英语人教版九年级全册unit4作文

This is the most important change because ___
________________________________________.
How I’ve changed! My life has changed a lot in the last few years. My daily life is different and I used to like different things when I was a child. For example, I ___________ didn’t use to like tests. Now, I don’t mind them. I ____________________. used to hate P.E. class Now, it’s my favorite class. I used to play __________. basketball Now, I __________. play soccer I___________ used to walk to school. Now, _____________________. we have to take the bus
Discussion
What makes a good composition?
写作步骤 • 审题立意 • 定主人称时态 • 用词得当 • 检查修改
写作时 • 找关键词 • 由词组句 • 组句成段 • 扩句成段
Content
Everything needed included which is related to your view. (内容要完整)
But now his school life has changed a lot. He is very busy every day. He has to get up early and stays in school all day. Because he has to study hard. He hasn’t any more time to play games with his friends. He has to do his homework and goes to bed late every night. He hardly has any time for concerts. He misses the old days very much.
The biggest change in my life was_____
_____________________________________. This is the most important change because____________________________________ ________________________________.
我过去喜欢跑步但现在我喜欢打篮球
3a Talk with a partner about the changes that have happened to you. Write notes about how you have changed for these three things.
1.Appearance 2. personality 3. hobbies
3b Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like? Which change is the most important one and why?
Try to write two paragraphs: 1. General introduction about the changes in your life. 2. The most important change and how it happened.
How I’ve changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few
years. I used to __________________________.
Now I’m _______________________________.
The biggest change in my life was___________.
Talking Appearance:
tall, short, fat, thin, slim,strong,
young, old, straight hair, curly hair,
long hair, short hair, a medium body …
Talking
Personality:
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the ite notes about how you
have changed in your appearance,
personality and hobbies. Then talk
with a partner about your changes.
Paragraph 3: To express your own ideas
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to_________________________. Now I’m ______________________________.
used to have much time used to spend a lot of time playing games with his friends used to watch TV or chat with his grandma in the evening used to go to concerts with his father. is too busy gets up early and stays in school all day. hasn't any more time to play games with his does his homework and goes to bed late, hardly has time for concerts. misses the old days.
humorous,outgoing,serious, funny,
smart, friendly, shy, helpful,
quiet,active,brave,unfriendly... hobbies: read cartoon/ novel, sing,dance, play football/ basketball…
Zhuanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years. _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ ___________________________________
Proper linking words between sentences（连接词）
• first, second, third (the most important) • firstly, secondly, thirdly (finally),
首先，第二，第三
表示举例子： • for example 例如 • Take…for example 以…为例 • such as 比如 • like 像
1. 我过去是走路上学的。
I used to go to school on foot/walk to school.
2.我过去喜欢跑步，但现在我喜欢打篮球。
I used to like running,but now I like playing basketball.
Write sentences by using used to:
3.I/shy/outgoing and brave I used to be shy,but now I am outgoing and brave. 4.I/read books on martial arts/read books on Western culture I used to read books on martial arts,but now I read books on Western
Structure
Good beginning and ending (好的开头结尾) Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Proper linking words between sentences（ 使用恰当的连接词）
Write sentences by using used to:
表示转折：
• however (but)
然而(但是)
表示个人观点： • In my view 在我看来 • In my opinion 我认为 • As far as I am concerned 就我而言
3b Write about how you have changed.
What did you use to be like? Which change is the most important one, and why?
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Write a passage in about 100 words with the help of the following points about Zhanghua’s life change. The first sentence has been given.
Zhanghua as a child Zhuanghua now
One possible version: Zhuanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years. In the past, he used to have much time to play after school. He spent a lot of time playing games with his friends. When he finished his homework, he often watched TV or chatted with his grandma. On Saturday, he often went to concerts with his father.
culture.
Write sentences by using used to:
1. 我过去是走路上学的。
I used to go to school on foot/walk to school.
2.我过去喜欢跑步，但现在我喜欢打篮球。
I used to like running,but now I like playing basketball.
Paragraph 1: General introduction about the
Try to write three paragraphs.
changes in your life.
Paragraph 2: The most important change and
（总分总）
how it happened.