2016—2017高一上第一次月考英语试题(含解析)

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河南省周口中英文学校2016—2017高一上第一次月考英语试题(含解析)
(满分 120分,限时 100分钟)
测试内容:必修一Unit1-2 测试形式:高考题型(不包含听力)语法要点:直接引语与间接引语
特点:贴近教材,夯实基础,通过做题培养分析问题解决问题以及提高实际运用的能力。

第二部分阅读理解(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(共15小题:每小题2分,满分30分)
阅读下列短文,从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

A
Linda Eveans was my best friend—like the sister I never had. We did everything together: piano lesson, movies, swimming, horseback riding.
When I was 13, my family moved away, Linda and I kept in touch through letters,and we saw each other on special times- like my wedding and Linda’s. Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often. One day a card that I sent came back, stamped “Address Unknown”. I had no idea about how to find Linda.
Over the years, I missed Linda very much, I wanted to share happiness of my children and then grandchildren, And I needed to share my sadness when my brother and then mother died, There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda could fill.
One day, I was reading a newspaper when I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda and whose last name was Wagman—Linda’s married name. “There must be thousands of Wagmans . ”I thought, but I still wrote to her.
She called as soon as she got my letter, “Mrs, Tobin!”she said excitedly, “Linda Evans Wagman is my mother.”Minutes later I heard a voice that I recognized at once, even after 40 years. We laughed and cried and caught up on each other’s lives, Now the empty place in my heart is filled, And there’s one thing that Linda and I know for sure: we won’t lose each other again!
21. They didn’t often write to each other because they______.
A.got married B.had little time to do so
C.didn’t like writing letters D.could see each other on special times
【答案】B
【知识讲解】
【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。

作者描写了与好朋友Linda分别数十载后,偶尔在报纸上看到了一个像Linda是女人,便尝试给她写信,结果两个儿时的好朋友竟然重新取得了联系。

细节理解题。

根据文章第二段中的“Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often.”可知,她们之所以没有经常写信,是因为她们忙于照顾孩子,又要搬新家,也就是说,她们忙于时间写信。

22. There was an empty place in the writer’s heart because she_______.
A.was in trouble B.didn’t know Linda’s address
C.received the card that she sent D.didn’t have a friend like Linda to share her happiness and sadness
【答案】D
【知识讲解】推理判断题。

根据文章第三段内容可知,作者十分渴望与她的好朋友Linda分享自己的喜忧,可惜与她失去了联系,这给作者的心灵深处留下了一个空白。

23. The writer was happy when she_____.
A.read the newspaper B.heard Linda’s voice on the phone
C.met a young woman who looked a lot like Linda D.wrote to the woman whose last name was Wangman
【答案】B
【知识讲解】推理判断题。

根据文章的最后2段的意思,真正让作者感到高兴的是当她在电话上听到老朋友Linda的声音的时候,而不是读报纸和写信的时候,因为那时还只是推测。

24. They haven’t kept in touch_______.
A.for about 40 years B.for about 27 years
C.since they got married D.since the writer’s family moved away
【答案】A
【知识讲解】细节理解题。

根据文章最后一段“Minutes later I heard a voice that I recognized at once, even after 40 years. ”可知,她们是40年后联系上的。

B
A study of English learning problems was carried out among a total of 106 foreign students.It shows that most students considered understanding spoken English to be their biggest problem on arrival.This was followed by speaking.Writing increased as a problem as students discovered difficulties in writing papers that they were now expected to hand in.Reading remained as a significant(显著的)problem.
The information gained helped us in determining where special attention should be paid in our course.Although many students have chosen to join the course with a reasonable motivation(动机),we considered it important to note what seemed to encourage interest. Nearly all the students have experienced some kind of grammar-based English teaching in their own country. To use the same method would be self-defeating because it might reduce motivation,especially if it has failed in the past. Therefore a different method may help because it is different.
Variety of activity was also seen as a way of maintaining(保持)or increasing motivation. Several years ago we had one timetable that operated throughout,but we soon found that both the students and the teachers lost interest by about halfway through the ten weeks. This led us to a major re-think,so finally we brought it into line with the expressed language needs of the students.
25. What is the text mainly about?
A.Foreign students have more problems. B.There are many ways to improve English.
C.Teaching should meet students' needs.D.English learning problems should be studied again.
【答案】C
【知识讲解】
【语篇解读】本文是科教阅读类文章。

本文通过对学生在英语学习中的需求的调查,说明了应该采取何种教学方法以适应学生的需求。

主旨大意题。

根据对学生的调查来了解学生的需求和最后一句“This led us to a major re-think,so finally we brought it into line with the expressed language needs of the students.”可知,教学应该满足学生的需求。

26.Writing became a bigger problem when foreign students__________.
A.had to write their papers B.became better at speaking
C.became less interested in reading D.had fewer problems with listening
【答案】A
【知识讲解】细节理解题。

根据文章第一段中的“Writing increased as a problem as students discovered difficulties in writing papers that they were now expected to hand in.”可知,正确答案选A。

27.We may infer from the last two paragraphs that___________.
A.different teaching methods should be used B.grammar-based teaching seems to be encouraging
C.English courses are necessary for foreign students D.teaching content should be changed halfway
【答案】A
【知识讲解】推理判断题。

根据倒数第二段中的“Therefore a different method may help because it is different.
”以及最后一段提到的以前的时间表的失败可知,应该采取新的教学方法。

28.The word“it”underlined in the last paragraph refers to“__________”.
A.re-think B.activity C.motivation D.timetable
【答案】D
【知识讲解】词义猜测题。

文章中提到的“timetable”在实施过程中老师和同学们就失去了兴趣,所以不得不重新调整,使之满足学生表达的需求,所以文中的“it”指的是“timetable”。

C
One day,Jack’s parents told him that his grandpa would retire after working for forty years.Jack said in surprise, "I'm only seven, so it means Grandpa has been…er …A really long time!"
His parents said, "Yes. That's why we are going to have a surprising party for him. "
Jack loved his grandpa and wanted to do something special for him. He remembered the business card his grandpa had given him two years before. He knew that his grandpa would no longer have the position(职位) on that card, so he decided to build a new one for his grandpa.
When the big day came, Jack was ready. But he didn't want to put his gift together with others'. He carried it around with him the whole evening.
When all the other people left, he took his grandpa's hand and brought him over to a chair and gave him the gift.
His grandpa smiled, "Well, it must be a beautiful gift. May I open it now?" "Sure!" Jack said excitedly.
As Grandpa opened the gift, tears came into his eyes. Jack gave him the greatest gift he had ever got! They were business cards with new position: FULL-TIME GRANDPA! Jack said, "Now your full-time job is my grandpa!"
Well, how much do I get paid?" his grandpa asked, smiling. "As many hugs as you want!" With these
words, Jack gave Grandpa a hug. " Well, I guess that means I'm the richest man in the world! " said Grandpa.
29. Who was going to retire?
A. Jack's grandma.
B. Jack's grandpa.
C. Jack's mother.
D. Jack's father.
【答案】B
【知识讲解】
【语篇解读】本文是故事类阅读。

作者讲述了Jack 的爷爷退休了,Jack 送给他一份特别的礼物,让爷爷很感动的故事。

细节理解题。

根据文章第一句话“One day,Jack’s parents told him that his grandpa would retire after working for forty years.”可知,是Jack的爷爷将要退休。

30. What did Jack decide to do for his grandpa?
A. To build a new position for him.
B. To draw a picture for him.
C. To sing a song for him.
D. To buy a gift for him.
【答案】A
【知识讲解】细节理解题。

由文章的第三段最后一句“He knew that his grandpa would no longer have the position(职位) on that card, so he decided to build a new one for his grandpa.”可知,他决定给爷爷建立一个新的职位。

31. Which of the following is TRUE?
A. Jack was the first one to give his gift to his grandpa.
B. Jack was the last one to give his gift to his grandpa.
C. Jack gave his gift to his grandpa together with other people.
D. Jack gave his gift to his grandpa together with his parents.
【答案】B
【知识讲解】细节理解题。

根据文章第五段中的“When all the other people left, he took his grandpa's hand and brought him over to a chair and gave him the gift.”可知,Jack 是最后一个送礼给爷爷的人。

32. Why were there tears in Grandpa's eyes?
A. Because he would lose his position.
B. Because he was not cared for.
C. Because he was moved by Jack's gift
D. Because he was unhappy.
【答案】C
【知识讲解】由文章的倒数第二段中的第二句“Jack gave him the greatest gift he had ever got! ”可知,爷爷感动的原因是他收到Jack的礼物是最好的。

D
GONE WITH THE WIND
Auther: Margaret Mitchell
¥25 (in bookstore) ¥18 (online)
Gone With the Wind is a best-seller, which tells a story that happened in the American Civil War. Scarlett Ohara is a woman in the story who is full of energy. She is strong and saves her family but is very selfish at the same time.
A LITTLE PRINCESS
Author: Frances Hodgson Burnett
¥18.3 (online)
Motherless Sara Crewe was sent home from India to schoo l at Miss Minchin’s. Her father was very rich and she lived a rich and comfortable life. Then her father died and Sara lost everything. She had to learn to do with her changed life. Her strong character made her able to fight successfully against her poverty(贫穷) and the scorn(嘲笑) of her fellows. It’s an excellent book with 4 tapes for children
PETER PAN
Author: J.M Barrie
¥15 (in bookstores) ¥12 (online)
It is a children’s story full of imagination and adventures, which is about Wendy, John, and Michael Darling’s adventures in Never-Never Land with Peter Pan, the boy who would not grow up. The children are happy and lovely. (with 2 tapes)
UNCLE TOM’S CABIN
Author: Harriet Beecher Stowe
¥20 (in bookstores)
The most famous novel in American history, U ncle Tom’s Cabin talked about the struggle between free states and slave states during the American Civil War and is as powerful today as when it first came out 150 years ago.
THE SECRET GARDEN
Author: Frances Hodgson Burnett
¥35 (in bookstores) ¥30 (online)
Mary Lennox, a sickly orphan(孤儿), finds herself in her uncle’s dark house. Why are so many rooms locked? Why is one of the gardens locked? And what is that crying she hears at night? Through the power of hope, friendship, and the magic of nature, the brave girl brings the house and a long-lost garden back to life.
33. All of the following books have children as their main characters except _______.
A.PETER PAN B.GONE WITH THE WIND
C.A LITTLE PRINCESS D.THE SECRET GARDEN
【答案】B
【知识讲解】
【语篇解读】本文是一篇广告文章。

文章对《飘》、《小公主》、》《彼得·潘》、《汤姆叔叔的小屋》和《秘密花园》这五部小说进行了简单的介绍。

细节理解题。

GONE WITH THE WIND 的主人翁是一位美丽坚强,敢于面对现实,勇于与命运抗争的女性,而不是关于小孩子的故事。

34. Mary brings the house and a long-lost garden back to life with the help of ______.
a. the power of hope
b. the power of friendship
c. her uncle
d. nature’s magic
A.a-b-c B.a-c-d C.b- c-d D.a-b- d
【答案】D
【知识讲解】细节理解题。

根据文章最后一句“Through the power of hope, friendship, and the magic of nature, the brave girl brings the house and a long-lost garden back to life.”可知,Mary 通过希望和友谊的力量以及自然界的魔法才使得这所房子和花园重新获得生机的。

35. Which of the following about the books is mentioned in this passage?
A What Sara did to help her fellows.
B Why Peter Pan wouldn’t grow up.
C What kind of woman Scarlett is.
D How Marry Lennox came into her uncle’s house.
【答案】C
【知识讲解】推理判断题。

根据这五部小说的内容和介绍可知,只有C项能够在原文中找到,其他选项在文章中均未有提到。

第二节(共5小题:每小题2分,满分10分)
根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。

选项中有两项为多余选项。

Once there was a poor village.He found it difficult even to support his family. 36 He walked about in the streets, but he did not get a job. One day, he met a rich businessman, who gave him the job of cleaning the office. The villager began his work and he even started reading and writing in his spare time.
One day, the businessman saw that the villager was writing something. He said, “You can also read and write! Your handwriting is very good.”37 The villager began to do this job as best as he could.
Later, the businessman learnt that the villager was good at accounting, and he made him his shop accountant. The other accountants were very jealous of the villager’s abilities. They told the businessman that the villager had a
small room where he hid the money stolen from him. 38 One day, they had their chance. They saw the villager going into ‘that’room. 39 When they came back and opened the door, there was nothing in that room except an ordinary box.
The villager was ordered to open the box with his own hands. And there was only a pair of dirty shoes and some old clothes. 40 At the same time, he was so angry with the jealous accountants that he fired them at once. The villager was made the only accountant for his office.
A. He came to a big city hoping to find a job.
B. They closed the door behind him and ran to the businessman.
C. So the businessman decided to give the villager a good lesson.
D. The businessman was moved by what he had seen.
E. So the villager was given the work of writing business letters for him.
F. The villager wished that some kind people might give him a good job.
G. But the businessman refused to believe them unless he had seen it with his own eyes.
36.【答案】A
【知识讲解】
【语篇解读】本文是记叙文。

主要叙述了难以维持生计的村民找到了一份会计工作,但却遭到了同事的嫉妒,诬陷他在家里藏了从富商那里偷来的钱的故事。

承接上一句“他发现养家都很难”,所以他他来到一个大城市希望能够找一份工作。

A选项与后一句衔接紧密,他在街上四处打听但找不到工作。

37. 【答案】E
【知识讲解】空前的意思是“你既能读也能写,你的书写非常好看”,空后的意思是“这位农民尽力地做好这份工作”,前后联系起来考虑,正确答案应该是E。

38. 【答案】G
【知识讲解】前一句是说“他们告诉这位商人,这位农民有一个小房间,他把从商人那偷来的钱藏在那儿。

”,所以后面就接着说“但是这位商人除非自己亲眼看到,否则不相信他们的话。

”符合语境,前后表示转折。

39. 【答案】B
【知识讲解】空前的意思是“他们看到了这位农民走进了那间房子”,空后的意思是“当他们回来打开房门时......”,根据文章前后照应,中间是“他们把门锁上,跑向商人”符合语境。

40. 【答案】D
【知识讲解】前文说到“箱子里只有一双脏鞋子和一些旧衣服”,所以当商人看到眼前这一切很感动。

第三部分英语知识运用(共两节,满分45分)
第一节完形填空(共20小题;每小题1.5分,满分30分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

My nephew’s 10-year-old son came for a visit one hot, July weekend.I persuaded him to 41 inside and joined him in a game. After 42 for an hour, I suggested that we relax for a while. I 43 my favorite recliner(躺椅)to let my neck muscles relax. He had slipped out of the room and I was catching a few enjoyable 44 of peace and quiet.
"Look,Alice,”he said eagerly as he 45 over to the chair where I was sitting." I found a kite. Could we go outside and 46it?"
Glancing out a nearby window, I noticed it was47 outside.“I'm sorry, Tripper,.”I said, sad to see his 48 eyes. " The wind is not 49 today. The kite won't fly.”
The50 10-year-old boy replied,“I think it's windy enough. I can get it to fly.”He answered 51 he hurried out to the back door.
Up and down in the yard he ran, 52 the kite attached to a small length of string. He ran back and forth,as hard as his ten-year-old legs would carry him, looking back 53 at the kite behind. After about ten minutes of unsuccessful determination, he came back in.
I asked, "How did it 54 ?"
“Fine,” he said, not wanting to admit 55.“I got it to fly some”
As he walked past me to return the kite to the closet shelf, I heard him say under his breath, “ I guess I'll have to wait for the56 .”
At that moment I heard another voice speak to my 57 .“Alice, sometimes you are just like that. You want to do it in your way 58 waiting for the wind.”
And the voice was right. We usually want to use our own efforts to 59what we want to do. We wait for the wind only after we have done all we can and have exhausted(耗尽)our own 60 .
41. A.live B.stay C.study D.lie
42. A.playing B.resting C.challenging D.arguing
43. A.cleaned up B.jumped off C.fell into D.cut down
44. A.moments B.hours C.times D.periods
45. A.sent B.ran C.left D.climbed
46. A.decorate B.drop C.hang D.fly
47. A.hot B.still C.noisy D.fine
48. A.bright B.disappointed C.dull D.satisfied
49. A.staying B.stopping C.going D.blowing
50. A.clever B.talented C.determined D.fearless
51. A.after B.unless C.as D.untill
52. A.following B.making C.pulling D.watching
53. A.angrily B.nervously C.doubtfully D.hopefully
54. A.go B.come C.make D.fly
55. A.win B.defeat C.mistake D.luck
56. A. wind B. order C. news D. sunshine
57. A. heart B. memory C. dream D. world
58. A. because of B. instead of C. except for D. as for
59. A. imagine B. decide C. apply D. accomplish
60. A. courage B. patience C. strength D. knowledge
【语篇解读】本文是一篇夹叙夹议的记叙文。

作者的侄子,一个10岁的孩子在没有风的时候想通过自己的努力放飞风筝,但是没有成功,由此引发感想,我们无论在做任何事的时候,都会尽心尽力地去做,但是有时也需要外部条件。

41. 【答案】B
【知识讲解】考查动词。

由于天气炎热,作者让这个10岁的孩子呆在家里和他玩游戏,stay 表示“停留,待”
42. 【答案】A
【知识讲解】考查动名词。

A. playing玩,B. resting休息,C. challenging挑战,D. arguing争论,从前面的句子:I persuaded him to42inside and joined him in a game.可知,是玩了一个小时后,选A。

43.【答案】C
【知识讲解】考查动词短语。

clean up “收拾干净,清理”;jump off “跳下来”;fall into “落入,进入”;cut down “削减”;根据句意:“我躺在躺椅上让自己放松一下”可知,正确答案是C。

44.【答案】A
【知识讲解】考查名词。

根据句意:“我在捕捉生活中这些平静的瞬间。

”可知,句中的catch是“捕捉”之意,后面用moments与之相呼应。

45. 【答案】B
【知识讲解】考查动词。

本句句意是“我躺在躺椅上,这时孩子跑到我面前跟我说话。

”,send“送,派遣”;leave“离开”;climb“攀登”三者均不合句意。

46. 【答案】D
【知识讲解】考查动词。

根据句意:“孩子找到一个风筝,于是提议一起出去放风筝”可知,放风筝是fly。

47. 【答案】B
【知识讲解】考查形容词。

hot “热的”;noisy “噪音的”;fine “好的”;still “不动的,无风的”。

由下文的“The kite won’t fly”来判断,说明此时外面没有风。

48. 【答案】B
【知识讲解】考查形容词。

本句句意:“我那样说,孩子当然会感到很失望。

”只有disappointed符合题意。

49. 【答案】D
【知识讲解】考查动词现在分词。

根据后面句子意思“风筝飞不起来”,前面应该是没有风,A、B、C 三项均不合题意。

50. 【答案】C
【知识讲解】考查形容词。

从孩子所说的话可以看出,他仍然坚持自己的想法,只有C项“意志坚定的”符合题意。

51. 【答案】C
【知识讲解】考查连词。

此处as是连词,引导时间状语从句,表示“一边......一边......”。

根据句意:“他一边答话,一边向后门跑去。


52. 【答案】C
【知识讲解】考查非谓语动词。

根据放风筝的习惯,一般是人在前面跑,拉着风筝让其慢慢飞起来,故选C。

53. 【答案】D
【知识讲解】考查副词。

根据句意:“他一边跑,一边回头看风筝,希望它能飞起来。

”可知,此处描写孩子的内心活动。

54. 【答案】考查动词。

it 指“风筝”,而go 表示“进展”,作者是问“风筝飞起来了吗?”
【知识讲解】
55. 【答案】B
【知识讲解】考查名词。

从下文的叙述可知风筝并没有飞起来,但是孩子不愿意承认自己失败了,而是说“我让它飞了一会儿”。

56. 【答案】A
【知识讲解】考查名词。

从孩子的话语里可以看出,要想让风筝飞起来,还是要等到有风的日子。

57. 【答案】A
【知识讲解】考查名词。

句子意思是:“此时我仿佛听到发自内心的另外一个声音。

”要从词义入手。

58. 【答案】B
【知识讲解】考查介词短语。

because of “由于”;except for “除......之外”;as for “至于”;instead of “代替;而不是”。

文章意思是“你想按自己的方式做事,而不是等待顺风顺水的时机。

”,所以只有instead of 符合题意。

59. 【答案】D
【知识讲解】考查动词。

句意:“通常,我们想尽自己的全力去完成我们想做的事。

”要区分清楚词义,imagine “想象”;decide “决定”;apply “申请,应用”;accomplish“完成”。

60. 【答案】C
【知识讲解】考查名词。

句意:“只有当我们竭尽所能、耗完了自己的力气还是不能成功的时候,才会想到依靠外界的力量。

”courage “勇气;胆量”;patience “耐心;忍耐”;strength “力量;力气”;knowledge “了解;知识”。

根据句意正确答案是C。

第二节(共10小题:每小题1.5分,满分15分)
阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

A farmer once organized a competition between his dog and his rabbit. He dug a hole in one of the biggest fields,
and hid a carrot and a bone in it. He wanted to see 61 animal would find them first.
The 62 (cheer) and optimistic rabbit threw himself into looking for the carrot,63 (dig) here and there,totally convinced that he would find it. But the dog,after sniffing around for a bit,64 (lie) down and began to complain about how difficult it was to find one bone in such a big field.
The rabbit dug 65 hours,and with every new hole the dog complained even more about how difficult this
was,even for the rabbit. 66 the rabbit thought that each hole dug was one hole less that needed digging. When there was no place in the whole field 67 (leave) to dig,the rabbit dug a tunnel right to 68 the dog had been lying all the time.There he found the carrot and the bone.
This is how the dog lost the game.He had come to 69 right place at the very beginning but failed to find the bone 70 he only complained and didn't try at all.
【语篇解读】本文是一篇寓言故事。

文章主要讲述了以为农民在他的田地里藏了胡萝卜和骨头,想看看他的狗和兔子是否能够找到它们。

兔子一直在努力寻找,而狗一直在抱怨,最终兔子在狗躺的地方找到了这两样东西,给我们的启示是:凡事要努力就有可能成功,抱怨只会一事无成。

61. 【答案】which
【知识讲解】考查which引导的宾语从句。

农夫想看看狗和兔子哪一个先找到胡萝卜和骨头。

62. 【答案】cheerful
【知识讲解】考查词性。

cheer 是名词、动词,根据句子结构空格处应与and 后面的optimistic(形容词)是并列关系。

63. 【答案】digging
【知识讲解】考查非谓语动词。

dig 与逻辑主语rabbit 构成主谓关系,这里用digging 的现在分词形式作伴随状语。

64. 【答案】lay
【知识讲解】考查动词时态。

此处与began 是并列谓语,因此,用lie 的过去式lay。

65. 【答案】for
【知识讲解】考查介词。

介词for后跟段时间,for hours 表示“几个小时”。

66. 【答案】But
【知识讲解】考查连词。

狗一直抱怨而兔子却在用积极的态度寻找,前后两句之间是转折关系,因此用But。

注意第一个字母大写。

67. 【答案】left
【知识讲解】考查非谓语动词。

空处做place的后置定语,leave与place构成逻辑上的动宾关系,因此用过去分词形式。

68. 【答案】where
【知识讲解】考查宾语从句。

兔子挖了一条地道,刚好通向狗一直躺着的地方。

根据语境可知,应用where引导宾语从句,在从句中作状语。

69. 【答案】the
【知识讲解】考查冠词。

在此处表示特指,the right place指的就是埋胡萝卜和骨头的地方。

70. 【答案】because/as/since
【知识讲解】考查连词。

狗没能找到胡萝卜和骨头,因为他只是抱怨而没去寻找,空格前后为因果关系。

四、写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was our English teacher's birthday yesterday. Though English is a hard subject, but I like my English teacher a lot, and so are my classmates. She is nice with us and always tells us stories of the days when she was in her twenty. Sometimes she even stayed in school to help students make up their lessons. She always encourages us and tells us do our best. We are gratefully to her, so that day we bought him a cake and a gift. We even made a big card for her, on it we wrote all our names. Seeing these, she was moving and had a big smile in her face.
【语篇解读】作者和他的同学们都喜欢他们的英语老师,老师给他们讲故事、补课、鼓励他们那里学习等,同学们给她送礼物、卡片等,老师很感动。

答案:
It was our English teacher's birthday yesterday. Though English is a hard subject, but I like my English teacher a lot, and so are my classmates. She is nice with us and always tells us stories of the days when she was in do to
her twenty twenties . Sometimes she even stayed stays in school to help students make up their lessons. She always encourages us
and tells us ∧to do our best. We are gratefully grateful to her, so that day we bought him her a cake and a gift. We even made a
big card for her, on
it which we wrote all our names. Seeing these, she was moving moved and had a big smile in on
her face.
1. 【答案】are →do
【知识讲解】考查肯定呼应。

前面句中的谓语动词是like ,在肯定呼应的句式中,so 后面要用倒装,谓语动词要与前面的一致。

2. 【答案】with →to
【知识讲解】考查介词用法。

be nice to sb. “对某人好”是to 而不是with 。

【举一反三】be kind/ good to sb 3. 【答案】twenty →twenties
【知识讲解】考查介词固定搭配。

在某人二十多岁时,英语的表达方式是“in one ’s twenties ”。

【举一反三】在某人三十多岁时,in one ’s thirties; 在某人四十多岁时,in one ’s forties; 在某人五十多岁时,in one ’s fifties; 在某人六十、七十、八十、九十多岁时,怎么表达?写写看 4. 【答案】stayed →stays
【知识讲解】考查动词时态。

由句中的sometimes和always,还有句意和意境可知,应该用一般现在时。

5. 【答案】us ∧
do
to
to
【知识讲解】考查动词不定式。

本句是一常见的句式:tell/ask sb. to do sth. 其中的to 不能省略。

6. 【答案】gratefully→grateful
【知识讲解】考查词性。

本句是我们对她很感激。

英语句式是be grateful to sb. “对某人感激”,be 后面要用形容词grateful, 而不是副词gratefully。

7. 【答案】him→her
【知识讲解】考查人称代词。

由前文可知他们的英语老师是一位女老师。

人称代词是英语短文改错常考的考点,主要考查细节,所以,在阅读文章时要注意人称代词的前后照应。

8. 【答案】it→which
【知识讲解】考查定语从句。

on it we wrote all our names.是非限制定语从句,介词on后面不能用it,要用关系代词which,指代前面的big car。

9. 【答案】moving→moved
【知识讲解】考查形容词的区别。

moving 是事物或人让你感动,感动你的东西做主语; moved 是你主动的被某物感动,感动的人或事物做主语。

10. 【答案】in→on
【知识讲解】考查介词的用法。

脸上洋溢着笑容,英语表达方式是a big smile on one’s face。

其中的介词是on不是in。

第二节书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是Nancy,在一个英文网站上,你看到一个网名叫Lazy Bone的中学生发帖寻求帮助。

请根据写作要求回帖。

写作要点:
1.列举自己不能坚持锻炼的常见借口;
2.谈谈坚持锻炼的好处;
3.提出坚持锻炼的建议。

注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.参考词汇:效率efficiency,监督monitor;
3.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Hi, Lazy Bone,
I used to have the same problem! I used to tell myself I would work out later, because ____________________________
____________________________
Wish you success!
Nancy
【答案】
Hi, Lazy Bone,
I used to have the same problem! I used to tell myself I would work out later, because I was too busy to have sports, or I was too tired today...As a result, I never put my workout plan into practice.
As you know, exercise benefits us in many ways.Not only does it improve our health, it also makes us cheerful and raises our learning efficiency.Having realized the importance of exercise, I work out regularly at present.
I suggest you make a practical workout plan and set aside some time each day to do exercise.You can go in for sports you like and have various sports in a week.Above all, you’d better find a workout partner.In this case, both of you can inspire and monitor each other.Of course, you can reward yourself by treating yourself to some delicious food.
Wish you success!
Nancy
【知识讲解】本题要求考生写一个回帖。

根据首句提示确定写作人称为第一人称,体裁为议论文。

因为这里谈论的是一个普遍现象,基本时态应为一般现在时。

但谈自己过去的经历时应用一般过去时。

题目以网络帖子的形式提出了问题"怎样坚持自己的锻炼计划"。

题目规定了三项任务:列举借口;谈论好处;提出建议。

可以按此线索安排写作顺序,分三段进行写作。

首先列举不能坚持锻炼的常见借口(如太忙、太累等);接着谈谈坚持锻炼的好处,如改善身体素质,提高学习效率等;最后提出建议,此部分可作为重点来写,可从"制订实用计划""找个锻炼伙伴"和"变换运动项目"等角度去发挥。

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