高考短文改错专题训练(含高考题、模拟题及答案解析)

A组2016～2014年各省市高考题
Passage 1(2016·全国Ⅰ)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.
Passage 2(2016·全国Ⅱ)
The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
Passage 3(2016·全国Ⅲ)
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didn’t seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
Passage 4(2016·四川)
It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular
in China now.
Mom has a full－time job，so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house，and then went on shopping.When he came back，I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest.At dinner，we said to her，“Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.
Passage 5(2016·浙江)
When I was a very young children，my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day，we’d greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there!
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
Passage 6(2015·新课标全国Ⅰ)
When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.
Passage 7(2015·新课标全国Ⅱ)
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that
he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
Passage 8(2015·四川)
Hi, Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
Passage 9(2015·陕西)
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits
with happy laughter!
Passage 10(2015·浙江)
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.
Passage 11(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)
Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then － for all these year－we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
Passage 12(2014·浙江)
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled
with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.
Passage 13(2014·四川)
Hello，boys and girls！Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don't panic or get out of line，and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If it's a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt，tell your teacher immediately.
Passage 14(2014·陕西)
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky－they were looked like rain！We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn't learn much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
Passage 15(2014·辽宁)
Dear Jeremy and Alice，
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors，we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word，your dog—Cleo.
We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside，Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock.That is too much for us，considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely，
Jack and Rose
B组2016～2015模拟精选题
Passage 1(2016·山西重点中学协作体模拟)
Having a good teacher do mean a lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have the one—Miss Brown, my English teacher.
Miss Brown is a charming lady always worn a big smile on her face. In the first class she introduced her and then asked us to say something about ourselves with English. When it was my turn, I felt too shy and fearful that I didn’t dare to say a word. She came up to me and said, “Don’t afraid. You can make it. Just have a try.”At last, I did it quite good. She praised me for that I had done. Never shall I forgot my first English class in senior high school.
Passage 2(2016·汉中市二次质检)
Smiling is auniversal language but can give us courage, confidence and comfort.
I still remember how upset I am when it was my turn to recite a poem before class.Feel nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give up, but all my classmates, especial my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their smile warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it up. I think smiling not only makes us happy but also
help build up our confidence. Furthermore, they will improve the relationship between us. It is smiling that brings harmony us. Only when you smile at the world does the world smile at you. Therefore, keep smiling and show your best to the world.
Passage 3(2016·临沂一模)
This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station.There were many passenger in the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one.I was thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her.Then he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address.But he only smile and said，“It’s my pleasure.”Then he left away quickly.I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love.
Passage 4(2016·株洲市质检)
Hi Lana，
I am 61 years old and I am fromNew Zealand. I start teaching in China last February.I decided that I reached 60 years I would like to do something different. I was lucky to have got a degree in English, that helped me find a job as a teacher in China. Now I work with two Canadian teacher. One, 57, has been here for four years, and the other, 63, have been teaching here for 6 years. He married with a lovely Chinese lady. The Chinese people are hard－working but the students are so willing to learn.
How an interesting country to live in!
I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found her tips on teaching so usefully.
Thank you!
Dave
Passage 5 (2016·宁夏六盘山二模)
Dear Joe，
Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you were interested in the 2017 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get a wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses provided. Also, activity are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, but you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certain add up the fun of the camp. Join in the camp and you will have the knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
Passage 6(2016·漳州八校联考)
Dear Peter，
I am writing to ask that you are able to do me a favor.I want to have
a penfriend，hopefully，a girl in her early twenties，and with interests similarly to mine.In my mind，he is someone interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis.However，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time.With such a pen friend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling，taking care pets，or whatever we have in common.I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her countries.I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Best regards，
Li Hua
Passage 7(2015·潍坊3月)
Dear Jack，
Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that
you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.
The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isn’t that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.
Yours，
Li Hua
Passage 8(2015·大连一模)
In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.It’s a long and bored journey.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street.
Passage 9(2015·山东省实验中学模拟)
As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save people’s lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that I’ll concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed.
Passage 10 (2015·泰安期末)
I ’d like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.
First ，it was important to take a Chinese course ，as you ’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then ，it also help to watch TV and read books ，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!
Besides ，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs ，because by doing so you ’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends ，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.
参考答案
A 组 2016～2014年各省市高考题（改编）
Passage 1
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that where
I live.Though not very big ，but the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had have
to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest honesty
.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or and high quality oil are using used
for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams of /about
becoming rich in the a
short period of time.Instead ，he hopes that our his business will grow steady steadily
. 1．that →where [考查宾语从句的连词用法。

由句子结构可知，介词to 之
后为宾语从句。

从句谓语是不及物动词live 。

故用where 引导。

]
2．去掉but [考查从属连词与并列连词。

从属连词though 不可与并列连词but 连用。

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3．had → have [考查语境中的时态运用。

根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。

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4．honest → honesty [考查名词作表语。

由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。

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5．or →and [考查并列连词的用法。

根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。

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6．using →used [考查固定短语的用法。

be used for “用来做”，为固定短语。

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7．在dreams 之后加上of 或about [考查短语动词。

固定短语dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。

]
8．the →a [考查代词的用法。

in a short period of time 为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。

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9．our →his [考查冠词的用法。

短文介绍了my uncle 诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our 改为his 。

]
10．steady →steadily [考查副词的用法。

修饰谓语动词用副词。

]
Passage 2
答案
The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how what to do during the holiday.We can chose choose
between staying at home and take taking a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but and
there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about the
world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your our view and gain knowledges knowledge we
can not get from books.Some classmates suggest we
can
can/或should
go to places
of interest nearby.I thought
think
that it is a good idea.It does not cost
many
much
，
yet we can still learn a lot.
1．how→what [考查疑问词的用法。

我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。

固定表达what to do，如果用how结构为how to do sth.]
2．chose→choose [考查动词形式。

根据语法知识可知，情态动词can后要用动词原形。

]
3．take→taking [考查非谓语动词的用法。

此处为between...and...结构，根据前面的staying at home可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。

] 4．but→and [考查连词的用法。

如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。

根据句意可知，此处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。

]
5．world前加the [考查定冠词的用法。

此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。

] 6．your→our [考查形容词性物主代词的用法。

根据前面的主语we可知，此处要用our，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。

]
7．knowledges→knowledge [考查不可数名词的用法。

knowledge为不可数名词，没有复数形式。

]
8．去掉can或can→should [考查虚拟语气。

suggest表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用should do形式，should可以省略，故答案有两种改法。

] 9．thought→think [考查一般现在时的用法。

我认为这是一个好主意。

根据上下文可知，此处并不是过去的看法，而是现在的看法。

]
10．many→much [考查代词的用法。

这样不会花很多钱。

cost much花费很多。

此处也可理解为much money的省略。

]
Passage 3
答案
The teenage
year
years
from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They
were also the best and worse
worst
years in my life.At the first，I thought I
knew everything and could make decisions by yourself myself
.However ，my parents didn ’t seem to think such so .They always tell told
me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldn ’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely free from them.I showed them I was independent by wear wearing
strange clothes.Now I am leaving home
to for college.At last ，I will be on my own ，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I
need help.
【语篇导读】 本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。

1．year →years [此处指13～19 岁的年龄，故用复数。

]
2．worse →worst [与前面的best 并列，此处应用最高级。

]
3．去掉the [at first 固定短语。

]
4．yourself →myself [根据句意，此处指“我自己”。

]
5．such →so [so 指已经提到的事。

]
6．tell →told [此处应用过去时态。

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7．freely →free [此处应用形容词作表语。

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8．wear →wearing [此处用动名词作介词的宾语。

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9．to →for [固定搭配 leave for 去……。

]
10．whenever 后加I [whenever 引导状语从句，从句缺少主语I 。

]
Passage 4
答案
It is Mother ’s Day today.Though it ’s a western festival, it ’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full －time job ，so but she has to do most of the houseworks housework .She is a great mother.Both Dad
or and
I planned to do something on Mother ’s Day.We
get got
up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house ，and then went on shopping.When he came back ，I found a bunch of flowers in her his
hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in the ∧
kitchen.The dishes
what which/that/what
I cooked were Mom ’s favoritest favorite .At dinner ，we said to her ，“Happy Mother ’s Day ！”Mom was grateful and
moving moved
. 1．so →but [前后句之间为转折关系。

]
2．houseworks →housework [housework 是不可数名词。

]
3．or →and [both...and 是固定搭配。

]
4．get →got [这里说的是发生在过去的事情，因此用一般过去时。

]
5．去掉on [go shopping 去买东西。

]
6．her →his [爸爸去购物，从句主语是he ，因此物主代词形式用his 。

]
7．kitchen 前加the [上文虽未提及kitchen ，但听话者一定知其所指，因此，kitchen 前加定冠词。

]
8．what →which/that 或去掉what [引导定语从句，并在从句中作宾语，指物，用关系代词that/which ，也可省略。

]
9．favoritiest →favorite [favorite 为无等级形容词。

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10．moving →moved [moving 多用来修饰事物，moved 用来指人。

]
Passage 5
答案
When I was a very young children child ，my father created a regular practice I remember well years late later
.Every time he arrived home at the ∧
end of the
day ，we ’d greet her him at the door.He would ask who we was were
and pretend not to knowing know
us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat chatted ，my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in on
the top of the fridge.It was both excited exciting
and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
1．children →child [因为前面有不定冠词a ，所以这里用单数。

故children 改成child 。

]
2．late →later [late 是形容词“迟的”，或副词“迟地”，但是“一段时间后面应该接later ”，表示“……时间以后”。

故late 改成later 。

]
3．at 后面加the [at the end of 为固定搭配。

]
4．her →him [根据上文可知我们每天在门口迎接爸爸。

用him 指代my father ，作greet 的宾语。

故her 改成him 。

]
5．was →were [这句话的主语是we ，谓语用复数，而且这篇文章是作者回忆小时候的事情，用一般过去时。

故was 改成were 。

]
6．knowing →know [pretend 后面接不定式作宾语，这里是否定式pretend not to do 。

故knowing 改成know 。

]
7．去掉had [would do 表示“过去常常做”。

]
8．chat →chatted [根据主句内容my father would lift my sister 可知while 引导的时间状语从句用一般过去时。

故chat 改成chatted 。

]
9．in →on [on the top of...为固定搭配，意为“在……顶部”。

故in 改成on 。

]
10．excited →exciting [这句话的主语是形式主语it ，真正的主语是to be up there ，主语是物的时候，表语应该用现在分词形式的形容词。

故excited 改成exciting 。

]
Passage 6
答案
When I was a child ，I hoped to live in the city.I think thought
I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city ，but I miss my home in ∧the countryside.There the air is clean or and
the mountains are green.Unfortunately ，on with
the development of industrialization ，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have 错误! shown that global warming has already become a very seriously serious problem.The airs air
we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much Many
rare animals are dying out.We must found find ways to protect your our/the
environment.If we fail to do so ，we'll live to regret it.
1．think →thought [考查动词的时态。

根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。

]
2．countryside 前加the [考查冠词的用法。

in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。

]
3．or →and [考查并列词的用法。

那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。

由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。

]
4．on →with [考查介词的用法。

with the development of...为一固定短语，意思是“随着……的发展”。

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5．去掉been [考查被动语态的用法。

众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。

由句意可知，studies 和谓语show 之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。

]
6．seriously →serious [考查形容词的用法。

修饰名词problem 应当用形
容词。

]
7．airs →air [考查不可数名词的用法。

air 作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。

]
8．Much →Many [考查代词的用法。

Animals 为可数名词复数，故用many 。

]
9．found →find [考查情态动词的用法。

情态动词后面要接动词原形。

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10．your →our [考查语境中代词的用法。

依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your 与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the 才能使句意通顺。

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Passage 7
答案
One day ，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent parents
.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on in
a shop window.He liked it so 错误! much that he quickly walked into the shop.After
looks looking at the toy for some time ，he turned around and found 错误! his parents were missing.Tony was scared
and begun began to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling told
him to wait outside a the
shop.Five minutes later ，Tony saw 错误! parents.Mom said ，“How nice to see you again ！Dad and I were
terrible terribly
worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
1．parent →parents [考查名词复数。

由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。

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2．on →in [考查介词的用法。

玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in 。

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3．去掉very [考查固定句型的用法。

由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。

so...that...为固定句型，意思是“如此……以致于……”，故去掉very 。

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4．looks →looking [考查省略的用法。

After 之后省去了主语he ，he 与look at 之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。

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5．去掉where 或where →that [考查宾语从句连接词的用法。

动词found 之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将where 去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that 。

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6．begun →began [考查并列谓语的用法。

由句子结构可知，begin 与was scared 并列，因此，要用一般过去时。

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7．telling →told [考查并列谓语的用法。

有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。

由句意可知，tell 这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw 构成并列谓语。

故改用told 。

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8．a →the [考查冠词的用法。

表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。

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9．saw 后加his [考查物主代词的用法。

根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents 前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。

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10．terrible →terribly [考查副词的用法。

形容词worried 之前要用副词来修饰。

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Passage 8
答案
Hi, Janice ，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want ∧to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell told you last time, I made three new friend friends
here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing singing
in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many much
.And I started to see this as a time －wasting activity! In fact ，I don't like to go anymore, so but I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How What
do you think I should do? If you
are
were
me，would you talk to
him
them
？
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
1．[考查动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to。

]want后加to
2．[考查时态。

根据时间状语last time可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。

句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。

]tell→told
3．[考查名词的复数。

名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。

句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。

]friend→friends
4．[考查动名词作宾语。

本句考查句型spend...(in)doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。

]sing→singing
5．[考查代词。

根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。

句意：那真的花费很多。

]many→much
6．[考查连词。

上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。

]so→but
7．[考查疑问词的选择。

本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用what。

]How→What
8．[考查虚拟语气。

根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。

句意：如果你是我，……。

]are→were
9．[考查代词。

根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them。

句意：你会和他们说吗？
]him→them
10．[考查动词。

动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。

句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。

]去掉with
Passage 9
答案
My soccer coach retired 错误! last week.I wanted to do 错误! special
for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better
best
biscuits in the
world，so I
decide
decided
to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic
step
steps
of
baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits
were really well
good
.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor
after
when/while
I was packing them up.
At
a
the
party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly
who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just∧,to) get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me
enjoy enjoying
the
biscuits with happy laughter!
1．去掉in [last week上个星期，前面无需加冠词。

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2．anything→something [something用在肯定句中，表示“一些事”，anything“任何事”。

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3．better→best [我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干，此处不是比较含义，应是最高级(best)。

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4．decide→decided [全文的时态都是一般过去时，故把decide改为decided。

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5．step→steps [根据前面的some，step应该是复数形式。

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6．well→good [作表语的是形容词good，well是副词，作状语。

]
7．after→when/while [我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候，掉在地上一些。

when/while当……的时候，after 在……之后。

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8．a→the [此处表特指，at the party 在晚会上。

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9．just后加to [动词不定式表示目的，我也许得再退休一次，能吃到更多的饼干。

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10．enjoy→enjoying [and连接两个并列的(动)名词，enjoy是动词，所以改成enjoying。

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Passage 10
1．第一句：side→sides [考查名词的复数形式。

前面有three修饰，故要用复数形式。

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2．第一句：from→of [考查固定表达。

be made of是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；be made from是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。

] 3．第二句：sit→sitting [考查非谓语动词。

动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。

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4．第三句：easy→easily [考查形容词和副词的错用。

修饰动词see要有副词形式。

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5．第五句：is→was [考查动词的时态。

本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室，故要时态保持一致，用一般过去时。

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6．第六句：them→it [考查代词的错用。

代替前面的单数a beautiful park 要用it。

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7．第七句：not去掉[考查逻辑关系。

在更远处，我可以欣赏雪山的美景。

] 8．第九句：in后加a [考查固定表达。

in a hurry匆匆忙忙。

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9．第十句：felt→feel [考查非谓语动词。

make sb do...使某人做某事。

] 10．最后一句：If→Although/Though [考查状语从句引导词。

尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子，但我将永远忘不了它。

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Passage 11
1．第一句中before→ago [ago常与一般过去时连用；before常与完成时连。