考研英语21--写作大作.ppt

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3短文写作思路形成
3.1 有图作文思路形成 三段安排 等边六边形结构——三段论
首段 3-4句
中间段5-6句
尾段 3-4句
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3.1 图画描述段 三至四句(50-55词)：第一句对画面简单概括且配 有同位成分；第二三句描述画面内容（两幅图每 幅图一句，一幅图找两个因素各一句）；第四句 将图画下方中文翻译为英语（如果有）
原因扩展方式
(3) 借用常识 As is known to everyone, …. It is of everyone’s commonsense that …. (4) 引用权威 As an influential person puts it, “…”. …(原因), which echoes a famous person’s remark, “…”. (5) 结果推导 Hence, the results caused by it may be concluded as follows.
by their grown-up children in some of the families in China.
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2.2 写作功能句型 2.2.1 描述图画
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（3）强调原则 • 写作公式 It is … that makes it adj. to do sth.. • 2002 It is love that makes it possible to overcome all difficulties. • 2008 It is teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want to.
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2.2 写作功能句型 2.2.1 描述图画 （5）广泛化原则2 • 写作公式 • 写作公式 • Of all the changes that have taken place in … during …, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline/sharp increase in …. • Of all the …，….is the most / the best. 2009 • Of all the changes that have taken place in the communication means during the past half a century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline in face-to-face intercourse.
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3.2 寓意说明段+原因分析段 （1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承 上启下)；第二句说明原因如下；第三四句一 个原因及扩展；第五六句一个原因及扩展。 具体化——切忌以理说理。 （2）常见原因——法律法规不完善、教育体制 不健全、个人意识较薄弱(选一，原创一)
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常见原因
• The lack of serious punishment according to the laws and regulations is the core reason of …, which provides the chances for people to do the misdeeds/wrongdoings. • People’s awareness is not that strong in …, which is decisive to the phenomenon. • The distorted/insufficient/inadequate education may lead to the pervasiveness of …
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2.2 写作功能句型 2.2.2 阐述寓意 （1）动词名词化原则2 • 写作公式 • 公式 It is beyond imagination that … • 2003 We can’t imagine a society full of adults having the ability like seven-year-old children. It is beyond imagination that a society is full of adults ….
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2.2 写作功能句型 2.2.1 描述图画 （1）个体群体化原则2
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• 写作公式 Those who … do sth. Those who tried every means to avoid their duty of looking after their elders should bear in mind that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth and growth.
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3短文写作思路形成
3.2 寓意说明段+原因分析段 （1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承上 启下)；第二句说明原因如下；第三四句一个原因 及扩展；第五六句一个原因及扩展。 具体化——切忌以理说理。 （2）常见原因——法律法规不完善、教育体制不健 全、个人意识较薄弱(选一，原创一) （3）扩展方式——举例论证、数据论证、借用常识、 引用权威、结果推导
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2.2 写作功能句型 2.2.1 描述图画
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（2）双重否定原则 • 写作公式 This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of+n./that+从句… • 2005
This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated
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1 写作基本语法
2.1 替换词突破 2.1.1 常用词 (1)to the best of my knowledge, I hold … (2)important: imperative It is imperative that … (should) … (建议) (3) show: unfold It is unfolded that … (寓意) 2.1.2 例举 …, such as …
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• 2010 • Of all the changes that have taken place in international culture during the past half a century, perhaps the most farreaching has been the sharp increase in culture blending.
（2）广泛化原则
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• 2008 • Of all the changes that have taken place in English-language newspapers during the past quarter-century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline in the scope and seriousness of their arts coverage.
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原因扩展方式
（1）举例论证 For example, for instance, take … for example, … provides an illustration. （2）数据论证 As is shown in the statistics of a recent survey launched by a non-profit institution, the increase/decline of … is so prominent that the results caused by it may be concluded as follows. The national statistics on … indicate …
3短文写作思路形成
This is an interesting and thoughtprovoking picture which depicts/describes … The picture shocks us beyond description in that it depicts/describes…
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2.2 写作功能句型 2.2.1 描述图画 （1）个体群体化原则1 两幅图片 • Some, like +图中人物 in the picture, do sth, while others, like +图中人物 in the drawing, do sth. 一幅图片
2常见原因法律法规不完善教育体制不健全个人意识较薄弱选一原创一3扩展方式举例论证数据论证借用常识引用权威结果推导2013830writing193短文写作思路形成1举例论证forexampleforinstancetake
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（1）被动客观表达原则,例： As is seen from the picture, As is depicted in the picture It is vividly depicted in the picture that… It is universally acknowledged that … It is believed that … （2）无缩写原则 I’d like to—I would like to can’t—cannot isn’t—is not
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2.2 写作功能句型 2.2.1 描述图画 （4）广泛化原则1 • 写作公式 It has been universally acknowledged that … that anyone who wants to … should possess. 众所周知，…….是想要做……的人必须具备的。 • 2008 It has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.
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2.2 写作功能句型 The author implies that…. 2.2.2 阐述寓意 （1）动词名词化原则1 • 写作公式 The real implication/meaning/indication of the author/picture(s) is that … • 2003 The real implication of the author is that everyone has to meet difficulties in their life experience, so we have to make adequate preparations for them.
3.2寓意说明+原因分析段
• 原因分析常用过渡句： The following reasons may be responsible for the meaning deduced above. There are two main reasons accounting for the symbolic meaning. The main reason for the phenomenon is that…. Another major reason is that… It is mainly because ….It is partly decided by the fact that…