人教新目标英语七年级下册 Unit10 I’d like some noodles Writing 课件(共39张PPT)

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项目
标准
结构 段落合理（2 分） （3分） 衔接自然 （1分)
汤类（2分）
内容 主食类（2分） （8分） 其他食物（2分）
语言 （3分）
卷面 （1分）
拓展合理（2分） 词汇丰富（1分） 句法正确 ，语言优美（2分）
Unit10 Our Restaurant
写作话题：Food (食物)
学习目标
1.掌握应用文的基本特征，尤其是针 对这一话题的宣传广告。 2.学习操控性图表作文的写作策略。 3.学会宣传自我，引起他人的关注。
Pre-writing
1.应用文的写作形式 应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体。它最突出 的特点是它的实际应用性，应用文包括很广，如书信 、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、请柬、电报、合 同等。应用文写作除了注重规范语言，重在实用，力 求朴实、准确、简洁外，还注重一定的格式。
beef noodles. beef and potato noodles. beef, potato and cabbage noodles. beef, potato ,cabbage and mutton noodles. beef potato cabbage mutton and tomato noodles.
海报是一种带有装饰性的宣传广告，通常配以绘 画图案，版面设计活泼。内容以影讯、球讯、展览、 演出信息、友谊赛和讲座等为主。海报往往贴在醒目 之处，以引起公众的注意。海报应简明扼要地写清楚 信息的内容、时间、地点和注意事项，还要注明出海 报的单位和日期。
本单元写作题目以宣传广告的形式体现，要求掌 握英语应用文中广告词的写作方法及技巧，展开以食 物为主线介绍个人对事物的喜好，并能完成假设为自 家餐厅写一则广告的写作任务。
Quiz: Read aloud the chunks above and try to match the meaning by numbering.
名词/动名词词块
①beef and tomato noodles, ② a large bowl of, ③what size, ④good luck
you mind waiting for a moment? About 5 minutes. Or do you want to change another kind?
Jack: I will wait for it.
Waiter: OK. we will serve you as soon as possible.
2. 具体描述菜单的细节
Body
3. 招揽顾客 Ending
Step3 Write
Step4 Check
篇章方面: 内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理
句子方面: 句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态； 连词使用
用词方面: 代词主格，宾格； 名词单复数； 动词搭配；副词位置
细节方面: 单词拼写；标点符号；大小写
（ ③ ）保持身材苗条
（ ⑥ ）稍等一会儿 （ ⑧ ）很高兴去…… （ ⑨ ）在……花…… （ ① ）想要 （ ⑩ ）需要做某事 （ ④ ）许愿 （ ⑤ ）变得流行起来 （ ② ）下订单 （ ⑦ ）使你变得健康起来
介词词块
①for 10 yuan, ②like beef noodles, ③in the beef soup, ④call…at
书写工整（1分）
自我 同伴 教师评价
评价 评价
优秀作文分享
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rice
porridge
dumplings
What kind of vegetables would you like?
tomatoes
potatoes
cabbage
What kind of meat would you like? beef 牛肉
mutton 羊肉
chicken 鸡肉
What kind of fruit would you like?
Post-writing
Appreciating & Evaluating
①请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点, 并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。 ②你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？ ③根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打 分。
Step5 同伴互赏—我欣赏，我快乐！
请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相 互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。
would you like something to drink?
Jack: A large bottle of orange juice. Waiter: That’s good for today. the weather is so hot!
what else would you like?
审题
体裁：_____应__用__文______________ 人称：____第__一__人__称__、__第__二__人__称___ 时态：___一__般__现__在__时____________
Step2 Structure
以“Our restaurant”为题
1. 简单点明这是一则广告，目的为何 beginning
While-writing
假如你家有一间餐厅。请根据以下表 格，以“Our restaurant”为题，为你家 的餐厅写一则广告，词数70词左右。
large bowl medium soup beef/mutton/chicken/vegetable bowl
small bowl
main food others
Rewrite
Rewrite the conversation into a paragraph.
Conversation Waiter: May I take your order, please? Jack: I'd like a hamburger. Waiter: What kind would you like? Jack: Beef and tomato, please. Waiter: Oh, sorry, we just sold out that kind. would
rice dumplings
noodles salad pancake
medium bowl
a dozen medium
bowl large bowl
a piece
10 yuan 7 yuan 5 yuan
free 12 yuan 8 yuan 6 yuan 3 yuan
Step1 Think and Fill
一天一苹果，医生远离我。
5. You can’t eat your cake and have it. 鱼与熊掌，不可兼得。
6. He who has health has hope. 留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。
7. It is difficult to cater for all tastes. 众口难调。
1. Every man to his taste. 人各有所好。 2. Eat to live, but do not live to eat.
人吃饭是为了活着，但活着不是为了吃饭。 3.Health is better than wealth.
健康胜于财富。 4. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
（ ② ）一大碗…… （ ④ ）好运 （ ① ）西红柿牛肉面 （ ③ ）什么尺寸
①would like, ②take your order, ③keep fit, ④make a wish, ⑤get popular, ⑥wait for a moment, ⑦make you healthy, ⑧be glad to, ⑨ spend…on…, ⑩need to do sth.
oranges
apples
bananas
What kind of drinks would you like?
green tea
coffee
orange juice
Memory Game
Make a sentence(造句) like this:
I’d like ... noodles.
I’d like
Jack: That’s all. Thank you.
Rewrite
It is hot today. Jack comes into a restaurant to order a beef and tomato hamburger. Unluckily, it is sold out before. So Jack has to wait for 5 minutes. He also orders a large bottle orange juice which is just right for today!
8. Health is happiness. 健康就是幸福。
Lead-in
Chat: Look at the pictures, and point out what you like best and tell others the reason.
What kind of main food would you like?
2.操控性图表作文 操控性图表作文要求执笔者要严格按照图表显示要点 进行阐述，不能加入过多的外来元素。因此，要学会 从以下的途径分析：
①首先要分析所写文章的体裁。本单元以宣传食 物为目的，因此应以应用文形式呈现。
②分析图表中所列的要点是否都已包括在内。
③最后分析自己语言运用是否简练扼要，是否符合应用 文的用语特点。尤其要注意自己的最终目的是否已经达 到（以本单元为例，是否达到了宣传的目的。）。
（ ③ ）在牛肉汤里 （ ④ ）拨打……找 （ ② ）比如牛肉面
（ ① ）要10元
I’d like a small/medium/large bowl of…; I’d like … noodles, please; What kind of … would you like; Would you like some drinks/… One … bowl of …is only … yuan; Would you like to eat something special/delicious… We have… for you; To keep healthy, what you need to do is just to……; Our food not only tastes good/delicious…, but also is …; Come to our …; Enjoy our food/drink/…