中考代词--专题复习导学案

--Yes, they are ________（our）.
2.—Whose is this pencil?
—It’s ________（I）.
3.I love ________（they）very much.
4.She is________（I）classmate.
5. Miss Gao teaches ____ English at school. (we)
6. I need a new schoolbag, so ___ mother buys one for ___. (I)
7. This is not my dictionary. This is _____ (she)
8. This book is not ____(he)
9. Look at ____ mouth. (I )
10. They are ____ parents. (he)
11. Your school is newer(更新) than(比) ___ .
(she)
12.____ classroom is bright(明亮).(I )
13. He is ___ father . (Bob)
14. Thank you for helping ___(I )
15.This isn’t ___pen. ___ is over there. (she)
16. ___ school is far away from (远离) ___ home. (he)
17.Parents care about ________ (they)
children's education more than anything else.
18. ---Are Kate and Joan_____(you)good
friends？
---Yes，they are．Please look after_____
(they)．
19.The exchange student from Australia is a
friend of ________(I).
20.She enjoyed ________(she) at the Art
festival held in Beijing yesterday.
21.We must protect plants because they are friends of____（we）．
22.The girl has lost____(she)pen，will you lend her____(you)？
三、单项选择
1.Jane looked carefully at ________ in the mirror before going outside. A．her B．him C．herself D．himself
2.Mr.Wu teaches ________ English.We all like ________.
A．our; him B．us; him
C．us; her D．our; her
3.Bob hurt ________ in the basketball match at school yesterday afternoon. A．myself B．himself C．herself
4.—Is this ________ ruler?
—No.________ is over there.
A.her; Her B．her; Hers
C．hers; Hers D．hers; Her
5.---Do you know who taught_____French？
---Nobody．He learned it by____．
A．his；himself B．him；him
C．him；himself D．his；him
________.
A．the other B．another
C．others D．other
2. —There’re four bedrooms in the house, ______ with its own shower.
—That’s what I want. I’ve got a few kids.
A.either
B. neither
C. each
D. none
3. Old Mr．Black lives happily with his three
dogs．_________ of them are part of his
family．
A．Both B．All C．None D．Neither
4. —Do you need an apple or a pear?
—________，I really don't mind.
A．Both B．None C．Either D．Neither
5. ----There is no salt left．Jim，would you like
to get ________？
----OK，Mum!
A.it B．one C．some D．Any
6.I tried two bookstores for the book I
wanted，but ______ of them had it．
A．none B．either C．neither
7. --When are we going to see the movie
Zoo Topia，this afternoon or tonight？
--____________is OK．I'm free today．
A．Either B．Neither C．Both D．All
8. ----I have two soccer balls，what about you？
----Oh，I don't have____．
A．some B．no C．any D．much
9. The twins look exactly the same．______ of them are in my class．
A．Each B．Both C．Either D．None
10. ----Where would you like to go for your summer holiday，Beijing or Shanghai？----_________. I will go to Sanya in Hainan．
A．Both B．Each C．Neither D．Either
11. ----Which of the two T-shirts would you
like to choose？
----Both．Then I can give one to my brother
and leave________to myself．
A．another B．the other C．other
12. Hurry up, kids! The school bus is
coming.We have________ time left.
A．Few B．a few
C．Little D．a little
13.--Tom likes cooking delicious food.
--_______ ________I.
A.So does
B.Neither do
C.Neither does
D.So do
14.--I am not a teacher.
--_______ ______Tom.
A.Neither is
B. so is
B.So is D. Neither does
15.—Have you finished your homework yet?
—No, I’ll finish it in fifteen ______ minutes.
A.another
B. other
C. more
D. some
16.一Hiking and swimming are good ways to
relax
一_________ are OK, I think, but I like jogging
best.
A Neither B. Both C. All D. None
17.一In some countries, people eat with chopsticks, but in_________ , knives and forks.一You see. People around the world have
different eating habits.
A. others
B. other
C. another
D. all
18. 一Ms. Wang, I'm afraid I can't finish the work
in two days.
一Don't worry. I'll give you________ days.
A. two another
B. two more
C. more two
D. two many
19. 一What about these two coats, madam?
一_________ of them fits me. Could you show me _________ one?
A. Either; other
B. Neither; another
C. Neither; else
D. Either; another
20. There are fifty students in Class One. Twenty of them are boys; __________are girls.
A. the other
B. the others
C. others
D. another
21. WeChat(微信)is widely used.________the
young _________ the old are interested in it.
A. Either; or
B. Neither; nor
C. Not only; but also
22. If you have any spare milk, could you give me__________?
A. a few
B. few
C. a little
D. little
23. _________knowledge and experience are important to finish that task.
I have something to tell you.
我给你说件事。

②由any组成的复合不定代词用于否定句和
问句中。

(There isn’t any bread at home.)
We couldn’t see anything below.
我们看不见山下的任何东西。

(Did you meet any interesting person
last week?)
Did you do anything interesting
yesterday?
你昨天做了任何有趣的事了没？
③当希望得到别人肯定的回答时，问句中用
由some组成的复合不定代词。

(Would you like to drink some tea?)
Would you like something to drink?
你想来点喝的吗？
5.复合不定代词与 not 连用，表示部分否定。

Not everyone likes English.
不是每个人都喜欢英语。

6.在反意疑问句中，当陈述部分的主语是指人的复合不定代词时，附加问句中常用代词they 替代；当陈述部分的主语是指物的复合不定代词时，附加问句中常用代词 it 替代。

Everyone is here, aren't they?
大家都在这儿，对吗？
Everything is OK, isn't it?
一切都好，对吗？
注：Now,I am nobody,but in the future I will be somebody .
现在，我是一个无名小卒。

将来我将成为一
个著名的人。

巩固练习：
一、单项选择
1.I've been so bored for a long time．I hope
to have________to do．
A．exciting anything
B．nothing exciting
C．something interesting
D．good something
2.I'm sorry I know______ about it．It's a secret between them．
A．nothing B.something
C．anything D．everything
3.Helen is new here，so we know _______ about her.
A．nothing B．something
C．anything D．Everything
4.--Sir，________ called you just now．I told him to phone again 20 minutes later．--OK．Thanks，Nancy．
A.someone B．nobody
C．anyone D．everyone
dies and gentlemen，attention please!I have ______ important to tell you．A．nothing B.something
C．everything D．anything
6.----How is Lily in the new school？
---She is doing very well．There is ______to worry about．
A．nothing B．something C．anything
7.----Is there ______in today's newspaper？
----No，I think everything in it is boring．
A．interesting anything
B．somebody interesting
C．interesting something
D．anything interesting
8.There is_________ wrong with Tom's leg，we should send him to hospital at once．A．something B．anything
C．everything D．nothing
9.----Is there_______ else in the classroom？
----It is empty．________ is listening to a speech in the school hall．A．anyone；Anyone B.anyone；Everyone
C．everyone；Anyone D.everyone；Everyone
10.----Who was hurt in the traffic accident？
----__________ ．
A.None B．No one C．Nothing
11.----Would you like _______ to eat
----Yes,please.
A.anything delicious
B.delicious anything
C.something delicious
12.A smile costs________,but gives much, so
always keep smiling.
A.something
B.anything
C.nothing
A. anything
B.something
C. everything
D. nothing
2. —Do you have ______ to say for yourself? —No, I have ______ to say.
A.something;everything
B. nothing; something
C.everything;anything
D. anything; nothing
3. Why not ask ______ to help you?
A. everyone
B.someone
C. anyone
D. none
4. Everything ______ ready. We can start now.
A. are
B. is
C. be
D. were
5. There’s ______ with his eyes. He’s OK.
A. anything wrong
B. wrong something
C. nothing wrong
D. wrong nothing
6. —The story is so amazing! It’s the most interesting story I’ve ever read. —But I’m afraid it won’t be liked by ______.
A.everybody
B.somebody
C. anybody
D. nobody
7. She listened carefully, but heard ______.
A. anyone
B. someone
C. everyone
D. nothing
8. I agree with most of what you said, but I don’t agree with ______.
A. everything
B.anything
C. something
D. nothing
9.—Everyone is here today, ______? —No, Han Mei isn’t here. She’s ill.
A. isn’t it
B. isn’t he
C. are they
D. isn’t everyone
10. Everything goes well, ______?
A. is it
B. isn’t it
C. do they
D. doesn’t it
①It is +adj.(for sb) to do sth
做某事对某人来说怎样。

It’s a little difficult for me to
solve this problem.
②It is +adj.(of sb) to do sth
做某事体现某人怎样的品质。

It’s very kind of you to help me.
③It’s time to do/for
做某事的时间到了
It’s time to do homework.
It’s time for homework.
④It takes sb time to do sth
做某事花费某人多长时间。

It takes me ten minutes to walk home.
(2)做形式宾语
think/find/believe it +adj (for sb) to do sth.
认为做某事对某人来说怎样。

I find it easy for me to cook food.
(3)指代不明身份的人
Someone is knocking at the door.please go and see who it is.有人在敲门。

请去看看是谁？
(4)指代时间，季节，天气，距离等
★It has been＋时间段＋since＋一般过去时：自从……
It has been three years since we last
saw each other.
自从我们上一次见面到现在已经有三年时间了。

(=We haven’t seen each other for three
years.我们已经有三年时间没见面了。

)
It’s raining now.
How far is it from your school to your
home?
one的用法:指代同类而不同一的事物
This Water Park is closed. Let me show you
one near here.
★考点五：疑问代词
Who，whom，whose What，which
作为特殊疑问词的用法见基本句型专题复习
作为从句引导词的用法见专题复习宾语从句
巩固练习：
单项选择
1.The Browns had a party with their neighbors
yesterday. ______ all enjoyed themselves.
A.We
B. You
C. Them
D. They
2. Televisions have made ______ possible for us to watch movies at home.
A. that
B. this
C. it
D. they
3.When we got to the park yesterday, ______ started raining.
A. that
B. it
C. this
4. I can’t find my ticket. I think I have lost ______.
A. it
B. one
C. this
D. them
5.—I can’t find the magazine I bought this
morning.
—Well, Jack is reading ______ over there. Why
not go and see if it is yours?
A.it
B. that
C. one
D. some
6.----I am a little hungry, Mum.
---- There are some apple pies on the table.You may take______.
A.it
B. this
C.one
7. Could you record the football game for me? I
can watch_______later.
A.it
B. one
C.this
8. I find ____very important to study English well.
A. its
B. that
C. this
D. it
9. Lucy finally found _________exciting to have conversations with friends in Chinese.
A. that
B. this
C. it
D. it’s
10. I found _______ difficult to finish all the work in such a short time.
A. that
B. it
C. this
D. both A and B
11.________ is really hard_______ them to climb Mount Huang.
A. This, to.
B. It, for
C. This, for
D. It, to
12. ---Simon, ___________ is my cousin Andy.
---Nice to meet you, Andy.
A. he
B. she
C. that
D. this
13. Are ______ her parents?
A. this
B. these
C. that
D. he
14. The weather in Guangzhou is hotter than _______ in Beijing.
A. that
B. it
C. this
D. one
15. _______ is really hard _______ them to climb Mount Huang.
A. This, to.
B. It, for
C. This, for
D. It, to
16. —What are _____ in English?
—They are _______.
A. these , boxes
B. these, box
C. this, boxes
17. —What is this ?
—____is a cake.
A. That
B. This
C. It
18. We find ______ impossible for us to learn a
foreign language well in a short time.
A. it
B. this
C. one
D. that
19. Don‘t you think ____ necessary for friends to trust each other?
A. that
B. it
C. this
D. those
20. Did you find __________ interesting to play YoYo?
A. that
B. it
C. it’s
21. —I don't think _______ possible to learn a foreign language without hard work.
— I agree with you.
A. this
B. it
C. that
22. Your mobile phone is so good. Where did you
buy _____? I want to buy____ too.
A. it; it
B. it; one
C. one; it
D. one; one
23. —I need something for cutting the paper.
—Oh, you want a knife? Ok, I’ll get ______ for yo u.
A.it
B. that
C. this
D. one
24. —Excuse me. Can you please tell me where I can find a bookstore?
—I know one not far from here. You can find______ easily.
A. one
B. this
C. them
D. it
25. Lucy finally found _________exciting to have conversations with friends in Chinese.
A. that
B. this
C. it
D. it’s
26. —Which of the two T-shirts will you take?
—I’ll take _______ . One is for my brother and the other is for myself.
A. either
B. both
C. neither
D. all
27. _______ will be not easy for people to work
without computers.
A.There
B.This
C.That
D.It
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．书面表达
为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。

请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

注意：1. 词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：梅西 Messi
Dear classmates,
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.
Thank you for your attention.
【答案】Dear classmates，
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．
I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．
Thank you for your attention．
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。

要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。

根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team
spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。

3．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。

假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。

内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

4．2019年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。

时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写
一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

5．亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。

假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette (礼仪). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。

【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。

表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。

平时注意多多积累句型、短语。

细心检查避免疏漏。

以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读
懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。

【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

如but, so, then 等。

可以适当使用高分句子。

本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。

China is a nation of etiquette(礼仪)，中国是一个礼仪之邦。

6．随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。

“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。

请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.
【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习
惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of 等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．《朗读者》、《中国诗词大会》等文化类节目唤醒了中国人的阅读情结。

为了激发市民们的阅读兴趣,广州开展了“书香羊城”活动。

请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对阅读的看法,并对如何培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动提出建议。

注意:1.参考词汇:《朗读者》(Readers): 作品: works (n.)
2.文章应包括所有要点:
3.词数80词以上(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数):
4.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分.
The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while.
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【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in rea ding after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，内容包括提示内容以及谈谈自己对阅读的看法，并对培养阅读习惯和开展班级阅读活动方面提出建议，人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时，同时注意恰当使用连词使文章逻辑关系更为紧密。

高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不仅能帮助我们更多地了解这个世界，而且能带给我们幸福。

not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列连词短语。

2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天坚持阅读是一个好习惯。

Keeping reading every day动名词短语作主语。

3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.另外，我们的教室里还可以设置一个读书角，以便课后随时阅读。

此句是一个复合句，主句是含有情态动词的被动语态，so that引导的是目的状语从句。

8．“友善”是一种美德，它犹如阳光和雨露照耀并滋润着美德的形成。

同学们，请奉献你的友善，为创建和谐社会做出贡献。

某英文网站正在开展以“友善待人、快乐生活”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。

主要内容包括:你对友善行为的认识和理解，你平时做哪些友善的事情，以及你这样做的美好愿望。

提示词语:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society
提示问题:What do you think of showing kindness to others?
How do you help them kindly in your daily life?
What do you dream about being kind to them?
It's our duty to show kindness to others around us.
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【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our community, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many fri ends by helping others in need.
I believe our society will become better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

9．“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造｡
某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动｡假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受｡
提示词语: diligence (勤奋), make progress, effort, proud
提示问题: • What did you achieve by working hard?
• What did you do to make it?
• How did you feel about it?
【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.
It was so great that all my efforts paid off.I felt so proud of myself.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。

所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。

主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？•你是怎么做到的？•你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。

时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。

注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具
有条理性。

【高分句型一】
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。

句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】
The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。

这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。

表示“越……，就越……”的意思。