中考英语书面表达点+例题-全面解析经典1

中考英语书面表达点+例题-全面解析经典1
一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
1．书面表达
难忘的初中生活即将结束。

你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。

假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。

要点如下：
1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容：
1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。

参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。

Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。

而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．书面表达
李华所在的国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动，假定你是李华，请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节，内容包括：
1. 今年庆祝时间（6月18日）
2. 节日由来：纪念（be in memory of）屈原
3. 吃粽子，赛龙舟，挂菖蒲和艾草（calamus and Ay Tsao）……
4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日
注意：1. 词数80~100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear fellows,
The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.
_____________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________.
【答案】Dear fellows,
The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People celebrate……，People hold……，We can watch……，We welcome to……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了今年端午节庆祝时间，接下来介绍端午节的由来以及庆祝活动，最后欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日。

此处according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．书面表达
初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。

请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

要求：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：
2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.
At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。

而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more
colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．书面表达
假设你将代表你校2009届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言
稿，发言稿的内容要点如下：
回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同
学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。

注意：1. 90词左右。

发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.
Thank you for listening!
【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.
It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!
Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写作中适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。

5．书面表达
为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。

请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

注意：1. 词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：梅西 Messi
Dear classmates,
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.
Thank you for your attention.
【答案】Dear classmates，
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．
I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．
Thank you for your attention．
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。

要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。

根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team
spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。

6．环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。

某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。

提示词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action
提示问题：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?
Now there are many environmental
problems._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.
I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.
I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。

例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；
Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。

【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。

以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。

假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。

内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and
horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

8．随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。

“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。

请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
3.词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.
【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disa dvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
【解析】
本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of
等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．书面表达
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”
----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”
----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》
“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”
----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。

但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。

所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。

请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。

要点提示：
1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；
2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；
3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；
4.补充自己的观点。

写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can
learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。

主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。

2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何实现自己的目标（Firstl y,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。

承接文章开头，句意完整，避免汉语式英语，叙述条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：
高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。

高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。

10．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计
划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

写作内容：
1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。

写作要求：
1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I
decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.
I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
【解析】
试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。

文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。

所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。

用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。

用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：考查提纲作文。