2014年高考英语短文写作分析共8页文档
2014重庆英语高考作文解析
we can rely on forever. They are the life-long treasure in life. Wee falls, while it’s hard to repair the damage done to the relationship between friends. In a word, we should cherish friendship, because it is much more important for us than phones,
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The sentence “ My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry” shows a common phenomenon that most people regard their phones more important than friends. But in my opinion, friendship is far more important than phones. Firstly, phones are only tools for us. We use them mostly to communicate with others. However, friends are necessary for us. We share happiness and sorrow, they are the ones who we can
“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”
1. 反映出:it reflects / shows / reveal that …. 2. 我的看法是:In my point of view / As far as I am concerned / As for me….
2014年高考英语真题(新课标全国卷Ⅱ)及答案详细解析
2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标全国卷Ⅱ)英语本试卷分第I卷(选择题)和第II卷(非选择题)两部分。
考试结束后,将本试卷和答案卡一并交回。
注意事项:1.答第I卷前考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。
2.选出每小题答案前,用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。
如需改动,用橡皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案标号框,不能答在本试卷上,否则无效。
第I卷第一部分:听力(共两节,满分30分)第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)做题时,现将答案标在试卷上,录音内容结束后,你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节(共5小题;每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)听下面5段对话,每段对话后有一个小题。
从题中所给的A,B,C三个选项中选出最佳选项,并标在试卷的相应位置。
听完每段对话后,你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。
每段对话仅读一遍。
例:How much is the shirt?A.£ 19.15B.£ 9.18C.£ 9.15答案是C。
1. What does the woman want to do?A. Find a place.B. Buy a map.C. Get an address.2. What will the man do for the woman?A. Repair her car.B. Give her a ride..C. Pick up her aunt.3. Who might Mr. Peterson be?A. A new professor.B. A department head.C. A company director.4. What does the man think of the book?A. Quite difficult..B. Very interesting.C. Too simple.5. What are the speakers talking about?A. Weather.B. Clothes.C. News.第二节(共15小题;每小题1.5分,满分22.5分)听下面5段对话或独白。
2014年高考新课标卷1英语试题分析
2014年高考新课标卷1英语试题分析今年新课标卷1英语试题难度适中,设计合理,有一定区分度,具有较好的信度和效度,检测了学生的基础知识,考查了基本能力。
但也有个别试题有一定难度,学生需要经过缜密的思考和推断总结后才能做出正确答案。
大部分考生取得了满意的成绩,小部分考生也能突出能力,取得了卓越的成绩。
下面从不同题型解读今年试题的特点和对教学的导向作用。
第一部分听力题从理解主旨要义,获取事实性的具体信息,做出简单推断,理解说话者的意图、观点和态度等方面进行考查。
细节和推断题居多。
内容涉及生活、工作和社会等各个方面。
设置答案的特点是每道题两个错误选项都是干扰项,三个选项的内容都有提到,考生需要抓住问题的关键来获取需要信息,排除干扰项做答。
只要学生常听各种内容地道的英美录音,做不同形式的练习题,教师辅以听力技能和做题方法指导,注意和朗读、口语练习相结合,考试前进行标准题型的集中训练,在听力上拿到优异成绩是不难的。
第二部分阅读理解题分为阅读和七选五。
阅读题以细节和推理判断题为主。
第一篇应用文涉及剑桥科技节的一则公告。
前两道属细节题,第三道文章类型题可以通过首段第一句中关键词inform…of做出判断。
第二篇社会报道讲人类活动的破坏导致美国旅鸽由兴盛到灭绝。
学生把握时间线索提炼文章主旨做出三道推断题,和一道词义猜测题都难度不大。
第三篇议论文以驯狮为例指导我们面临多个选择时要集中一个立即行动起来。
考生要做出一道推理题,两道细节题和一道作者观点态度题,必须先理解作者阐明的观点道理。
第四篇关于语言文化方面的特别报道记述了一些语言文化学者采取措施保护世界各地濒临消亡的一些小语种。
第一道主旨题概括了文章的大意。
后三道都是细节题,但是并不能只在文章中找相同的词。
有的题需要在两三处找到线索归纳总结,有的题用了不同的词汇表达相同的意思,有的题需要查找关键词然后总结。
所以,完成这些题,学生不仅得具备略读、查读、速读等阅读技能和理解能力,而且得应运用分析、推断、总结归纳等思维方法,同时,缜密思维排除干扰项。
2014年浙江省高考英语书面表达的解读与心得共4页word资料
2014年浙江省高考英语书面表达的解读与心得1. 引言英语书面表达是当前高考英语试题的重要组成部分,主要考查学生的观察能力、分析能力、逻辑思维能力和表达能力等综合运用语言的能力。
它要求学生恰当使用词汇和语法、构建篇章、传递信息、表达情感。
高考英语书面表达题型对学生综合语言运用能力的测量最准确,效度最高,是历年高考的必考题型。
2. 真题再现,范文欣赏2014年浙江省高考英语书面表达真题如下(满分30分):学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。
假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。
请你用英语给图书馆王教师写一封100――-120词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr. Wang,Yours sincerely,Li Yue2014年书面表达体裁沿用近几年的实用性文体――书信,选材以大众生活为话题――推荐书籍。
内容避开当今社会热点问题,如反腐倡廉、环境保护等。
作文要求学生向学校图书馆推荐“科普类”和“文学类”两种类型的书籍,并且说明推荐这两种书的理由。
写作风格五年内首次转型,更加关注基础运用能力。
话题改变了以往连续五年“一半记叙,一半议论”的形式,省略记叙部分,更加偏重应用性。
高考英语作文评分有三大依据:第一,符合中心,达到写作目的;第二,高级词汇和多样性复杂语法的应用;第三,连词的恰当使用。
以下是可供参考的范文:Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books,I’d li ke to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Yue3. 试题特点,命题反思3.1高考英语书面表达试题控制性减弱,开放性增强“控制性”是指控制考生的思维不无限扩张而无所依托;“开放性”是指鼓励学生自由地表达、有个性地表达、有创意地表达,尽可能减少对写作的束缚。
2014年上海高考英语试卷翻译和写作精析与答案
2014年上海高考英语试卷翻译和写作精析与答案TranslationDirections: Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets. 【翻译总体分析】五句翻译分别考察了词组搭配、名词性从句、比较级、名词词组固定搭配、让步状语从句。
整体试题难度体现了良好的阶梯性,由简至难,除第五句中如何翻译出购物狂稍有难度,其他翻译题都保持在中等难度,只要能掌握基本句式难度就不太大了。
1 我习惯睡前听点轻音乐。
(accustomed)【解析】本题主要考察词组be accustomed to doing,只要对词组掌握良好,根据语序就可以按部就班的翻译出句子。
2 将来过怎样的生活取决于你自己。
(be up to)【解析】本题考察名词性从句当中的主语从句,整体句子结构相对比较简单,正是我们平时口语当中的it’s up to you.难点就在于正确翻译从句部分。
首先从句是用what来引导,同时注意从句保持陈述语序;其次需要注意词汇的积累,过着…生活词组表达是lead/ live a … life。
3 没有什么比获准参加太空旅行项目更令人兴奋的了。
(than)【解析】本题考查比较级, 难度较前两句稍有增加,主要难点在于:一、合理安排句子结构,要用比较级表示最高级,此考点的重点就在于使用比较级的同时要搭配否定,表达出“没有…更…“来表达最高级的意思;二、同意 approve 这个词搭配的介词 of,同时要注意介词后面要加动名词,相应地enter for 参加要改成 entering for 。
4家长嘱咐孩子别在河边嬉戏,以免遭遇不测。
(for fear)【解析】此题考察重点就在于嘱咐和遭遇不测嘱咐: ask或者tell即可\在河边应该翻译成by the river,需要注意介词的选择;由于题目给出的词组是for fear,fear作为名词,可以直接在后面加of,所以遭遇不测这个动词词组可以名词化,翻译成for fear of accident.5.虽然现代社会物资丰富,给与消费者更多的选择,但也使不少人变成购物狂。
2014高考全国卷英语作文及参考翻译.doc
2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。
下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:住宿accommodation【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad,and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua亲爱的先生/女士,我是一名在中国的学生,我计划在假期期间去英国上暑期学校。
我看过你的广告,我想了解一下你为期六周的英语学习情况。
首先,课程什么时候开始,每周有多少课时?此外,我希望一个班的学生不要太多,我还想知道我要付多少钱是否包括住宿,是否有寄宿家庭或大学宿舍?希望早日得到你的答复。
2014年高考英语试题分析5篇范文
2014年高考英语试题分析5篇范文第一篇:2014年高考英语试题分析2014年高考英语试题分析北京二中集宁分校高中部英语组蔚丽娜本次英语高考题共有四部分,第一部分听力,第二部分阅读理解,第三部分英语知识应用,第四部分写作。
本次高考英语题最大的变化就是取消了传统的单项选择题,在第四部分中加入了语法填空这一小节。
整个试卷体现出了对语言知识的综合应用能力的要求,更加符合英语课改的要求,体现了在新时代语言教学的真正目的所在,即对听说读写等基本能力的要求。
下面我就2014年英语高考试题分题型进行分析:第一部分是听力题,考查的是学生对英语这一语言的听力方面的要求,题中既有根据单个的一句话来回答问题,也有根据一段对话或听一段短文来回答问题。
新课改要求英语更加注重听说能力,虽然现在高考英语听力不计入总分,但是听说的能力是英语学习的重要组成部分,将来一定会成为考试的核心内容,应该加以重视。
第二部分是阅读理解,其中传统的4选1阅读3篇,7选5阅读1篇。
阅读是英语的又一个重要组成部分。
阅读考查的使学生的词汇量的大小,基本语法的掌握程度,获取文中信息的技巧等。
2014年4选1阅读共出了15到题,总分30分。
这15道题中第1题是根据A篇中第一段设置的,是对这一段目的的概括。
第2题是根据第三段设置的,这是一道细节题,根据文中的细节设置问题,让学生从文中找到答案。
第3题是对文中的一个核心词“restore”的考查,这既考查了学生平时词汇的积累,也考查了学生根据上下文猜单词的能力,考查学生对文章主题思想的宏观把握。
第4题是让学生为文章选择一个合适的题目。
考察的同样是文章核心意思的把握。
B篇中第一题同样是根据文章的第一段设计的,第1题的答案相当于是文中第一段第二句话的同意句转换,只要学生读懂了这句话,答案就显而易见了。
第2题是根据文章第二段的第一句话设计的。
第3题又是一道细节题,答案从以下文字中可找到“According to US government repo rts , emissions(排放)from cars and trucks have dropped from 10.3 million tons a year to 5.5 tons.The number of cities producing CO beyond the standard has been reduced from 40 to 9.Although serious problems still remain and need to be dealt with , the world is a safer and healthier place.A kind of “Green thinking ” has become part of practices.”第4题明确表明是从文章最后一段找答案,也就是概括最后一段的核心意思即教育。
2014高考英文作文分析
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20146月SAT英语写作真题分析
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2014年上海英语高考分析4写作
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申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。
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信中请包括:1.你个人基本情况2.你对申请项目具体设想3.项目经费使用情况●My name is Li Ming. I am a student in Ming Qi middle school. I am Grade 3. One day I sawsome poor children’s life in the TV…●Due to my love and warm heart for the children in poor areas, I want to apply for apoor-supporting event and fund to support the children in poor families. I want to support the study of children in Wenchuan. Although the earthquake has gone away three years, the destroy from earthquake has not completely been moved. Many families lost their home and money in earthquake so that they couldn’t have power to support the study of Wenchuan.Watching the children’s eyes for desiring to study in TV, I feel worried. I think I must do something. I want to use 2000 Yuan to support the children who mostly need to go to study but their families are mostly poor. I want to use money to support 3 most-needed students.The following is my plan. (136 words)●…… If I have the opportunity to get the fund of 2000 yuan, I’d really love and try my best tobuild a solid and beautiful school building for the poor children in the mountainous areas…….---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Dear Sir,Hello! I’m Li Ming, a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai. As I’ve always been interested in charity, I’m writing to y ou in the hope that I could be given the 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poor areas.My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts. In the initial stage, I’ll try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths. Given that new books are usually expensive, I’ll be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books. The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas. Surely they should be armed with relatively profound knowledge to be qualified teachers. We will set out for primary schools, which are selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program, which of course is my last stage.As to how to allocate the money, I’d like to use 1,000 for textbooks, and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.I am looking forward to your reply, thanks!Yours, Li Ming (188/ 8+7+4 )---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------To whom it may concern, Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Ming, a student from Ming Qi middle school. I’m writing this e-mail, on behalf of every charity-pursuer, to apply for the project aimed at helping children in poverty-stricken areas. My experience of last year’s visit to a school in the depth of a mountain triggered the intention to shoulder the responsibility of helping them overcome the hardships and struggles they would go through.There is a series of steps in my project that will be demonstrated as follows: Of the top priority is our organizing an activity to introduce the living and learning conditions of kids in poor areas and thus bringing home to the public the urgency of immediate action to be taken to help them out, whether by donating money or by sending daily necessities from clothes to books. As should be done next, a video play will be shot to convey the wishes, cheers and encouragement from us city people to them. Equally significantly, I along with my teammates have planned to visit those kids, to play and chat with them, which is bound to establish a solid connection between us.If I were lucky enough to be granted the 2000 yuan fund, a quarter of it would be spared for the traffic and so cost, while the rest would be added to the money collected to be donated contributing to modernizing and improving the teaching devices.Thanks for taking time to read my e-mail and I’m looking forward to being part of your project.Yours, sincerely,Li Ming (260/ 9+10+5)2013:上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。
2014年全国统一高考英语试题(辽宁卷)评析7页word
2014年全国统一高考英语试题(辽宁卷)评析一、总体评价2014年辽宁省英语高考试题按照《2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲》及《2014年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲的说明》(以下简称《考试说明》)的要求,贯彻了《普通高中英语课程标准(实验)》的思想,以稳定为主,注重基础,突出能力,着力发展与创新,体现了政治性、科学性、公平性和规范性的原则。
在试题形式上,减少了客观题的比例,去掉了单项选择题,代之以语篇型语法填空题,放在第二卷中,增加了主观试题的比重。
考查基本语法能力和语言运用能力,信度和效度都很高。
作文也一改文字提示语的形式,代之以图画提示形式,给学生想象空间,增加了趣味性。
整套试题难易适中,无偏题、怪题。
在保持原有命题风格和难度的基础上,有所创新,有所突破,巧妙地将语言知识、语言技能、文化意识、情感态度和学习策略融于语料中,既考查了学生的综合语言运用能力,又突出了“新课改”的理念,对高中英语教学将起到积极的引领与促进作用。
二、试题特点(一)突出基础性和交际性2014年辽宁省英语试题在难度上与近几年试题相当,依然注重基础知识和基本技能的考查,试题中出现的词汇和短语几乎都在教材上出现过。
新题型“语篇型语法填空题”也是按照“考纲说明”的样题,采用了“对话形式”,且所设考点均为教材中常见的语言现象;语法考查有一定覆盖面,侧重核心、主干知识;在阅读材料中,B篇采用了“对话”形式,突出交际的真实性与阅读理解的实用性;改错题采用了书信的形式,表述了Jack和Rose对邻居家的狗Cleo每天“晨吠扰民”一事的抱怨及期待解决之情;作文要求就学校即将举行的活动写一则书面通知。
这些试题都突出了“交际能力”的考查,在尽可能真实的特定语境中考查学生语言运用的能力。
(二)注重科学性和公平性2014年辽宁省英语试题在命制上科学、严谨、规范、准确。
阅读题量与去年基本一致,约为2000词。
语篇型语法填空题取代原有的单项选择题后,阅读题量减少了200词左右,语法的考查覆盖面有限,但在完形填空及改错中有所补充,一些语法现象在阅读语料及题干设置中有所体现,显现了出题者的智慧,也进一步突出了语言的工具性与人文性的特点。
2014山东英语高考作文分析
山东高考英语作文考试一览表今年山东卷高考英语发生重大题型改变,深刻研究今年题目,对于2015年考生备考有着重要的指导意义。
以下是对于书面表达题型的分析。
今年山东省英语作文题一改沿用多年的书信形式,由“某报社举办‘我最喜欢的谚语’征文活动,你有意参加”开头,让考生初读似乎为书信体,但继续往下看,会发现试题要求考生从所给的两句谚语中选择一句为题写一篇作文,解释该谚语的含义并讲述能体现该谚语含义的个人经历,形式新颖。
题中给出的两句谚语“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”“Where there’s a will,there’s a way.”都是中学生耳熟能详的,考生在审题时不会有障碍。
两句谚语所蕴含的道理浅显易懂,贴近考生生活和经验,能够保证考生有话可说,利于考生展现其语言运用能力。
那么,这篇作文该如何构思呢?不要因为从来没有见过该题型就慌了手脚。
在考场上,大家一定要具备将不会的内容转变成自己熟悉的内容的能力,这是得分的关键。
根据“要点全面,内容简单”的原则,大家首先在两则谚语中选择自己读懂的,相对较熟悉,有话可说的一句来入手。
文章可以分为三段来写,第一段阐述谚语的含义,可以写成提纲作文常见的“主题句—拓展句”结构,再灵活运用恰当的过渡词,使你的观点层次分明,掷地有声。
第二段结合个人经历来谈对该谚语的看法,可以借鉴看图记叙文的一些表达技巧,巧妙利用时间状语衔接上下文。
此外,记叙过程中一定要保证动词时态的一致,避免因时态混乱而丢分。
第三段对自己的观点进行简短总结,再次扣题。
下面将分别分析题目中的两句谚语如何着笔。
第一句“A friend in need is a friend indeed”强调挚友的重要性。
在理解其含义时,要抓住句中最有感触的词“in need”和“indeed”,而在阐述时,可以联想真正的朋友应该具备的优秀品质,如“忠诚(loyalty)”“信任(trust)”等,然后一一作解释。
2014年成人高考高起点英语真题作文范文赏析
2014年成人高考高起点英语真题作文范文
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导读:本文2014年成人高考高起点英语真题作文范文赏析,仅供参考,如果觉得很不错,欢迎点评和分享。
假设你是李华,请用英语写一封信邀请Mike参加你和朋友在颐和园的周末野餐,并告诉他你将负责面包、水果和饮料。
具体安排如下:
自带物品:自己最喜欢的一道菜
集合地点:学校北门公交车站
出发时间:星期日早上8点
注意:词数应为100左右
Dear Mike,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:Dear Mike,
How are you doing recently? My friends and I planto have a picnic together in the Summer Palace thiscoming weekend. We' d like to invite you to come andjoin us. Each of us is expected to prepare a favorite dishfor the picnic. And I will get
enough bread, fruit anddrinks ready for all of us. We have decided to meet at thebus stop near the north gate of our school at 8o' clockthis Sunday morning. Please let me know if you cancome.
Yours,
Li Hua。
高考英语2014年高考满分作文解析及写作素材积累 Word版含解析【25页】
2014年高考英语满分作文1.2014年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。
下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿— accommodation_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _______________________【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务。
在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等。
只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务。
李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式。
这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体。
考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比如:功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情。
注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。
14年英语真题分析(汇总后)
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并不多,都需要综合考虑。
很多设问都不是以往常规的人物关系,事发地点,主旨大意等,而是针对材料本身个性化的设问,比如8. What is lying on the railway tracks?12. Why is Lucy in low spirits? 等。
实生活中不是能常见的情况,父母策划锻炼还是应对紧急情况的能力,这种情况很少见,感觉这个材料想要找些戏剧性,但是明显这个戏剧性,貌似贴近生活又有点儿远。
这是需要我们在新一轮找稿过程中需要权衡的。
第二:整个听力选材情景性强,对话逻辑性严密,很能抓住耳朵。
话题是日常生活场景,可内容不落俗套,新
等。
设问方式很常规。
难度适中。
没有答案太偏或思维转折太大的试题。
Section B 部分,语音留言的形式,语言很口语化,句子短,通俗易懂。
篇幅不长,但信息量很足。
出题点都是拐点处词汇或者信息中心词。
5个空,分别以5句话的形式考查了1个动词,3个名词,1个名词短语。
中心主要偏向名词性词汇的考查。
因为动词的考
第一:话题以日常生活居多,贴近生活,且在具体对话中做了些曲折的处理,不会使老套话题出现老套对话。
第二:设题点方面: 隐性题(5个,占33%):4,5,7,10,15 显性题(10个,占67%):1,2,3,6,8,9,11,12,13,14 整篇。
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2014年高考英语短文写作分析【真题呈现】请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意:①无须写标题;②除诗歌外,文体不限;③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例;④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称;⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总次数。
【审题谋篇】提示语意为:小事情有大的影响,我们所做的小事情能使我们成为这个社会中有责任感的一员。
提示语的落脚点在第二句话,因此我们要把小事情和社会责任感这两个点有机结合起来。
一个人的社会责任也许并不起眼,一件事情上体现的社会责任也许并不惊天动地。
但是,无数人担负共同的社会责任,无数小事情上汇集的社会责任举动,就能形成推动社会进步的巨大力量。
在日常生活中,我们会遇到很多小事情,比如在灾难面前伸出援助之手,参加志愿者活动,节约水电,保护环境等,都能体现出我们的责任意识。
因此,从我做起,从小事做起,尽到自己的社会责任是这篇文章的立意所在。
对于这种话题作文,我们依然采取引题、记叙、总结的三段式。
把握了立意后,就可以谋篇布局了。
第一段提出话题;第二段例举自己生活中遇到的一件体现自己社会责任感的小事;第三段写这个经历给自己的体会和启示,再次点明主题,首尾呼应。
习作一As is known to us all, small things can make a big difference. In our daily life, even if the things we do are very small, we still can make us a responsible member of the society.For example, one weekend, our teachers took us to a park where we were about to plant trees. With the help of our teachers, everyone at least planted one tree. Some enthusiastic students planted more. Every one of us was really happy to do something for our society. In the meanwhile, we were confident that there would be a forest in the park many years later. Last week, I went to the park. Those trees we planted ten years ago have been taller than I. What a exciting thing! We do make us a responsible member of the society.Although we just did a small thing, but it did make a big difference. Don’t hesitate to do small thing just because they are small. Do it, and you will see the big change you make. Let us be a responsible member of the society.点评这是一篇中档习作。
其优点是:1.内容切题,语言表达清楚流畅。
2.运用了一些好的短语。
如be about to, with the help of, in the meanwhile, hesitate to do sth.3.运用了一些高级句式。
如非限制性定语从句As is known to all,…;让步状语从句even if the things we do are very small,…;定语从句…a park where we were about to plant trees;感叹句What an excitingthing;祈使句+and+一般将来时Do it and you will see the big change you make.不足之处是:1. 冠词的错误。
a exciting thing应该为an exciting thing.2. 有个别严重的结构性错误。
如Although we just did a small thing, but it did make a big difference. Although是从属连词引导从句,后面应该是主句,but是并列连词连接两个并列的简单句,因此but 要去掉。
3. 语句表达错误。
如Let us be a responsible member of the society. 这里应该包括听话人,因此应该说Let’s be a responsible member of the society. 这是一种表示建议的句型,如Let’s go home. 我们回家吧!Let sb do sth是表示请求对方允许去做某事,如Let me in, ok?请让我进去,好吗?习作二As a tiny spot in the enormous world, there is no denying that something happening is out of control. Nevertheless, life is a stage established for everyone, where the small things we do can make us shine, becoming a responsible member of the city. Walking down my memory lane, I can recall one thing lingering in my mind. One day, I was walking on my way to school when I heard a cry. It occurred to me that something terrible must have happened. Running to the spot of the accident, I found an old man left alone. Depressedand frustrated, he was longing for help. Much to my surprise, there was no one he could turn to! Without hesitation, I came up to him,helping him stand up. The old man rewarded me with a warm smile,which made me aware of the responsibility of a social member.From my perspective,it can’t be emphasized too much that we’re supposed to do kind things as opposed to ignoring them. However small the tings are, only when we attach significance to these can we make a big difference and embrace the vast sky.点评:这是一篇满分作文。
本文有以下优点:1. 内容切题,记叙具体,中心突出,语言表达流畅自然。
2. 运用了大量高级词汇和短语。
如enormous, nevertheless,establish, lane, recall, linger, spot, depressed, frustrated,embrace, vast, out of control, be left alone, long for, much to my surprise, turn to, without hesitation, reward me with a warm smile, be aware of, from my perspective, be supposed to,as opposed to, attach importance to.3. 运用了多样化的高级句型。
Nevertheless, life is a stage established for everyone, where the small things we do can make us shine, becoming a responsible member of the city.(非限制性定语从句和现在分词作结果状语)Walking down my memory lane, I can recall one thing lingering in my mind.(现在分词作时间状语和后置定语)One day, I was walking on my way to school when I heard a cry.(when作并列连词表示“这时”,相当于and at that time.)It occurred to me that something terrible must have happened.(主语从句和情态动词表示推测的用法)Depressed and frustrated,…(形容词作状语)…,it can’t be emphasized too much that…(主语从句以及否定词not, never和too连用表示肯定的意思)However small the tings are, only when we attach significance to these can we make a big difference and embrace the vast sky. (让步状语从句和倒装句)【拓展语料】相关词汇:make a contribution to 为……做贡献sense of responsibility 责任感regardless of 不管,不顾be devoted to 致力于set about doing sth 着手做某事pave the way to... 为……铺平道路be sufficient/adequate to do sth 足以……dawn on sb 使某人明白assist sb to do sth/in doing sth/with sth 帮助某人做某事bend one’s efforts to do sth/make every endeavor to do sth 努力做某事burden the responsibility of the society 肩负社会的责任attach importance/significance to 认为……重要take action 采取行动be determined to do sth 决心做某事inspire sb to do sth 鼓舞某人做某事相关语句:1. A small thing is to life what a drop is to ocean.2. When it comes to the meaning of small things, I assume that there is no other evidence more persuasive than my own experience.3. Now that the little efforts we pay can make such a big difference,why don’t we all set about doing it?4. It is universally acknowledged that small things make a difference, which helps us become a responsible member of the society.5. As far as I am concerned, we should start from small things,which I believe will pave the way to our future development.6. When it comes to the effect of the small things to me, an example which is sufficient to illustrate the point above dawns on me.7. Never will I forget the period when I went to the nursery to help those who were in need.8. Having cleaned up the room, I chatted with people to assist them to get rid of loneliness.9. No sooner had I noticed the waste than I threw it into the box.10. Having learned from the volunteer experience, I was aware of the fact that small things can accelerate the speed of becominga responsible member of society.11. Here comes my conclusion that tiny things make a difference and only when we bend our efforts to tiny things will we burden the responsibility of the society,which can’t be attached more significance to.12. It’s high time that we should start from small things.13. As is emphasized in the sentence, the small things we do can make a great difference.14. Here is my own experience from which the importance of small things can be illustrated.15. Simple as the story is, it shows the fact that a small thing can make a big difference too.16. It was our comfort and encouragement as well as their own strength that helped them live a happier life.17. It wasn’t long before our ac tion was reported by a local newspaper and we were praised by the society.18. Deeply rooted in my mind is the experience that is related to my voluntary work.19. Hearing his words, I felt very guilty and was determined to do every small thing carefully.20. We were about to cross the road when Tom noticed a piece of waste paper lying on the road.希望以上资料对你有所帮助,附励志名言3条:1、有志者自有千计万计,无志者只感千难万难。