高考真题短文改错15篇解析

知识就是力量，学习提升竞争力
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Correction 1(2014课标全国Ⅰ一、,10处语言错误假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有
每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

并在其下面写出该加的词。

在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),增加: 划掉。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(
并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

:在错的词下画一横线,修改;
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词注意:1.
处起)不计分。

处,多者(从第11 2.只允许修改10 Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女
we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they for all these year—果)in our back garden. Since then—
please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so
much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place
year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully
tomatoes at no cost!
)
课标全国Ⅱ二、Correction 2(2014,文中共有10处语言错误假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

并在其下面写出该加的词。

),增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧
(:把多余的词用斜线划掉。

删除并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

,修改:在错的词下画一横线;
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
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处起)不计分。

处,多者(从第112.只允许修改10My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the
t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. afternoon. We didn'
For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom
buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and
helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
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Correction 3(2014浙江三、10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有),并在其下面写上该加的词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧
(划掉。

删除:把多余的词用斜线
并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,
;
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词注意:1. 不计分。

11处起)只允许修改2.10处,多者(从第
s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with ' I was taking a train to
London
people.
t find his ticket but Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn'
became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a
seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly
offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to
live in.
)
Correction 4(2014辽宁四、,处语言错误,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

∧(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(\)划掉。

把多余的词用斜线删除: 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

在错的词下画一横线修改:,
;
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词注意:1.
处起)不计分。

11(,102.只允许修改处多者从第
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Dear Jeremy and Alice,
re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we'' Although we
Cleo.
In a word, your dog—
s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks ve called several time about Cleo' We'
s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with every
minute she'
the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5
clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.
o'
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely,
Jack and Rose
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四川五、Correction 5(2014 处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有10 并在其下面写出该加的词。

(∧),增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

删除: 在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

修改:: 注意;
1.每句不超过两个错误
;
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
不计分。

从第11处起)10 3.只允许修改处,多者(Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear
the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and
t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and classmate. Don'
s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you put out a fire. If it'
notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
II)
新课标Correction(2013·六、101分，满分分）10短文改错（共小题；每小题处语言错误，假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

并在其下面写出该加的词。

\删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

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1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；注意：11处起）不计分。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第ook I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have teaThe b
in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8
o'clock at night.
) This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器
industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there
was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain
industry.
陕西卷】Correction【2013·七、分，满分15分）小题，每小题短文改错（共101.5处语言错误，假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10并在/\）,每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（该句下面写出该加的词。

\）划掉。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；注意：处起）不计分。

112．只允许修改10处，多者（从第My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we
arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get
impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden
pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry,
we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
【2013·四川卷】八、Correction 15分）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分处语言错
误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有10 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2. 每处错误及其修改均公限一词；处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

103. 只允许修改
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Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend,
asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test,
all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We
were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just
helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
)
（2013辽宁卷九、Correction
10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有),并在其下面写上该加的词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧
(划掉。

删除:把多余的词用斜线
,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

修改:在错的词下画一横线
;
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词注意:1. 不计分。

11处起)从第2.只允许修改10处,多者( work. With little sleep and his Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. E very day, he spends too much time with
l. ―He has ruined his hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very il
healthy. We are worried about him.‖That is which other teachers say.
Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped.
I had to
calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture
we had
taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
)
2011浙江卷Correction 十、（10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有并在其下面写上该加的词。

),:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧增加划掉。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(
,:在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

修改;
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
不计分。

从第11处起)多者只允许修改 2.10处,( family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one I was playing at my cousin house. Since his
on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would
n again; I would always know I'd done something never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousi
wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.
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She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
全国卷I）十一、Correction （2009. 下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( 把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

删除: ,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

修改:在错的词下画一横线;
:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词注意)不计分。

(从第11处起 2.只允许修改10处,多者After five years away in my hometown, I find that the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed a lot.
The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school were gone. There exist
now a park that has a small river run through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road
has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of
Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle
school is still there.
）2009.全国卷II十二、Correction（处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有10 ∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

在缺词处加一个漏字符号增加:( 把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

删除: ,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

修改:在错的词下画一横线;
:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词注意不计分。

从第11处起)10 2.只允许修改处,多者(Hi, Susan.
on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the I'm sorry that I wasn't able to return to your bike
and I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of park street. I happened see an afternoon ，
accident. A little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed
here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all hope you understand.
Thank you!
Li Ling
陕西卷）2009.十三、Correction（处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有10 ),并在其下面写上该加的词。

(增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

:删除
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在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

修改:;
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
处起)不计分。

,多者(从第112.只允许修改10处My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when he
let a bicycle ran right into him. He never watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. But he is
having a nice time here. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read.
Some friends
of his go to see him every day, they take him lots of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time from
school because he is busy study what he has missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected
and will be out of hospital a few weeks.
2009.辽宁卷）十四、Correction（10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有并在其下面写上该加的词。

),:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧增加划掉。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(
并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,
;
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词注意:1.
处起)不计分。

多者10处,(从第11 2.只允许修改When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a
second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only
give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My
father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how
much happy I am when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
2009.浙江卷）十五、Correction（10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

下面短文中有并在其下面写上该加的词。

在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),增加: (:把多余的词用斜线划掉。

删除在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

修改:;
:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词注意)不计分。

处起多者只允许修改2.10处,(从第11
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put
wet through. I stood there and couldn't the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were
believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him
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and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give
it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
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一、答案常和完成时连此处讲述的是过去发生的事情,和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before
第一句:before→ago
用。

with the help of...在……的帮助下,为固定短语。

第一句:by→of
,前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。

:year→years句中year是可数名词第二句since then 通常和现在完成时连用,而不是过去完成时。

第二句:had→have时间状语
结果,为固定短语。

:在result前加a as a result 第三句所以用everywhere。

第三句:somewhere →everywhere根据句意可知是“到处都有”,
是并列的表语,所以要用形容词。

→tasty本句中small,juicy和tasty第四句:taste 可知应是代替可数名词复数的many。

根据前面的be动词are和后面的them第五句:much→many
连用。

但是可以和副词yet引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用,but/but第六句:删掉→yet
yet。

所以可以删掉but,也可以把but改为修饰名词时应用形容词。

第七句:wonderfully→wonderful 二、答案
,题材是学校生活类。

作者描述了自己心目中理想的校园。

[语篇解读]本文为记叙文
there be句型。

There表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应使用第二句:They→。

t改为don'tdont→'t全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didn' 第三句:didn'修饰。

homework是不可数名词,故应用much第三句:many→much。

时,应使用介词for→for表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于……)第四句:with 。

hours “一个半小时”要说one and a half hours第五句:第一个hour→其谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数我梦想中的学校)是单数,第六句:look→looks主语My dream school( 形式。

)后直接加可数名词复数或不可数名词,不用再加冠词。

第七句:删掉第一个the all kinds of(各种各样的
We can lie...,or (can) sit...
:sat→sit第八句接宾语时要加介词to。

:listening后加to listen是不及物动词,第八句改为形容词helpful。

and连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully第九句:helpfully→helpful 三、答案
,应用一般过去时。

1.第二句:删掉had。

此处指过去发生的事情
,应该是形容词。

第二句:noise→noisy。

此处作表语 2. 应用一般过去时。

:comes第三句→came。

此处是过去发生的事情, 3. 。

此处是顺承关系。

4.第四句:but→and。

后加for。

搜寻某个东西应该用search for 5.第五句:在searching :his→its/the。

此处指票的主
人。

第五句 6. :a→the。

此处特指丢了的票。

7.第六句→previously。

此处应该用副词形式。

8.第七句:previous ,所以用单数。

,第八句:strangers→stranger。

此处指的是票的主人只有一个人9. in need。

10.第九句:on→in。

此处是固定词组
四、答案
打扰某人。

后的to bother sb.: 1.第一段去掉bothers 考查名词复数。

several times好几次。

2.第二段第一句:time→times 句型可知。

s difficult to do sth.→understand根据it'第二段第二句3.:understanding所以谓语动词也应为单数考查主谓一致。

the early morning barking为单数,→ 4.第二段第三句:havehas
形式。

beside。

而不是介词此处应为副词Besides:Beside5.第二段第四句→besides
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average为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an→ 6.第二段第四句:average前的aan考查冠词。

所以用一般过去时。

→started考查时态。

因为是今天早晨发生的事情,7.第二段第五句:starts 作表语。

→close考查形容词。

形容词close8.第二段第六句:closely 考查物主代词。

:our →your9.第三段可知答案。

根据动词短语figure out(想出)10.第三段:在figure后加out
五、答案
talk with sb.和某人交谈;talk about sth.谈论某事。

1.第二句:with→about
主语是a fire alarm,谓语动词要用单数形式。

2.第二句:go→goes wait for sb.to do sth.等待某人做某事。

wait 3.第三句:在后面加for
所以要用复数形,根据语境可知不止有一个同学,第四句:classmate→classmates classmate是可数名词 4. 式。

后面应是肯定的祈使前面是表示否定的祈使句,连接的是并列的两个祈使句:trying→try and, 5.第五句,所以要用动词原形。

句quiet并列。

的表语,所以应用形容词,和 6.第五句:calmly→calm此处作系动词remain 此处应该是特指上文提到的火灾。

→7.第六句:athe。

人称代词错误。

前文用的是人称代词you,所以此处也应该是you8.第七句:us→you when所以多余,而且不符合语境。

第八句:删掉when引导词使用重复,that已经引导宾语从句,9.→or此处应该是选择关系而不是并列关系。

10.第八句:and
【答案】of---去掉六1.having 【答案】have—2.
which
【答案】that—3.
became becomes—4. 【答案】the
day前加5. 【答案】在interesting---interestingly 6. 【答案】by---with/to 7. 【答案】drank---drunk 【答案】8.
cups —9. 【答案】cupgrow-growth
【答案】10.
go→went七1. （第二段）第一句。

2. 第二句ours→our。

第三句so去掉。

3.
第四句Before→After。

4.
impatiently→impatient。

5. 第四句。

第五句中6. and→but 。

7. 第六句were→was and ∧fish-a。

8. 第六句中minute→minutes。

9. 第七句。

10. 第八句Felt→Feeling
difficulty--- difficult
61. 【答案】八
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【答案】hardly--- hard。

62.
asking--- asked. 63. 【答案】【答案】第二个to去掉。

64.
think--- thinking. 65. 【答案】all---both. 66. 【答案】the. same前加67. 【答案】tests--- test. 68. 【答案】so---or. 69. 【答案】does---did.
70. 【答案】
health 5.which---what has 4.healthy—去掉3.have—九答案：1.with—on 2.somuch —his 8.step—stepped 9.picture---pictures 10.many6.visit前加a 7.her---
richer 3.on --- in 4.put ---put it/that 5. enjoy to --- enjoy cousin's 2. rich –十1.cousin –
6.faced --- face
7. Late --- Later
8.slow --- slowly
9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never
十一答案属于固定搭配。

1. in→from。

句意是我离开家乡五年，away from 过去常常做某事请‖。

used to 2. living →live。

后跟动词原形，表示―3. older →old。

句中没有比较的意思。

根据上文可知饭店和鱼店消失都陈述的是现在的情况。

4. were →are a park是单数第三人称。

5. exist →exists 主语6. run---running
sports center是可数名词单数，表示不确定。

7. sports前加a。

是单数，因此把their改为its。

8. their →its 前文中提到了名词The factory ‖give way to―让路，用主动语态。

9. 去掉been。

短语10. Besides →But。

前后表示转折关系。

十二答案to;
1. 去掉meant;
2. mean改为but; 改为
3. andheld; 改为
4. hold
5. turned the corner;
前加6. seeto；go; 7. going改为there; 8. here改为hours; 改为9. hourwas 10.were改为
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十三答案1. breaking- broken. 非谓语动词做定语，与所修饰词是被动关系，用过去分词。

后常用省略to的不定式做宾语补足语。

2. ran- run. let 。

get into trouble是固定短语，意思是：陷入麻烦中。

3. 去掉trouble前的the4. here---there
修饰名词nurses，用形容词。

5. patiently- patient.
and。

6. ∧they take him- and.前后文是并列关系，用并列连词lots of修饰，应用复数。

7. book-books. book前用be busy (in) doing sth：忙于做某事。

8. study –studying。

than可知此处副词用比较级。

9. fast- faster。

由in a few weeks：过几周。

10. ∧a few- in/within。

十四答案决定了名词必须用复数形式。

1. friend---friends；Most of
指同类里边的一个，此处我希望我也能有一辆，与前面提到的是一类。

；it代替同一个，one2. it —onethat.
不能用3. that---which；非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which之间需要加表目的the moneyask my father与4. the money前加for；、此处ask my father的目的应该是钱。

的介词。

I. 和后句的myself.可知此处应该改为5. He----I；由前句he said he could only give me half of the money. ；按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。

6. if---when 7. after---later；此处用副词，不能用连词。

8. gives---gave；按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。

happy之间不需要加任何词。

前的much.；此处how与9. 去掉happy10. am---was
十五friends. 后用名词复数形式，改为中的多数才能用one of ，one of 1. friend-friends 。

---beside. 旁边，用2. besides----beside，在---；umbrella 的发音可知。

3. a----anbelieve vt.
去掉in；4.
,用过去时。

5. is----was；过去发生用副词6. grateful---gratefully；动词accept.but.
；前后构成转折，用7. and---but ；表示其他人用someone/somebody else。

8.
everyone---someone/somebody 句型决定。

；用9. possible后加to It is/was possible to do sth. 10. expect----expecting；介词后动名词形式。

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