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广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练（3）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take them to their aunt’s to play while she w ent to the city buy some new clothes. They played for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it like a gentleman.” “How do ge ntlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.”【参考答案】4.My friend Dick was seven years old, and her (his) sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take (took) them to their aunt’s to play while she went to the city ∧ (加to ) buy some new clothes. They played for a (an) hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely (nice) cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece (pieces) to your sister. But remembering (remember) to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up (about) this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but (and) said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.”短文改错。
广西凤山县2016高考英语二轮复习短文改错专练(2)
广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练（2）短文改错------【命题趋向】短文改错是一项主要测试考生的判断能力，观察能力、纠错能力语言基础知识及语言的综合运用能力。
短文改错的趋势：1.改错短文以记叙文和说明文为主。
2.文章内容贴近学生生活，没有生僻词汇和复杂的结构，文章简单易懂，错误设置也很简单，多为学生平常作文中常出现的错误。
3.短文一般100词左右，错误有9处。
4.常见错有三种:错词、多词、缺词。
错词占60%左右【错误类型】1. 错词2. 多词3. 缺词4. 正错【考点透视】一．错词的热点1．动词—时态语态非谓语；主谓关系。
2．联系词—关系代词和关系副词；连词；连接词。
3．名词—可数名词、不可数名词，可数名字的单复数变化。
4．介词—介词和动词的搭配错误。
5．形容词/副词—词类错用。
6．冠词—定冠词和不定冠词的错用。
7．代词—人称代词；物主代词；反身代词。
8．惯用法—固定句型，固定短语。
二．多词和缺词热点1. 冠词2.介词3.副词4.代词5.关联词6.小品词 to【短文改错主要特点】1. 语言材料取自于学生的习作。
2. 短文为贴近学生生活的话题或学生身边事。
3. 短文难度符合学生水平。
4. 语言简单易懂。
5. 没有生僻的语言现象或繁难的语句结构。
短文改错Snow came a bit later this year than usually. After school, we took a bus to go back home in noon. On the way, we were attracted by the amazing scenery — trees, houses, and even cars were covered with purely white snow. How desperately we want to play in the snow! However, when we got off the bus, we immediately ran to a square nearby to enjoy the very spirits what the snow brought us. Despite the cold weather, we had a great fun playing with the snow. Many passer-by watched us laughing and playing, with smiles on his faces. Occupying with our study every day, we would like to regard it a refreshing experience for us all.【参考答案】4.Snow came a bit later this year than usually. After school, we took a bus to go backusualhome in noon. On the way, we were attracted by the amazing scenery — trees, houses, atand even cars were covered with purely white snow. How desperately we want to playwantedin the snow! However, when we got off the bus, we immediately ran to a square nearby Thereforeto enjoy the very spirits what the snow brought us. Despite the cold weather, we had thata great fun playing with the snow. Many passer-by watched us laughing and playing,去掉 passers-bywith smiles on his faces. Occupying with our study every day, we would like to regard their Occupiedit ∧ a refreshing experience for us all.as短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语短文改错精选练习含答案(共6页)
英语短文改错-精选十篇练习短文改错练习（1）Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard . They do extreme well on 76．achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending 77．Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78．to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy different from 79．most students is that they don’t go to school . In fact , 80．they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81．have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if 82．they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．As many of the more than one million people who receive 84．home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．have gotten a good education .短文改错练习（2）Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d76．like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77．just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring,78．since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79．hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80．to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you 81．may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82．as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83．So I ran three miles to school only to discover that nobody 84．was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85．locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.短文改错练习（3）Get a good education is more important today than 76．_______________ ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public 77．_______________ schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments 78．_______________ through tax income. Students in Canada taught in 79．_______________ English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．_______________ attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．_______________ paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend 82．_______________ the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different 83．_______________ levels in the Canadian education system .The first was 84．_______________ called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens 85．_______________ through grade 7 or 8.短文改错练习（4）Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill near to 76.our school. The boys were made dig pits(坑).The 77.girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits. 78.All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet 79.with sweat.After the young trees planted, we 80.began to water it.The water was at the foot of 81. the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 82. of water from one to other up to the hill. 83.We did not finish water the trees until it 84. was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy. 85短文改错练习（5）A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took 76.part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77.speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 78.interested to begin studying another language. At the first 79.class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, 80.in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 81. student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 82.kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him 83.why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an84. American speak French with a German accent.”he explained it. 85.短文改错练习（6）It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in thesky. I went boating by myself. I didn’t take many76．friends with me because I wanted to row alone. 77．I hired a boat and rowed slowly to the center of lake. 78．A fresh breeze was blowing, fish was swimming and birds 79．were singing. When I reached the center, I took up the 80．paddles（桨）and lie down in the boat. With the blue sky 81．over me or green water around me I was extremely 82．relaxed. Over about two hours passed in this way before I 83．knew them. I came back home very late. I didn’t feel84．tiring at all, for I had really had a good time. 85．短文改错练习（7）I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last 76.________ it has reached to me. I am very glad to know that 77________ everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78________ Things here are same now as they were before. The 79 ________ final examination will take place in next week. So 80 ________ I am now busy preparing for my lessons. It’s nice 81________ to think that the summer vacation is coming 82________ nea r. I can’t say much I want to see you all again. 83 ________ I am looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84________ Give my love to Father, Mother and anyone at home. 85________短文改错练习（8）One afternoon , when I was on my way home , the sky 76．changed suddenly . Dark clouds were gathered . I began 77．to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat 78．or umbrella about me . It soon started to rain . 79．Just as I was hurrying home , I heard of someone calling 80．me from behind . I turned to have a look and find that 81．he was Liu Wei , a good neighbour of mine . He 82．offered to share his umbrella with me . We walked all 83．the ways home . Without Liu Wei’s help , I would have 84．got wet to the skin . How much thankful I was for his help ! 85．短文改错练习（9）I worried about the missed bag all the evening. 76．I tried to remember exact what I had done from the 77．time I left the store until at the time I got home. I 78．remembered whether I had looked at the bag while I 79．was having lunch. So I must have it when I left the 80．store. I remembered showing it to a friend on the bus. 81．But I had the bag then. I came directly from the bus 82．to my house, and I must have forgotten it on the bus. I 83．was in hurry to get off and forgot to check the packages 84．lying on the floor. I should be much careful next time. 85．短文改错练习（10）A kind of little car may someday take place of today’s big 76．ones . If people drive such cars in the future ,there would be 77．less pollution in there air . There will be more spaces for 78．parking cars in cities . The streets will be less crowd . And 79．driving will be safer as these little cars can go only 65 km 80．per hour . The future cars will be fine for getting round acity , so they will not be useful for long trips . Little cars 81．will go 200km , before needing to stop more gas . If big cars 82．are still used along with the small ones , two sets of roadsthat will be needed in the future . Some roads will be used 83．for the big fast cars and another roads will be needed for 84．the slow small ones . It is said that third such little cars 85．fit in the space now needed for one car the usual size .短文改错练习（1）76.extreme—extremely 77.will—will be/attending—attend 78.hope—hopes 79.That —What 80.right 81.a kindergarten—kindergarten 82.or—nor 83.nothing—anything 84.As—Like 85.if—as if短文改错练习（2）（2）76．do→did 77．Nothing→Everything 78．In→On 79．since→so 80．去掉第一个the 81．buses→bus 82．am→was 83．在teacher 前加my/the 84．√85．but→and短文改错练习（3）76.Get-- Getting 77.mostly-- most 78.found --founded 79. in Canada∧-are 80.rests- rest 81.that -which82.paying-- paid 83.the school 84.was --is 85. √短文改错练习（4）76. 第二个to去掉77. made后加to 78. √ 79. hardly改为hard 80. trees后加were 81. it改为them82. But改为So 83. other改为another 84. water改为watering 85. feel改为felt短文改错练习（5）76．returning 后加to 77．have改为had 78．good改为well 79．interested改为interesting 80．对81．one改为a 82．their改为his 83．去掉to 84．funs改为fun 85．去掉it短文改错练习（6）76．many→any; 77．row→be; 78．of^lake→the; 79．第二个was→were; 81．√；81．lie→lay;82．or→and 83．去掉about; 84．them→it; 85．tiring→tired.短文改错练习（7）76. expected改为expecting 77. 去掉to 78. usually 改为usual 79. are 后加the 80. 去掉in 81. 去掉for82. right 83. say 后加how 84. spend 改为spending 85. anyone 改为everyone短文改错练习（8）76.sky-weath 77gathered-gathering 78.both-either 79. or ^umbrella-an 80 heard of81.find-found 82.he-it 83. √84.ways-way 85.much短文改错练习（9）76.missed-missing77. exact-- exactly 78．去at 79.whether-that 80. have∧it --had 81. √82.But—So 83.forgotten--left 84. in∧hurry --in a hurry 85.much --more短文改错练习（10）76. take^ place——the 77.would ——will 78.spaces ——space 79.crowd ——crowed 80.正确81.so——but 82.stop^ ——for 83.去掉that 84. another——other85.third-three。
广西凤山县高考英语二轮复习 短文改错专练(8)
广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练（8）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before. 【参考答案】4.Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets forthe circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.betweenThis family made∧ deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably a allunder the age of twelv e. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes was notwere expensive, and they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line,but themtwo-by-two behind their parents, held hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns,holdingelephants and another performances where that they would see that night .Everyone couldother 删除wheresense they have never been to the circus before.had假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语二轮专题复习精练 短文改错(1)-人教版高三全册英语试题
2015届高考高三英语二轮专题复习精练：短文改错〔1〕短文改错Dear Peter ，I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopeful a girl in her early twenty, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept that at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share her our traveling experiences, and whatever we have in common. And I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learn more about his country.I look forward to hear from you soon.Yours ，Susan答案：Dear Peter ，I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopeful hopefully a girl in her early twenty twenties， and with interests similar to mine. In my mind ，she is someone who is interesting interestedin traveling, swimming ，and playing table tennis. Beside Besides ， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept that one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share ∧with her ourtraveling experiences, and or whatever we have in common. And I believe I would will improve my English by doing so and learn more about his hercountry. I look forward to hear hearingfrom you soon. Yours.Susan短文改错Dear Li Lei ，I am writing to provide my sincere congratulations on your graduation from seniorhigh school and enrollment by the PekingUniversity. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort get rewards. I am sure your parents are great proud of you.I just want you to know how pleasing I am to witness your success. Being admitted by PekingUniversity is a new start for you, who will bring you a good chance to learn of top professors. However, it's good for you to study with such many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.Sincerely Yours ，Han Meimei答案：Dear Li Lei ，I am writing to provide offermy sincere congratulations on your graduation fromsenior high school and enrollment by the PekingUniversity. I know you ∧haveworkedvery hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort get getsrewards. I am sure your parents are great greatlyproud of you. I just want you to knowhow pleasing pleasedI am to witness your success. Being admitted by PekingUniversityis a new start for you, who which will bring you a good chance to learn of fromtopprofessors. However Besides ， it's good for you to study with such somany excellentstudents who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.Sincerely Yours ，Han Meimei短文改错Dear David ，I'm writing this letter to express my sincerely apologies to you for lose the book you lent to me. I'm very grateful you lent it to me. In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also borrow someother books in the library after I left. Unluckily, when I arrived my dormitory, I couldn't find my book. I searched all the my dormitory or the road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldn't find your book. I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised ago. But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can receive my apologies.Yours Sincerely,Li Lei答案：Dear David ，I'm writing this letter to express my sincerely sincere apologies to you for lose losingthe book you lent to me. I'm very grateful you lent it to me.In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also borrow borrowedsome other books in the library after before I left. Unluckily, when I arrived ∧at /arrived reachedmy dormitory, I couldn't find my your book. I searched all the my dormitory or andtheroad from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldn't find your book. I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised ago before. But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope youcan receive acceptmy apologies.Yours Sincerely,Li Lei短文改错When it came to city and country life ，I think they all have their own advantages and disadvantages.For city life ，you know ，the traffic is too convenient that you can arrange your life flexible and easily.At the same time ，there are many great opportunity for you when looking for jobs.Also ，there is no doubt the quality of life is fantastic.Fortunately ，living in cities ，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution.For country life ，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful ，which is both good for your health.However ，it is inconvenient for people to go out.Besides ，the communication is easy.答案：When it came comes to city and country life ，I think they all bothhave their ownadvantages and disadvantages.For city life ，you know ，the traffic is too soconvenient that you can arrangeyour life flexible flexibly and easily.At the same time ，there are many great opportunity opportunitiesfor you when looking for jobs.Also ，there is no doubt ∧thatthe quality of life isfantastic. Fortunately Unfortunately， living in cities ，you will suffer much stress and heavyair pollution.For country life ，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment is beautiful ，which is areboth good for your health.However ，it is inconvenient forpeople to go out.Besides ，the communication is isn'teasy.短文改错Dear David ，I read your message on the website coolworld say you would like to make friend with a Chinese student who can help you understand how China is trying to protect the environment atthe moment. My name isLi Hua and I am a student at HongxiangHigh School. I am also interesting in the environment and would very much like to your friend. My dad work for the local government department ，which is responsible for things like cleaning up rivers and improving on pollution in our area.I would also be happy to host you for a guest in my house so that you can find out about China and the environment here for myself.Let me know that you are interested. I look forward to hear from you soon. Best wishes!Li Hua答案：Dear David ，I read your message on the website coolworld say sayingyou would like tomake friend friendswith a Chinese student who can help you understand how China istrying to protect the environment at the moment. My name is Li Hua and I am a student at HongxiangHigh School. I am also interesting interestedin the environment and wouldvery much like to ∧be your friend. My dad work worksfor the local governmentdepartment ，which is responsible for things like cleaning up rivers and improving on pollution in our area. I would also be happy to host you for asaguest in my house so that you can find out about China and the environment here for myself yourself.Let me know that if you are interested. I look forward to hear hearingfrom you soon.Best wishes!Li Hua。
2021年高考英语二轮复习：短文改错 练习题精选(Word版,含答案)
2021年高考英语二轮复习：短文改错 练习题精选假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文:文中有10处语言错误。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm sorry to hear that you lose the Chinese Talent Contest holding in your city last week. I quite understand how I feel now. After all, you practiced hard and prepared well after the contest. Though you didn't win any award, but you did a good job. Personally what matters most is the process, not the results. While preparing for the contest, you have learnt a lot about Chinese, what will benefit you great in the future. As the old saying goes, ''Failure is mother of success." If you go on learning Chinese, you will have best opportunities in the future.【答案】I'm sorry to hear that youlose lost the Chinese Talent Contest holding holdin your city last week. I quite understand how I you feel now. After all, you practiced hard and prepared well be after forethe contest. Though you didn't win any award, but you did a good job. Personally what matters most is the process, not theresults result . While preparing for the contest, you have learnt a lot about Chinese, w what hich will benefit you great greatlyin the future. As the old saying goes, ''Failure is the mother of success." If you go on learning Chinese, you will havebe best tter opportunities in the future.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语二轮复习短文改错综合练习1课件 共31张PPT
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高考英语二轮复习 短文改错分层训练高三全册英语试题
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校短文改错分层训练·知能双升高考回顾A.2015·陕西卷My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decided to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party，my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!答案：My soccer coach retired inlast week. I wanted to do anythingsomething special for him at hisretirement party. My mum makes the betterbestbiscuits in the world, so Idecidedecidedto ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic stepstepsof baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuitswere really wellgood. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floorafterwhen/whileI was packing them up.At atheparty，my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, askedsurprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again nextyear just ∧toget some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoyenjoyingthebiscuits with happy laughter!B.2015·四川卷Hi, Janice，It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really wantshare with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang outtogether during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of timesing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time －wasting activity! In fact,I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案：Hi, Janice ，It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want∧toshare with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell told you last time, I made three new friend friends here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing singingin karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it reallycosts me many much . And I started to see this as a time －wasting activity!In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so but I'm afraid I'll lose theirfriendship. How What do you think I should do? If you are wereme, would you talkto him them ？Please help wit hme and give me some advice.GraceC.2015·浙江卷My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroomwere made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking atthe view. On the left －hand side of the class, I could easy see thefootball field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. Theview from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the schoolthere was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in thedistance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view mademe felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.答案：My old classroom was interesting because three side sidesof the。
广西凤山县高考英语二轮复习短文改错专练(1)
广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练(1)短文改错I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.【参考答案】6.1.holding----hold此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号，故用动词原形。
2.passes----passed根据前面was可知为一般过去时态。
3.much----well/ clearly根据句意可知，我很清楚记得我的爷爷。
此处very much是多的意思，不合题意。
4.shoulder----shoulders根据常理，人有两个肩膀，故用复数。
5.toward----to/ into根据句意，这里指：黑胡子变成白胡子。
高考英语短文改错训练(001)-英语试题
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该行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意：原行没能错的不要改I went out to see a filmwith my brother afterSupper .On our way tothe cinema ,we meet an American 1.----------girl named Alice ,shehad got lost and looked very 2..---------anxious ,We went up to see that was the matter ,we 3.----------then took him to thehotel .While going there 4.----------told her the great changes that had been taken place 5.----------in our country in the past few years and Alice told 6.----------us a lot about youth in America7.---------Although we missed the film,but we felt very happy 8--------for we had not only helped Alice get out of troubles9.---------also knew somethingabut the States We see Englishcan strength understandingand friendship10.---------KEY:1．meet→met 2．she →who 3．that →what 4．him→her 5．去掉been6．√ 7．youth前加the 8．去掉but 9．troubles→trouble 10．strength→strengthen。
高考英语(广西课标版)二轮复习短文改错专题突破练17含答案(1)
高考英语（广西课标版）二轮复习短文改错专题突破练17含答案(1)专题突破练第45页1Last month,I visited the Great Wall of China.It was packing with many tourists.As a girl from small village,I found it was difficulty for me to get a scenic photo opportunity.However,the setting was really attractive.Visiting this wonder was a tiring and absolutely unbelievable experience,easy proven by those large crowds around me.They made me realized just how lucky I was to be there.How long have they all been waiting for to visit this wonder?Saw a friend of mine in Beijing gave us an opportunity that others wish to have in their entire lives.For that,I am forever grateful.Last month,I visited the Great Wall of China.It was with many tourists.As a girl from small village,I found it was for me to get a scenic photo opportunity.However,the setting was really attractive.Visiting this wonder was a tiring absolutely unbelievable experience,proven by those large crowds around me.They made me just how lucky I was to be there.How long they all been waiting to visit this wonder?a friend of mine inBeijing gave an opportunity that others wish to have in their entire lives.For that,I am forever grateful.2Most people directly link senior high school life with plenty of stress and endless homeworks.However,some interested activities indeed contribute to reduce the st week the entertainment department of our Student Union organized the activity in which each class shoot a short movie.Our class chose a story setting in World War Ⅱ,that showed the preciousn ess of peace. I think this process was a good lesson that taught to me how to strike a balance between studying or relaxation. Now I amdetermined than ever to treasure everything I have and fight for my future.Most people directly link senior high school life with plenty of stress and endless .However,some activities indeed contribute to the st week the entertainment department of our Student Union organized activity in which each class a short movie.Our class chose a story in World War Ⅱ, showed the preciousness of peace. I think this process was a good lesson that taught me how to strike a balance between studying relaxation. Now I am determined than ever to treasure everything I have and fight for my future.3With the development of science and technology,intelligent robots will be wide used in the future. At home,robots will help people do some housework and taking care of the elderly,babies and patients. In addition to these task,robots will even be able to play the chess and do exercise with people. Infactories,robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs avoid accidents.Robots will change our future life by many ways,what will make it more colorful and comfortable. Therefore,we shouldn’t depend on intelligent robots too much,for they were made to help humans rather than replace us.As helpers of we humans,robots should be used properly.With the development of science and technology,intelligent robots will be used in the future. At home,robots will help people do some housework and care of the elderly,babies and patients. In addition to these ,robots will even be able to play chess and do exercise with people. In factories,robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs avoid accidents.Robots will change our future life many ways, will make it more colorful and comfortable. ,we shouldn’t depend onintelligent robots too much,for they made to help humans ratherthan replace us.As helpers of humans,robots should be used properly.4Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all,the traffic rules must be strict obeyed.When we cross streets,wait until the traffic light turn green.Next,don’t forget walk on the pavement.Finally,I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling.Since we can’t pay enough attention on the traffic around us,so accidents may happen.Taking good care of ourselves and don’t let our parents worry about us.Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic and accidents. As student,what can we do to guarantee our ? First of all,the traffic rules must be obeyed.When we cross streets,wait until。
广西凤山县高考英语(二轮)七选五类阅读练习(1)及答案
广西凤山县2016高考英语（二轮）七选五类阅读练习（1）及答案七选五。
Each Indian tribe had a different language. Many Indians never learned any language except their own. Do you know how Indians from different tribes talked to each other? They had two ways to talk without sound. __36__Sign language is a way of talking by using signs. Indians used sign language when they met strangers. In this way, they could find out whether the stranger was a friend or an enemy. In the Indian sign language, signs were made with the hands. Indians usually used signals when they wanted to send messages to someone far away. To make signals, an Indian might use a pony. __37__ Or he might use smoke, a mirror or fire arrows.To signal that he had seen many animals, an Indian rode his pony in a large circle. Sometimes the Indian gave a signal like this and then went away to hide. __38__The blanket signal was visible from far away. An Indian held the corners of a blanket in his hands. Then he began to swing the blanket from side to side in front of him. __39__ He could also send many signals with a mirror. He usually used the mirror to warn someone of danger. Or he attempted to get the attention of a person far away. But he also used it to send messages in code.__40__ At night, Indians used fire arrows for signaling.Now you can see that Indians didn’t need to learn each other’s language. They could talk to one another by using signals or sign language.A. This meant that there was danger.B. He might use a blanket.C. Different things mean different to them.D. One way was by sign language ; the other way by signals.E. An Indian could send many different signals with his blanket.F. But they still can make themselves understood.G. Of course, mirrors could be used only when the sun was shining.【参考答案】36-40 DBAEG信息匹配--专题1--日常生活相关的信息专题导读不同体裁的文章，有不同的写作手法，表达的方式也千差万别，这就要求使用的阅读方法也不一样。
广西课标版高考英语大二轮专题复习短文改错专题突破练18042613.doc
短文改错专题突破练181Recently,a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact,this happens in many place of interest.I had some suggestions to solve this problem.First,make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦). Besides,punishments,such as a fine,is necessary to tourists with so badbehavior.Also,I think it’s helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages.I’m sure with our efforts,more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.Recently,a famous basketball player has caused public by writing on the Great Wall.In fact,this happens in many of interest.I some suggestions to solve this problem.First,make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦). Besides, punishments,such as a fine, necessary to tourists with bad behavior.Also,I think it’s to put up some boards along the tourist attractions tourists can leave messages.I’m sure with our efforts,more and more people will become about protecting cultural relics.2During my second month of nursing school,our professors gave us a quiz. I had smoothly finished the others’questions when I got stuck on the last one:“What’s the first name of the wo man who clean the school?”I had seen,many times,the woman,tall and in her fifty,but how could I know her name? I handed in my paper,leavethe last question blankly. After a class ended,one student asked for the answer for the question.The professor said,“A s you know,that in your careers you will meet many people. You should respect them and care about them,even you just smile and say‘hello’ to them.”During my second month of nursing school,our gave us a quiz.I had smoothly finished the questions when I got stuck on the last one:“What’s the first name of the woman who the school?”I had seen,many times,the woman,tall and in her ,but how could I know her name?I handed in my paper, the last question .After class ended,one student asked for the answer t he question.The professor said,“As you know, in your careers you will meet many people.You should respect them and care about them,even you just smile and say ‘hello’ to them.”3I still remember the first day I come to this new school.Everything was new to me,what made me realize I was no longer a small child. I had to depend onme.Luckily,I made several good friend.Their interests were similar with mine. I had great English teacher,Maggie.She let me know the important of English.So I decided to learn English hardly. Although it was very difficult at first,but with the help of my teacher,I made rapidly progress.Just as the old saying goes,“Where there is awill,there is a way.”I still remember the first day I to this new school.Everything was new to me, made me realize I was no longer a small child.I had to depend on .Luckily,I made several good .Their interests were similar mine.I had great Englishteacher,Maggie.She let me know the of English.So I decided to learnEnglish .Although it was very difficult at first, with the help of my teacher,I made progress.Just as the old saying goes,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”4My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be,however he never fails to show her care and consideration.Once I broke a neighbor window.Seeing nobody around,I ran away immediately.When Dad came home,he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened. I could only tell him a truth. Instead of scold, he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor. I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health and he also teaches me what to be a good citizen.How luckily I am to have such a good father!My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be,he never fails to show care and consideration.Once I broke a window.Seeing nobody around,I ran away immediately.When Dad came home,he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what happened.I could only tell him truth.Instead of ,he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health he also teaches me to be a good citizen.How I am to have such a good father!5I have met many teachers since I begin my schooling. Of all my teachers,Mrs.Green is the one who impresses me most.Though she is 50,she looks very young at herparing with other teachers, Mrs.Green pays more attention to her way of teaching. She tries various ways to make her class lively and interestingly.In her opinion, w e will not only know “what” but also understand “why”.So instead of giving us answer immediately,she encourages us to think carefully every time when she puts forward questions. With her help,we have learned how to analyze and settled problems. What the am azing world of “why”she leads us!She is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.I have met many teachers since I my schooling.Of all my teachers,Mrs.Green is the one who impresses me most.Though she is 50,she looks very young her age. withother teachers,Mrs.Green pays more attention to her way of teaching.She tries various ways to make her class lively and .In her opinion,we will not only know “what” but also understand “why”.So instead of giving us immediately,she encourages us to think carefully every time she puts forward questions.With her help,we have learned how to analyze and problems.What amazing world of “why” she leads us !She is such a learned person that we all admire very much.6Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher,Anna. When we arrived,we made a campfire first.Then,Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more food to eat that night.I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean. Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright. We all sat around the fire,listening Anna’s stories about her childhood.She was born into a poor family or she worked very hard to be successful. I was very touched that I couldn’t sleep the whole night,thought about being a teacher in the future.When I get home,I said to my parents,“Everything was great about the camping. I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future.”Last weekend we wentcamping in the mountains with our teacher,Anna.When we arrived,we made a campfire first.Then,Anna taught us to catch fish so that could have more food to eat that night.I liked the there because it was fresh andclean.Many stars were up in the sky and the moon looked bright.We all sat around the fire,listening Anna’s stories about her childhood.She was born into a poor family she worked very hard to be successful.I was touched that I couldn’t sleep the whole night,/ about being a teacher in the future.When I home,I said to myparents,“Everything was great about the camping.I want to be teacher like Anna in the future.”7I’m a huge book lover but like sharing my love for books! So I’ve been bought books constantly.Finishing reading one book,I placed it in or around my school sothat some of my schoolmate can treat themselves to the book. I especial like placingit on a stone table in the little garden in that students might have time to take a rest. I was delighted an other day when I saw a card left on the table to saythanks.And from the card,I knew my book turned out of to be a birthday gift for a strange girl. It was so lovely find out that my book could bring anyone pleasure!I’m a huge book lover like sharing my love for books! So I’ve been books constantly.Finishing reading one book,I it in or around my school so that some of my can treat themselves to the book.I like placing it on a stone table in the little garden in students might have time to take a rest.I was delighted other day when I saw a card left on the table to say thanks.And from the card,I knew my book turnedout to be a birthday gift for a strange girl.It was so lovely find out that my book could bring pleasure!8Now I’d like to share with you a strange experience I had a month before. It may sound funny,and it’s true. After a day’s hard work I went to bed early than usual.It was about two o’clock in the morning,and suddenly I woke up. I heard a noise. I got out of bed and went slow downstairs. I listened carefully. I could heard two men speaking quietly. I believed two thieves had broken into my house and I was really frightened,so I went back to upstairs,and immediately phone the police from my bedroom.The police arrived quickly. They opened front door with a special key andwent into the living room.You can imagine what embarrassed I was when they came upstairs and told me we had turned the television off for me and everything was all right.Now I’d like to share with you a strange experience I had a month .It may sound funny, it’s true.After a day’s hard work I went to bed than usual.It was about two o’clock in the morning,and suddenly I woke up.I heard a noise.I got out of bed and went downstairs.I listened carefully.I could two men speaking quietly.I believedtwo thieves had broken into my house and I was really frightened,so I went back upstairs,and immediately the police from my bedroom.The police arrived quickly.Theyopened front door with a special key and went into the living room.You can imagine embarrassed I was when they came upstairs and told me had turned the television off for me and everything was all right.9Susan’s family was terrible poor.One Christmas Eve,Susan’s father saw that Susan had used piece of gold wrapping paper to decorate a shoe-box,where was so precious to their family,and she put it under the Christmas tree. The nextmorning,Susan takes the box to her dad and said,“This is for you,Dad!”But if he opened it,he found it was empty.“Why do you give me an empty boxes? Don’t you know the gold wrapping paper is such expensive to us?” Her dad said angrily.Susancried,said,“Dad,it isn’t empty.I blew kisses into it until it was allfull.”Hearing of this,the dad felt regretful,he held Susan in his arms butsaid,“Sorry,my dear,I love you!”Susan’s family was poor.One Christmas Eve,Susan’s father saw that Susan had used piece of gold wrapping paper to decorate a shoe-box, was so precious to their family,and she put it under the Christmas tree.The next morning,Susan the box to her dad and said,“This is for you,Dad!”Buthe opened it,he found it was empty.“Why do you give me an empty ?Don’t you know the gold wrapping paper is expensive tous?”Her dad said angrily.Susan cried,,“Dad,it isn’t empty.I blew kisses into it until it was all full.”Hearing this,the dad felt regretful,he held Susan in his arms said,“Sorry,my dear,I love you!”10In hot summer,there are many kind of drinks such as water,tea and coffee.When you are very hot and feel thirst,which is the best you should drink?Scientists say water is very important for people.Water is needed for cooling the body on the hot day.Water carries body heat to the surface of the skin,but the heatis lost by sweating. Scientists say in hot weather,drink cold water is the best.Cold water helps cool us faster than warmer water.This is because it takes more heat inside the body and carries them away faster.However,scientists think why sweetdrinks are not good in hot weather.The sugar slows the drinks from getting the blood system.Tea and coffee are also not effective.Doctors also warn against alcoholic drinks.Alcohol speed the loss of body water.In hot summer,there are many of drinks such as water,tea and coffee.When you are very hot and feel ,which is the best you should drink?Scientists say water is very important for people.Water is needed for cooling the body on hot day.Water carries body heat to the surface of the skin, the heat is lost by sweating.Scientists say in hot weather, cold water is the best.Cold water helps cool us faster than water.This is because it takes more heat inside the body and carries away faster.However,scientists think sweet drinks are not good in hot weather.The sugar slows the drinks from getting the blood system.Tea and coffee are also not effective.Doctors also warn against alcoholic drinks.Alcohol the loss of body water.精美句子1、善思则能“从无字句处读书”。
高考英语短文改错专项练习1.doc
高考短文改错专项练习（1）My English teacher, who graduated Shan Xi Normal University, came to 1___our school in . It was at that time he was 23 years, in m y memory 2___there was an unforgettable thing, that made a perfect impression on me. 3___ He was once taught us English in class. All of a sudden, a boy named 4___Li lei had a quarrel with his partner. All the students fixed their eyes 5___on both of them, I thought he must have been angry with them, but, 6___ he didn’t blame th em, gave them a chance to sit down on the contrary,7___ after class the two boys were willing to apologize him for causing 8___ trouble in class. From then on, he had a big change about his class in9___ order to make his class lively and interested, he was deeply loved. 10___答案解析:1. graduated后加from graduate from 毕业于……。
2. time后加that it+is/was+强调部分+that从句。
高三英语二轮复习 专题一 语法填空和短文改错 第二讲 短文改错练习-人教版高三全册英语试题
第二讲短文改错[全国卷3年考情分析][命题者说]短文改错主要考查语法根底知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，根本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。
短文词数通常与书面表达一样，也是100词左右。
Ⅰ短文改错命题原如此表——高考就考这些点着眼点具体思考点词法动词时态、语态、非谓语动词、情态动词与虚拟语气名词可数不可数、单数还是复数、是否需用所有格代词主格与宾格、人称与物主、人称与反身、各种不定代词形容词、副词原级、比拟级、最高级冠词不定冠词、定冠词还是零冠词介词根本用法、固定搭配词性误用形容词与副词、形容词与名词、名词与动词句法连词(并列连词和从句引导词)、主谓一致、there be句型与特殊句式行文逻辑时态一致、指代一致、逻辑一致短文改错10处错误中，设错方式是有规律的，一般情况下，多、缺词2～3个，错词7～8个，做完题后，可按此规律进展查验。
见下表：类型总数(10) 具体思考点多、缺词2～3 be的各种形式、介词、冠词、不定式符号、三大从句引导词、代词、副词、固定搭配中的虚词错词7～8 连词、三大从句引导词、动词、名词、代词、形容词、副词等A(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor ’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up ！〞 “Slow down！〞 “Turning left！〞 I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following my eighteen eighteenthbirthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard ∧the/myfirst day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so but/yet once I started the car, my mind goes went blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word words， “Speed up ！〞 “Slow down ！〞 “Turning Turnleft ！〞 I was so much ＼ nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late later， the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sudden stop just in the middle on ofthe road. B(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all wor k in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables! 答案：Mr. and Mrs.Zhang /all both all ＼ work in our school.They live far from the school, andit takes them about a an/onehour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting interested in planting vegetables in their garden, that whichis on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier earlyand water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside Besides ， they often get some useful informations informationfrom the Internet. When summercame comes， they will invite their students ∧ to pick the fresh vegetables!C(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I loo k at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案：When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of ＼ how fast time flies. I had havegrown not only physically, and butalso mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took taken ， I entered my second year of high school and become becamea new member of the school music club.Around me in ∧this/the picture are the things they that/which were very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studyingdifference different kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late latestmusic albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your myhigh school days.名词单复数的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)可数名词单复数的错用：一般考查错把复数用作单数，有时也考查错把单数用作复数。
高考英语二轮温习考点题组训练专题11短文改错1
专题11 短文改错(2016·新课标Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(第11处起)不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our is always crowded with customers at meal people even had to wait uncle tells me that the key to his success is day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of ，he hopes that our business will grow steady.My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close tothatwhereI not very big，the restaurant ispopular in our is always crowded with customers at meal people even hadhaveto wait uncle tells methat the key to his success is honesthonesty.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetablesorandhigh quality oilare usingusedfor uncle says that he never dreams∧ofbecoming rich intheashort period of ，he hopesthat ourhisbusiness will growsteadysteadily.1．宾语从句中缺少地址状语，故用where引导。
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广西凤山县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）专练(1)
短文改错
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old
songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set
himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact,
he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with
me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
【参考答案】 6.
1.holding----hold
此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号，故用动词原形。
2.passes----passed
根据前面was可知为一般过去时态。
3.much----well/ clearly
根据句意可知，我很清楚记得我的爷爷。
此处very much是多的意思，不合题意。
4.shoulder----shoulders
根据常理，人有两个肩膀，故用复数。
5.toward----to/ into
根据句意，这里指：黑胡子变成白胡子。
所以用短语turn to或turn into。
6.himself----him
句意：他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。
故用him。
7.he前加and
根据句中结构可知He had a deep voice…和he was strong and powerful是并列关系，故用and连接。
8.去掉fact前a
固定短语：in fact。
9.during----when
during为介词，后不能接句子；应用when这个连词引导时间状语从句。
10.never----ever
语义错误。
根据句意：他是我认识的最温柔的人。
可知将never改为ever。
短文改错------【例题解析】
一．错词
1.动词错误：
（1）时态和语态、主谓一致的错误。
【1】整体时态：
*Then I ask him “Grandma, how come you have so much lines on your hand”全文为故事，故ask改为asked。
*High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon.The hole became bigger and bigger.
全篇使用过去时态，故改discover- -discovered
【2】主谓一致
*Having fun with their friends make them happy.
动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数形式makes。
*But the most wonderful thing about jack w ere his musical ability。
主语为the most wonderful thing 故此，系词为was
*But not all information are good to society.
主语不可数，所以动词用is。
（2.）动词错误：
*In American big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.(buy)
根据句子意思，数千人买票去看比赛。
故sell改为 buy。
（3）非谓语动词
【1】动名词错误
*I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future.(seeing)
解析：to 为介词，故此see改为seeing
* Not only play football makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense。