英语作文的评分标准

On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a man’s bike.
我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声 喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了.
pick up shout to ride away
I picked up the case and shouted to the man, but he didn’t hear me and rode away.
I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up with the man.
May 3rd、2011，Friday
Fine
This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw …
把两个或多个句子合并为简单句
1、把其中一句改为介词短语
I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly.
After picking up the case, I shouted to the man loudly.
2、把其中一句改为分词短语 I gave the case back to the man.
Practice
假设下面六幅图画描述的是你在4月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请 你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。
Key words and phrases.
• go to school • on the way • find • wallet • pick up • owner • phone book • bus stop • give back • refuse
看图作文难度稍大，在写作时它要根据图画呈 现的内容与所给的中英文提示相结合来表达其 内在涵义，描述图画内容，使短文达意、正确、 连贯。
看图作文可采用以下几个步骤： 1、理解图意，确立情景 2、注意所给的中英文提示 3、明确时态，理顺思路 4、连词成句，然后再连句成文 5、反复审核，修改错误
今天下午我去看电影. go to a movie go to the cinema see a film
I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a man’s bike.
适当选择固定句型
But he didn’t hear me and rode away. But he rode too fast to hear me. I wanted to catch up with him ,so I stopped a taxi quickly.
于是,我拦了一辆出租 车去追赶失主.
stop a taxi catch up with
I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.
我终于追上了失主,并把 箱子还给他.
give back / rht up with him at last and gave the case back to him.
英语作文的评分标准
英语作文的评分标准
四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地 表达思想。可得0-2分 三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层 次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处 语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分 二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较 清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写 错误；字数符合要求。 可得6-8分 一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分， 层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有 1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得9-10分
this afternoon
It’s a fine day today. I went to a movie happily this afternoon.
在路上,我看到一个手提箱 从一辆自行车上掉了下来.
on the way fall down from / fall off see / find + 复合宾语
…The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .
It was such an interesting movie that I couldn’t wait to enjoy it.
Although I missed the movie, I was very happy to help others.
I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .
The man took out some money to thank me.
Getting the case back from me, the man took out some money to thank me.
把两个或多个句子合并成复合句
I went to see a film this afternoon. One the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a man’s bike.
失主非常的感动,他拿出 一些钱来感谢我,但被我 拒绝了.
The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.
May 3rd,Friday
Fine
This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a man's bike. I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop. But he didn't hear me and rode away.