高考英语书面表达句子写作

八.连接成分起着承上启下的作用，是语意过度的桥梁。有效的使 用连接词，文章更自然。
表示并列what’s more , besides, moreover, furthermore
表示转折 on the contrary, in spite of, regardless of, despite, while
表示因果thus, therefore, as a result, consequently, so that 表示条件unless. on condition that ,as long as ,if 表示时间all of a sudden, later, eventually, meanwhile,finally 表示换种方式in other words, that is to say, namely
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Hale Waihona Puke Dear friends, May I have your attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here. Nowadays, some of us students have formed some bad habits on campus. For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime or leave water running after washing. Some leave too much food on the table after eating in the canteen. Besides, waste paper and books can be seen everywhere. So it is high time that we had to deal with the problems. As is known to all, these bad habits will have had influence on our character and behavior. What’s worse, they can not only increase our cost at school and add financial burden to our parents, but also waste the limited resources. If we reduce the waste, we will change the present situation. …… That’s all. Thank you!
三. 要注意使用长短不同，结构不同的句子，尽量使 句型多样化，避免单调。 1.There is a new classroom building on one side of the road. There used to be a playground on the other side before .But there is a library now. There are all kinds of books, newspapers, and magazines in the library .There is a new playground in front of the school. There are a lot of trees in and around the school.
谈谈这次学测写作
一.要适当的多使用些词组，习语来替代一些单词， 以增加文采。 如： 1. She doesn’t like sports. She cares nothing for sports. 2. A new railway is being built in my hometown.
A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
七. 在整篇文章含有众多的主谓宾的句子结构时，可适 当的打破些常规，用一些倒装句，感叹句，或强调句， 为文章增添一点新意。 1.My parents praised the dog warmly . It saved my little sister bravely. My parents praised the dog warmly . It was our brave dog that had saved my little sister. 2.The head of the farm showed us around . We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. The head of the farm showed us around . How glad We were to see the crops and vegetables growing very well!
表示举列or instance ,for example, such as ,like, take example
表示事实in fact , as a matter of fact, actually
for an
表示总结in conclusion, in a word, all in all, on the whole
As far as I am concerned, I think only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved. On the one hand, it is necessary for schools to educate every student not to waste anything in any form and on the other hand every one of us should start with ourselves to fight against waste. It is not until all of us are involved in the activity that we can bring the situation under control.
五.改变句子开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头， 接着是谓语，宾语，最后在句末加个状语，我们 可以把一些成分如状语提前，使整个句子读起来 跌宕起伏。 1.The young man pointed to a policeman not far away from and said , “He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch another offender. Pointing to a policeman not far away , the young man explained: “He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch another offender.
四.多使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句，可使书面 表达行文更加丰富多彩 。 1. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much.
The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.
2. I studied Chinese, maths, physics , chemistry, English and computer at school. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, physics , chemistry, English and computer.
六.通过批合并句子，将意义相关的几个句子用一 定的连接方式连接起来，或通过紧缩，去掉一些 多余的成分，避免冗长累赘。 1.We had a short rest . Then we began to play happily . We danced and sang. Some told stories . Some played chess. After a short rest . We had great fun dancing and singing, telling jokes and playing chess. 2.My brother was riding a bike and I sat on the seat behind him. My brother was riding a bike with me sitting on the seat behind him.
First of all Firstly, To begin with,
In addition, Besides, Moreover, What’s more
In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not least, the world’s limited natural resources, such as water and electricity , will be used up soon. Finally, What’s worse,
二. 尽量避免过多的重复的使用某一些单词，必要时选用 些同义词或词组来代替。
1.I like reading while my brother like watching Tv I like reading while my brother enjoys watching Tv 2.We have built a new classroom building besides the old one and we have also built a library where the old one used to be . We have built a new classroom building besides the old one and we have also set up a library where the old one used to be