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9. Thank you very much for all the kindness. 谢谢您一切的好意。 10. Hope everything is fine with you there. 希望您在那里一切如 意。
1. I find it hardly to deal with.
1. hardly改为hard 2. The main reason I’m writing is that I have litte favour to ask. 2. little前面加a 3. I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters. 3. 删掉the
10. I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter.
10. hear改为hearing
（2020全国三卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编 了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。 邮件内容包括：
你的, 李华
Dear Tom, It’s been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything
going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.
作文翻译
尊敬的先生， 我的名字是李华，你们航空公司BA793航班的一个乘客。我是在
2010年6月3日乘坐这趟班机的。 你们优质的服务给我留下了很深的印象。但是，不幸的是，我
到家时，我发现我把一个旅行箱落在了飞机上。 您想象不到这个旅行箱对我是多么重要。里面有我需要参加一
个工作面试的文件和我的身份证，没有身份证我不能参加一场重要 的考试。我的旅行箱较小，蓝色，有一条拉链。在把手处有一个标 签，上面有我的姓名和地址。
（1） 剧情简介； （2） 指导内容； （3） 商定时间地点。 注意：
1. 词数100左右; 2. 结束语已为你写好。
满分佳作赏析：
Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Yours Sincerely, Li Hua
Tkank you !
1. I’m in desperate need of your help.我迫切需要你的帮助。 2. I wonder if you could do me a favor. 我想请您帮个忙。 3. I am wondering whether you could ... 我想知道您是否能 够…… 4. I would be very grateful if you could ... 如果您能……，我将感 激不尽。
作文翻译
亲爱的Tom， 你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开
心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。 今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更
好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料 上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮 助我，我会非常感激。
你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望 在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。
【请求寻找物品】
假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现 请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。 信件要点包括：
1. 陈述写信原因; 2. 简要描述该行李; 3. 说明其重要性; 4. 期待回复并表示感谢。
7. 第一个you改为it
8. We’re trying to find someone to look after the ca
9. There are hundreds of people go to work in cars and buses. 9. go改为going
the moment I got home, I found I had left a suitcase in your plane. You can’t imagine how important the suitcase is to me. There are
some documents I need for a job interview and my ID card, without which I can’t take an important exam. My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it.
5. loudly改为loud
6. Also, there is often rubbish leaving in the stairway.
6. leaving改为left
7. I would appreciate you if you would help me solve these problems.
Yours truly, Li Hua
【演讲比赛写稿求助】
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学 习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比 赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面 遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：
1. 询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2. 谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3. 告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。
5. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果您能帮 助我，我将感激不尽。
6. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. 不知道我是否 可以请您帮个忙？
6.I’m dying for your effective advice to crack the difficulties. 我很期盼你能给我有效的建议来清除这些困难。
7. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply. 谢谢您的关注，期待收到您尽早的 回复。
8. If you need further information, do let me know. 如果您需要 更多的信息，请告知我。
4. I would like to bring your attention to some problems what are occurring in this block. 4. what改为that/which
5. The people in the apartment below mine often play loudly music late at night, making it very difficult for me to sleep.
You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I can’t wait to see you again!
Yours, Li Hua
appreciate 感激；欣赏 grateful 感激的 offer sb. a hand 提供帮助 encounter a problem 遇到一个问题 have no idea how to do sth 不知道该做什么 deal with/cope with 处理 challenge 挑战 difficult/tough/challenging 困难的 overcome /crack the difficulties 克服困难
谢谢你善意的关心，我期待收到您尽早的回复。 您真挚的， 李华
Dear Sir, My name is Li Hua, a passenger of flight BA793 of your airline
company. It was on June 3rd, 2010 that I took this flight. Your good service left me a deep impression. But unfortunately,
1. I find it hardly to deal with.
1. hardly改为hard 2. The main reason I’m writing is that I have litte favour to ask. 2. little前面加a 3. I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters. 3. 删掉the
10. I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter.
10. hear改为hearing
（2020全国三卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编 了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。 邮件内容包括：
你的, 李华
Dear Tom, It’s been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything
going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.
作文翻译
尊敬的先生， 我的名字是李华，你们航空公司BA793航班的一个乘客。我是在
2010年6月3日乘坐这趟班机的。 你们优质的服务给我留下了很深的印象。但是，不幸的是，我
到家时，我发现我把一个旅行箱落在了飞机上。 您想象不到这个旅行箱对我是多么重要。里面有我需要参加一
个工作面试的文件和我的身份证，没有身份证我不能参加一场重要 的考试。我的旅行箱较小，蓝色，有一条拉链。在把手处有一个标 签，上面有我的姓名和地址。
（1） 剧情简介； （2） 指导内容； （3） 商定时间地点。 注意：
1. 词数100左右; 2. 结束语已为你写好。
满分佳作赏析：
Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Yours Sincerely, Li Hua
Tkank you !
1. I’m in desperate need of your help.我迫切需要你的帮助。 2. I wonder if you could do me a favor. 我想请您帮个忙。 3. I am wondering whether you could ... 我想知道您是否能 够…… 4. I would be very grateful if you could ... 如果您能……，我将感 激不尽。
作文翻译
亲爱的Tom， 你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开
心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。 今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更
好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料 上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮 助我，我会非常感激。
你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望 在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。
【请求寻找物品】
假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现 请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。 信件要点包括：
1. 陈述写信原因; 2. 简要描述该行李; 3. 说明其重要性; 4. 期待回复并表示感谢。
7. 第一个you改为it
8. We’re trying to find someone to look after the ca
9. There are hundreds of people go to work in cars and buses. 9. go改为going
the moment I got home, I found I had left a suitcase in your plane. You can’t imagine how important the suitcase is to me. There are
some documents I need for a job interview and my ID card, without which I can’t take an important exam. My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it.
5. loudly改为loud
6. Also, there is often rubbish leaving in the stairway.
6. leaving改为left
7. I would appreciate you if you would help me solve these problems.
Yours truly, Li Hua
【演讲比赛写稿求助】
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学 习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比 赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面 遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：
1. 询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2. 谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3. 告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。
5. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果您能帮 助我，我将感激不尽。
6. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. 不知道我是否 可以请您帮个忙？
6.I’m dying for your effective advice to crack the difficulties. 我很期盼你能给我有效的建议来清除这些困难。
7. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply. 谢谢您的关注，期待收到您尽早的 回复。
8. If you need further information, do let me know. 如果您需要 更多的信息，请告知我。
4. I would like to bring your attention to some problems what are occurring in this block. 4. what改为that/which
5. The people in the apartment below mine often play loudly music late at night, making it very difficult for me to sleep.
You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I can’t wait to see you again!
Yours, Li Hua
appreciate 感激；欣赏 grateful 感激的 offer sb. a hand 提供帮助 encounter a problem 遇到一个问题 have no idea how to do sth 不知道该做什么 deal with/cope with 处理 challenge 挑战 difficult/tough/challenging 困难的 overcome /crack the difficulties 克服困难
谢谢你善意的关心，我期待收到您尽早的回复。 您真挚的， 李华
Dear Sir, My name is Li Hua, a passenger of flight BA793 of your airline
company. It was on June 3rd, 2010 that I took this flight. Your good service left me a deep impression. But unfortunately,