初三英语书面表达专题训练答案及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
无锡被评为内地最宜居城市。

假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你根据讨论主题并结合所给信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”为题写一份发言稿，号召广大学生为建设美好城市作贡献。

内容提示如下：
1．政府修建了很多新路、大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩；
3．私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题；
4．城市变化有利有弊；
5．你的希望：……
注意事项：
1．发言稿须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第5个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象。

作适当发挥；
3．词数90左右，发言稿的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4．发言稿内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了大量短语，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a picnic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both …and，deal with the problem，in the future等。

而More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.等多种more and more句式结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用现在完成时和一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们拓展成一个个英文句子。

还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。

2．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。

A（n） _________ I have
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I have
Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.
In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow clo th. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.
When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.
Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!
【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。

写作亮点：
这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。

在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。

最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。

3．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，在你的帮助下，交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。

请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你的真诚祝贺，回忆他比赛时的表现，以及你从他身上学到了什么。

提示词语：wm，priZP,，speech competition，pronounce，practlce
提示问题：
Why do you congratulate Tom?
What made him successfulin the competition?
What can you leam from him?
【答案】Dear Tom,
I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech competition, so I’m writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance.
You did a good job in the Chinese speech competition. You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful. You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you. What’s more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents.
As your best friend, I know you tried your best for the competition. You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better. I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up. I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。

灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。

语言力求准确，简洁。

最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：try one’s best; What’s more, feel proud of； in order to； give up ；keep on trying. ； It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等；so ；so···that等连词的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

4．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。

作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文（80字左右）
内容包含：1.遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。

2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3.劝父母不能酒后驾车。

4.你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________
【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra –crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
【解析】本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述，谈论有关交通安全的相关内容。

实际上就是要求书写一份倡议书。

人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。

动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充个人的观点。

注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。

可能用到的词组：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。

5．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
你们学校的生活丰富多彩吗？请以“Colorful weekdays”为题，介绍一下你们学校周一至周五（weekdays）都有哪些课外活动。

要求：1. 语意连贯，层次清晰；
2. 要有评价性描述；
3. 词数80左右。

【答案】Colorful weekdays
It is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our
school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on.
Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.
So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school!【解析】话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

6．（·湖南中考模拟）人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。

请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。

注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。

2. 词数80词左右，短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people
think___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。

是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】
本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。

注意文体、人称和时态。

文章要有层次、流畅。

可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。

注意过渡性语言的使用。

做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

7．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要求：
1．文中必须包含表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2．条理淸晰，字迹工整。

词数大约90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Nowadays, reading is becoming more and more popular among us. ____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying” To open a book is always helpful” clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they
increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．
As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．
Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．
【解析】
【详解】
越来越多的人认识到阅读对人一生发展的重要性，作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

用一般现在时来写。

根据汉语提示，灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。

语言力求准确、简洁。

最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【点睛】
文章从读书好；好读书；读好书，分别介绍了读书的重要性，文中要到了一些好的句型：People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．；They introduce us different kinds of knowledge；They lead us down the road to success给文中增色不少。

8．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达
提示：转眼间三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人或事物。

请以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

要求：1. 请先将题目补充完整后再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 将短文写在答题卡上。

写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.
when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇话题作文。

根据以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

文章时态用一般过去式时，人称主要为第一人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，
不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

9．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
三年初中生活即将结束，在你学习和成长的路上一定得到了不少人的鼓励，支持和帮助。

虽然你就要和一些人说再见了，但总有些人是你一生都难以忘记的。

请以I’ll never forget _______为题，谈谈你最难忘的人。

老师、好友，家人，同桌还是……
基本信息：（1）Who is he/she?
（2）What kind of person is he/she?
（3）What did he/she do for you ?
（4）Why is he/she unforgettable?
参考词汇：loving, strict, understanding, patient, friendly, generous, reliable, intelligent, optimistic, humorous, confident, honest, helpful…
要求：1.补全标题；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名
3. 介绍他/她的具体情况以及对你的影响；
4. 词数不少于70词。

I’ll never forget _______
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________
【答案】I’ll never forget my English teacher
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacher-Ms Lee.
Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你最难忘的人。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, become interested in, once以及cheer up。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

10．（·广东中考模拟）马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。

班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。

请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.
【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。

题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。

审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。

内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。

表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。

写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。

另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。

句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。

同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。

短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。

短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。

各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。

句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。

短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

11．（·吉林中考模拟）“inspire” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。

请以“The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。

要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？
2. How did he/ she inspire you？
要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。

【答案】The person who inspired me
Many people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.
Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.
You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。

题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。

学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。

写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。

其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。

应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。

可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。

为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。

同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。

短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。

各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。

其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。

用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。

12．（·福建中考模拟）回首三年，相信你有满满的回忆。

在你将踏上新的旅程之际，请给新入学的学弟学妹们两则初中生活的建议，并说说原因，让他们的初中生活更加精彩。

请参考下面的思维导图用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activities
My Advice for Junior High
【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in your life. As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork, but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如as a student，must be，filled with，get used to，relax ourselves，two pieces of advice，fall into，join new clubs，take up，not only…but also，make more friends，be helpful to等。

而非谓语动词结构To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice.和As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。