2020浙江省高考读后续写中可以使用的各种各样的“说“

续写中的各种各样的“说”
浙江高考新题型读后续写对学生除基础写作能力以外提出了更高层次的要求。

如果想要把读后续写写好除了能够灵活准确的运用基础语法与高频词汇，还需要额外掌握更多的写作能力。

要有意识的运用环境的渲染、人物衣着、表情、动作、语言等的精细描写，还要能够运用更准确的生动的词语来推动情节的发展，烘托出文章的中心。

其中语言描写是重要而且必需的手段，一个什么样性格的人在一个特定的场合要有恰当的语言，而“说”这个动作更不能只用said或者said angrily，实际上英语中有很多生动、准确、有特色有画面感的“说”，可以尝试在自己的文章中使用，会使文章增色不少。

以下列文章为例，可以尝试找找看，这一段文章中使用了多少表示“说”的动作，相信读完这边文章这个人物的特点和当时的情景可以生动的展现在你的面前，这就是我们需要模仿和学习的。

“I will honour Christmas in my heart and try to keep it all the year,” cried Scrooge in terror. He reached out to hold the spirit’s hand, but it slipped away. Scrooge looked around him. he saw he was in his own bed with his own thing around him.
“I have learned from the past, present and the future,” he rushed to the window and shouted to the boys below: “What day is it today?”“Why, it’s Christmas Day,” they replied in amazement. “Wonderful,” cried Scrooge. He rushed to his office to wait for Bob. When he entered, Scrooge pretended to look angry. “Do you know what day it is, my boy?” he asked Bob. “I’m not going to stand for this any longer,” he continued, “and so I’m going to raise your salary.” Bob looked amazed. “A Merry Christmas, Bob,” cried Scrooge slapping him on the back. “I want to help you and your family. Let’s talk about it this very afternoon.”
下面给大家总结一下我们高频使用可以替换“说”的动词。

先来翻译下列句子，思考在先有利于记忆和运用，练习后有答案，可以参考借鉴。

一、Said 加修饰成分
1.“想试试吗?”我说，碰了碰玛丽娜的手。

“好吧，”玛丽娜用她那尖利、不确定的声音说。

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2.“你不用着急。

慢慢来，”我温和地说。

她的整个脸顿时变得明亮起来，肩膀也放松了。

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二. 说完再说用“补充道”或“继续说”
1.Derek补充道：“我讨厌看到他生病，我知道需要做些什么才能让他恢复健康。

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2. 她接着说，“我紧紧地拥抱着他们，感觉到自己内心突然有了一种力量……”
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三. 正式的说可以用“宣布”或“声明”
1.“从来没有人投诉过我，”感到受辱的那名医生宣称
_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.“诸位，这是一个钱的问题，”我郑重其事地说。

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四. 回答的话可以用不同情绪“回应”
1.他自豪地回答说：“我可以带我的家人去看马戏了。

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_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.“我觉得你在抛弃我。

”她痛苦地回答。

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五. 除了“说”以外还可以表示“解释”“建议”“提醒”“承诺”或“警告”
1.“你还是需要好好休息一下。

”我建议道。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.“他和斯坦夫人有个计划，”她解释说.
_______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 妈妈提醒我：“一切都会好起来的。

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_______________________________________________________________________________ 4.“我们明年会回来的，”他承诺道。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 5.“暂时不要采取行动，”他警告说，“太危险。

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六.可以根据情节，把“说”改用成“坚持”“抱怨”“承认”“安慰”
1.“他还活着，”Bettie坚持说。

“但除非他把药列在单子上，否则他活不了多久。

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_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.“我以为我们可以成为朋友，”他抱怨道。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 3.“...但当这个可怜的男孩没有被选中时，我崩溃了，”他承认。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 4.罗先生用红边的眼睛安慰他说：“我也会想你的。

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七.还有其他情绪丰沛的“说”。

1.“不，不，”我抽泣着说。

泪水模糊了我的视线。

“很好，真的，”我叫道，“拿去吧。

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2.我打开窗户大声向对面喊道：“我知道我们以前见过面，但我不记得在哪里。

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3.车上的女人跳了出来，尖叫着，“你这个白痴！你为什么不看看你要去哪里？”
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4.“起来把你的钱和珠宝给我！”那人喊道。

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5. 她叹了口气，“你打碎了我们的明花瓶。

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6.“你真漂亮，”我低声说，我的舌头勉强配合。

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最后分享一个不用动词表现“说”的方式，例如：
Words just flooded out of her.“I'm going to talk about swimming. I have been lucky. I've won lots of competitions. But when I'm in a race, I'm not really thinking about winning. I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water…”她说得滔滔不绝。

【练习参考答案】
一、
1.“Want to try one on ?” I said, touching Marina's hand. “OK,” Marina said in her sharp, unsure voice.
2.“You don't have to rush. Just take your time,” I said in a gentle way. Her whole face instantly brightened and her shoulders relaxed.
二、
1.“I hated seeing him sick and knew something needed to be done to make him healthy again.” Derek adds.
2.She continued, “I hugged them tightly, feeling a sudden strength inside me...”
三、
1.“I had never received one single complaint against me,” claimed the humiliated doctor.
2.“It's a question of money, folks,” I announced.
四、
1.He proudly responded, “I can take my family to the circus.”
2.“I feel like you're abandoning me.” she responded bitterly.
五、
1.“You still need a good rest,” I suggested.
2.“He and Mrs Stein have a plan,” she explained.
3.“Everything happens for the best,” Mom reminded me.
4.“We'll be back next year,” he promised.
5.“Don't do anything yet,” he warned. “Too risky.”
六、
1.“He’s alive,” Bettie insisted. “But he won't be much longer unless he has the medicines on that list.”
2.“I thought we could be friends,” he complained.
3.“... But when the poor boy didn't get picked, I broken down,” he admits.
4.With red-rimmed eyes, Mr. Rowe comforted him, “I will miss you, too.”
七、
1.“No-o-o,” I sobbed. My vision was blurred by tears “It’s fine, really,” I cried, “Take it.”
2.I opened my window and shouted across. “I know we've met before, but I can’t remember where.”
3.The woman in the car jumped out, screaming, “You idiot! Why didn't you look where you were going?”
4.“Get up and give me your money and jewelry!” the man yelled.
5.She sighed, “You broke our Ming vase.”
6.“You are beautiful,” I whispered, my tongue barely cooperating.。