Note Writing,英语便条写作
英语实用文体写作系列 4便条
Unit 4便条(Short Note)一、写作技巧便条(Short Note),或称便签或便笺,是一种简单的书信。
便条是对比较熟悉的人的留言,虽然内容简单,但却有其独特的风格。
主要目的是为了尽快的把最新的信息、通知、要求或者活动的时间、地点转告给对方。
常见的便条有收条、欠条、留言和请假条等。
便条写作(Note Writing)实际上与书信写作(Letter Writing)大致相似,但有三点主要不同:1. 便条较随便,因此语气通常更轻松,格式和语言都是如此。
2. 通常便条较短,应言简意赅,这意味着你必须略去冗余信息。
便条写起来往往更具个性化,通常语言更接近口语,更直接。
具体说来,有以下特点:便条可以有题目,也可以省略题目。
便条开篇须有称呼语,但称呼可以比较随便。
日期部分可写在便条的右上角。
日期的签署通常只需写星期几或星期几的上午、下午,也可只写上午或下午和具体时间。
只写日期也可以。
便条结尾须署上留条人的姓名,位置在正文的右下角。
便条的形式和内容简洁,故可以用几句话概括。
文内语言尽量通俗口语化,简单扼要,直截了当,无需使用客套语言(In a roundabout way )。
便条虽简单,但中心务必突出,更要注明活动的时间及地点。
便条不需邮寄,不用信封。
通常请人代为转交。
有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。
基本写作格式便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。
但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素:1)Date:便条日期;2)Salutation:称呼;3)Body:正文;4)Signature:署名。
注意月份的全拼及缩略形式。
月份的缩略形式为:Jan., Feb., Mar., Apr., May,June, July, Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov., Dec.。
二、经典范文(一)收据(receipt)收据种类很多,有收条、借据、订阅单、订货单等,是在跟对方发生钱和物的关系时写给对方作为凭据的条子,起书面证据作用。
note-writing (samples)
Note-writing (范文)1.Invitation给外教写张便条,邀请她参加新年午餐。
Dear Mary,Would it be possible for you to join us for New Year's dinner at 12:00 this Sunday at Qingfeng Dinning Hall? You have been teaching us for half a year. Every student speakshighly of you for your patience, kindness and strictness. We would like to take the chance to show our appreciation for you too. If you could manage to come, we would be very happy.Sincerely yours,Nancy2.Request写张便条请张教授就便条的写作给予知道。
Dear Professor Zhang,TEM-4 is approaching, but I still have some problems in note writing. So, if you can spare me some time and give some help, I would be very appreciative. I am sorry to say that Thursday afternoon is the only free time I have. So if it is convenient for you, shall we meet at the Room 101 in building C, at 3 p.m. this or next Thursday? Heartfelt thanks.Sincerely yours,Zhang Fang3.Congratulation听说朋友张盈获得了奖学金,写个便条表示祝贺。
Note Writing 3
对所谢事情的描述和个人感受
Everything seemed perfect with your consideration: the comfortable hotel and the reasonable visiting plan.
I am so lucky that I have such a generous and charming friend.
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回馈承诺
Please accept my warmest thanks; I hope I have the chance to reciprocate (互换, 互给,报答 )your kindness.
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致谢便条范例1
April 20th, 2008
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7. 致谢便条
(Note of Thanks)
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致谢便条写作思路
Main Procedures
致谢行为 对所谢事情的描述和个人感受 (解释对方的帮助给自己带来的好处)
再次致谢( 回馈承诺)
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参考句式
1、Thank you very much for .... 十分感谢... 2、Many thanks for your ... 非常感谢您... 3、Please accept my sincere appreciation for ... 请接受我对...真挚的感谢 4、I am truly grateful to you for ... 为了...,我真心感激您 5、It was good (thoughtful) of you ... 承蒙好意(关心)... 6、You were so kind to send ... 承蒙好意送来...
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格式
称呼:Dear Tom
日期:Sep. 3, 2010
Sep. 3rd, 2010 正文:首行缩进,直接进入主题 署名:Yours/Yours sincerely, Alice
致谢类
表达谢意,叙述感谢原因,再次表达谢意…… Example:
April 20,2008 Dear Peter, I’m writing to show my gratitude for your invitation to your birthday party. That was a really wonderful party. I appreciate your considerate arrangement and wonderful performance you had prepared. And it also offered me a chance to meet many old friends. I really enjoyed that night and I do hope you will have a wonderful life. Yours, Amelia
when you visit here.
Note-writing (10 minutes)
Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the
following situation: You have enjoyed very much the party held at your friend – Mike’s home. Write to him a note to thank him for his hospitality and express your hope for more of such kind of parties to be held. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.
英语专业四级考试便条写作解析
Dear Jane,
拼写错误
Hearing you want to subscribe an English-languge newspaper. I
• 2)假设情景、灵活处理人际关系、圆满解决实际问题。
• 语言得体内容和语言是一个统一体。内容抓住后,应以恰 当的语言来表达。一般来说,便条的语言要简单明嘹,用 词平易。当然,语言风格还应与情景一致,不同的对象, 所使用的语言应有所不同。相对来说,对上级、长者、不 熟悉的人的语言较为正式,对亲朋好友的语言则较为随便。 不过,不管对方是谁,行文中都应体现态度诚恳礼貌。
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2.称呼
April 22, 2014 Dear Professor Wang,
I’m very sorry I didn’t keep the appointment with you yesterday because of my sick roommate. As his close friend, I had to look after him the whole day. I wonder if you’d mind having another appointment with me at your office at four o’clock tomorrow afternoon.
I’m expecting your reply. Yours sincerely, George
1.日期 3.正文
5.署名
4.套语
Part I: Note-writing(便条写作) ---格式
Note-writing 专四98-12真题 便条作文范文
Note-writingModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2012)Direction: The winter vacation was over, and you came back by train yesterday. Y our friend (Michael or Lucy) went to the railway station to meet you and helped cleaning your dorm. Now, write him/her a note, expressing your gratitude and offering your help in return.Feb.26, 2012 Dear Michael,I’m writing to you to express my deep gratitude for your help on the day I came back from my winter vacation. Thank you very much for coming to pick me up at the railway station and helping with the overloaded suitcase. Without your help, I could not imagine how I would have exerted to drag it out the platform. What’s more, I was greatly touched at the moment you decided to stay and help cleaning my dorm. My heart swelled with great thankfulness the whole day and thereafter. And I sincerely would like to repay your kindness by doing something for you.Thanks again and best wishes.Y ours,LindaModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2011)Direction: During the summer vacation you would like to invite your best friend to your hometown. Write a note to him/her, extending your invitation and telling him/her how to get to your hometown.May 26, 2011 Dear Mary,The summer vacation is coming next month. I hope you can come to my hometown Hangzhou, and spend the vacation with us. There are a lot of places of interests to visit. After arriving at the North Coach Station, you can get to the Y an’an Xincun stop by taking No.188 bus. I am looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible.Sincerely yours,ChristineModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2010)Direction: Y ou r good friend, John, is thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party. Write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to help him. Y ou have to be specific about how you can help him.April 17, 2010 Dear John,It’s kind of you to organize a party at the end of the term. How relaxing and enjoyable the party will be!I would like to offer a helping hand for the preparationof the party. I will be very glad to buy fruits and desserts. I will be also delighted to pick up our classmates. I will call you to discuss more details of the party later. Good luck!Y ours,TomModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2009)Direction: Lily, your roommate, is looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. Y ou saw an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy.Write her a note, telling her what the job is and strongly recommending it to her.April 17, 2009 Dear Lily,I know you’re looking for a part-time job in thecoming summer vacation. And I have just seen an ad for a private English tutor for a 13-year-old schoolboy.Since you have the experience of tutoring students and the pay is decent for 50 yuan an hour, I strongly suggest that you go for a try.Y ours,EllenModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2008)Direction: Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper.1April 17, 2008 Dear Jane,I heard you want to subscribe to an English-language newspaper and I would like to recommend 21st Century to you. It is a weekly newspaper, covering many topics that we are interested in. First, you will surely be attracted to the vocabulary section, from which we can learn a lot of useful words and phrases. Besides, the testing section introduces different English tests that college students may take. I love the newspaper, and I hope you will like it too.Y ours,Jimmy Model of Note-writing (TEM4-2007)Direction:Y our classmate, Jimmy, is head of the university’s swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why.April 20, 2007 Dear Jimmy,Thank you so much for inviting me to the swimming club. I really appreciate that. It would be great joy to swim on hot days, but I'm afraid I have accepted the invitation from the Judo club. I've been practicing Judo for several years, and I don't want to quit the sport. Thank you again for your invitation. I may introduce a friend of mine to you if you are interested. He’s really into swimming.Y ours,MikeModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2006)Direction: Y ou have got to know that your classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the chess. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and asking for information on two details related to the excursion.April 23, 2006 Dear Michael,I’m very interested in the weekend excursion you’re organizing and I’d like to join you. Can you call me and let me know when and where we are going to meet and what I shall bring? I can be reached at 68895687.Thank you.Y ours,Joan Model of Note-writing (TEM4-2005)Direction: Y ou have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.April 15, 2005 Dear Hilda,I’ve got two tickets to a concert given by S.H.E, the most popular group nowadays, this Saturday evening at Hongkou Stadium. Since you are their great fan, I’d like to invite you to come with me. We are sure to have a good time together. Please let me know whether you can come or not. I can reached at 54723129.Y ours truly,Betty Model of Note-writing (TEM4-2004)Direction: Y our friend, Jane, has failed in the final exam, and is feeling very unhappy about it. Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.May 10, 2004 Dear Jane,Y ou’ve been in low spirit for the whole day for your failure in the maths exam. And I’m very concerned about you. Y ou know we often have “those days” in our life and ups and downs are unavoidable.It is useless “crying over the spilt milk”and the best thing right now for you is to cheer up and get yourself prepared for the make-up exam. Smile and life will smile at you.Y ours,Mary Model of Note-writing (TEM4-2003)Direction: Y our friend Clare has invited you to her house warming party his weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wished to her.April 18, 2003 Dear Clare,Congratulations on your moving into a new house and thanks a lot for your invitation to your house warming party this weekend. But I’m very sorry to tell you that I have to go to Beijing for business2from this Wednesday to next Tuesday. What a pity for missing the party! I sincerely hope that you will enjoy every minute of the party to your heart’s content.Y ours,JoanModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2002)Direction: Y ou have heard that your friend, Jack, wished to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.April 15, 2002 Dear Jack,I heard someone say that you wanted to sell your walkman. As luck would have it, I want to buy a new walkman to improve my English. I wonder if you could give me a description of the condition of your walkman. Can it still go forward and backward? Can it record? Does it have a radio? I’d like to spend no more than 200 yuan on it.How about it?Y ours,Laura Model of Note-writing (TEM4-2001)Direction: Y esterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. Y ou should also suggest the time for the requested meetingApril 17, 2001 Dear Prof. Wang,I am terribly sorry that I missed the appointment with you. Y esterday, my grandma suddenly went ill, and my parents were not in, so I had to take her to the hospital. When I got to your office, it was too late, and you had already left. Please forgive me.I know you’re busy these days, but I wonder if you could agree to meet me at 2 o’clock on Friday afternoon. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Respectfully yours,Tim Model of Note-writing (TEM4-2000)Direction: Y ou’ve read on the notice board that the university library is looking for a part-time library assistant who can work at weekends. Y ou think that your classmate, George, is a suitable person for thisvacancy. Write him a note, telling him what you know about the vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for an interview.April 13, 2000 Dear George,A piece of good news for you! I’ve read on thenotice board that the university library is looking for a part-time library assistant who can work at weekends.I know that you’ve been looking for a part-time job.Indeed, it is not high paid, but you are only supposed to work at weekends. Why not go for an interview?Y ours,CathyModel of Note-writing (TEM4-1999)Direction: Y ou have learned that your friend Jimmy is ill these days. Write him a note expressing your concern, asking after his health and giving your best wishes.April 15, 1999 Dear Jimmy,I feel sorry to learn that you’re down with a badcold. Are you feeling better now? I really want to go and see you, but I’m up to my neck in my thesis, which is due this Friday. Anyway, I’ll come to you as soon as I finish it. Best wished for your early recovery.Y ours,JackModel of Note-writing (TEM4-1998)Direction: Y ou are Mark or Sally. Y ou have got a ticket to a computer fair, but you now find that you are unable to go. Write a note to your friend, George, explaining why you are sending the enclosed ticket to him and telling him briefly how to get there.April 20, 1998 Dear George,I’ve got a ticket for a computer fair to be held in Fuzhou University, but I won’t be able to attend it because I must go to Shanghai on business this weekend. I know you’ve always been interested in computers and I’m sending the ticket to you. Please find it enclosed. Y ou may take Bus 101 to get there.Have a good time!Y ours,Mike3。
便条信英语作文
便条信英语作文Title: Writing a Note in English。
Writing a note, whether it's a friendly message, a reminder, or a formal communication, is a valuable skill in English. A well-crafted note can convey your message effectively and leave a positive impression on the recipient. In this essay, we will explore the elements of writing a note in English and provide examples toillustrate each point.1. Identify the Purpose: Before writing your note, it's essential to identify the purpose. Are you expressing gratitude, extending an invitation, giving instructions, or conveying important information? Understanding the purpose will help you tailor your message accordingly.2. Start with a Greeting: Begin your note with an appropriate greeting based on your relationship with the recipient. For instance, "Dear [Name]," is suitable forformal notes, while "Hi [Name]," or "Hello [Name]," may be used for informal ones.3. Express the Main Message: Clearly express the main message of your note in a concise and polite manner. Use simple language and avoid ambiguity. For example:Thank you for your kind hospitality during my visit.I would like to invite you to dinner next Friday.Please remember to submit your report by the end of the week.4. Provide Additional Details: Depending on the nature of your note, you may need to provide additional details such as time, date, location, or any specific instructions. Organize the information logically to ensure clarity. For instance:The dinner will be held at my place at 7:00 PM.The meeting has been rescheduled to Monday at 10:00 AM in Conference Room A.Please find attached the documents you requested.5. Closing Remarks: Conclude your note with appropriate closing remarks that reflect the tone of your message. This could be a simple "Thank you," "Looking forward to seeing you," or "Best regards," followed by your name. For example:Thank you once again for your assistance.I hope you can join us for the event.Best regards, [Your Name]6. Check for Clarity and Politeness: Before finalizing your note, read it through to ensure clarity and politeness. Avoid using jargon or slang that may not be familiar to the recipient. Also, check for spelling and grammatical errors.Now, let's put these elements together in a sample note:---。
notewriting范文
notewriting范文英文回答:Note writing is an essential skill that allows us to communicate effectively in various situations. Whether it's leaving a message for a colleague, expressing gratitude, or simply jotting down important information, note writing plays a crucial role in our daily lives. In this response, I will discuss the importance of note writing and provide examples to illustrate its significance.First and foremost, note writing is a convenient way to convey information concisely. In our fast-paced world, time is of the essence, and note writing allows us to quickly communicate important details without the need for lengthy conversations or explanations. For instance, if I need to remind my roommate to buy groceries, I can simply leave a note on the fridge with a list of items needed. This saves both of us time and ensures that the message is delivered accurately.Furthermore, note writing allows us to express our thoughts and emotions in a thoughtful manner. Sometimes, we may find it challenging to articulate our feelings verbally. In such cases, writing a note can provide a platform for us to express ourselves more effectively. For example, if I want to apologize to a friend for a misunderstanding, I can write a heartfelt note expressing my remorse and explaining my perspective. This allows me to carefully choose my words and ensure that my message is conveyed sincerely.In addition, note writing can serve as a documentation tool. When we jot down important information, such as meeting minutes or project updates, we create a written record that can be referred back to in the future. This is particularly useful in professional settings where accurate documentation is crucial. For instance, if I attend a team meeting and need to remember the action items discussed, I can take notes during the meeting and refer back to them later. This ensures that I don't miss any important details and helps me stay organized.中文回答:写便条是一项重要的技能,它使我们能够在各种情况下有效地进行沟通。
专四便条写作-Note_Writing
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• 1、便条的时间; • 2、写便条者与收便条者之间的关系; • 3、情景的正式程度。根据情景确定适当的称呼和署名, 确定所用语言的语体。 • 4、仔细检查格式是否正确,内容表达是否清楚,用词是 否准确得体,句子结构是否符合语法。
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• Key Note: (1) Ask for a leave; (2) Reasons; (3) Apology • sample
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• Sample: • Jan. 6 • Dear Professor Chen, • I am sorry that I can’t attend this morning’s reading class because I have to take Jane to the hospital. She is running a high fever and can’t possibly go by herself. I will try to make up today’s lesson by consulting the other students’ notes when we come back. • Yours sincerely, • Lin Jing • 要点分析: • 1. 这是学生写给老师的请假条,语气和格式都应正式. • 2. 内容应包括: (1) 你要请假; (2) 原因; (3) 致歉 • 3. 补上课的内容为附加内容,有了更好.
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Notes-writing评分标准: 1. 格式不对扣1分 Back 2. 超字数或字数达不到扣1分 3. 语法、拼写错误3个扣1分。 主要内容是否交待清楚占最 大比重。 造成错误的原因 1.不写日期或日期格式不对,很多学生习惯将它写在右下方。 2.署名后不应该有任何标点符号,而很多学生习惯点上句号。 3.结束语与署名写在一行。 4.Yours写成Your 语言不得体,比如,对于很随便的情景,使用很正式的词。
Note-writing英语便条写作
Note-writing: An InvitationI. The following sentences go together to form an invitation. Working in groups oftwo or three, put them in the right order and in three paragraphs.17 March, 2006 Dear Tom,1.The first person they wish to invite is you, my childhood pal.2.We’ll be expecting you any time after six.3.My parents are giving a dinner party to mark the occasion.4.Imagine, there are already twenty long years behind me!5.See you then.6.Next Monday is my 20th birthday.7.No wonder I feel old!8.Indeed, all of those 20 years are more or less associated with you.Yours,Dick II. I n a note of invitation one usually states:1.the occasion for the invitation2.the reason for inviting the addressee (optional)3.the time and the place4.the hope of having the invitation accepted / of receiving an answer5.the reason for this (optional)III. Reference version:17 March, 2006 Dear Tom,Next Monday is my 20th birthday. Imagine, there are already twenty years behind me! No wonder I feel old!My parents are giving a dinner party to mark the occasion. The first person they wish to invite is you, my childhood pal. Indeed, all of those 20 years are more or less associated with you.We’ll be expecting you any time after six. See you then.Yours,DickNote-writing: An InvitationI. Discuss in groups of two or three and write an invitation in three paragraphs,using the cues given below.24 March, 2006 // Mary and John // just move / suburban district / southwestern Shanghai // everything / more or less / orderly / house-warming party / coming Saturday afternoon, 11 June // see for yourselves / living / country / not terrible / after all / what with / fresh air / clear sky / subway / city proper / in no time // sure / have good time / Saturday // many old friends / coming // give / ring / say / coming // Jill and JackII. R eference version:24 March, 2006 Dear Mary and John,We have just moved to a suburban district in southwestern Shanghai. Now that everything is more or less orderly again, we are going to have a house-warming party this coming Saturday afternoon, 11 June.We want you to see for yourself that living in the country is not so terrible after all, what with the fresh air, clear sky and, above all, the subway that can take us to the city proper almost in no time.We will have a good time on Saturday, we are sure. Many old friends are coming, too. Give us a ring to say that you are coming.Yours,Jill and JackUnit 3Note-writing: A Note Accepting an InvitationI. The following sentences go together to form a note accepting an invitation.Working in groups of two or three, put them in the right order. Add linking words where necessary.31 March, 2006 Dear Rebecca,1.I’m a little surprised that you seem quite happy with your new ho use.2.I’d be only too glad to come and see for myself.3.You can count on me to be punctual.4.Thank you for asking me to come to your house-warming party.5.Looking forward to seeing you.6.Do you want me to come earlier to help?7.I have long heard that you’ve move d to the suburbs, away from all kinds ofconveniences.8.You’re quite a green hand at housekeeping, as is known to all.Love,Kate II. A note accepting an invitation usually includes:1.appreciation of being invited2.his / her certainty of having a good time3.his / her assurance of being punctual // his / her apology for having to be late(optional)4.his / her offer of help (optional)5.his / her looking forward to the occasionIII. Reference version:31 March, 2006 Dear Rebecca,Thank you for asking me to come to your house-warming party. I have long heard that you’ve moved to the suburbs, away from all kinds of conveniences. I’m a little surpr ised that you seem quite happy with your new house. I’d be only too glad to come and see for myself. You can count on me to be punctual. You’re quite a green hand at housekeeping, as is known to all. Do you want me to come earlier to help? Looking forward to seeing you.Love,KateUnit 4Note-writing: A Note Accepting an InvitationI. Discuss in groups of two or three and write a note accepting an invitation, usingthe cues given below.8 April, 2006 // Bill // happy / inform / alumni get-together // meet / old friend / chat / old days // incidentally / you / know / Prof. Chadi / arrive / yesterday // think / his presence / meeting / more memorable // he / be reached / 84123348 // I / prompt // count / days / see / all // MartinII. R eference version:8 April, 2006 Dear Bill,I’m happy to be informed of our alumni get-together. Surely I will meet many old friends and we’ll be able to chat over days long gone by. Incidentally, do you know that Prof. Chadi arrived in our city yesterday? I think his presence will make our meeting more memorable. He can be reached by phone no. 84123348.Yes, I’ll be prompt. I’m counting the days to see you all.Yours,MartinUnit 5Note-writing: A Note Declining an InvitationI. The following sentences go together to form a note declining an invitation.Working in groups of two or three, put them in the right order. Add linking words where necessary.14 April, 2006 Dear Rebecca,9.But, alas, I must stay away from this gala occasion, which, to me, isexcruciatingly painful.10.You see, I’ve been down with the flu for some time now.11.It really breaks my heart to miss this great party.12.Thank you for inviting me to your 20th birthday party.13.And I was told that I wouldn’t be able to recover soon.14.I can’t pass on the virus to you all.15.All the same, my heartiest congratulations!Yours,Kate II. A note declining an invitation usually includes:6.appreciation of being invited7.reasons for not being able to attend8.regret for missing such an occasion9.extending felicitation, etc, should the occasion requireIII. Reference version:14 April, 2006 Dear Rebecca,Thank you for inviting me to your 20th birthday party. But, alas, I must stay away from this gala occasion, which, to me, is excruciatingly painful. You see, I’ve been down with the flu for some time now. And I was told that I wouldn’t be able to recover soon. I can’t pass on the virus to you all. It really breaks my heart to miss this great party! All the same, my heartiest congratulations!Yours,KateUnit 6Note-writing: A Note Declining an InvitationI. Discuss in groups of two or three and write a note declining an invitation, usingthe cues given below.9 April, 2006 // Wenhua // thanks / chamber music concert / golden wedding anniversary / grandparents // I / ought to be / there / appointment / Professor Zhang / leave for / United States / next day / afraid / I not / present // dreadfully sorry / absent / important occasion // their kindness / when I child / be remembered / with gratitude // also regret / miss / chamber music / adore // extend / heartiest congratulations / grandma // MinhaoII. R eference version:9 April, 2006 Dear Wenhua,Thanks for inviting me to the chamber music concert to be given at the golden wedding anniversary party of your grandparents. I really ought to be there, but as I have an appointment with Professor Zhang, who is leaving for the United States the next day, I’m afraid I can’t be present. I’m dreadfully sorry to have to be absent from this very important occasion. Indeed, their kindness to me when I was a child has always been remembered with gratitude. I also regret to have to miss the chamber music, which I adore. Please extend my heartiest congratulations to your grandpa and grandma.Yours,MinhaoUnit 7Note-writing: A Note Canceling an AppointmentI. The following sentences go together to form a note canceling an appointment.Working in groups of two or three, put them in the right order. Add linking words where necessary.14 April, 2006 Dear Mr. Grayson,16.Will you please see to it that some one else takes my place?17.I was just informed that Prof. Ian Henderson would arrive in Shanghai tomorrowat 10:00 a.m.18.That will certainly cause you much trouble.19.I regret that I can’t come to interview Mr. Song with you tomorrow morning.20.I was asked to meet him at the airport as he is our much respected senior advisor.21.My regrets.22.Sorry to give you such short notice.Paul White II. A note canceling an appointment usually includes:10.what appointment it is11.the reason to cancel it12.suggestion to make up for it (optional)13.expressing regretsIII. Reference version:7 July, 2006 Dear Mr. Grayson,I was just informed that Prof. Ian Henderson would arrive in Shanghai tomorrow at 10:00 a.m. I was asked to meet him at the airport as he is our much respected senior advisor. I regret that I can’t come to interview Mr. Song with you tomorrow morning. Will you please see to it that some one else takes my place? Sorry to give you such short notice. This will certainly cause you much trouble. My regrets.Paul WhiteUnit 8Note-writing: A Note Canceling an AppointmentI. Discuss in groups of two or three and write a note canceling an appointment,using the cues given below.12 October, 2006 // Xiaogang // given / unexpected assignment / yesterday // write / report / our study / mystery of memory / busy / coming week // impossible / attend / alumni meeting / next Sunday // say “hello” / old pals // thanks // regrets // Ningan II. R eference version:12 October, 2006 Dear Xiaogang,I was given an unexpected assignment yesterday. I was to write a report on our study of the mystery of memory, and I’ll be busy for the coming week. So it is impossible for me to attend the alumni meeting next Sunday. Please say “hello” to all of our old pals. Thank you. My deepest regrets.NinganUnit 9Note-writing: A Note of CondolenceI. The following sentences go together to form a note of condolence. Put them in the right order.27 July, 20___ Dear Lilian,1.Imagine such a sturdy little boy could have been struck down by meningitis.2.Please convey our profoundest condolences to your brother and sister-in-law.3.It grieved us beyond words to learn that your little nephew is no more.4.Please extend the same to your parents as well.5.His happy laughter still rings in our ears.Ellen, Fanny and Grace II.In a note of condolence, we usually include the following:1.the distress at hearing the sad news,2.some good words about the departed,3.expressing regrets at his / her passing away,4.some comforting words,5.extending condolences.Reference version:27 July, 20___ Dear Lilian,It grieved us beyond words to learn that your little nephew is no more. Imagine such a sturdy little boy could have been struck down by meningitis. His happy laughter still rings in our ears. Please convey our profoundest condolences to your brother and sister-in-law. Please extend the same to your parents as well.Ellen, Fanny and GraceUnit 10Note-writing: A Note of CondolenceI. Write a note of condolence, using the following cues.19 May, 20 ___ // Nancy // just read / newspaper / sad news // hardly believe / our eyes / brother Clyde / victim / plane crash // deeply grieved / loss / dear friend / brilliant young executive // extend / condolences / your parents // best regards / you all // Connie and ConradII. Reference version:19 May, 20 ____ Dear Nancy,We just read in the newspaper about the sad news. We could hardly believe oureyes when we saw that your brother Clyde could have been a victim of the plane crash. We’re deeply grieved by the loss of a dear friend, a brilliant young executive. Please extend our condolences to your parents. With best regards to you all.Connie and ConradUnit 11Note-writing: A Note Accompanying a PresentI. Put the following sentences into the right order to form a note accompanying a present. Work in groups of two or three.March 22, 2006 Dear Meili,1.It reminded me of your English studies.2.I hope it will be helpful to you.3.I happened to come across this Student’s Dictionary of English Phrasal Verbs atthe Foreign Language Book Store this morning.4.And I have wanted to do something to help make your studies easier for you.5.Here it is as a reward for your hard work.6.I have always appreciated your work style, so earnest and meticulous.Love,Aunt Mabel II. A note accompanying a present usually includes:1.the reason of sending the present,2.the hope that the present will suit the receiver.Reference version:March 22, 2006 Dear Meili,I happened to come across this Student’s Dictionary of English Phrasal Verbs at the Foreign Language Book Store this morning. It reminded me of your English studies. I have always appreciated your work style, so earnest and meticulous. And I have wanted to do something to help make your studies easier for you. Here it is as a reward for your hard work. I hope it will be helpful to you.Love,Aunt MabelUnit 12Note-writing: A Note Accompanying a GiftI. Discuss in groups of two or three, write a note accompanying a gift, using the cues given below.27 December, 2005 // Yaoliang // been told / you / work hard / paper / day and night // here / CD chamber music / provide you / lover of serious music / relaxation / soothe / nerves // call / finish / work / then / hearty talk // best wishes / coming year // Weibo II. Reference version:December 27, 2005 Dear Yaoliang,I have been told that you’ve been working hard on your paper day and night. Here is a CD of chamber music, which I think may provide you, a lover of serious music, with some relaxation and soothe your nerves. Call me when you have finished your work, then we can have a hearty talk. Best wishes for the coming year!Yours,Weibo。
Note Writing,英语便条写作
Wish for your allowance. 4.请求: • I hope this request will not trouble you too much . 5.申请: • I will be greatly grateful if you would grant me a chance
③Avoid grammatical errors;
Note-Writing
Layout of Notes:
• 称谓(salutation), 内容(Body)
• 日期(Date)
(Complimentary close) 署名(signature)
I.格式
• 1. 日期(位置在右上角) :
• 正确的写法:
①Is the note quite formal, informal or colloquial in language?
②Use different styles on different occasions and display your ability to use language appropriately;
• 2、Complete in content:
Understanding the instructions;Understanding the situation;Covering the gist/main points;Dictation of some model notes;
• 3、Appropriate in language:
• Notes-writing评分标准: • 1.格式不对扣1-2分 • 2.超字数或字数达不到扣1-2分 • 3.语法、拼写错误3个扣1分。 • 4. 主要内容是否交待清楚占最大比重,3-4分。 • • 造成错误的原因 • 1.不写日期或日期格式不对。 • 2.署名后不应有任何标点符号,切忌点上句号。 • 3.要求的信息点未能一一点到。 • 4.语言不得体。
英语专业四级考试便条写作1
Part I: Note-writing(便条写作)---格式
一. 基本写作格式:(称呼顶格,日期在右,首行
缩进,署名签在后)
1)Date:便条日期 2)Salutation:称呼 3)Body:正文 4)Signature:署名
Part I: Note-writing(便条写作) ---格式
1)Date:日期(写在右上角) 具体年月日,星期几,或具体的时刻 方式:一般把年份写在月、日的后面。另外,英文日期的月、 日与年之间通常用逗号隔开。例如,2005年5月11日有以下写 法: • May 11, 2005(最普遍) • 11 May, 2005 • May 11th, 2005 • 11th May, 2005
Note-writing(便条写作)
Note-writing(便条写作) ---介绍
英语专业四级考试大纲写便条的要求是,“根 据提示写大约50-60词的通知、便条、请贴等。要 求格式正确,语言得体。” 英语专业四级考试大纲 的要求其实也TEM4 便条制定了评分标准。TEM4便条的评分往往从格 式、内容、语言、字数这四方面来考虑。因此,要 想写好TEM4便条,就必须掌握TEM4便条的基本 要求,注意TEM4便条写作中常见的问题,以便对 症下药,充分发挥自己的英文写作水平。一TEM4 便条的基本要求
Part I: Note-writing(便条写作) ---格式
2)Salutation:称呼(日期下一两行,左顶格) 称呼时,一般只需在其名字前加Dear即可,如 Dear Susan, Dear Tom。 若此人有头衔(social title),称呼时,便要保留其头衔,例如 Dr.Herce,要称Dear Dr.Pierce,不称Dear Pierce。 如果提示中的另一方是以Mrs Wang或Mr Wang出现,称呼时 也只需在其前加Dear便可,即称Dear Mrs Wang或Dear MrWang,若只称Dear Wang则视为不妥。
note-writing便条写作
Guided writing II
According to the following cues, write a telephone message. 3 August, 2007// Dr. Lee// Mr. Mills/ call/ 9:10 a.m.// ask/ you/ agree/ cancel/ three o’clock/ appointment// he/ ardent stamp collector/ offer/ stamp/ make up/ set of rare stamps/ he/ have// not want/ miss/ chance// he/ sorry/ sudden change/ plan/ request/ another appointment/ next week// Marilyn
Yours faithfully BrE used to end a formal letter that begins 'Dear Sir' or 'Dear Madam' Yours truly/Yours also Yours sincerely BrE Sincerely yours AmE
Guided writing II
In writing a telephone message, it is necessary to give the name of the person who called and the exact time of call. The message must be stated clearly and in good order.
Very sincerely yours ,Very respectfully yours, Very truly yours ,Sincerely yours 或Yours sincedrely,Respectfully yours 或Yours respectfully Faithfully yours 或 Yours faithfully.如果前面称姓,则应选择下列是结束语: Sincerely yours 或Yours sincerely ,Truly yours 或Yours truly ,Yours ever. 如果前面称 名,则表示写信人与收信人的关系亲近友好,应 选择下列结束语:Sincerely Yours,Love,All my love.
note-writing的格式
1)道歉便条(Note of Apology)具体内容:写这类便条时,一般首先向对方道歉,承认自己的错误,而后监视原因,最后提出弥补或补救的具体措施。
常用表达法:I sincerely apologize for…I must apologize for (not) doing…Please accept my sincere apologies for…Please excuse me for my carelessness.I’m afraid…I feel awful about…I’m terribly / very sorrySorry about…2)询问便条(Note of Request)具体内容:写询问便条时先要说明请求帮助的原因,以及求助的具体内容或细节;而后向对方表示感谢常用表达法:Could you please…Would it be possible to …Would you mind doing …Could you possible…I would be grateful if you would …I wonder if you co uld ….I would quite appreciate it if you could…I’m writing to ask you to …3) 建议便条(Note of Suggestions)具体内容:写这类便条时,先要交待事情的起因,而后根据便条的具体要求提出相应的建议。
常用表达法:I’d like to suggest that…May I suggest that…Could you please…Perhaps we could…4) 祝贺便条(Note of Congratulations)具体内容:这类便条一般包括以下几个要点:首先,复述值得祝贺的事情以及自己听到喜讯的心情;其次,对值得祝贺的事做积极的评价;最后,表示自己衷心的祝福。
Note Writing,英语便条写作
3、情景的正式程度。根据情景确定适当的称 呼和署名,确定所用语言的语体。
4、仔细检查格式是否正确,内容表达是否清 楚,用词是否准确得体,句子结构是否符合语 法。
Types of Notes
1. Declining an Invitation 2. Passing Information 3. Asking for Information 4. Taking Leave 5. Asking for Help 6. Asking for Permission 7. Expressing Regrets 8. Expressing Congratulation 9. Expressing Good Wishes 10. Making Complaints 11. Other types
Sample:
Oct. 18
Dear Everyone,
We can’t thank you enough for the invitation to see the film. However, next Wednesday is not a good time for us because we are going to take part in our school’s drama contest. Could we make it some other time? We are really sorry for not being able to go.
Common Types of Notes
1. Declining an Invitation Task: You received a note from your sister dorm room
专四便条Note-writing
Note-writing1.A Note of IntroductionⅠ. The following sentences go together to form a note of introduction, but they are in the wrong order. Work in groups of two or three, put them right.1 June, 2005Dear Mr. Sullivan,He is a linguistics student at our university.This is to introduce Mr. Hu Ming.Any assistance rendered him would be highly appreciated.Mr. Hu is looking for a teaching assistant’s post. Thank you.Sincerely yours,Geoffrey JacksonⅡ. Notes must be precise and to the point; the style is casual. In notes of introduction, the following are usually included:The name of the person to be introducedHis/Her identityThe purpose of the introductionAppreciationReference version:1 June, 2005Dear Mr. Sullivan,This is to introduce Mr. Hu Ming. He is a linguistics student at our university. Mr. Hu is looking for a teaching assistant’s post. Any assistance rendered him would be highly appreciated. Thank you.Sincerely yours,Geoffrey JacksonⅢ. Discuss in groups of two or three the cues given below and then write a note of introduction.16 October, 2005 // Mr. Wang // Liu Li / English literature student // paper / modern English literature // appreciate / help / locate / reference books / need / badly // thank // Liang BeijunReference version:16 October, 2005Dear Mr. Wang,Liu Li is an English literature student. She is presently working on a paper on modern English literature. I would appreciate it if you could help her locate some reference books she needs badly. Thank you.Liang Beijun2.A Note of InvitationⅠ. The following sentences go together to form a note of invitation, but they are in the wrong order. Work in groups of two or three, put them in the right order.1 June, 2005Dear Meili,We would like to have you join us, as we know you are one of the classical music lovers.Hoping to see you on Saturday.Symphony No. 9 by Beethoven will be on the program.We are going to have a music appreciation evening in our classroom this coming Saturday.The time is 7:30 p.m.Drop me a line if you are interested.Yours,Wang FangⅡ. A note of invitation should state precisely:What invitation it isThe time and the placeThe pleasure of seeing the addressee on that occasionA reply is expected. (In some, this is not mentioned.) It is evident that Meili and Wang Fang are close frien ds, thus Wang Fang signs herself as “yours”.Reference version:1 June, 2005Dear Meili,We are going to have a music appreciation evening in our classroom this coming Saturday. The time is 7:30 p.m. Symphony No. 9 by Beethoven will be on the program. We would like to have you join us, as we know you are one of the classical music lovers. Drop me a line if you are interested. Hoping to see you on Saturday.Yours,Wang FangⅢ. Working in groups of two or three, discuss the cues listed below. Then write a note of invitation.17 September 2005 // Frank // sports meet / Thursday,25 September / university // sports stars / participate / show skills // lot / friends / here // tea party afterwards // call or write / coming // GeraldReference version:17 September, 2005Dear Frank,There will be a sports meet on Thursday, 25 September, in our university. Some sports stars will participate to show their skills. Lots of our friends will be there, too. And there will be a tea party afterwards. Call or write to say that you are coming.Yours,Gerald3.A Telephone MessageI. The following sentences go together to form a telephone message, but they are in scrambled order. Work in groups of two or three, put them right.10 a.m., 1 MarchProf. Johnson,He sent his regards to Mrs. Johnson. /He said his rheumatism prevented him from leaving the house in this nasty weather. /Prof. Smith called at 9:50 a.m. /So he would not be able to come to discuss the energy project with you and your colleagues. / He asked to be excused.MaryII. In writing a telephone message, it is necessary to give the name of the person who called and the exact time of call. The message must be stated clearly and in good order.Reference version:10 a.m., 1 MarchProf. Johnson,Prof. Smith called at 9:50 a.m. He said his rheumatism prevented him from leaving the house in this nasty weather. So he would not be able to come to discuss the energy project with you and your colleagues. He asked to be excused. He sent his regards to Mrs. Johnson.MaryⅢ. Working in groups of two or three, discuss the cues given below and write a telephone message.3 November, 2005 // Dr. Lee // Mr. Mills / call / 9:10a.m. // ask / you / agree / cancel / three o’clock / appointment // he / ardent stamp collector / offer / stamp / make up / set of rare stamps / he / have // not want / miss / chance // he / sorry/ sudden change / plan / request / another appointment / next week // MarilynReference version:Dr. Lee,Mr. Mills called at 9:10 a.m. He asked if you would agree to cancel his three o’clock appointment. He, an ardent stamp collector, was offered a stamp that could make up a complete set of rare stamps that he had had. He did not want to miss this chance. He was sorry for this sudden change of plan and requested that another appointment be made for next week.Marilyn4.A Thank-you NoteⅠ.The following sentences go together to form a thank-you note, but they are in the wrong order. Working in groups of two or three, put them right.26 December, 2005Dear Aunt Mabel,I did need a more sophisticated recorder.Again a million thanks!Thank you for your wonderful gift.The old one that I have has seen me mature from a lanky school boy to a college student.Indeed, it has more than served its purpose.How could you possibly have known?Remember? It was also a present from you.Note-writingA Thank-you NoteⅡ.In writing a note of thanks, besides expressing our gratitude, we also show our pleasure at the gift itself, for example, we may say that it is exquisite or it is just what we want, etc. We may also show our appreciation of the sender’s considerations or his/hercleverness at picking out the right thing.Reference version:6 December, 2005Dear Aunt Mabel,Thank you for your wonderful gift! How could you possibly have known? I did need a more sophisticated recorder. The old one that I have has seen me mature from a lanky school boy to a college student. Indeed, it has more than served its purpose. Remember? It was also a present from you. Again a million thanks!Your loving nephew,HenryⅢ.Working in groups of two or three, discuss the cues given below and write a thank-you note.2 January, 2005// Father// pleasure/ return home/ weekend// exquisite computer/ my desk// not latest model/ enough/ me// make studies easier/ save time//you/ thoughtful// lucky/ son// thanks// MikeReference version:2, Jan. 2005Dear Father,Imagine my pleasure when I returned home for the weekend! An exquisite computer on my desk! Though not of the latest model, it’s more than enough for me. It will not only make my studies easier, but will save me a lot of time as well. Dear Father, you are always so thoughtful. It’s indeed lucky to be your son!A million thanks!Love,Mike5.A Note of CongratulationⅠ.The following sentences go together to form a note of congratulation. Work in groups of two or three, combine some of the sentences together, and then put the sentences in good order.20 November, 2005Dear Prof. Cai,Please accept our heartiest congratulations!We know, of course, how you’ve worked.We have just been informed.Your lifework on elementary Chinese teaching methodology had been fully recognized during the International Conference on Language Education. We are your students.This is the first honour ever won by a Chinese scholar. Your article “Teaching Chinese as a Foreign Language” was awarded first prize.You’re fully worthy of it!Respectfully yours,Ron, Mabel, Kay, PeteⅡ.In writing a note of congratulation, one usuallyrelates how he/she hears of the good news, what the good news is, how he/she is happy for the addressee … , and then extends his/her congratulations.Reference version:Dear Prof. Cai,We have just been informed that your lifework on elementary Chinese teaching methodology had been fully recognized during the recent InternationalConference on Language Education where your article “Teaching Chinese as a Foreign Language” was awarded first prize. This is the first honour ever won by a Chinese scholar. Since we are your students, we know, of course, how you’ve worked. You are fully worthy of it! Please accept our heartiest congratulations!Respectfully yours,Ron, Mabel, Kay, PeteⅢ.Working in groups of two or three, write a note of congratulation with the following cues.1 April, 2005 // Henry // newspaper / you / 2nd prize / National Photo Contest // congratulations // also learn / you / only amateur participant / only / first your college student // your parents / very proud / especially / father / train / you / this hobby // again / felicitations / you all // EdwardReference Version:1 April, 2005Dear Henry,I read from the newspaper that you were awarded the second prize at the National Photo Contest. Congratulations! I also learned that you were the only amateur participant, and you are only a first-year college student. Your parents must be very proud of you, especially your father, who has trained you in this hobby. Again my felicitations to you all!Edward6.A note that gives informationⅠ.Put the following sentences into the right order to form a note that gives some information. Work in groups of two or three.22 August, 2005Dear Liuping,It is expected that everyone in our class will participate, so that he can get to know our department and his future students.He will give us a series of lectures on banking.This is to inform you that Prof. John Jefferson has arrived in Shanghai.We are going to have a welcome party in his honour. Please write if you cannot come.The date is set for next Thursday, 26 August, at 3 p.m., at the College Guest House.Huang AnⅡ.In writing a note that gives information, one must state the news / information clearly. Since it is a note, it should be short and to the point.Reference version:22 August, 2005Dear Liuping,This is to inform you that Prof. John Jefferson has arrived in Shanghai. He will give a series of lectures on banking. We are going to have a welcome party in his honour. The date is set for next Thursday, 26 August, at 3 p.m., at the College Guest House. It is expected that everyone in our class will participate, so that he can get to know our Department and his future students. Please write if you cannot come. Huang AnⅢ.Write a note that gives some information, using the cues given below.6 February, 2005 // Albert // new magazines / from Kim // articles / rare stamps / of interest to / philatelist / you // I / inkling / you / switch / attention / rare stamps //come / get / magazines // home / most evenings // drop in // KenReference version6 February, 2005Dear Albert,I have recently received some new magazines from Kim. There are some articles on rare stamps which may be of great interest to a philatelist like you. Furthermore, I have an inkling that you have switched your attention to rare stamps. Come and get the magazines. I’ll be home during most evenings. Just drop in.Ken7.A Note of InvitationIn a note of invitation, one usually states:1)the occasion for the invitation2)2)the reason for inviting the addressee (optional)3)the time and the place4)4)the hope of having the invitation accepted / of receiving an answer5)the reason for this (optional)I. The following sentences go together to form an invitation. Working in groups of two or three, put them in the right order and in three paragraphs.17 March, 2006Dear Tom,The first person they wish to invite is you, my childhood pal.We’ll be expecting you any time after six.My parents are giving a dinner party to mark the occasion.Imagine, there are already twenty long years behind me! No wonder I feel old!See you then.Next Monday is my 20th birthday.Indeed, all of those 20 years are more or less associated with you.Yours,DickReference version:17 March, 2006Dear Tom,Next Monday is my 20th birthday. Imagine, there are already twenty years behind me! No wonder I feel old!My parents are giving a dinner party to mark the occasion. The first person they wish to invite is you, my childhood pal. Indeed, all of those 20 years are more or less associated with you.We’ll be expecting you any time after six. See you then.ours,DickⅡ. Discuss in groups of two or three and write an invitation in three paragraphs, using the cues given below.24 March, 2007 // Mary and John // just move / suburban district / southwestern Shanghai // everything / more or less / orderly / house-warming party / coming Saturday afternoon, 11 June // see for yourselves / living / country / not terrible / after all / what with / fresh air / clear sky / subway / city proper / in no time // sure / have good time / Saturday // many old friends / coming // give / ring / say / coming // Jill and Jack4 March, 2007Dear Mary and John,We have just moved to a suburban district in southwestern Shanghai. Now that everything is moreor less orderly again, we are going to have a house-warming party this coming Saturday afternoon, 11 June.We want you to see for yourself that living in the country is not so terrible after all, what with the fresh air, clear sky and, above all, the subway that can take us to the city proper almost in no time.We will have a good time on Saturday, we are sure. Many old friends are coming, too. Give us a ring to say that you are coming.8.A Note Accepting an InvitationA note accepting an invitation usually includes:appreciation of being invitedhis / her certainty of having a good timehis / her assurance of being punctual // his / her apology for having to be late (optional)his / her offer of help (optional)his / her looking forward to the occasionI. The following sentences go together to form a note accepting an invitation. Working in groups of two orthree, put them in the right order. Add linking words where necessary.31 March, 2007Dear Rebecca,I’m a little surprised that you seem quite happy with your new house.I’d be only too glad to come and see for myself.You can count on me to be punctual.Thank you for asking me to come to your house-warming party.Looking forward to seeing you.Do you want me to come earlier to help?I have long heard that you’ve moved to the suburbs, away from all kinds of conveniences.You’re quite a green hand at housekeeping, as is known to all.Love,KateReference version:Dear Rebecca,Thank you for asking me to come to your house-warming party. I have long heard that you’ve moved to the suburbs, away from all kinds of conveniences. I’m a little surprise d that you seem quite happy with your new house. I’d be only too glad to come and see for myself. You can count on me to be punctual. You’re quite a green hand at housekeeping, as is known to all. Do you want me to come earlier tohelp? Looking forward to seeing you.Love,KateⅡ. Discuss in groups of two or three and write a note accepting an invitation, using the cues given below.8 April, 2007 // Bill // happy / inform / alumni get-together // meet / old friend / chat / old days // incidentally / you / know / Prof. Chadi / arrive / yesterday // think / his presence / meeting / more memorable // he / be reached / 84123348 // I / prompt // count / days / see / all // MartinReference version:April, 2007Dear Bill,I’m happy to be informed of our alumni get-together. Surely I will meet many old friends and we’ll be able to chat over days long gone by.Incidentally, do you know that Prof. Chadi arrived in our city yesterday? I think his presence will make our meeting more memorable. He can be reached by phone no. 84123348.Yes, I’ll be prompt. I’m counting the days to see you all.Yours,Martin9.A Note Declining an InvitationA note declining an invitation usually includes: appreciation of being invitedreasons for not being able to attendregret for missing such an occasionextending felicitation, etc, should the occasion requireI. The following sentences go together to form a note declining an invitation. Working in groups of two or three, put them in the right order. Add linking wordswhere necessary.14 April, 2006Dear Rebecca,But, alas, I must stay away from this gala occasion, which, to me, is excruciatingly painful.You see, I’ve been down with the flu for some time now.It really breaks my heart to miss this great party. Thank you for inviting me to your 20th birthday party.And I was told that I wouldn’t be able to recover soon.I can’t pass on the virus to you all.All the same, my heartiest congratulations!Yours,KateReference version:14 April, 2006Dear Rebecca,Thank you for inviting me to your 20th birthdayparty. But, alas, I must stay away from this gala occasion, which, to me, is excruciatingly painful. You see, I’ve been down with the flu for some time now. And I was told that I wouldn’t be able to recover soon.I can’t pass on the virus to you all. It really breaks my heart to miss this great party! All the same, my heartiest congratulations!Yours,KateⅡ. Discuss in groups of two or three and write a note declining an invitation, using the cues given below.9 April, 2006 // Wenhua // thanks / chamber music concert / golden wedding anniversary / grandparents // I / ought to be / there / appointment / Professor Zhang / leave for / United States / next day / afraid / I not / present // dreadfully sorry / absent / important occasion // their kindness / when I child / be remembered / with gratitude // also regret / miss / chamber music / adore // extend / heartiestcongratulations / grandma // MinhaoReference version:9 April, 2006Dear Wenhua,Thanks for inviting me to the chamber music concert to be given at the golden wedding anniversary party of your grandparents. I really ought to be there, but as I have an appointment with Professor Zhang, who is leaving for the United States the next day, I’m afraid I can’t be present. I’m dreadfully sorry to have to be absent from this very important occasion. Indeed, their kindness to me when I was a child has always been remembered with gratitude. I also regret to have to miss the chamber music, which I adore. Please extend my heartiest congratulations to your grandpa and grandma.Yours,Minhao10.A Note Canceling an AppointmentA note canceling an appointment usually includes: what appointment it isthe reason to cancel itsuggestion to make up for it (optional)expressing regretsI. The following sentences go together to form a note canceling an appointment. Working in groups of two or three, put them in the right order. Add linking words where necessary.14 April, 2006Dear Mr. Grayson,Will you please see to it that some one else takes my place?I was just informed that Prof. Ian Henderson would arrive in Shanghai tomorrow at 10:00 a.m.That will certainly cause you much trouble.I regret that I can’t come to interview Mr. Song with you tomorrow morning.I was asked to meet him at the airport as he is our much respected senior advisor.My regrets.Sorry to give you such short notice.Paul WhiteReference version:7 July, 2006Dear Mr. Grayson,I was just informed that Prof. Ian Henderson would arrive in Shanghai tomorrow at 10:00 a.m. I was asked to meet him at the airport as he is our much respected senior advisor. I regret that I can’t come to interview Mr. Song with you tomorrow morning. Will you please see to it that some one else takes my place? Sorry to give you such short notice. This will certainly cause you much trouble. My regrets.Paul WhiteⅡ. Discuss in groups of two or three and write a note canceling an appointment, using the cues given below.12 October, 2006 // Xiaogang // given / unexpected assignment / yesterday // write / report / our study / mystery of memory / busy / coming week // impossible / attend / alumni meeting / next Sunday // say “hello” / old pals // thanks // regrets // NinganReference version:12 October, 2006Dear Xiaogang,I was given an unexpected assignment yesterday.I was to write a report on our study of the mystery of memory, and I’ll be busy the coming week. So it is impossible for me to attend the alumni meeting next Sunday. Please say “hello” to all of our old pals. Thanks. My deepest regrets.Ningan11.A Note of CondolenceIn a note of condolence, we usually include the following:the distress at hearing the sad news,some good words about the departed,expressing regrets at his / her passing away,some comforting words,extending condolences.I. The following sentences go together to form a note of condolence. Put them in the right order.27 July, 2006Dear Lilian,Imagine such a sturdy little boy could have been struck down by meningitis.Please convey our profoundest condolences to your brother and sister-in-law.It grieved us beyond words to learn that your little nephew is no more.Please extend the same to your parents as well.His happy laughter still rings in our ears.Ellen, Fanny and GraceReference version:27 July, 2006Dear Lilian,It grieved us beyond words to learn that your little nephew is no more. Imagine such a sturdy little boy could have been struck down by meningitis. His happy laughter still rings in our ears. Please convey our profoundest condolences to your brother and sister-in-law. Please extend the same to your parents as well.Ellen, Fanny and GraceⅡ. Write a note of condolence, using the following cues.19 May, 20 ___ // Nancy // just read / newspaper / sad news // hardly believe / our eyes / brother Clyde / victim / plane crash // deeply grieved / loss / dear friend / brilliant young executive // extend / condolences / your parents // best regards / you all //Connie and ConradReference version:19 May, 20 _Dear Nancy,We just read in the newspaper about the sad news. We could hardly believe our eyes when we saw that your brother Clyde could have been a victim of the plane crash. We’re deeply grieved by the loss of a dear friend, a brilliant young executive. Please extend our condolences to your parents. With best regards to you all.Connie and Conrad便笺写作(Note Writing)便笺写作(Note Writing)实际上与书信写作(Letter Writing)大致相似,但有三点主要不同:1. 便笺较随便,因此语气通常更轻松,格式和语言都是如此。
英语专四Notewriting写作(优秀范文5篇)
英语专四Notewriting写作(优秀范文5篇)第一篇:英语专四Note writing 写作λ 2001年5月专业四级考试:λ Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note of about 50-60 words based on the followingsituation:Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.λλFormat2003年5月专业四级考试:SECTION B NOTE-WRITING [10 MIN.]Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Heading=solutationλλ英语应用文写作之便条写法(03/02)便条是一种简单的书信。
虽然内容简单,但却有其独特的风格。
主要目的是为了尽快地把最新的信息、通知、要求或者活动的时间、地点转告给对方。
常见的便条有欠条、留言和请假条等。
特点:文内语言尽量通俗口语化,简单扼要,直截了当,无需使用客套语言。
In a roundabout way便条虽简单,但中心务必突出,更要注明活动的时间及地点。
便条不需邮寄,不用信封。
通常请人代为转交。
有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。
基本写作格式便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。
但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素;1)Date:便条日期2)Salutation:称呼3)Body:正文4)Signature:署名样例欠条;留下字据,表示欠某人某物。
条据上需写明钱物名称和数量、立据人及日期。
不得涂改。
Sept.16th, 2002Borrowed from the Foreign Language Department Reference Library three books as follows: A copy of English History and Anthology of English Literature by Wu Weiren A copy of A Survey of American Literature by Chang Yaoxin A copy of World Literature by Jiang Chengen.Wu ZhuoFor the Office of Social Science Department留言;用书面留下要说的话。
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I.格式
1. 日期24th, 2012 / June 10,2012
June 24th
/ June 24
/ 10 June 2012
2. 称呼(位置在 日期下面一行左侧): 正确的写法: Dear Jack, / Dear Jack: / Dear Miss Gao,
Note Writing
Basic Requirements
1、Correct in form: Correct arrangement or organization of relevant information;Date ; Salutation;Details;The complimentary close;Signature; punctuation;Observe the model notes
正文第一句: I heard you were thinking
of… I hear you are thinking of… I have heard you are
thinking of…
正文第一句按照实际情况写,
如道歉式便条的结构安排:
Personal letter: ㈠I am sorry (道歉) ㈡解释原因(理由要充分) ㈢怎样弥补(根据要求来写) ㈣Thank you
③Avoid grammatical errors;
④Ensure that no difficulty is experienced by the reader.
Note-Writing
Layout of Notes:
称谓(salutation), 内容(Body)
日期(Date)
(Complimentary close) 署名(signature)
Best wishes.
Call me if you have any doubt. 11.广告、失物招领:
可以用address,telephone number,room number结尾 12. 寻找:
I am looking forward to your early reply. Thanks in advance.
II.内容
按便条具体内容的各项功能给分. 以2002年的 便条要求为例:
You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.
本便条内容必须包括以下三项:
1. Expressing your interest in the walkman.
2. Asking Jack about its condition.
3. Offering a price for it.
①Is the note quite formal, informal or colloquial in language?
②Use different styles on different occasions and display your ability to
use language appropriately;
Business letter: ㈠I am regretful (道歉)
I am honored that …but … ㈡解释原因(理由要充分) ㈢怎样弥补(根据要求来写) ㈣Thank you
正文的结尾:
最常用: I’m looking forward to your reply.
1.邀请: Please let me know whether you can make it.
an interview.
6.投诉:
If you can’t give me a satisfactory answer, I complain it to the Consumer Association. 7. 道歉:
Many apologies./ Do please forgive me.(进一步致歉)
/ Jack,
3. 结尾: 正确的写法: Yours sincerely, / Yours truly, / Yours,
Sincerely (Truly) yours, / Sincerely,
格式:称呼不与日期同一行,日期要与结尾同 一列。
署名不能用汉语拼音或打叉XXX, 位置在便 条结尾的右下方。
2、Complete in content: Understanding the instructions;Understanding the situation; Covering the gist/main points;Dictation of some model notes;
3、Appropriate in language:
Please give me a chance and I am waiting for your reply. 8.祝贺:
Congratulations again and all good wishes for your… 9.致谢:
I would like to express my gratitude, along with my best wishes. 10.留言:
2.拒绝邀请: I hope my absence will not cause you any serious
inconvenience(, have fun) . 3.请假:
Wish for your allowance. 4.请求: I hope this request will not trouble you too much . 5.申请: I will be greatly grateful if you would grant me a chance for