湖北省黄石市高二英语3月联考试题牛津译林版

大冶二中、黄石三中三月联考
英语试卷
本试卷共8页。

全卷满分150分。

考试用时120分钟。

第一部分：听力（共两节，满分30分）
第一节（共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分）
听下面5段对话。

每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置，听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题，每段对话仅读一遍。

1. Why doesn’t the man open the door?
A. He hasn’t got the key.
B. T he key doesn’t work.
C. He has got a wrong key.
2. What relation is the woman to Tom?
A. His manager.
B. His girlfriend.
C. His colleague.
3. What are the speakers mainly doing?
A. Having a party.
B. Cooking.
C. Shopping.
4. What does the woman advise the man to do in the end?
A. Take a walk alone.
B. Wait for her in a park.
C. Wait until she finishes a letter.
5. What is the woman going to do?
A. See a doctor.
B. Go to a party.
C. Look after her children. 第二节（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）
听下面5段对话或独白。

每段对话或独白后有几个小题。

从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。

听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间，每段对话或独白读两遍。

听第6段材料，回答第6至7题.
6. What is the woman thinking about?
A. The exams.
B. The English class.
C. The coming holiday.
7. What makes the man change his mind?
A. He thinks hiking is tiring.
B. He wants to be with the woman.
C. He wants to keep away from the cold weather.
听第7段材料，回答第8至10题。

8. What is the relationship between the speakers?
A. Workmates.
B. Classmates.
C. Club members.
9. Why didn’t the woman receive the man’s e-mail?
A. He sent it to someone else by mistake.
B. There was a computer problem.
C. She changed her e-mail address.
10. What did the woman do last Saturday?
A. She attended a party.
B. She took part in a meeting.
C. She went on a bike trip.
听第8段材料，回答第11至13题.
11. When does the conversation take place?
A. In the morning.
B. In the afternoon.
C. In the evening.
12. What did Peter think of poems?
A. They are fun to read but difficult to write.
B. They are boring to read and hard to write.
C. They are fun to read and easy to write.
13. What did the woman do when Peter was little?
A. She asked him to recite poems.
B. She read nursery rhymes to him.
C. She taught him how to read poems.
听第9段材料，回答第14至16题.
14. What does the man think of the Science Club?
A. It is funny.
B. It is attractive
C. It is not enjoyable.
15. Why do so many students like joining the Drama Club?
A. To be outstanding on campus.
B. To perform another person.
C. To develop their talent in drama.
16. What do we know about the man?
A. He hates drama.
B. He is a drama star.
C. He is handsome 听第10段材料，回答第17至20题.
17. Where do children play games after school?
A. On the street corner.
B. At home.
C. At school
18. What do old people do after breakfast?
A. Read newspapers.
B. Go to car races.
C. Watch TV at home.
19. How do young people go on outings at the weekends?
A. By bike.
B. By car.
C. By train.
20. What does the speaker mainly talk about?
A. Different ways of enjoyment for Australians.
B. Australians live a busy life.
C. Living in Australia.
第二部分:词汇知识运用 (共两节，满分30分)
第一节：多项选择(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
21. The school often ______ many books and magazines for the teachers to refer to.
A. applies to
B. adapts to
C. subscribes to
D. adjusts to
22. Don’t expect too much of him. After all , he is a child of ______ intelligence.
A. average
B. slight
C. absolute
D. firm
23. These companies succeeded because they were the first companies to make use of the ____________ of the internet and was thought highly of by some experts.
A. potential
B. possibility
C. prejudice
D. precious
24. Success _________three key factors: diligence, talent and luck, of which the
first one is of great importance .
A. breaks down
B. puts up
C. divides into
D. consists of
25. Hannah was busy with work then but she still tried her best to some time
from her tight schedule to visit her mother.
A. cut out
B. squeeze out
C. leave out
D. dig out
26. He devoted himself entirely to his research into viruses and it earned him a
good _________in his field.
A. impression
B. attraction
C. contribution
D. reputation
27. The interviewee felt ___________ and uncomfortable when he could not answer the
interviewer’s q uestions.
A. addicted
B. ambitious
C. amazed
D. awkward.
28. ______ the best efforts of the desperate mother, the powerless baby elephant
seemed to have no hope of escaping, until a team of conservation workers rushed to help.
A. In favor of
B. In spite of
C. In need of
D. In
case of
29. I was nearly exhausted from preparing my experiment report last night so I took
a hot bath to
myself.
A. behave
B. transform
C. present
D. refresh
30. As for hungry, you won’t get much from those who never went through it
A .kindness B. sympathy C. advice D. regret
第二节完形填空（共20小题；每小题1分，满分20分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后所给各题的四个选项A、B、C、D中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

Sometimes I really doubt whether there is love between my parents. Every day they are very busy trying to 31 in order to pay the high tuition for my brother and me. They don’t act in the 32 ways that I read in books or I see on TV. In their opinion, “I love you” is too 33 for them to say. Sending flowers to each other on Valentine’s Day is even more out of 34.
One day, my mother was sewing a quilt. I sat down beside her. “Mom, I have a question to ask you. Is there _35 between you and Dad?” I asked her in a very low voice. She didn’t answer immediately. She 36 her head and continued to sew the quilt.
I was very worried because I thought I had _37_ her. I was 38_ and I didn’t know what I should do. But at last I heard my mother say the following words: “Susan,” she said thoughtfully, “Look at this thread．Sometimes it __39_, but most of it disappears in the quilt. The thread really makes the quilt _40__. If life is a quilt, then love should be a thread．It can hardly be seen _41 , but it’s really there. Love is 42_.”
I listened carefully but I __43_ her until the next spring. At that time, my father suddenly _44 seriously. My mother had to stay with him in the hospital for a month. When they returned from the hospital, they both looked __45_. It seemed both of them had had a serious illness. After they were back, every day in the morning and dusk, my mother helped my father 46__ on the country road．
“Dad, how are you feeling now?” I asked him one day.
“Susan, don’t _47 me.” he said gently. “To tell you the truth, I just like walking with your mom.”_48_ his eyes, I know he loves my mother deeply.
Once I thought love meant flowers, gifts and 49 . But from this experience, I understand that love is just _50_ in the quilt of our life. Love is inside, making life strong and warm.
31．A．keep fit B．rise early C．collect money D .earn money
32．A．romantic B．magic C．fantastic D．attractive 33．A．simple B．luxurious C．relaxing D．easy 34．A．question B．the question C．reach D．control
35．A．feeling B．quarrel C．love D．smile 36．A．bowed B．shook C．nodded D．raised 37．A．hurt B．injured C．wounded D．harmed 38．A．in great surprise B．with deep depression
C．in a great embarrassment D . at extreme sorrow
39．A. happens B．comes about C．occurs D．appears 40．A．warm and soft B．hot and hard C．thin and cool D．strong and durable
41．A．more or less B．here and there C．somewhere and sometime D ．anywhere or anytime
42．A．inside B．outside C．faraway D．nearby 43．A．could believe B．wouldn’t recognize C．couldn’t understand D．might know
44．A．got stuck B．got sick C．threw up D．became disabled
45．A．quite healthy B．fairly red C．very pale D．much surprised
46．A．walk slowly B．go hurriedly C．run fast D．jump high 47．A．think about B．worry about C．talk with D．laugh at 48．A．Saying B．Seeing C．Reading D．Writing 49．A．fresh roses B．gold ring C．beautiful jewelry D．sweet kisses
50．A．a needle B．a thread C．the cloth D．the cotton
第三部分：阅读理解（共20小题;每小题2分；满分40分）
阅读下列短文, 从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中, 选出最佳选项并在答题卡上涂黑。

A
When TV news programs report wars or disasters, the editors rarely use the most horrifying pictures of dead or wounded victims because they don’t want to upset their viewers. Even so, viewers are usually warned in advance that they may find some of these scenes disturbing, so they can look away if they choose. But the men and women whose job is to record those scenes－the TV cameramen－have no such choice. It is their duty to witness the horrors of the world and record them, no matter how terrible and unpleasant they may be. Consequently, it is one of the most dangerous, exposed and emotionally taxing jobs the world has to offer.
Today, the demand for their work is rising. The explosion of satellite broadcasting and 24-hour news in recent years has created an almost insatiable (贪得无厌的) demand for TV information. But major broadcasters and the TV news agencies—such as Reuters and WTN－have never had enough staff to meet the worldwide demand for up-to-date pictures, so increasingly they turn to “freelance” TV cameramen.
These freelance cameramen are independent operators tied to no particular organization. They will work for any company which hires them, be it for just a few hours or for several weeks in a war zone. But if the freelance cameraman is injured in the course of the job, the TV company is not responsible for him. The freelancer must survive on his own.
TV will always need hard, vivid moving pictures which are fresh, but these
companies feel uncomfortable with large numbers of employees on their books, explains Nick Growing, once foreign editor for Britain Channel 4 News and now a BBC news presenter.
By hiring freelancers, they can buy in the skills they need only when they need them. It also enables them to contract out the risk, he says.
51. TV news agencies turn to freelance cameramen in order to .
A. save expense and avoid risks
B. get free and useful pictures
C. get first-hand information and pictures
D. satisfy the greed of the freelance cameramen
52. We can infer from the passage that the freelance cameramen .
A. have to take a lot of risks in the course of work
B. are tied to many TV news agencies
C. have better skills than other cameramen
D. need to contract out risks of work for TV companies
53. According to this passage, some major broadcasters and TV news agencies .
A. have employed enough cameramen
B. are not willing to employ many cameramen
C. are very mean to freelancers C. are responsible for the freelancer if he is injured
54. The author of this passage shows his the freelance cameramen.
A. sympathy to
B. respect for
C. anger to
D. admiration to
B
You have the ability to decide if you are happy or not. Happiness is a choice.
You can't depend on someone else to make you happy. That is a lesson I learned early on in my marriage. I realized that I couldn't rely on my husband as my source of happiness. I learned that my happiness depended on me and not my husband's actions.
I learned that you have to choose to be happy.
You can choose your emotions. True happiness comes from within; it can't be forced by outside forces. So how do you choose happiness? The same way you choose to smile or choose to wear a certain outfit. You choose it because that's what you want to experience in your life.
You want to buy a new pair of shoes so you choose a pair that you like and feel good. You wouldn't buy a pair of shoes that you don't like or that don't fit well, right? So why do we keep choosing emotions and feelings that don't make us feel good?
Choosing to be happy after you realize your anger has shown up (or even choosing to be calm) can be beneficial. We choose our feelings; no one can do that for us. If we let others get to us, influence our emotions - we are giving them power over us. When others cause us anger or pain, we are giving them our power.
We need to keep our feelings in check and not react automatically to what is thrown at us. We need to think our actions out instead of just reacting to what someone says or does.
Remember that we can always choose happiness. At first it will be difficult to just switch your thoughts and feelings from anger, self-doubt, or fear to joy and
happiness. But it is only a thought away. Don't dwell on what happens to you unnecessarily but realize what is causing you to feel that way. Realize that thoughts, feelings and emotions can change. Then move on and choose to be happy. 55．What’s the best title of this passage?
A. Choose to Be Happy
B. Choose Your Emotions
C. Pretend to Be Happy
D. Find Happiness
56．The lesson the writer learned in her marriage is ________.
A. she can depend on her husband to find happiness
B. balancing the relationship between the husband and wife is an art
C. one can’t rely on som eone else to make himself or herself happy
D. happiness can be influenced by outside forces
57．Why did the writer mention buying shoes?
A. To use it as an example to show the importance of choosing to be happy.
B. To offer advice on how to choose comfortable shoes.
C. To compare choosing shoes and choosing an outfit.
D. To help to move to the next paragraph easily.
58．The writer suggests that we should ________.
A. let others control our feelings
B. respond immediately to others’ words
C. pay more attention to words than actions
D. hold back our feelings properly
C
In Canada and the United States, there is a new group of children called “satellite kids”, who live in one place but whose parents live in another place.
Asians are immigrating (移民) to Canada and the United States in larger numbers than ever before. Most Asians immigrate because they believe that they can give their children a better education in the West. In Asia, especially in China, Japan, and Korea, it is difficult to go to university. Students must first pass the strict national examination. However, in Canada and the United States, it is easy to go to university, and anyone who wants to go can go. As a result, Asian parents decide to leave their countries so that their children can go to university.
The problem is that when Asians arrive, they discover that finding a job and making money are more difficult in the West than in the East. Also, they find that they are very lonely, and that they miss their homes. For these two reasons, most Asian parents decide to go back to work while their children study in the West. Therefore, these children become “satellite kids”, and most of their parents do not know how sad it is to be a “satellite kid”.
Only until now are Canadians and Americans discovering the “satellite kid” problem. Because these children do not speak English and because their parents are not there to take care of them, they are often absent from school. To be a “satellite kid” means to grow up in a country where you know you a re different and where you cannot make friends because you do not speak English well. Also, it means to grow up lonely, because your parents are elsewhere. What these “satellite kids” will probably say to their parents is that it’s better to have parents a round than to have a university education.
59. Some Asian parents send their kids abroad because ________.
A. they hope their children may easily find a job there
B. all foreign universities are better than the ones in their own countries
C. the kids may not be accepted by universities in their own countries
D. the kids want to improve their English and make foreign friends
60. “Satellite kids” refer to Asian kids ________.
A. without parents
B. speaking no English
C. with university education
D. living abroad alone
61. Some Asian immigrant children become “satellite kids” because their parents ________.
A. want to leave their own country
B. want them to go to university
C. return to their countries to work
D. want them to be independent
62. What is the main idea of the passage?
A. Parents want better education for their kids.
B. Parents feel lonely and miss their families.
C. Kids in foreign countries alone are badly in need of care from family.
D. Canadians and Americans begin to notice the “satellite kids” problem.
D
. After Mom died, l began visiting Dad every morning before I went to work. He was frail and moved slowly, but he always had a glass of freshly squeezed orange juice on the kitchen table for me, along with an unsigned note reading," Drink your juice." Such a gesture, l knew, was as far as Dad had ever been able to go in expressing his love. In fact, l remember, as a kid I had questioned Mom "Why doesn't Dad love me?" Mom frowned, "Who said he doesn’t love you?" "Well, he never tells me, "I complained." He never tells me either," she said, smiling. " But look how hard he works to take care of us, to buy us food and clothes, and to pay for this house. That's how your father tells us he loves us. "
I nodded slowly. I understood in my head, but not in my heart. l still wanted my father to put his arms around me and tell me he loved me. Dad owned and operated a small scrap (片) metal business, and after school I often hung around while he worked. Dad handled scrap steel into a device that chopped it as cleanly as a butcher chops a rack of ribs. The machine looked like a giant pair of scissors, with blades thicker than my father's body. If he didn’t feed those terrifying blades just right, he risked serious injury. "Why don' t you hire someone to do that for you?" Mom asked Dad one night as she bent over him and rubbed his aching shoulders with a strong smelling liniment. "Why don’t you hire a cook?" Dad asked, giving her one of his rare smiles.
Many years later, during my first daily visit, after drinking the juice my father had squeezed for me. l walked over, hugged him and said, "I love you, Dad." From then on I did this every morning. My father never told me how he felt about my hugs, and there was never any expression on his face when I gave them.
63. What would be the best title for the passage?
A. My father never loved me
B. I just couldn't understand my father
C. My hard-working father
D. Silent fatherly love
64. The author’s father always prepared a glass of fresh ly squeezed orange juice
for him because____.
A. that was the author's favorite
B. that was a gesture of love
C. the author was always complaining
D. he was sure the author would be thirsty
65. The author’s father didn’t hire a helper because________. .
A. he wanted to save money
B. his job required high skills
C. his job was too dangerous
D. he was not good at communicating with others
66. We may infer from the passage that _______. .
A. the author's father lacked a sense of humor
B. the author's-father didn't love him very much
C. the author quite understood his father as time went on
D. the author's father was too strict with him
E
The iPhone, the iPad: each of Apple’s products sounds cool and has bec ome a fad (一度时髦的风尚). Apple has cleverly taken advantage of the power of the letter “i” —and many other brands are following suit. The BBC’s iPlayer —which allows Web users to watch TV programs on the Internet —adopted the title in 2008. A lovely bear —popular in the US and the UK —that plays music and video is called “iTeddy”.
A slimmed-down version of The Independent newspaper was launched last week under the name “i”.
In general, single-letter prefixes have been popular since the 1990s, when terms such as e-mail and e-commerce first came into use.
Most “i” products are aimed at young people and considering the major readers of The Independent’s “i”, it’s no surprise that they’ve selected this fashionable name.
But it’s hard to see what’s so special about the letter “i”. Why not use “a”, “b”, or “c” instead? According to Tony Thorne, former head of the Language Center at King’s College London, “i” works because its meaning has become ambiguous. When Apple uses “i”, no one knows whether it means Internet, information, individual or interactive, Thorne told BBC Magazines. “Even when Apple created the iPod, it seems it didn’t have one clear definition,” he says.
“However, thanks to Apple, the term is now associated with portability (轻便).” Adds Thorne.
Clear ly the letter “i” also agrees with the idea that the Western world is centered on the individual. Each person believes they have their own needs, and we love personalized products for this reason.
Along with “Google” and “blog”, readers of BBC Magazines vo ted “i” as one of the top 20 words that have come to define the last decade.
But as history shows, people grow tired of fads. From the 1900s to 1990s, products with “2000” in their names became fashionable as the year was associated with all things advanced and modern. However, as we entered the new century, the trend unavoidably disappeared.
67. People use iPlayer to _________.
A. listen to music
B. make a call
C. read newspapers
D. watch TV programs online
68. We can infer that The Independent’s “i” is aimed at _________.
A. engineers
B. old readers
C. fashionable women
D. young readers
69. Nowadays, the “i” term often reminds people of the products which are _________.
A. environmentally friendly
B. easy to carry
C. advanced
D. recyclable
70. The writer suggests that _________.
A. “i” products are often of high quality
B. iTeddy is a living bear
C. the popularity of “i” products may not last long
D. the letter “b” replaces the letter “i” to name the products
第四部分：书面表达（共两节，满分50分）
第一节完成句子（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分）
71. Langlang, ______________________ , has performed successfully on a lot of grand
occasions . (gift)
朗朗，很有音乐天赋，曾经在很多大场合成功表演过。

72. _________________ that the experiment ended in failure? We should try to find out the cause.(come)
实验怎么会失败呢？我们应好好找找原因。

73. With about 2000 seats ______________, the concert hall can hold more than so many people. (sit)
有大约2000个座位，这个音乐厅可容纳更多的观众。

74. The young man has ______________________ of turning on the computer to read news
at home and abroad as soon as he comes back from work. (get)
这个年轻人养成了下班就打开电脑看国内外新闻的习惯。

75. He pretended not ________________________ it. (hear)
他假装没听说过这件事。

76. ______________________________ at home, the novelist went for a walk as a rest.(spend)
花了好几个小时在家写作，这位作家出去散步休息一下。

77. I’m sorry ,I can’t remember ______________ that the Qin dynasty united the currency of China. (it)
很抱歉，我不记得秦朝究竟是在何时统一中国货币的。

78. Have you ever been to Yuanmingyuan in Beijing? Now it is in ruins, because it
_______________ years ago and was not rebuilt. (burn)
你去过北京的圆明园吗？现在是一片废墟，因为多年前被烧毁了且没有重建。

79.I eventually persuaded my president to open a branch in the middle-sized city.As
a result, I was there _________________________ our company。

(behalf)
我最后终于说服了总裁在那个中等城市开分公司。

结果，我就在那做我们公司的代表了。

80.Under no circumstances ______________________ the manager’s office except the
manager himself. (access)
在任何情况下，除经理自己外，任何其他人都不能随意进入经理的办公室。

第二节：短文写作（共1题，满分30分）
请根据下列提示写用英语一篇120词左右的短文.
Everybody can’t live happily and healthily without other’s help. As a result ,
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1.why should you be grateful?
2.to whom and for what should you give thanks ?
3.How will you be grateful to other people by giving one or two examples? Learn to be grateful
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书面表达：
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1-5 BCCBA 6-10 AAACC 11-15 CABCA 16-20 CABBA
21-25CAADC 26-30 DDBDB
31-35 DABBC 36-40 AACDD 41-45 DACBC 46-50 ABCDB
51-54CABA 55-68 ACAD 59-62 CDCC 63-66 DBAC 67-70 DDBC 71. who has a gift for music
71.How did it come about
73.to sit on
74.got into the habit
75.to have heard about/of
76. having spent several hours( in) writing
77.when it was
78.was burnt /burned to the ground /was burnt down
79.(to be) on behalf of
80.can anyone else have free access to
One possible version
One possible version:
Everybody can’t live happily and healthily without other’s help. As a result , we should be grateful to our parents, teachers and friends. Who shall we give our thanks to? I’d like to share my idea with you.
First, we should clarify why we are expected to learn to be grateful. Being grateful has always been a good quality in China, which can inspire a sense of responsibility in us. And I always think if everyone is grateful to our society, it will be more harmonious. If everyone has got a grateful heart to our parents, teachers and friends, love and happiness will greet us everyday.
Gratitude is so important and necessary that we should take action right away. Gratitude doesn't necessarily consist in how much money we spend or how great our deeds should be. We can just start with small things —give our parents a warm hug or make them a cup of tea, design beautiful thank-you cards for our dear teachers and send thank-you emails to our friends .
【英语作文各档次的给分范围和要求】
第一档是极优档，30分。

标准为：书写规范；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；词汇丰富，有修辞意识。

第二档是优秀，26分至29分。

标准为：紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，显示出较强的语言运动能力；语言小错不超过4个。

第三档是良好，22 分至25分。

标准为：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。

第四档是一般，18分至21分。

标准为：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。

第五档是较差，13分至17分。

标准为：内容不完成，要点不全，行文不连贯，语言错误较多，多数句子基本正确。

第六档是差，6分至12分。

标准为：内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题，能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。

第七档是极差，0分至5分。

只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容。

评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线。

根据百分制计算，英语作文的及格线是18分。

第一节:完成句子题评分原则
①结构正确、用给定的英语单词完整表达所给的汉语信息，给满分；
②未用给定单词不给分(用构词法变化给定单词也不给分)；
③结构不正确不给分；
④结构正确，信息完整，但有一个或一个以上拼写错误扣0.5分；
⑤结构正确，信息有遗漏扣0.5分；
⑥结构正确，添加无关信息扣0.5分。

第二节：短文写作（满分30分）
一、评分原则
①本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。

②词数少于100，将分数降低一个档次。

③评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前提下侧重于语言的表达。

④评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。

⑤拼写与标点符号是语言表达准确的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

⑥如书写太潦草，以至影响辨认，将分数降低一个档次。