2018-2019中考英语作文指导公开课课件Writing(共20张PPT)

Practice: Use different expressions
You should keep the park clean.
You shouldn’t push in before others .
Fine language
Tip4: 添加连接词(conjunctions)
（徐李垚）The fireworks show will be worth watching.
（张可）A fireworks show will be shown at night. Don’t miss it.
Modify your writing 修改作文
Enough Make contents up
Writing
Hu Caogang Middle School Cai Weilian
Learning aims:
By the end of the class, we students are expected to
1.To learn how to edit a composition.
2. To learn to use some writing strategies
不乱扔垃圾，保持整洁 考生自拟（至少2点）
Tip2: 不遗漏要点
1 In the theme park, you shouldn’t throw rubbish around. You should keep the park clean. Don’t write 2 3 words on the wall. keep the park clean/tidy queue for your turn keep quiet keep your voice down help others drop litter/rubbish everywhere push in before others draw on the wall break public things shout loudly in public
参加活动，欣赏表演 You can take part in activities and enjoy the show.
（吴彦悦）There are a lot of activities, you can take part in all of them. You will enjoy the wonderful show in the later afternoon. You can take part in many activities in it, such such as as enjoy enjoying the song and dance show .
由六个主题公园组成
2.It is made of six theme parks. It is made up of six theme parks.
It has/includes six theme parks. There are six theme parks in it .
Enough contents
Tip1: 添加主语、修饰词(时间、地点、方式），转换句式 购买礼物 观看烟花
Let’s appreciate 欣赏
（韦天玥）The fireworks show is the best part of a day. I believe that you will enjoy it. （王紫伊）In the evening, I believe that all of you will be excited because the fireworks show will be wonderful.
假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园。
I’d like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
you can take part in…，Also, we you can In Disneyland, we buy some gifts for …， we can watch a fireworks show … you
Typical mistakes(典型错误）
lies 1.The Shanghai Disneyland is in the eastern of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. … in the east of Shanghai. … in the eastern part of Shanghai. 上海东部, 地铁可达
Standards of a good composition
中考书面表达20分 No mistakes 没有错误
Enough contents充足的内容Βιβλιοθήκη Fine language
丰富的语言 Beautiful handwriting 书写工整
Typical mistakes(典型错误）
What person? （人称） 第二人称为主
Fine language
Tip3: 使用不同表达
When you are visiting the park, You shouldn’t drop litter everywhere. You should keep the park clean . You shouldn’t push in before others. You should queue. 不乱扔垃圾 Don’t drop litter everywhere . It’s impolite to drop litter everywhere. You’d better not drop litter everywhere. You aren’t allowed to drop litter everywhere . Littering isn’t allowed .