutrition
营养
5． far from
远非
第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1．现如今，快餐在中国日益流行，尤其是受到儿童和青少
年的欢迎。(现在进行时：be popular with) Nowadays, fast food is becoming increasingly popular in China.It is especially popular with children and teenagers. 2．快餐很方便，可以节省许多时间。(It is convenient to do ...) It is very convenient to get fast food and it can save a lot of time.
3．还要表达自己鲜明的观点，以及文章用什么时态来写。
二、增分佳句 1．...be supposed to ... 2．keep ... in your left hand ... 3．It's polite/impolite/good manners/bad manners to ... 4．While eating, you'd better not ... 5．You are not allowed to ...over the dinner. 6．You should express your购食物，你定的食物会立刻 准备好。(and 并列句) You just go into a fast food restaurant, order your food, and your food is ready in no time.
4．其次，它的受欢迎程度也来自于快餐店的清洁、舒适的 环境和优良的服务。(result from) Secondly, its popularity also results from the clean and comfortable environment of fast food restaurants and the excellent service there.
6．因此，医生建议人们，尤其是儿童，应该尽量少吃快餐食品。 (suggest, as ... as possible) Therefore, doctors suggest that people, especially children, should eat as little fast food as possible.
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 Fast Food
Nowadays, fast food is becoming increasingly popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.
There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is so convenient to get fast food that it can save a lot of time.You just go into a fast food restaurant, order your food, and your food is ready in no time.Secondly, its popularity also results from the clean and comfortable environment of fast food restaurants and the excellent service there.
第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题 1．确定体裁：本文为一篇 议论文 ； 2．确定中心人称：本文主要人称为 第三人称 ； 3．确定主体时态：使用 一般现在时。 二、构思 第一部分：说明现象：现如今，快餐在中国日益流行，尤其是 受到儿童和青少年的欢迎。 第二部分：快餐受欢迎有其原因；但从营养角度来讲，快餐却 差强人意。 第三部分：说明医生的建议；发表自己的观点：对快餐还是少 食为佳。
Section_Ⅴ
Writing—_介绍饮食的文章
一、写作要领 在人们的日常生活中，怎么也离不开吃饭、喝茶等行为， 不论形成好的习惯还是坏的习惯，不论喜欢吃什么样的食物。 这类文章往往可以写成说明文或是议论文。
1．写这类文章一定要明确自己的写作方向，明确自己的态 度和观点；
2．在写作中要运用一定的写作方法，清楚地将要写的内容 表达出来；
7．你太忙了抽不出足够的时间，快餐是最好的选择。(too ... to ...) You are too busy to spare enough time and fast food is the best choice.
第四步：句式升级造亮点 1．把句 1 合成一个简单句
Nowadays, fast food is becoming increasingly popular in China, especially among children and teenagers. 2．用 so ... that ...句式改写句 2 It is so convenient to get fast food that it can save a lot of time. 3．用含 when 时间状语从句改写句 7 Fast food is the best choice when you are too busy to spare enough time.