上海中考英语作文分类训练：书信作文

书信作文
1．假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Bob听说中国正在减轻中小学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。

请你根据下列内容，用英语写一封回信，谈一谈“双减”给你的学习和生活带来的变化。

提示：
1．过去，课后常常做很多作业，甚至周末还要上各种辅导班，睡得晚，压力大……
2．现在，有很多自由时间读课外书，参观博物馆等；
3．周末不上课，可以做自己想做的事情；
4．晚上有时间观看新闻，不必再熬夜……
要求：
语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及考生个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数80~100，开头结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。

Dear Bob,
How nice to hear from you again!
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Lovely yours,
Li Ming
2．假如你是校音乐社团的主席John，下周你校将举行校园好声音总决赛（the final of V oice of Our School），请拟一份英文邀请卡，邀请父母们届时参加。

要求至少五句话，不少于40词。

提示：1. 时间：下周五，下午1点。

2. 地点：音乐厅（music hall）。

3. 请于5月30日前书面回复是否能参加。

Dear uncles and aunts,
I’m the president of the music club.
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John
3．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (假定你是Tony，根据以下情境续写这一封信，不少于60 词，标点符号不占格)
注意：
1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。

Note: entire adj. 全部的，整个的
Dear Editor,
I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that will be built on First Street. I think it is exciting to have new things to do here. I just wish our city did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a
mall?__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
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4．Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。

标点符号不占格。

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假如你是李华，你的朋友小强最近在学习时注意力难以集中，学习效果不佳，感觉压力很大。

请你给他写一封信对他表示关心，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给他提供一些缓解学习压力的方法，帮助他放松身心、提高学习效率。

注意：
1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。

The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
☺ under stress
☺ take an active part in…
☺ try to relax and enjoy…
Dear Xiao Qiang,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
5．为了提高学生英语学习能力，李老师想要调查了解一下学生课外在记忆单词、朗读/背诵课文、做书面作业、读英语书刊和故事，或者其他等等方面的学习情况。

请你写一封信给他，谈谈以上几个方面你觉得哪个最重要，哪个方面你花时间最多，哪个做得最少；哪个
方面你最感到困难或最有成功经验；你将如何改进学习方法才能取得更大的进步。

（注意：1、信的格式与开头已给，这些文字不计入你所写的总数。

2、信中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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Dear Mr. Li,
In response to your survey, I’d like to tell you something about how I learn English after school._________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
Yours,
XXX
6．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。

假定你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊最近和妈妈发生了争吵，好几天不说话了。

为此她非常烦恼，想让你给出出主意。

请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。

1.认真思考争吵的原因；
2.主动和妈妈沟通，说出自己真实的想法，并了解妈妈的真实想法；
3.和妈妈一起寻找解决问题的方法。

注意：
1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分
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2.照抄阅读语篇不得分
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7．Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
假设你的好朋友李华最近沉迷于电脑游戏，无心学习。

他的父母和老师都非常担心，作为他的好朋友，请你给他写一封信：表达你对他的担忧，告诫他沉迷电脑游戏的危害以及摆脱目前这种状况的方法。

（信件格式已给）
The following is for reference only
1. lose oneself in ...
2. be worried about ...
3. communicate with ...
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8．Write a letter of at least 60 words on the topic “A suggestion for our school” (以“给学校的一个建议”为题写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。

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在近四年的初中校园生活和学习中，你学到和享受到了很多。

但是通过你的观察，学校有些地方还有提升和完善的空间，比如在课后服务、活动项目、学生午餐、学校设施、校园文化等等方面。

要求：请你结合自身经历，确定一个主题，给校长写封信，为学校提出一个合理化、可操作的建议，并说说你的理由或感想。

注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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9．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

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新学期带来了新变化。

“双减”新规（The new rules）提出：减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。

“双减”后，你的生活有了什么变化？请给学校的校长（Headmaster）写一封信，从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈谈你是否满意现在的变化以及还有何烦恼，并请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。

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10．In 60-100 words. write a letter of complaint according to the given situation and prompts. (根据所给情景和提示，写一篇60-100词投诉信) write a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the products that you bought and aren’t happy with. In your letter.
· explain why you’re writing the letter
· give details of your order (订单)
· describe the problem with the product(s).
· say what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir and Madam.
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Looking forward to a positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Bob,
How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China. In shorts, things have changed a lot. I used to have to do endless homework after class and attend classes even on weekends. Now I have more free time. I can do some reading and visit museums
and so on. On weekends, I can follow my own interests such as going for a movie and visiting friends. In the evenings, I can watch news on TV. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
Lovely yours,
Li Ming 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按书信格式写。

在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据所给的提示，给Bob写一封回信，介绍一下“双减”给你的学习和生活带来的变化。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述书信内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时相结合；首先介绍一下“减负”之前的情况；其次具体介绍现在的情况。

文中不要出现单词拼写及语法时态方面的错误。

2．例文：
Dear uncles and aunts,
I’m the president of the music club. We will hold the final of V oice of Our School next Friday. I’d like to invite you to come to our activity. You can come to the music hall at 1:00 p.m. Please reply in writing by May 30. Looking forward to seeing you.
John 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，你是John，是校音乐社团的主席，写一份英文邀请卡，邀请父母们届时参加，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。

2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时和一般将来时，人称用第一人称和第二人称。

文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

3．例文：
Dear Editor,
I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that
will be built on First Street. I think it is exciting to have new things to do here. I just wish our city did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a mall?
Now people are under more and more pressure from work and study. We need a place to relax.
I think this park is the best place to relax. We can see many people in the park every day. Some old people exercise in the park, and children fly kites in the park. There are also many people talking happily with their friends. If the park becomes a shopping center, there will be no suitable place for us to relax.
So I insist on my view that the park cannot be given up. Now the transportation is very convenient. People can take the subway or car to go to a far place when shopping. I think this is a better solution.
That’s all. Thank you!
Tony.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据信件中的提示要点，介绍不同意公园变购物公园的理由以及建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

4．例文
Dear Xiao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty concentrating on his study recently, the learning effect is poor, and you feel stressed. In fact, don’t worry, everyone will be under pressure. Proper pressure is helpful to do our study well. However, too much pressure is harmful to our health and study.
I was in the same situation as you. You can take an active part in sports. When you feel upset, you should try to relax and enjoy your favorite music. I believe that if you do this, you will get better and you will make a big progress in your study.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，给小强写一封信，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给出一些缓解学习压力的方法。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；在写作时要确保内容完整，要点全面，行文连贯，流畅、通顺，适当选用表示因果、递进、转折
关系的连接词，和复合句。

语言结构要符合语法习惯，保证单词拼写和标点使用正确。

5．
例文
Dear Mr. Li,
In response to your survey, I’d like to tell you something about how I learn English after school. Personally, I find memorizing new words most important, for vocabulary is the basis of any language learning, not just English. Besides, reading out loud is what I spend most of my time doing while I seldom recite any texts, which is too boring for me. As for written homework, it is truly my biggest headache because it seems endless. To progress more in English learning, I think it necessary to do some pleasure reading and that is exactly what I am about to do.
Yours,
Helen 【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，谈谈自己英语学习的情况，具体包括单词、课文、作业以及课外阅读等方面。

2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称；写作时承接开头，具体叙述自己认为英语学习哪个部分最重要、哪个部分还有所欠缺，以及将如何改进学习方法来取得更大进步。

注意信件的写作格式，要正确运用语言句式和语法，注意标点符号使用恰当。

6．例文
Dear Su Shan,
I’m sorry to hear that you have such problem. It’s common to have different opinions with our parents. First you should think about the reason why you argue with your mom. Then you should apologize to her, because we should respect the old. What’s more, you should face-to-face communicate with your mom. Tell her your feelings and ask her feelings. You can find out the key to solve this problem with your mom. I think your mom will understand you.
I think my suggestions can help you. Look forward to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。

针对好朋友苏珊和妈妈的问题提出针对性的建议。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。

根据提示内容，从思考争吵的原因，主动和妈妈沟通，寻找解决问题的方法等方面提出建议。

写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

7．例文：
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to computer games. Spending too much time and energy on games is harmful to your health. I’m worried about you. If you lose yourself in games, you may become isolated from the real world and ignore the beauty and love in life.
You can try other things to distract your attention. You can play basketball or take part in other sports with your friends. It can not only help you keep healthy, but also strengthen your friendship. Besides, you can communicate with your parents and friends, sharing you happiness and sorrow with them. Last but not least, you can read some interesting books to expand your knowledge in your spare time.
I will be happy if you get rid of the game. Look forward to your good news.
Yours,
Lily 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。

在写作时应根据题目要求写信讲述自己对朋友的担忧，讲述玩电脑上瘾的弊端，并讲述摆脱游戏的方法。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主，讲述游戏的危害和摆脱游戏的方法及建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

8．例文：
Dear headmaster,
I am your student. I want to say something about our school. Although my school life is colorful and happy, I still want to have a suggestion to our school. In my opinion, our school should organize more activities, such as going hiking, holding art festivals, and reading and speech contest. I think our school pay more attention to our study, but ignore other skills. If our school can hold all kinds of activities, students will be more active and improve themselves quickly. It is important for students to grow up healthily.
Your student
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应先确定主题，然后给学校提出建议，然后说出提建议的理由或感想，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍建议和提建议的理由或感想时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

9．例文
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rules.
In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school, including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself.
I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time? Thanks so much！
Yours
Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封学生写给校长的信，要求谈论“双减”政策出台后自己生活的变化以及遇到的烦恼，并请校长提出建议来解决烦恼。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，重点描述现在的生活，因此时态主要用一般现在时。

可分为三段：第一段说明写信目的；第二段描述“双减”后生活的变化；第三段陈述遇到的烦恼并请求对方的建议。

写作时，注意条理清晰，语言连贯，力求无语法和标点错误。

10．例文：
Dear manager,
I am writing a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the product that I bought and aren’t happy with. I feel bad to trouble you, but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.
I bought a pair of shoes of size 36. But it’s not like what the picture says. In addition, I find it very uncomfortable to wear. l am grateful if you take back the pair of shoes. I hope you can settle
this matter by next week. I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming 【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应先介绍你写这封信的原因，然后介绍你的订单和产品的问题，最后说出你希望经理做什么，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍产品的问题和希望经理做什么时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。