2018-2019学年高中英语人教版必修5 Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing——劝说信

Section ⅤWriting——劝说信
[写作技法指导]
[文体指导]
劝说信写作目的是向某个组织或个人提出劝说性的建议的一种应用文体。

在写作过程中，要以合理的语气和口吻为基调，用有说服力的素材来支撑自己的观点，以说明阐述为主，以理动人，以理服人。

我们可以通过以下三个部分来进行写作：
第一部分：引入。

写信人首先需要简要说明写信的主要目的。

第二部分：阐述。

这是劝说信的主体和核心部分。

写信人需要在这个部分有条理地列出自己的理由。

理由要力求客观、真实、有说服力，要重点突出、层次分明。

同时，要注意适当提高语言的力度，发挥语言的功力，以更好地展现自己的观点。

第三部分：总结。

这部分应该注意语言的简练和冲击力，切忌冗杂拖拉的表达。

写作中要注意下列几点：
1．话题的提出要开门见山，不要拖泥带水；
2．观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可；
3．论据要条理清楚，语言应准确、精炼；
4．主体时态多用一般现在时；
5．尽量避免同一单词、句型的重复使用，多采用同义词、相似结构以使表达多样化。

[亮点句式]
(一) 引入
1．I am writing to...
2．In my opinion, it is wrong to...
3．I don't think it is a very good way to...
4．As far as I am concerned, ...
5．In my opinion...
(二) 阐述
1．Here are my reasons. First of all, I think it would be better if...
2．The reasons for... are as follows. First, ... Second, ... Last but not least, ...
3．On the one hand, ...; on the other hand, ...
4．What's more...
5．No one can ignore the fact that...
6．If I were you, I would...
(三) 总结
1．In short...
2．All things considered...
3．To sum up...
4．In brief...
5．Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.
[满分佳作构建]
[写作任务]
假如你是高二学生李华，你的一个在外地读书的同学张力给你写信，向你诉说他最近因为身体不好而影响学习的情况，并且坦言自己平时学习忙，很少锻炼。

请根据这一情况给张力写一封说服信，鼓励他积极锻炼身体，从而为更好地学习打下基础。

注意：1．词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．尽可能运用本单元所学的词汇、句型和语法。

Dear Zhang Li,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua [审题谋篇]
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1．positive积极的
2．be absorbed in 全神贯注于
3．contribute to 有助于
4．draw a conclusion 得出结论
5．put forward 提出
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
(一)完成句子
1．你一直全神贯注于学习。

You have been absorbed in study.
2．结果，你没有时间锻炼身体。

As a result, you have no time for exercise.
3．这些时间被花费在锻炼上。

The time is spent on exercise.
4．你可能会认为这些时间被浪费了。

You may think the time is wasted.
5．当你有了强健的体魄时，才能继续你的学习。

When you have a strong body, you can keep on studying.
6．你不会感到任何的不舒服。

You won't feel bad.
(二) 句式升级
7．用so... that...合并句子1、2
You have been so absorbed in study that you have no time for exercise.
8．用过去分词短语作后置定语合并句子3、4
You may think that time spent on exercise is wasted.
【导学号：88982013】9．用only修饰状语从句和介词without合并句子5、6
Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad. [妙笔成篇]
【参考范文】
Dear Zhang Li，
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in study that you have no time for exercise, which is really harmful to your health. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you have a positive attitude to exercise in future.
You may draw a conclusion that time spent on exercise is wasted. In fact, exercise can contribute to your health a lot. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad. So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour's exercise every day from now on.
In short, as long as you exercise more, you will surely have a stronger body.
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua。