高三英语一轮复习----Continuation Writing教学课件共30张PPT

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高一英语读后续写第二讲Continuationwriting课件

高一英语读后续写第二讲Continuationwriting课件
P2:
衔接句3: 情节发展(1)(2)(3)(4) 故事结尾句4: 主题升华句5:
When Mike was a seven-year-old kid, his parents usually didn’t give him money because he liked to buy junk food. They knew such food would be harmful to kids’ bodies.
Predicting(预测发展)
第一段(逆向思维):结合原文,由第一段首句和第 二段首句推出故事情节(动作、情感、对话等细节)
第二段 :结合上文,根据第二段首句展开内容,列出要 点(动作、情感、对话等细节),
最后想ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้一个升华句:体现故事圆满结局的句子或故事 给我们启示的句子

原文阅读+信息梳理

读懂情节+体会语言+理清线索
• 2. 构思(3-5mins):

潜心构思+情节预设+明确方向
• 关注“两线”---情节线&情感线(负→正)

关注“四点”---四处衔接
• 3.行文(10-15mins):

初稿勾勒+润色提升+工整誊写
一篇好的续写=内容构思+语言表达
内容构思不准确是分数无法提高的重要原因之一 存在问题: 读中:缺少阅读发现,阅读时不知道如何挖掘原 文中的材料为续写所用 写中:缺少衔接与连贯,续写与原文疏离。 根源:原文读不懂,读不透,从而抓不住本质。
Para 2: Mike realized he should admit what he had done. So he told his mom the truth. After hearing it, his mom didn’t seem angry. Instead, she patiently explained to Mike why his behavior was wrong. She told him,”You can ask for it if you really want to eat junk food. But you shouldn’t steal money. You should be honest.” That day, Mike learned a big lesson and understand the importance of being honest.

ContinuationWriting读后续写课件高考英语作文复习专项

ContinuationWriting读后续写课件高考英语作文复习专项
2.形容词做状语: 感到...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2 adj.1+adj.2, sb.did, doing...
3.让步状语(倒装句型): 尽管某人(感到)...,某人仍做某事
情绪形容词+ as/though sb.+ be 动词, sb. ( still ) did sth. .
Activity 2: Make a draft.
Polish the story.
Exchange and polish your writing to make the story vivid and detailed.
Tips: •Correct the spelling and grammar mistakes; •Replace the common expressions with specific words or advanced sentence structures; •Add some cohesive words to make the story coherent.
用无灵主语句扩写: 当我听到这个好消息的那一刻,一种强烈的喜悦感抓住了我。
A stro情ng se绪nse名of 词delight took动h词old of msbe when I heard the good news.
Skill 1.无灵主语:“情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when sb do sth 当某人做某事时,一股...情绪涌上心头
A wave of delight seized me. (加并列): “开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我”
Delight and excitement seized me.
Skill 1.无灵主语:“情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when sb do sth

《Continuationwriting读后续写》公开课优秀课件(精品)

《Continuationwriting读后续写》公开课优秀课件(精品)
兴趣。
课程评价
课程设计合理,内容丰富,涵 盖了读后续写的各个方面,有 助于学生全面掌握写作技巧。
教师授课认真,专业水平高, 能够很好地引导学生思考和解 决问题。
课程注重实践,让学生通过大 量的练习来提高写作能力,取 得了很好的教学效果。
课程改进
针对不同水平的学生,可以设计更加 个性化的教学内容,以满足不同学生 的需求。
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教学内容
BIG DATA EMPOWERS TO CREATE A NEW
ERA
读后续写的定义
总结词:明确概念
详细描述:读后续写是一种写作技巧,要求学生在阅读一篇文章或故事后,根据 文章的内容和情节,继续创作出后续的情节或结局。这种写作方式旨在培养学生 的创造性和逻辑思维能力。
读后续写的技巧
BIG DATA EMPOWERS TO CREATE A NEW ERA
《continuationwriting读后 续写》公开课优秀课件(精品)
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• 课程介绍 • 教学方法 • 教学内容 • 课程效果 • 课程总结
目录
CONTENTS
01
课程介绍
BIG DATA EMPOWERS TO CREATE A NEW
需求。
增加实践机会
为学生提供更多的实践机会,让 他们在实际操作中提高读后续写
的技能。
加强个性化指导
针对不同学生的需求,提供更加 个性化的指导,帮助他们更好地
掌握读后续写的技巧。
THANKS
感谢观看
总结词
掌握关键技巧
详细描述
在读后续写过程中,学生需要掌握一些关键技巧。首先,学生需要理解原文的主题和情节,以便更好地延续故事 的发展。其次,学生需要发挥想象力,创作出与原文情节相符合的后续情节。此外,学生还需要注意语言的表达 和风格的统一。

《Continuationwriting读后续写》公开课优秀课件(精品)

《Continuationwriting读后续写》公开课优秀课件(精品)

分析能力
通过阅读和分析文章,学生可以 学习如何分析问题、理清思路和
组织观点。
创新思维
学生在续写过程中需要发挥想象 力,提出新的观点和解决方案,
从而培养创新思维能力。
逻辑思维
学生在分析和续写文章时需要遵 循逻辑规则,培养逻辑思维能力

增强沟通能力
书面表达能力
通过写作练习,学生可以提高自己的书面表达能 力,更好地与他人沟通。
详细描述
教师布置写作任务,要求学生进行读后续写实践,及时给予 指导和反馈,帮助学生提高实际操作能力。
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课程亮点
丰富的课程内容
课程内容涵盖了读后续写的各个 方面,包括写作技巧、阅读理解 、创意构思等,旨在全面提高学
生的写作能力。
课程提供了丰富的素材和案例, 帮助学生更好地理解和掌握读后 续写的技巧,同时激发他们的创
作灵感。
课程内容设计注重层次性和渐进 性,适合不同水平的学生,能够
满足不同学生的个性化需求。
实用的教学方法
采用“任务驱动”教学法,通过设置具体任务,引导学生主动探索和实践,提高他 们的学习积极性和主动性。
课程中运用多媒体和网络教学资源,利用在线平台进行互动教学,增强学生的学习 体验和参与度。
教师根据学生的实际情况和需求,灵活运用多种教学方法,如小组讨论、角色扮演 、案例分析等,以培养学生的协作能力和创新思维。
交流能力
学生在课堂上与其他同学讨论和分享自己的观点 ,可以提高口头表达和交流能力。
跨文化交流能力
学生可以通过阅读不同文化背景的文章,了解不 同文化之间的差异,提高跨文化交流能力。Βιβλιοθήκη 5学生反馈对课程的评价
课程设计合理
课件内容丰富,结构清 晰,符合学生的认知规

高考英语作文复习专项:Continuation+writing动词链的构造课件

高考英语作文复习专项:Continuation+writing动词链的构造课件

looking old and wise. Aram greeted her and stuck out his hand. Mrs Rossi looked at it for a second before turning around and waving him inside. "I'm ready to learn everything," Aram said.
Aram still couldn't believe his luck. All his friends were working boring summer jobs-waiting tables and babysitting. And here he was, about to start as an actual baker's assistant, doing what he loved. It was all thanks to his Aunt Rita. She knew Mrs Rossi and had arranged everything. It was the perfect experience for his future career. Rossi's Bakery, he was sure, would one day be known as the place where he got his start.
Aram still couldn't believe his luck. All his friends were working boring summer jobs-waiting tables and babysitting. And here he was about to start as an actual baker's assistant, doing what he loved, It was all thanks to his Aunt Rita. She knew Mrs Rossi and had arranged everything. It was the perfect experience for his future career. Rossi's Bakery, he was sure, would one day be known as the place where he got his start. Ah, here he was--the bakery. A faded wooden sign over the door read“"Rossi's Bakery." Aram straightened his shoulders and entered. Mrs Rossi was sitting at the counter,

高三英语一轮复习课件:读后续写之人物情绪描写

高三英语一轮复习课件:读后续写之人物情绪描写

angry愤怒的,生气的 annoyed恼怒的,烦恼的

fearful/ horrified/ terrified/ frightened/ panic/ scared 害怕的,惊恐的,恐惧的

surprised/ astonished/ shocked/ amazed 惊讶的/震惊的/惊奇的
⑨皆大欢喜 (矛盾得到解决)
⑤承上启下 (这一句要与下一段的开头句紧密衔接)
⑩主旨升华 (首尾呼应)It finally dawnedon me that +谚语(Life is not all roses.)
Ⅰ、Nouns about emotion
喜Байду номын сангаас




happiness/ joy/ delight 幸福/快乐/喜悦 pleasure/ contentment/ satisfaction快乐,满足excitement激动,兴奋 relief宽慰,轻松




Ⅰ、Nouns about emotion
puzzlement困惑不解confusion
worry/nervousness/anxiety 不安/焦虑
shame 羞愧, 羞耻 embarrassment尴尬,难堪
guilt/regret/remorse[rɪˈmɔːs] 愧疚,悔恨

gratitude/appreciation 感激 admiration 钦佩/赞赏
Writing
Continuation writing——Emotion读后续写之人物情绪描写
Teaching AimsIn today's lesson, you will1. master some nouns and ajectives related to emotion;2. make sentences with emotion;3. use emotion in different context or writing.

读后续写复习课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写复习课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写的写作法则
七三四 法则
按“所见、所闻、所 说、所思、所感、所 做”构想5-8个合理细 节。
如何读? 故事线 情感线
The seller’s words__ ashamed
_r_em__i_n_d_e_d_m__e_w__h_a_t_m__y_ 羞愧的
_m_o_m___h_a_d_d_o_n_e__f_o_r_m__e._
根据人物“所见、所闻、所说、 所思、所感、所做”构想5-8个 合理细节
Tom felt so exhausted that he lay in Mother’s arms , sleeping soundly.
➢ So exhausted did Tom feel that he lay in Mother’s arms , sleeping soundly.
4. 非谓语
Hungry and exhausted, Tom threw himself into Mother’s arms and fell into a deep sleep in a few seconds .
练习:In读O要rc素he、st情ra(节管、弦情乐感队) class we had on Fridays something called Chair Challenge. You could challenge the next higher-up chair. The teacher selected a passage from the music and the person you were challenging would play it first — then you would play it. The teacher would determine which of you w具o体n.流程 How? If you won, you switched places with the loser and moved up one chair. And at the end of December, whoever was first-chair violin, first-chair viola and first-chair cello(大提琴) would play the three separate solos(独奏) in the big New Year Concert.

高中英语_ContinuationWriting教学课件设计

高中英语_ContinuationWriting教学课件设计

Marie The French soldier Two German soldiers
Cottage Forest Plane
Keep her promise
“I won’t Show the To her
fail”
light
great joy
Summary
How to read and write a story?
story in a logical way
Marie
happy/proud/ nervous/worried....
Use the first sentences of the next two paragraphs to predict the ending of the
story in a logical way
Polish your continuation writing and share with your classmates.
1.梳理文章的篇章结构;获取故事发生的背景信息; 2.整合归纳主人公第一次任务的完成情况及其感受,
并对主人公做出合理的评价; 3.概括主人公执行第二次任务过程中所遇到的困难
并描述其内心感受,推断第二次任务的完成情况; 4.通过教师的问题引领、个人思考Part 2
01 What was the task?
02 03
Part 3
01 Who was the man? What was the task this time? 02 What was the problem?
03
04
Use the first sentences of the next two paragraphs to predict the ending of the

读后续写Continuation+writing+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写Continuation+writing+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
An Unforgivable Mistake A few years ago,the company I work for sent my wife and me to live in New York for a year. I've always loved jogging, so I was really happy when I found the apartment(they had rented for us)was next to Central Park. This meant that every morning I could go for a run before I went to work. Because a lot of people had told me to be careful of robbers in the park, I didn't usually take anything with me. How could they rob me if I didn't have anything? But one morning my wife asked me to buy some bread on the way home, so I put a $ 10 bill in my back pocket. It was a beautiful morning and the park was quiet with very few people walking or jogging around. While I was running, another jogger bumped(撞) into me. He apologized and continued running. For a while, I didn't think too much of it. However, when I noticed the wide path where I was running, I thought it was kind of strange. The warning of muggers in the park occurred to me. He could have been a mugger! I suddenly became alarmed, so I checked my pocket. The money was missing! I immediately started to run after the jogger. I finally caught up with him and grabbed him firmly by the arm. I started shouting and demanding that he give me the $ 10 bill. I'm not usually a hot-headed person, but I really lost my temper at that moment. I couldn't believe the robbery was actually happening to me. Filled with anger, I shook my fist at him. This seemed to frighten him. He quickly put his hand in his pocket and gave me the money. Then he ran away as fast as he could. I bought the bread and went home. As soon as I got home, I couldn't wait to tell my wife the story."You won't believe what happened to me," I started with pride. She immediately interrupted (插 话),"I know, you left the money for the bread on the kitchen table."

Skillsincontinuationwriting课件高三英语一轮复习

Skillsincontinuationwriting课件高三英语一轮复习

• “我去救公主” • 我要带上最好的剑
• 翻过最高的山
• 穿过最深的树林
• 把公主带回来
我带上最好的剑 翻过最高的山 闯入最深的森林 把公主带回 I climbed over the highest mountain, found my way into the deep forest and brought back the princess.
冲上去-- dash forward 抱住她-- hug/ gather her into her
arms
流下眼泪-- burst into tears
She dashed forward, gathered Betty into her arms and burst into tears.
上车?
丰富准确的表达
Steps for continuing your story
Step 1 Step 2
研读文本,寻找冲突 确定主题,围绕核心
Step 3 揣测首句,预测情节
Step 4 关注伏笔,高度融合
Step 5 解决冲突,升华主题
1. 眼前一亮的书写卷面 2. 情节合理,衔接过渡自然, 3. 内容可读性强,创造性、逻辑性、丰富性、合理性 4. 生动的动作和贴切的心理描写+环境衬托+少许对话
动作链:使用一连串动作让画面动起来
动作描写 –动作链
例1: ①Fortunately, he thre题w材me a题b材ranch and
pulled me out.
Action1
Action2
②He lay on his stomach, pushed the
branch before him and wound his way Action3

2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写解题技巧课件

2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写解题技巧课件

made by a pair of sneakers ,
Not giving them much thought
she walked on.
Step 1: Reading
By 11 a.m.Bales was getting cold. She decided to return to her car. On her way down, she again spotted the sneaker tracks, which suddenly made a hard left-hand turn off the trail. Now she felt genuinely alarmed . She was sure the hiker lost his way in the low visibility. If Bales continued to follow the tracks, she'd add risk and time to her return. But she couldn't let this go. She turned to the left and called out, “Hello!" Nothing. Bales followed the tracks, rounded a slight comer and saw a man sitting motionless. He wore tennis sneakers, shorts, a light jacket and fingerless gloves. His skin was pale and he had a glazed (呆滞的)look on his face. uOh, hello? Bales approached and said, "What's your name?” The man didn't react. Obviously, nothing was connecting for him and he was in really big trouble.

2020届高三英语一轮复习---continuation writing (读后续写)教学课件

2020届高三英语一轮复习---continuation writing (读后续写)教学课件

2.Arrange them reasonably.
1.Know the plot of the passage. 2.Find out clues like a detective
Thank you!
from the old man
“You are excellent. You will find a dream job soon.”
Step6StPerpe7dIinctfeprotshseibplleopt lots
Paragraph2: • John got extremely excited, hurrying home to express his thanks to the
Tip 1: we can get the main idea with the help of 5w quesions
The main idea is that ______________
Step2 Analyze characters
characters
appearance
behavior /action
Step3 Use the given sentences
Paragraph1:
• From then on, the old man lived with John in
John’s small house. ____________
1. Encouragement
Paragraph2:
from the old man 2. Got a job
old man’s encouragement_________w_a__ll_e_t___________
Discuss in four and draft(起草) your story.

Continuation+writing动作链和情感描写+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

Continuation+writing动作链和情感描写+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
Example 2 她颤抖着手,缓缓打开了包裹。
Her hands was trembling.
She opened the parcel slowly.
合并为一句
Her hands trembling, she opened the parcel.
Strategy 2: 非谓语结构④主1+非谓语,主语2+谓语 Practice
夜幕降临,他们支起帐篷.
The night falling, they put
up a tent.
夜幕降临,他们支起帐篷,唱歌
聊天,脸CV上洋溢着幸福。
The night falling, they put up a tent, singing
环境描写
心理描写
神态描写
and chatting ,with happiness on theCiVr face.
Strategy2: 非谓语结构 ③ Done sth. , 主+谓
Example 孩子感动哭了。
孩子被感动 + 孩子哭了
The child was moved by the story.
The child began to weep.
_M_o_v_e_d__by the story, the child began to weep.
当一个句子中出现两个动作,而前后两个动作逻辑主 语不一致时,便可使用独立主格(主要动作为谓语动 词,次要动作为非谓语动词)。独立主格属于高级语 法句,在书面语中可以使表达精准、简洁,是老外在 书面表达中最常用的一种句型,非常之地道。
Her hands trembling, she opened the parcel. 她颤抖着手,缓缓打开了包裹。

continuation writing 读后续写课件 2022届高三英语复习

continuation writing 读后续写课件 2022届高三英语复习

got all the words rightproud
beginning
Ending
reading--------------------------continuation
prediction(The Ending )
●After the competition,I was in low spirits. Mrs.casazza sensed that and told me there would be a spelling bee every Thursday.
Extension:紧张心理描写
One’s forehead sweats heavily额头冒汗 One’s face blushes/flushes deeply 涨红了脸 swallow hard 使劲咽了下口水 blink one's eyes quickly 快速眨眼 One's mind goes blank 大脑空白 One's heart jumps to the mouth 心跳到了嗓子眼 One's pulse races脉搏加快 have butterflies in one's stomach (胃里都是蝴蝶)紧张啊
me, "You'll have to sit down." Then I returned to my desk.
Although I was relieved that I was no longer in the spotlight, I
felt like crying because I knew how to spell the word. I was
1.This being my first voyage, I felt blood pulsing through my

高中英语高三一轮复习:Continuation Writing(读后续写)课件

高中英语高三一轮复习:Continuation Writing(读后续写)课件
“ What is it?” Santa asked warmly.
kind, friendly, helpful, warmhearted
13
Why did she wish to see Santa ? She was very sick, and she wasn’t expected to make it even through the holidays.
When It was Christmas season
Where Story
Who
At Mayfair Mall in Wisconsin
A little boy, grandmother, Santa Claus
What The little boy asked Santa to see his sister
Sarah
She wished to see Santa.
7
Tip1.
细读原文,探寻素材
8
Step 1 Read for writing materials —细读原文,探寻写作素材
1. What’s the genre of the context?
A. Narration B. Argumentation C. Exposition
Continuation Writing
1
2
By the end of the class, you must be able to ……
Teaching aims
Grasp how to read for writing materials.
Master some tips to construct the plot.
at The Mayfair MMallll in Wisconsin
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Learning Objectives
1.To master the essential steps of composing continuation writing; 2.To be clear about the requirements and the criteria of continuation writing; 3.To know how to evaluate and polish a writing through practice.
Reading for Plots
Climax (the turning point)
Falling Action
Rising Action
(which helps probem solved)
(which makes problem worse)
Conflict (problem) Beginning
Nov.)
when
who
They needed a
A story
my wife, I, the driver
van to send
them to Harlem why
what
and to load supplies.
an experience in New York City to search vans
Writing Steps
Step 1 Read for elements
Step 2 Read for plots
Step 3
Step 4
Infer the Write
development and polish
Reading for Elements
during Thanksgiving
(the 4th Thursday in where New York City
After we made found __th_e_r_e_s_e_e_m__e_d_n_o__v_a_n_s___ d_i_s_a_p_p_o_i_n_te_d_.
a plan
_a_v_a_il_a_b_l_e_; I advised to
_ta_k_e__a_c_h_a_n_c_e__in__t_h_e_s_t_re_e_t_s_.
Q2: How would the drivers react to the couple's behavior?
Q3: How would the couple/the wife feel?
Inferring the development
Raise three questions about the development.
Inferring the development
Raise three questions about the development.
Para. 1 We tried stopping vans as they were driving down the street. Q1: What did the couple do on the street?
(character and setting)
Ending
Reading for Plots
Time
Before we made a plan
Events
My wife and I were _s_tu_c_k_ int
__s_a_d____.
When we
I told her m__y__T_h_a_n_k_s_g_i_v_in_g__r_it_u_a.l She got
Q3: How would the couple feel in the end? Or what would they learn in the end?
Tip 2: By_r_a_i_si_n_g__q_u_e_st_i_o_n_s_o_n__y_o_u_r_o_w__n_, you can create more details of the development of the story.
Para. 2 Eventually a van drove up and the driver said yes. Q1: How would the couple react to the driver's agreement?
Q2: What would they do for the people in need?
made a plan We decided to _g_o__t_o_t_h_e_p_o_o__r __ _e_x_c_i_te_d__.
_H_a_r_l_e_m__a_n_d_b_u__y_f_o_o_d__fo_r__th_e_m__.
We started by getting _a_v_a_n_, but She was
Continuation Writing
学科:英语 年级:高三 版本:外研社新教材
Lead-in
1. Have you ever helped others? 2. Have you ever been helped by others? 3. For both sides, what benefits could you achieve from these experiences?
Para. 2 Eventually a van drove up and the driver said yes.
Event: succeed in getting a van Mood: delighted/excited
Tip 1: The development of the story can be inferred _fr_o_m__t_h_e__g_iv_e_n__in_f_o_r_m__a_ti_o_n_.
Inferring the development
Infer the development from the given sentences.
Para. 1 We tried stopping vans as they were driving down the street.
Event: attempt to get a van---in vain Mood: disappointed/hopeless
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