高考英语作文训练1书信咨询信+假日活动含范文

2019高考英语作文训练
李仕才
作文训练之书信（咨询信+假日活动）范文抄写：
句型提示：
1、书信功能句：
2、英语作文万能句：
1）I am writing to you to …(谈写信目的)
2) I am looking forward to your reply. （写信结束语）
3) I would appreciate it if you could …如果你能…，我将非常感激。

4) I wonder if you could …我想您是否能….
5) Would it be possible for you to …? 您是否可以。

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6) Would it be convenient for you to …? 您是否方便…?
7) I would like to …我想要…
8) It would be better for you to …您最好…
9) You might as well …您最好…
10) If I were you, I would …. 如果我是你，我会…
11） Would you please …? Could you …? 请您…
3、英语作文常用句式：
1) 主+谓+…,doing/done …
2) 主+谓+…,which/who 从句
3）主，同位语，+谓+…
4）主+谓+…,with 结构
5）What +从句 is that 从句
6）强调句或倒装句（起强调作用，需要强调时，用）
7）其他：so/such …that…; It is …before …; too … to …等
写作训练（1）
(1) 假设你是李华，寒假期间你准备和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩。

你想了解有关订
Difference?
票方面的具体情况，例如：可否在网上订票？团体购票是否可以打折？可否因故取消订票？
你在互联网上查到了一份门票价格表（见下表），但还有些具体信息不明确。

请给迪斯尼乐
园发一封信，询问有关情况。

参考词汇：取消cancel 折扣 discount 要求：词数100左右；可根据内容要点适
当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

注意：信的开头与结尾已给出。

[思路点拨]
题材：书信；时态：一般现在时人称：第一人称
要点提示：（１）寒假期间你准备和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩，（２）你想了解有关订票
方面的具体情况；（３）可否在网上订票；（４）团体购票是否可以打折；（５）可否
因故取消订票；（６）盼望尽快回音
篇章结构：文章可分两段
重点句型使用：I wonder whether… Is it possible for sb to do sth? I’d
like to know if…
第一稿
Dear Sir / Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
第二稿
Dear Sir / Madam, Yours,
Li Hua
第三稿
Dear Sir / Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Sir / Madam
My family are planning a visit to Hong Kong Disneyland this winter vacation.
I’ve got some information about the ticket prices on the Internet and now I’m
writing for some detailed information.
I wonder whether children under 3 need to pay for a ticket and what is the difference between a peak day ticket and a special day ticket. Is it possible for us to get a discount if we buy tickets as a group? Can we book tickets through the Internet? Besides, I’d like to know if we are allowed to cancel our ticket bookings if we cannot make the trip for personal reasons.
I am looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Li Hua。